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Afra Omar

Money brings , respect, and greater opportunities in life. Those who have money can make choices and create opportunities for themselves.

In the past, men controlled most of the wealth and ran businesses, while women had limited rights.

Today, things are gradually changing. Women can study, work, and even lead companies. Yet challenges remain, such as traditional expectations, pay gaps, and fewer women in top positions.

So, take charge of your future, work smart, and make your own path.

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fatima khamis

"money rules the world but is it a man's game ?"

Today , money gives the good life that you chooses , gives you power , respect , and opportunities . people with money can make decisions , and get better chances in school , work , and life .

In the past, men managed money and businesses, and women usually depended on men and did not own or manage money. Over time, women got more rights to have a role in money and business. Even though there are still some difficulties, today women take part more in the economy.

Women now have more chances to work and lead. But there are problems like old traditions and lower pay for women.
Also, there are fewer women in important positions.

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Today, money is the reason we are living now. Money has given people the power to do what they want and get whatever they need. Although money helps in almost everything you can think of, humans will always respect those with more money and make others feel low and poorer in any way possible, since being rich gets you more chances to be known. Being rich also makes you much more successful.

In the past, men were usually paid and used their salary to pay off their own needs, like paying off their debts or paying for studies, which made women depend on them. So most women didn’t get the chance to do business or meet their financial needs, since the men did most of the jobs. Back then, women didn’t need to work since men could just pay for them.

Nowadays, most women are much more successful than men because they have the skills and the talent to do it. However, most people seem to not like it because they believe that men are better and deserve to get higher chances and better jobs than women. In my opinion, I believe that both genders should be fairly equal in all ways possible, since both men and women have many responsibilities and their own needs to take care of. Furthermore, women are able to do whatever men do and even in a better way. That’s why everyone must be treated the same, and women should be given more chances at doing different jobs and difficult work or tasks.

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Money, power, and gender.

Money rules the world because it gives people power, respect, and opportunities. With money, people can make choices, influence others, and gain access to better education and careers. Wealth often brings higher status and respect in society.

In the past, men usually controlled money and financial power. Women were often excluded from owning property, working in high-paying jobs, or leading businesses, which kept men in control.

Today, women have more chances to earn money and become leaders, but challenges still remain. Many women face low-paying jobs and family expectations that can limit their progress. While money is no longer only a man's game, men often continue to have more advantages.

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Money is important in our life. we have to get money but I think that the money is not the most important thing in

our life. There is so many things is important than money.

Money can be a rules of the world but I don’t think that it is a man's game because , the money can be also woman’s game. Money can be the source of given people Power, and maybe respects, and of course money can change our life too.

Money can empower a person and enable him to make his

own decisions like in their studies, work and personal affairs. I think that men in the past usually could control their money, because I think that in the Past, the life was so easier than our life now, and also the life in the past was not harder and expensive like our life’s now.

while I think that women had limited chance to control their life and also I think that it's harder to women to had chance as men did in the past , but now in our life, I don’t think so that it is harder to women to have the same chance as men had to earn money and be leaders of their lives.

shaikha Jassim

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Money Rules the World, but Is It a Man’s Game?

Money plays a big role in everyone’s life. It gives people power, respect, and opportunities to have a better life. With money, people can afford education, health care, and better lifestyles.

Back in the days, men were the ones who controlled anything financial. Men used to hold the highest jobs and businesses, which gave them control over money.

Nowadays, things are much better for women. They go to school, work, and some own famous companies. They start businesses and are becoming more independent.

Even with everything good that is happening, women still don’t have complete equal rights. In many jobs, women are paid less than men even if they do the same work. Family responsibilities and our communities’ expectations make it harder for women to focus on their careers.

In conclusion, money plays a powerful role in today’s society. Men have held control over money for most of the past, and women are continuing to make progress towards equal financial rights. The future will depend on making sure money is shared in equal rights between everyone.

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Money , power ,and gender .

Money rules the world because it gives people power, respect ,and opportunities. With money people can make choices, influence others , and gain access to better education and careers . Wealth often brings higher states and respect in society .

In the past men usually controlled money and financial , power . Though women were often excluded from owning property , working in high paying jobs or leading businesses which kept men in control .

Today , women have more chances to earn money and because leaders but challenges still remain . Many women face pay jobs and family expectations that can limit their progress , while money is no longer only a man's game , men often continue to have more advantages.

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Today, money is the reason we are living now. Money has given people the power to do what they want and get whatever they need. Although money helps in almost everything you can think of, humans will always respect ones with more money and make the others feel low and poorer in any way possible since being rich gets you more chances to be known. Being rich also make you much more successful.

In the past, men were usually paid and used their salary to pay off their own needs like paying off their debts or pay for studies which made women depend on themselves. So most women didn’t get the chance to do business or get their financial needs since the men did most of the jobs. Back then, women’s didn’t need to work since men could just pay of them.

Nowadays, most women’s are much more successful than man because they have the skills and the talent to do it. However, most people seem to not like it because they believe that men are better and deserve to get higher chances and better jobs than women. In my opinion, I believe that both genders should be fairly equal in all ways possible, since both men and women have many responsibilities and their own needs to take care of. Furthermore, women’s are able to do whatever men’s do and even in a better way, that’s why everyone must get treated the same and they should give women more chances at doing different jobs and difficult work or tasks.

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Nowadays, money can give you almost anything you want, because with money many things are possible. Rarely will someone do something for you for free.

In the past, men were usually the ones who worked in jobs, while women often stayed at home and depended on their husbands for money. At that time, people believed that men should handle money, since women were not working much and men were considered more logical.

Today, things are very different. Women now have more chances than before, because people’s views have changed and women have become leaders in many fields. Laws also support women and encourage them to work and study. For example, even the Minister of Education is a woman now.

I believe that women today are as important as men, and when both work together, society becomes stronger and more successful.

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“Money Rules the world but is it a man’s game?”

Nowadays in our society, money has been proven that it is the key to survival. Money provides access to education, healthcare, and many opportunities that can improve an individual’s life. It is logical that wealth often brings respect because it is linked with success, stability, and security it can open doors to leadership positions or strong connections that other may not have.

In the past, men usually tended to control money and have more power in the financial field because laws and traditions gave them authority over property, businesses,and family income. Women were often given a whole different role that had nothing to do with money. The ideal vision they were given was that “Men are the providers and women are the producers”.

Women born in this generation are extremely luck they have been given many more opportunities and chances to hold a big role in their work environment. People have changed the way they perceive a woman. However, challenges still exist; woman that tend to get fewer chances of promotion due to them having family responsibilities ,and that can limit many opportunities. Overall, the playing field has not proven the equality, even though progress has been made.

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Original: money has been proven that it is the key to survival

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Original: …security it can open doors…

Corrected: …security. It can open doors…
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Original: …connections that other may not have.

Corrected: …connections that others may not have.
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Original: businesses,and

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Original: a whole different role

Corrected: a completely different role
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Original: “Men are the providers and women are the producers”.

Corrected: “men are the providers and women are the producers.”
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Capitalization inside quotation (should be lowercase men since it continues the sentence).

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Original: extremely luck

Corrected: extremely lucky
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Original: to hold a big role

Corrected: to hold big roles
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Original: the way they perceive a woman

Corrected: the way they perceive women
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Original: challenges still exist; woman that tend to get fewer chances

Corrected: challenges still exist; women tend to get fewer chances
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woman → women (plural form).

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Original: due to them having family responsibilities ,and that can limit many opportunities.

Corrected: due to family responsibilities, and that can limit many opportunities.
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Original: the playing field has not proven the equality

Corrected: the playing field has not proven equal
✅ Fixed: incorrect grammar (the equality → equal).

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Mariam Obaid 12 A4

"money rules the world but is it's a man's game"

how does money give people power, respect, and chances in life today ? Money gives people power in many ways , such as advantages in their daily life , it brings respect because many people admire those who are successful , having money creates many chances in life. It allows people to attend better schools, receive excellent healthcare, and pursue their dreams and goals in life. in the past , how did men usually control money and financial power?

Back in the day, men usually controlled money and financial power because society was built to favor them ,Most men worked outside the home, owned land or businesses, and made important money decisions. Women and other groups didn’t have many rights when it came to money,Laws and traditions kept women dependent on men for money, so men ended up with most of the power both at home and in the wider world. This meant that men had more control over how money was spent and how wealth was passed down through generations.

Do women today have the same chances as men to earn money and be leaders ?

why and why not.

Today, women generally have more chances than before to earn money and become leaders, but they still don’t always have the same opportunities as men. In many places, laws support equal rights, and more women are going to school and entering the workforce. However, some challenges remain. Women often face discrimination, lower pay for the same work, and fewer chances to reach top leadership roles. Social expectations and stereotypes can also make it harder for women to balance work and family or be taken seriously as leaders. So, while progress has been made, there is still work to do to achieve true equality between men and women.

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Money rules the world, but it’s a man’s game.”

How does money give people power, respect, and chances in life today?

Money gives people power in many ways, such as advantages in their daily life. It brings respect because many people admire those who are successful. Having money creates many chances in life. It allows people to attend better schools, receive excellent healthcare, and pursue their dreams and goals in life.

In the past, how did men usually control money and financial power?

Back in the day, men usually controlled money and financial power because society was built to favor them. Most men worked outside the home, owned land or businesses, and made important money decisions. Women and other groups didn’t have many rights when it came to money. Laws and traditions kept women dependent on men for money, so men ended up with most of the power both at home and in the wider world. This meant that men had more control over how money was spent and how wealth was passed down through generations.

Do women today have the same chances as men to earn money and be leaders? Why and why not?

Today, women generally have more chances than before to earn money and become leaders, but they still don’t always have the same opportunities as men. In many places, laws support equal rights, and more women are going to school and entering the workforce. However, some challenges remain. Women often face discrimination, lower pay for the same work, and fewer chances to reach top leadership roles. Social expectations and stereotypes can also make it harder for women to balance work and family or be taken seriously as leaders. So, while progress has been made, there is still work to do to achieve true equality between men and women.

Money rules the world, but it’s a man’s game.”

How does money give people power, respect, and chances in life today?

Money gives people power in many ways, such as advantages in their daily life. It brings respect because many people admire those who are successful. Having money creates many chances in life. It allows people to attend better schools, receive excellent healthcare, and pursue their dreams and goals in life.

In the past, how did men usually control money and financial power?

Back in the day, men usually controlled money and financial power because society was built to favor them. Most men worked outside the home, owned land or businesses, and made important money decisions. Women and other groups didn’t have many rights when it came to money. Laws and traditions kept women dependent on men for money, so men ended up with most of the power both at home and in the wider world. This meant that men had more control over how money was spent and how wealth was passed down through generations.

Money rules the world, but it’s a man’s game.”

How does money give people power, respect, and chances in life today?

Money gives people power in many ways, such as advantages in their daily life. It brings respect because many people admire those who are successful. Having money creates many chances in life. It allows people to attend better schools, receive excellent healthcare, and pursue their dreams and goals in life.

In the past, how did men usually control money and financial power?

Back in the day, men usually controlled money and financial power because society was built to favor them. Most men worked outside the home, owned land or businesses, and made important money decisions. Women and other groups didn’t have many rights when it came to money. Laws and traditions kept women dependent on men for money, so men ended up with most of the power both at home and in the wider world. This meant that men had more control over how money was spent and how wealth was passed down through generations.

Do women today have the same chances as men to earn money and be leaders? Why and why not?

Today, women generally have more chances than before to earn money and become leaders, but they still don’t always have the same opportunities as men. In many places, laws support equal rights, and more women are going to school and entering the workforce. However, some challenges remain. Women often face discrimination, lower pay for the same work, and fewer chances to reach top leadership roles. Social expectations and stereotypes can also make it harder for women to balance work and family or be taken seriously as leaders. So, while progress has been made, there is still work to do to achieve true equality between men and women.work to do to achieve true equality between men and women.

Capitalized sentence beginnings.

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6. Added missing question mark after Why and why not.

7. Removed extra quotation mark at the end of the first line.Capitalized sentence beginnings.

2. Fixed is it’s → it’s.

3. Removed extra spaces before commas and question marks.

4. Split run-on sentences into shorter sentences.

5. Changed some commas to periods for proper sentence separation.

6. Added missing question mark after Why and why not.

7. Removed extra quotation mark at the end of the first line.

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Hamda Hamad 12A4

Money nowadays is considered as a sign of power and oppertunities. Some people who have the advantage of money are most likely to use for their own selfish gain, as such: gaining status, respect, and more.

In the past, men are said to be the head of houses, towns, companies, and countries, which is why they are given such higher status and respect because of their gender rights. They would manage finances, bills and govermental issues. Where women would serve as houswives and manage the household.

Women who lived in the past were given less free will, free speach, and their rights were left to a minimum. As time passed and the world evolved, women were given opportunities to work, lead and even have the right of free speech about opinions and other civil matters. Even though most people prefer to keep things traditional where the man is the one who keeps everything in check.

In conclusion, men were seen as power, yet women still manage to pull though and make a living on their own. And till this day money is still seen as a sign of power, oppertunities, and high status.

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Money nowadays is considered a sign of power and opportunities. Some people who have the advantage of money are most likely to use it for their own selfish gain, such as gaining status, respect, and more.

In the past, men were said to be the heads of houses, towns, companies, and countries, which is why they were given higher status and respect because of their gender rights. They would manage finances, bills, and governmental issues, whereas women would serve as housewives and manage the household.

Women who lived in the past were given less free will, free speech, and their rights were limited to a minimum. As time passed and the world evolved, women were given opportunities to work, lead, and even have the right of free speech about opinions and other civil matters. Even though most people prefer to keep things traditional, where the man is the one who keeps everything in check.

In conclusion, men were seen as power, yet women still managed to pull through and make a living on their own. And to this day, money is still seen as a sign of power, opportunities, and high status.

15 corrections approximately, covering spelling, grammar, punctuation, word choice, and usage

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Money gives people power by being able to invest or also starting a business, and it also gives them opportunities to choose where they live or go on vacation. People respect those who are wealthy and have their life sorted, especially those who help individuals in need.

Back then, men controlled money and financial power by providing for their family, and women were expected to stay home or be the nurturers. Men also had access to more high paying jobs , which provides opportunities more for men than women.

Women today dont always have the same chances as men do, because women earn less than men, in addition to the fact men still have high paying jobs. Though, nowadays women have more opportunities than in the past and more women are in high paying careers. People are preaching about equality and more countries will promote equal pay in the future.

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Money gives people power by being able to invest or also starting a business, and it also gives them opportunities to choose where they live or go on vacation. People respect those who are wealthy and have their life sorted, especially those who help individuals in need.

Back then, men controlled money and financial power by providing for their family, and women were expected to stay home or be the nurturers. Men also had access to more high-paying jobs, which provided more opportunities for men than women.

Women today don’t always have the same chances as men do, because women earn less than men, in addition to the fact that men still have high-paying jobs. Though, nowadays, women have more opportunities than in the past, and more women are in high-paying careers. People are preaching about equality, and more countries will promote equal pay in the future.

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Money rules the world, but is it a man's game?

Honey has always played a powerful role in shaping society: It gives people access to better education, healthcare, status, and opportunities. Those who have money often gain respect and influence; while those without it, struggle to be heard. In many parts of the world today, money still decides who holds power, and unfortunately, men are often the ones in control.

Money gives people power, respect, and opportunities, but men have traditionally controlled it. In the past, men had more access to education and jobs, while women were expected to depend on them. Although things are improving today, woman still face challenges like lower pay and fewer leadership roles. However, more women are now becoming business leaders and politicians.

1. “Honey has always played…” → “Money has always played…”
(Spelling mistake: “Honey” → “Money”)

2. “It gives people access…” → “it gives people access…”
(Lowercased “It” after a colon, since colons are usually followed by lowercase unless it’s a proper noun.)

3. “respect and influence; while” → “respect and influence, while”
(Semicolon replaced with a comma – no need for semicolon here.)

4. “those without it, struggle” → “those without it struggle”
(Removed unnecessary comma.)

5. “woman still face challenges” → “women still face challenges”
(Grammar: singular “woman” corrected to plural “women”.)

6. “true equality will only happen it both men and women” → “true equality will only happen if both men and women”
(Corrected “it” → “if”.)

In conclusion, progress is being made, but true equality will only happen if both men and women have the same chances to succeed. The world is changing, but we must continue working toward fairness for everyone.

Maitha Alshamsi

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money is really important because it helps people buy things like food, clothes, and toys. it also helps paying for schools, hospitals, and other important places. that’s why some people say “money rules the world.” it means money has a lot of power and can control what happens. a lot of people wonder if money is just for men. in the past, mostly men had money and made decisions about it. women didn’t always have the same chance to earn or control money. some people thought money was only for men, and women should just take care of the house.

but today, things are different. girls and women works hard, own businesses, and become leaders too. they can save money, invest money, and use money to reach their goals. for example, famous womens like oprah winfrey show that girls can be powerful and successful with money. so, money isn’t just a man’s game anymore. everyone, whether they are boys or girls, should have the same chance to earn money and use it in smart ways. money might rule the world, but it should never be only for men .

Mistakes (with explanations): ✅ List of Mistakes and Corrections:

1. helps paying → ✅ helps pay

Mistake: Wrong verb form after "helps".

Why it's wrong: "Help" is usually followed by the base form of the verb (not the -ing form).

Fix: "helps paying" → "helps pay"

2. the house → ✅ the home

Mistake: Word choice slightly off in context.

Why it's wrong: "Take care of the home" is the more natural and common phrase when referring to domestic roles.

Fix: "take care of the house" → "take care of the home"

3. works hard → ✅ work hard

Mistake: Subject-verb agreement error.

Why it's wrong: The subject "girls and women" is plural, so the verb should be "work", not "works".

Fix: "girls and women works hard" → "girls and women work hard"

4. womens → ✅ women

Mistake: Incorrect plural form of "woman".

Why it's wrong: "Women" is already the plural of "woman"; adding an "s" makes it incorrect.

Fix: "famous womens like Oprah" → "famous women like Oprah"

5. Punctuation error

Mistake: Extra space before the period.

Why it's wrong: In English, there should be no space before punctuation like a period.

Fix: "for men ." → "for men."

6. Repetitive word use (not technically a grammar mistake, but it was left as is)

Why it's a problem: Using "money" too many times can make the writing sound repetitive or robotic.

Fix suggestion (optional): Could swap in words like "wealth", "income", or "finances", but it's acceptable for a student version to repeat.

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Money rules the world... but is it just a men's game?

It's well known that money has a profound impact on the lives of people and societies. It not only affects living standards but also plays a fundamental role in politics, the economy, and even social relations. However, an important question arises: Since money rules the world, is it a game reserved only for men? Do women have the same opportunities in this all-powerful financial world?

The Financial System... Historically in the Hands of Men

Looking back at history, we notice that men have controlled money and economic decision-making. For many years, women were denied the right to own money, manage businesses, or even open bank accounts in some countries. Financial and economic systems were run by men, making them the stronger party in the "money game."

Even in the modern era, women still suffer from a pay gap and a lack of representation in leadership positions in companies and financial institutions. This means that money, to date, is often a male-dominated game.

Positive Changes... and Women Enter the Game

Despite this long history of marginalization, things have begun to change. In recent years, women have made significant inroads into the fields of finance and business. There are now women holding senior positions in global banks, and there are successful businesswomen who own large companies and generate huge profits.

Initiatives supporting women in the fields of investment and entrepreneurship have also emerged, awareness of women's financial rights has increased, and it has become common to see women running their own businesses and investing their money with confidence and success.

Persistent Obstacles Despite Progress

However, this doesn't mean the road has become completely easy. Women still face challenges, such as difficulty accessing financing or being undervalued compared to men in some fields. Furthermore, some societies still view men as better suited to managing money, which sometimes undermines women's opportunities.

but in the end Money is for everyone, not just men.

Ultimately, yes, money rules the world, but it shouldn't remain the exclusive domain of men. The world is changing, and women have proven they can succeed in all fields, including economics and finance. If we want a more just future, we must break the old rules and open the way for everyone to play the "money game" on equal footing.

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"Money Rules the world But Is It a Mans Game?"

Money plays a big role in giving people power, respect, and chances in life today. With money people can control resources, make important decisions, and gain influence in their achievements, and it can can also help people earn admiration by supporting others. Most importantly money provides opportunities by giving access to better education and health.

In the past, men were the ones who usually controlled money and financial power. They were seen as the main earners, while women were expected to stay at home and care for the family. They often gave men the right to own land, run a business, and manage property.

Today, in many parts of the world, women have the same abilities, intelligence, and opportunities as men. Women can succeed in every field. However, in some places, women still face challenges like equal pay and or fewer chances, But progress is being made. Women can achieve just as much as men and prove that leadership are is limited by gender.

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Money today gives people power, respect, and chances. People with money can get good eduction and jobs.

They can travel, start businesses, or help others. Money makes people feel respected . So it is important in society, it also gives freedom to make choices and influence others around them.

In the past, men controlled money and wealth. They owned Land, businesses, and major resources, While woman often depended on them, men made most family and society decisions, money gave man power , respect Influence in all areas of life, Woman could not own businesses or control resources.

Today, Women have more chances to earn businesses and Be leaders. they can study, work,and start businesses like men.

However, pay gabs ,fewer top jobs, and harder to gain the same respect, influence and opportunities that men may get more easily, progress has been meale, but equality is still a work in progress

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How dose money power respect and chances in life today?

It helps them make choices,get respected , and do new things like travel or learn. In short, money makes life easier.

In the Past, how did men usually control money and finacial Power?

In the past, men usually controlled money because they had most jobs, owned land or businesses, and made financial decisions. Women often had little access to work or property.

Today , women don’t always earn as much as men. They may get paid less , work in fewer high paying jobs ,or take breaks for family. But move women are getting good jobs , running businesses, and going to school like men.

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How does money, power, respect, and chances in life work today?

It helps people make choices, get respected, and do new things like travel or learn. In short, money makes life easier. It also gives people more freedom and security, since money often brings both opportunities and respect in society.

In the past, how did men usually control money and financial power?

In the past, men usually controlled money because they had most jobs, owned land or businesses, and made financial decisions. Women often had little access to work or property, which left them depending on men for support.

Today, women don’t always earn as much as men.

They may get paid less, work in fewer high-paying jobs, or take breaks for family. But more women are getting good jobs, running businesses, and going to school like men. This shows that women now have more chances, even if challenges still remain.Money, power, and respect shape opportunities in life. While men controlled them in the past, women today are gaining more equality and independence.

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Money isn’t just about buying stuff , It gives humans the power to be able to make their own choices , for example where they can live or what school they go to it also gains them respect from others , as a lot of people see that is a sign of success. Most importantly , it allows you to get more chance’s in life , for better jobs and a lot of things

In past , men controlled their money and financial power through laws and paying of debt , bake then ,more jobs offers were for men to conduct , there family and their own life , this left women completely dependent on men for money

Even today, women don’t have the same opportunity as men to earn money and become leaders , the way different genders is a big part of this , as women are often paid less of the same work , and more likely to work in lower , where fewer women are promoted to mangement roles from beginning

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"Money Rules the World but Is It a Man's Game?"

Nowadays, money is one of the most -if not the most- important thing in the world.

An unspoken rule: if you have money, you have respect. Money is the thing that keeps people alive; It's how life goes on. If you lose your money, you basically lose the thing helping you live. Let's start from the very beginning: everything belonged to men - inventions, companies, even driving licenses. A common thought that has always been around: "A man will always be dominant." No one seemed to be against that, since it was planted in every single brain ever born. A while later, in the beginning of the 2000s, women started protesting. Money gives chances, jobs, and better lives. Who would not want to get that?

I understand why some people believe "Men should get paid more than women." but I believe that it depends on the situation. If the reason is just about "Responsibilities", then it is not fair. Women also have responsibilities: A parent? she could be one too, maybe even a single mom. Many other reasons and even more. Equality is the solution. Women have got skills just as much as men, therefore is should be equal.

Eventually, we all need money, since we all have families and responsibilities. What is wrong with getting what my colleague gets if we've got the same skills?

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“ Money rules the world but is it a man’s game?”

Money controls many things in life. It gives people power, chances, and choices. In the past, men had most of the money and women were often left out because of culture and rules. Today, this is changing. Women are working, leading, and starting businesses, showing that money is not just for men. There are still problems like unfair pay, but success now depends more on hard work and ideas than on being a man or a woman.

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Money and Equality

Money gives people power because it allows them to make choices others cannot. A rich person can buy better education, health care, and housing, which brings respect from society. With money, people also get more chances to travel, invest, and meet important people.

In the past, men usually controlled money and business decisions. Women were often left out of financial power because they were expected to stay at home. This gave men the main role in leadership, property ownership, and politics.

Today, women have more chances, but are not fully equal. Many still face lower pay and fewer leadership roles. Education and awareness are helping close the gap.

Money has always shaped who holds power and respect in society. While men controlled it in the past, today both men and women seek equal chances. The future depends on breaking barriers so everyone can succeed fairly.

Amal Almadani

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“Money Rules the World, but Is It a Man’s Game?”

Money has always been linked with power, respect, and opportunities in life. People with wealth often gain influence, higher social status, and greater chances to succeed, while those without money face more limitations.

In the past, men controlled most of the financial power because societies were patriarchal. Men had access to jobs, property rights, and decision-making, while women were often limited to household roles and excluded from economic activities. This gave men more authority over money and leadership positions.

Today, the situation is changing. Women have more opportunities than ever before to earn money, gain education, and lead businesses or governments. However, challenges still exist, such as unequal pay, gender stereotypes, and fewer women in top leadership roles.

While women do not always have the same chances as men, progress is being made. True equality requires breaking barriers, promoting fair opportunities, and recognizing that leadership and success are not limited by gender, but by talent, hard work, and determination.

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Money shapes almost every aspect of our lives, from the way nations trade to the choices people make about education, careers, and lifestyle. For a long time, wealth was often associated with men because they were given more chances to control business and politics. Yet today, society has evolved, and financial success is no longer tied to gender. Both men and women have the ability and the right to build, manage, and influence wealth on equal terms.

Modern economies thrive because talent is not limited by gender. Women run global companies, create start-ups, invest in markets, and design policies that guide nations just as men do. Likewise, many men choose paths outside traditional finance, proving that money is a skill, not an identity. Opportunities such as education, technology, and entrepreneurship have opened doors for everyone, allowing success to depend on creativity, discipline, and knowledge rather than stereotypes about who “should” handle money.

While money undeniably rules the world, it is not a man’s game it is a shared space where determination and ideas matter more than gender. When men and women participate equally, economies become stronger, innovation grows, and society benefits as a whole. True progress comes from recognising that financial power belongs to anyone who works for it responsibly, making the pursuit of money an inclusive, collaborative effort rather than a contest between genders.

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Nowadays, money can do and give you anything you want, because now everything is possible with money. Rarely will someone do something for you for free.

In the past, men were usually the ones working at jobs that paid, while women often got married and took money from their husbands. So, in the past, people believed that men should handle money, since very few women were working at that time maybe because men were considered more logical than women.

I think yes, women today have more chances than men because people’s views have changed, and women now are leaders. Laws now especially support women. Even the Minister of Education is now a woman, for example.