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Handout T1W7 Social media 3E Improving counter paragraphs for Argumentative writing (2)

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How often do you really think about what you share on social media

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Abhijit Naskar, one of the world's famous Neuroscientists and an untiring advocate of global harmony and peace once said. Facebook is to mental health, what fossil fuel is to climate health.” Since climate change is an extremely negative effect contributed extensively by the burning of fossil fuels, Facebook which is a social media platform contributes extensively to mental health problems.

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Have you ever wondered how social media can change the way we think and act?

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Are you constanstly thinking about the comments that others post on your post?

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Have you ever wondered what happens to the pictures you post on social media

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Was there ever a time when you felt worthless after vacuously consuming negativity in social media's from unknown users?

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Enlightenment: As the saying goes "Comparing your real life to someone else's controlled content will only lead to more superficial opinions and an unhealthy mindset," it suggests that social media is a networking platform that simply displays the outer shell and physical appearance of oneself, changing one's perspectives to downgrade their self-esteem and leave a detrimental effect on one's mental health.

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Social media is like a mirror. Behind that mirror is something you would not expect...

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Would you type hurtful comments under people's post if you could remain anonymous?

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Did you know that 60% of people aged between 12 and 25 who spend more than  2 hours on social media daily are at a high risk for mental health problems. Why do you think so?

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Wow, if I had a nickel for every time I had a midlife crisis because someone disliked my post, I'd have two nickels - which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice.

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an average 4.76 billion people around the world use social media daily. Half the world has a chance on encountering an embarrassing post of yours. Even if it is just a 1 percent chance,47.6 million individuals have already seen it.It is no wonder why people would be stressed if something embarrassing about them has been leaked online

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Did you know social media caused depression in 13% and anxiety in 32% of teenagers from 12-17 who use social media, while 25% of adults who use social media from ages 18-25 had reported mental illness?

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Could social media cause you to be mentally unstable?

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Have you ever felt safe posting on social media?

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Have you ever felt safe to let loose online because no one knows the actual 'you'? A research study has found a majority of teens have experienced some form of cyberbullying.

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have you ever felt jealous when comparing others' lives on social media to your own?

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Have you ever thought of how social media affects your
brain?

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Have you ever wondered how social media has changed you as an individual?

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If you did not post the photo, will you still be the same person?

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Social media is one of the main causes of mental disorders such as depression.

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using statistics

multiple studies has shown that there is a strong link between social media and an increased risk of many mental health issues such as depression, anxiety and self-image issues.

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Since the release of smartphones and increasing usage of social media, mental health concerns have increased in children and young adults. The rate of adolescents reporting symptoms of major depression in a given year increased by 63% from 2009 to 2017. What do these statistics mean to you?

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Are people really themselves online?

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Have you ever wondered if social media always tells the truth?

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Have you ever wondered why you are so addicted to social media?

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Have you ever wondered what people do with your post after you upload it?

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Do you ever feel bad about yourself after scrolling through social media?

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Have you ever compared yourself to what you see on social media

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Have you ever wonder what happens on the other side of a good post?

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Have you ever felt sad when scrolling mindlessly through social media?

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Have you ever thought why do you feel insecure after scrolling through social media?

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Group 7(Elissa,Min Xuan, Chen Jian, Clarence)

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Group 7(Elissa,Min Xuan, Chen Jian, Clarence)

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Social Media is a large part of many people's lives. Many people are able to have access to a wide range of informative content for education and news that could be instantly updated using these platforms. Creators and influences are able to make a living out of doing things that interest them and educating others while doing so due to companies who want to promote their product or services.

Therefore, social media is able to bring more benefits to the society

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Group 6 ( Jing Yi, Harshita, Genevia, Ragavi)

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Group 6 ( Jing Yi, Harshita, Genevia, Ragavi)

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Through social media, many users' privacy have been breached[is this specific?]. The unpredictability of the sponsorship social media influencers experience unstable income. [Clear, Specific arguments lacking]

Stance lacking

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group 3(no) kaizhe theodore zechariah rylee

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Is social media really that bad? Social media are platforms where people from all around world are able to share their passion and believe to others through a virtual screen. counter to many believes we feel that social media benefits outweighs its disadvantages. Social media allows one to gain publicity when other people resonates with their post. Social media is able connect one to others and share their believes and influencing others to follow their opinions. Through digital platforms, users are able to gain meaningful information on what is going on around the world with a click of a button.

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Group 5- Rakshita, Yoshitha, Lixuan, Ying Xuan

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Group 5- Rakshita, Yoshitha, Lixuan, Ying Xuan

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Social media has improved the visibility and allows users to gain instantaneous fame. It has allowed users to connect with the audience at a deeper level and fosters a meaningful relationship that enables for longevity and sustained recognition.
Sponsorships build their reputation and ensures the stable financial income. Social media can also help users to bond and share their common interests, this comfortable environment has a wide sphere of influence on the users and affects their daily habits and practices. The meaningful content shared raises awareness on global affairs and keeps us up to date on such issues, this can allow the viewers to acquire educational and useful knowledge too, thanks to social media.

Therefore, I believe that the countless benefits of social media simply outweighs the harm caused and disadvantages of the social media platforms.

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Grp 10 (Jathniel, Delia, Yeexuan, Samanvi)

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Grp 10 (Jathniel, Delia, Yeexuan, Samanvi)

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While social media gives us access to global information and meaningful content all over the world, it also exposes us to toxic online culture and the influence of harmful ideologies [.]due to the growing increase of these aspects online, therefore we feel that social media brings more harm then good.

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Social media can be detrimental to our mental and physical health. It is an online platform where people share about their life to other people. However,people might post hateful comments and demotivate creators of the posts. Cyberbullying is also very common on social media platforms nowadays and can affect their mental wellbeing.
People also become addicted to social media and cause them to use social media for long hours which causes lack of sleep, resulting in fatigue.People may also use so much social media that they do not interact with people in real life, thus, resulting in the lack of Face to face interaction.
Are your points from the list given to you? are they clear, specific?
Your stance?

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Group 1 ( Tracy, Sarah, Si Jie, Charlene and Alisha )

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Group 1 ( Tracy, Sarah, Si Jie, Charlene and Alisha )

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Social media is beneficial as it allows users to gain publicity and expand their social circle. Social media provides instant access to global resources and information. Wtih publicity gain, influencers can use thier platform to share meaningful content and spread awareness to their audience.

Therefore, from these points we can reap a plethorial of benefits from social media. Social media does not bring more harm than good

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Social media has brought instantaneous fame and fortune for people through sponsorships and deals from mega corporations. Lavish and alternative lifestyles that have previously been hidden away can now be easily observed today thanks to social media.

It is clear therefore, that the benefits of social media outweigh the costs on a progressive society.

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1LkQU_PnW-fGHYza0Dvn_RWgrH01sAw6DY6PGNtNDCus/edit?usp=sharing

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Social media has brought instantaneous fame and fortune for people through sponsorships and deals from mega corporations. Lavish and alternative lifestyles that have previously been hidden away can now be easily observed today thanks to social media.

However, the benefits that social media bring are fleeting and its negative effects are widespread. In the long run, social media brings more harm than good.

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Social media has brought about the ability to access many platforms in order to socialise. However, in such social platforms, the culture of toxicity has become prevalent. This has led to the dissemination of harmful ideology that led to the degradation of one's moral conscience [run-on]which can be caused by exposure of unhealthy influences from the lifestyle and content of influencers. Therefore, social media brings more harm than good as it negatively influences people instead of promoting healthy behaviour

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Group 8( Arnav, Alexa, Thaddeus, hemang)

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Group 8( Arnav, Alexa, Thaddeus, hemang)

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SOcial media is beneficial as it provides good and meaningful content for all users. It also provides publicity for business and is a platform for entrepreneurs for marketing their product. Influencers on social media also earn high incomes on social media.[clear, specific? ]

Your stance is supposed to be that "S.M brings more harm than good." You've written the opposite stance.