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🍔 1. Main Idea (Top Bun)

🔹 Tells what the paragraph is mostly about
🔹 Usually the first sentence
🔹 Helps the reader understand the topic
👉 Example: My dog Max is the best pet ever.

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🔹 Gives more information about the main idea
🔹 Includes facts, examples, or explanations
🔹 Makes your paragraph interesting and clear
👉 Example: He always greets me with a wagging tail.
👉 Example: Max plays fetch better than any other dog I know.

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🔹 Restates the main idea in a new way
🔹 Brings the paragraph to a strong finish
👉 Example: That’s why Max is such a special dog.

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🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):
My most memorable day was when my class went on a field trip to the mountains.

🥬 Supporting Detail 1:
We started the day with a long bus ride, singing songs and sharing snacks.

🍅 Supporting Detail 2:
When we arrived, we hiked up a trail and saw beautiful trees and a waterfall.

🧀 Supporting Detail 3:
After lunch, we played games and took lots of fun pictures together.

🍞 Closing Sentence (Bottom Bun):
That day was unforgettable because I had fun with my friends and learned new things about nature.

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🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun): My most memorable day was when I heard of my brother’s birth, that I always dreamed of.

🥬 Supporting Detail 1: I was playing in the yard with my friends,when I heard the news.

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🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):

A memorable day in my life was when my family took me on a surprise trip to the mountains.

🥬 Supporting Detail 1:

I was amazed by the beautiful scenery and fresh mountain air.

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🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun): I will never forget the time I become Mum

🥬 Supporting Detail 1: I feel so happy when I pass exam

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🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):my most memorable day was when I played volleyball for the first time

🥬 Supporting Detail 1: I started to play with a local volleyball team

🍅 Supporting Detail 2: I've touched the ball for the first time

🧀 Supporting Detail 3: After that I

🍞 Closing Sentence (Bottom Bun):

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After reading a classmate’s paragraph, leave a kind and helpful comment.
You can use these sentence starters:

👍 Say something positive:

I liked how you started your paragraph with...

Your details made me feel like I was really there!

I think your most memorable day sounds really fun because...

✏️ Give a gentle suggestion:

You could add one more detail about...

Maybe your ending could explain how you felt.

I wonder what happened before/after that – could you include it?