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Walking With My Shadow

Steep Hill

Shady sounds, whispers of weakness

Strong legs you need

needed for the steep road ahead

Feet feel heavy

Feel the grounding from the waves from underneath

Take the time on this trip, uphill, uprise sunshine

Lovely chandelier trees above my head

Dancing leaves, asking me to dance with them

take a break listen to the sounds of the whispers of the wind

You will make it there, the whispers say

Look at me, the house said, I have stories from the West to tell

Redbuds from the rose said

smell the life

of soil to get you up all the way

Don't rush the tiny bird with blue feathered colors, sang, you will make it all the way.

Night jasmine

Lingering here

Take my scent with you and take it for the day.

Until we meet again

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Original Walking With My Shadow

Steep Hill

Strong legs you need

feet feel the grounding from the waves underneath your skin

Take the time on this trip uphill

Lovely chandelier trees above my head

Dancing leaves, asking me to dance with them and take a break

You will make it there, they say

Look at me; the house said I have stories from the West to tell

Redbuds from the rose said

smell the life  of soil to get you up all the way

Don't rush the bird sang you will make it all the way

Night jasmine lingering here is this scent for you to take

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Revised Sweet boy

Play in the soccer field, my sweet boy

Team player go-getter

sweet red cheeks

Come home early, don’t be late

Green grass

is waiting for your presence to park where children play, laugh, learn,loud laughers

Go Go play sweet boy

Be aware of your surroundings, watch your back don't talk to strangers

My sweet cheeks

Backpacks full of schoolwork

Shots fired

Have wounded, sweet red cheeks

No more joy to the field

Rivers of tears

No more laughter

Tear of pain for the cruelty of

one

of a once Sweet boy

Sweet boy, innocent human

Never again will you score a shooting ball

You have been taken by the hand of a teen, once a sweet boy

How has hate violence poisoned the veins of our young boys, sweet boys?

Sweet cheeks, why would someone do this to you?

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Original Sweet boy

Go play in the soccer field

Team player, sweet red cheeks

Come home early, don’t be late

Green grass is waiting for your presence to park where children play

Go Go play

Be aware of your surroundings, watch your back

Backpacks full of schoolwork

Shots fired wounded sweet red cheeks

No more joy to the field

Tear of pain for the cruelty of one

Sweet boy

Will never again score a shooting ball

You have been taken by the hand of a teen boy

How has hate violence poisoned the veins of our young boys

Sweet cheeks, why would someone do this to you?

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Revised A gift

I give you back strength from the pain

I gained the strength to carry the pain

I give you back

Joy from the sadness I endured

I give you courage from the failures and defeats

I give you back oxygen to fill my lungs with life, I give you back

I give you back the love from the sorrow of weeping

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Orginal A gift

I  give you back the strength you gave to me

I give you back the joy after the sadness

I give you back the courage for failing

I give you back the oxygen you gave me exist

I give you back the love that gave me life

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Same

Like you, like you

Like you, I imagined my life with you

I’m skeptical

Like you

I still see you as a young version of when we met

Like you

I hurt you

unknowingly

Like you

I found someone else

Like you

I always wondered why we didn’t try

Like you Like you

I know you will always be around

Like you I fear

I fear to know what if fear of us

Like you,

I take people for granted

and later run to you

to seek comfort

Comfort for the goodbyes

Like you, I can’t tell what this is

Like you

I want it like this, a fantasy love that will never will be

Like you

We are the lost love we long for the rest of our lives

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Same

Like you

Like you, I imagined my life with

Like you, I’m skeptical

Like you

I still see you as a young version of when we met

Like you

I hurt you unknowingly

Like you, I found someone else

Like you, I always wondered why we didn’t try

Like you, I know you will always be around

Like you, I fear to know what if

Like you, I take people for granted and later run to you

Like you, I can’t tell what this is

Like you, I want it like this, a fantasy

Like you, we are the lost love we long for the rest of our lives

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Revise I come from here and there

I come from tequila and laughter

I come from blue skies

melodies of memories

I come from the busy and the noisy

I come from streets and dead silence

I come from different shades

bright-dark hues

I come from madness,chaos

Mayhem

I come from walking steep hills surrounded by trees and the walking dead

I come from getting lyft rides and buses and train rides

I come from nearby

I come from curiosity, loving hearts

strong roots

I come from the unknown

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I come from tequila and laughter

I come from blue skies and melodies

I come from busy noise streets and dead silence

I come from different shades of colors, bright-dark hues

I come from madness and chaos

I come from walking steep hills surrounded by trees

I come from getting lyft rides and buses

I come from nearby

I come from curiosity, loving heart,s and strong roots

I come from the unknown