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problem statement could be condense into a vertical column rather than across the whole slide horizontally just due to presentation purposes

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Good research exploration. Very thorough!

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- Current events showing how real the problem is.

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mind map could be scanned for easier readability

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nice sketches!

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Maybe try to consolidate your sketches. It'll save time for the renders and solutions in the end.

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Great presentation!

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feedback on the bell CAD, some consideration of easy visibility could be if the product were to be perpendicular from the wall so that if you're facing parallel of the cabin you could easily point it out

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nice use of contrasting colors for readability

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Nice metaphor and system map on it!

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Try to interpret the slides rather than read off the slides

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maybe addressing privacy concerns somehow would be something to consider as 1 slide

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How would you make sure, that the pinch gesture isn't triggert on accident, e.g. when grabbing the sterring wheel?

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nice in-context renders

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great layout of the whole system design

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Small tracking device for children has different sizes when shown in context. Not sure how large it is or if they come in different sizes?

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Great work. It would be nice to see the steps of the user putting the bike on the bus storage, and taking it off