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1. Fernando Garcés
2. David Córdova
3. Cristhian Carrasco
4. Enoc Luisamano
5. David Sánchez
6. Elio Santana

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This week is the second edition of INTERACTOS, I will go to all the musical performances because I registered in AN internships team, but I would like to enjoy the salsa concert of UA ensemble. I might go to other artistic presentationS of other careers. Also, I might take some pictureS with Los Corrientes although I will be very busy with the logistic of the presentations. That experience will be very important for my professional development because I will see close up all the activities and problems around it UP CLOSE.

The concert of “Los Corrientes” CONCERT in the first day of INTERACTOS was the best BEGINNING start that IT could HAVE HAD be have it. I never thought that the agora of the park would be full of many people. That night was very nice, the sound, lighting and music were incredible. I might register to the internships for the next year again.

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I have been waiting for several days for the Interactos, today is the inAuguration and I am excited for that I´m going to the DANCE AND THEATER presentations of dance and theater specially the dance work "Manipulo" of the company “Talvez” of San Francisco University. The act begins at 19:15 pm and then I would like to go to the concert of “Tayos Tayos Tayos” and “The Corrientes”. Finally, on Friday after school, I will see the play a dead man kicked, additonally I might stay at the multidisciplinary meeting of new media.

Interactos was very interesting. This year there WERE was international groups of art for example the company "En Ningun Lugar" FROM of Mexico. Last thursday was their performance with ITS dance work "Las Ultimas Cosas". IT was great! because all people participated on the performance. Four dancers entertained people but later they involved public WITH MOVEMENTS whit moved. I felt very exited because I was part of A play. Finally, all people ran ALONG THE for stage and theN ligths went out.

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I'm going to Latin Concert at "Universidad de las Artes" in THE south campus, I would like TO meet with many friends in the concert, beco Ause Latin music is the best. I hope my family will come with me, beco Ause my parents also really like Latin music. Besides, it is a good opportunity to enjoy a pleasant moment with family. After "INTERACTOS", I would like to have dinner with my family and friends in a Chinese restaurant. I really hope I enjoy the concert a lot and the orchestra plays my favorite song in salsa version.

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I'm going to the concert of the Symphony of Guayaquil, I feel very happy becAU uase I HAVE never seen them and the comments of the people'S COMMENTS are very interesting, I don't like classic music very much but I'm going to try that I like it more, I will go to another music concert later, in that concert they  will play "tayos tayos" and "los corrientes" WILL PLAY. This will be in the South Campus and I just hope to enjoy the music and if I have free time I'm going to seen the DANCE presentation of dance of San Francisco University and always TO enjoy and support THEM.

After to the concerts I feel inspired becAU uase the musicianS of my country are really incredible, the Symphony of Guayaquil were played one piece of classical music and its director was very important to the act, the others concerts were very good but I prefer the concert of classical music, it's more sentimental and relaxing. I learned to value more classical music and its composition.

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I’m going to the concert AT in the night, the concert startS at 8:30 pm in THE south campus of UARTES UNIVERSITY UniversityhUniversityh I’m going to see to Corrientes band, I would like to hear “Cuando me empieces a odiar”. I’m going to go with my brother, he would like to hear “Soy chiro”, we might to take a photo with all THE band, and we will see to the singer that singS in the middle of the audience, we ARE going to enjoy of the concert, and hope that exceedS our expectations.

The day of THE presentation, I’m felt very excited, because one of the my favorites bandS played this THAT night, the event started late, approximately at 8:30 pm, in THAT those place there WERE was a lot of people, especially young people in ages between FROM 18 TO 30. The concert startED and the public began to dance their songs, the concert was amazing, and they played my favorite song, and enjoyed all the concert.

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I feel excited because the Guayaquil symphonY ic orchestra will perform on the first day of INTERACTOS Interactions 2017 and they will play the song Porgy and bess suite by Gershwin, so, I am going to attend on Wednesday at 6:30 p.m with an old friend, but also I would like to attend the multimedia concert on Saturday at 9:00 p.m. I’m still not sure if I go, because this starts very late and at night it isn’t very safe, it’s dangerous, I might be attacked by an unknown person outside the park.

On the day of the concert I arrived late because the traffic was intense. If I had left earlier, I could have arrived on time. I was happy because I suddenly went to concerts like this, I think it WILL would be better if the next year's presentation lastS ed longer. At the end of the concert I went home, and the other events I could not stay ON OTHER EVENTS because they were very late.

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On Wednesday, October 18, I WENT thought I would go to the opening INAUGURATION concert that was inside the calendar of the Interactos Festival 2017, I thought that a lot of people COULD GO will be going since the concert started at 8 pm so I decided to go early to be able to listen to the first band called "Tayos", this group is formed by 4 members who gave us a lot of enthusiasm and energy with their songs and then opening one of the most awaited and acclaimed groups of the night: "Corrientes". This group IS formed by 8 members who arrived to brighten up the night and invite us to dance with their Latin rhythms and GAVE give us an hour and a half of good music. My friends and I spent a fun night, as we danced, laughed, sang and enjoyed a wonderful concert, all this was possible thanks to the festival Interactos FESTIVAL and its organization that allowed us to be participants of this cultural meeting, I hope this festival continues since this will allow us to rescue, to FOSTER fometar our culture and to impel to all artists of the country and of the world.

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Saturday will be the longest and most expected day on “Interactos” festival, there are so many acts on its schedule and from different disciplines. I’m going to SOME any of the dance shows. I have seen a few dance performances before, and it’s a beautiful art indeed.

But also, I would like to see something new, radical and bold. So maybe, I might attend the act of “Colectivo GWYKQLL”, an installation and performance of experimental music and audiovisual techniques.

I think this second edition of Interactos will be a total blast!

The “show” that I went last Saturday, was more than a usual concert. It was an intense and uninterrupted session of high frequencies, feedbacks and distorted sounds in a surrounded wave of synchronized noise. There were two projectors that showED n different scenes of our city, and various spots of colored lights WERE was spinning out of control. All the concept was like an “acid trip”, and I felt like being on a movie!

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Uartes will celebrate its SECOND edition second of Interactos, where will shows expositions, recitals, music, conversations, workshops and others forms of art, with nationality teachers and international PROFESSORS. Interactos is a big opPortunity for students because There we might show knowledge that we have learned. For example, I AM going to participate as AN INTERN pasant at Agora ON the days Wednesday and Sunday. I will work as A SOUND engineer sound for the band tayos tayos tayos BAND and Los corrIentes on wednesday. I  might work with my CLASSMATES companions OF fo music. On sunday, THEY she will play salsa! it will be amazing.

I was at interactos AS AN INTERN pasant. I had to heLp in all the events that WERE was at agora. It was fantastic the show of the university`s salsa band. The horns sounded amazing. I finished very tired. I worked as A sound engineEr for some bands that were Tayos Tayos Tayos, LOS CORRIENTES (DO NOT CHANGE PROPER NAMES) The currents, The most beautiful animal. After, I was remplaced by my CLASSMATE companion Jao Garcia that is a very profeSS cional person.

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"Salsa" is one of the most popular and sYncretic music genere, so I´m a salsa lover. I´m going to the last concert of Interactos on Sunday afternoon, where a Salsa ensemble will play at 18:00. Manny classmates told me that music ensemble is leading by Eduardo Manzanilla, so I hope they might play only "Salsa Dura" (Especially Indestructible by Ray Barreto). Maybe I will play one song with THEM their, because Juan Posso (Uartes Percussion Teacher) invited me three days ago to go on stage to participate in their performance.

I was very early there at 5 pm, so I could see their soundcheck on backstage. The performance was ok, but It wasn't perfect, because conga and bongo playerS weren't really percussionistS, especially THE conga player. They played songs like "Lagrimas" by Roberto Blades, "Llego la banda" by S.H.O. etc. Also, they played a Merengue´s song "La bilirrubina" what in my opinion was a music disaster.

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This week started interactos 2017 AND the teacher Fredy Vallejos WHO IS it’s a very good friend AND he is a musician, but I HAVE never seen HIM in a concert,  so I´m IS going to HAVE A the multimedia concert on Sunday afternoon at 3:00 pm. I have to arrive on time because Fredy told me the doors WILL close after 10 minutes THE CONCERT STARTS of the start the concert. I HAVE ´m checked his Facebook and said the name of the work is FRAGMENTS. This work will have: electro-acoustic music, improvisations and visuals. Also, invited the trumpeter Eduardo Manzanilla IS INVITED. I think this concert will be one OF the best of interactos 2017 because I like the new forms of makING of music.

ON sunday, I went to the concert with my fRiend. We arrived on time, after 5 minutes the concert started, with the lights off, all the chairS WERE was different, and I think it was part of THE show, the concert was very good, the sound, the video and the trumpeter was excellent.
I TOOK was take photos and video because Fredy asked ME TO FILM can I documentary the concert.

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This week I'm going to Intercatos Festival. I would like to go to some events for example: ANIMATION workshopS animation, some theather plays and concerts. I think this second edition WILL would be awesome, I might attend as many events as possible. Some of my best friends will be there cheering our partners on stage, and I will not miss any show. I would like to participate as AN intern in the next edition, or maybe be one of the breakthrough artistS! I might start a rock band with electronic influences. :)

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Hi, today is a special day. Tonight will be the salsa concert as the ending of "Inter.actos" and I'm going to go over there. I think it might be ok, because sometimes music in that class of concert it is usually noisY e. Also, the popular music like salsa is not my favorite. Adding the fact that the show will be at night and it might turns dangerous. Maybe I will go to stay with a friend to make me feel ok.

Wow, the concert was really boring, I am sad, because I knew it. That salsa show was good because I learned something ELSE more but at the same time was so noisy,  the bass musicians played so hard, VERY even hard! so, they weren't LISTENING listened and overALL top, they were out of tuned. So ALSO, teachers played with studentS, that was cool because not many universitIES y do that. Probably, the next "inter.actos" will BE better than this because the security was another theme with troubles. I am a truly person so I can't say the show was UNSAFE un-security but theY might HAVE DONE did something better.

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Interactos is a very good option to make known what we do in the University of the Arts. This Saturday I`m going to work at 8:00 a.m. like a sound assistant for the concert of the group "Manzanillas" GROUP with the work called "The Most Beautiful Animal". I will be there until the presentation finishES, I have been told that it will be very good, because it is aimed especially for children. I would like to talk with my wife to attend the salsa concert that will be on Sunday at 7 p.m. but I'm not sure I can attend. We might to go next time.

I went to INTERACTOS 2017 at 7:30 o'clock, I  had to collaborate in the event as a sound assistant, the concert started fifteen minutes late, but it's WAS fine because we solved all the technical problems. The band was formed by some teachers, including our director Andrey playing the French horn, the most important was the children's audience.

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This week started “interactos 2017” at the University of Arts. Tomorrow, Saturday at 10 a.m I’d like to go to A concert in the Miniteatro. It is called “El animal mas bonito”. First, I’m going to singing class at DOWNTOWN CAMPUS the Gobernación at 8 a.m. Then I will go to THE concert. It might not be A rock concert, maybe it MUSICIANS might play Jazz or classic music. They will use instruments as: trumpet, trombone, bass, drums and voice. The band won’t have electric guitar and synthetizer. I never listened to this THESE musicianS so, it will be a surprise.

The concert was for children, the band played some instruments as: drums, trumpet, trombone, electric bass and voice. I felt very happy because the Miniteatro WAS were full OF children and all music was for them. The singer was a woman and she sang very well. The artist group taught to children names of musical instruments and they remembered fast with a song.

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I am a super fan of Adelhaid so I am going to attend their rock concert on sunday afternoon at 16h30 with some friends at south campus.
I know that Adelhaid will play their new CD album because I have checked their social networks and they did that last month in another concert. They might sing my favorite song which is "Ni un segundo". Also, I might ask the main singer, Denisse Lalama, to sign my t-shirt at the end of the performance. For sure, it will be awesome!