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I like the colour scheme but i think it may be a bit girly, the key images link and show continuity. the layout is nice resembles a real music magazine. Maybe improve by changing the colour scheme to appear less girly.

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what do you think about the..?

Colour scheme

Images

layout

content

Does it look realistic

how could it be improved

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This is the third page of my draft feature article

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Age 16

I like the layout it looks very professional i also like the colour scheme as

I think the pink and purple go well together. i also think the images are very realistic

and i like the positioning of the black and white images. I Also think there is a reaccuring theme of

flowers in their clothing which links each page together as well as the font and colour scheme

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The name is original and the colour scheme is good the neutral background makes the picture stand out however the writing is slightly girly.

The key image represents the main story of the article well and the layout gives a balance between the different aspects that need emphasis. The font makes it look realistic however the title does make the article look a bit childish.

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good pictures I like the colour arrangement and the pictures are well placed and photoshopped in very good! looks very realistic just needs to be less girly colours.

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On the contents page

the guy on the left looks good.

apart from this I love the layout

of the magazine and cant wait to read

the full thing.

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1 decade and 7 years

Looks like they're about to kiss, yuck. Very clean

layout, lovely. Just the 2 images? C'mon Heather step

it up. Well, I guess as it's the same 2 people from the front cover.

Improvements, more pictures i guess oh god I put it in italics by accident i'm sorry.

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what do you think about the...?

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is there continuity from the front cover ?

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layout

Does it look realistic?

what could be improved?

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17 years young

Isn't indigo a colour? LOVE IT. Colour scheme

is lovely, nice and white. Key image, everyone's

happy in it, so i'm happy. The layout is, cool I guess. It

looks very realistic, did Heather make this, r was it a top

magazine writer? Who knows Improvements, more balloons.

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This is my draft double page spread

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This is the first page of my draft feature article

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This is the second page of my draft contents

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this is the first page of my draft contents

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This is mt draft front cover of my music magazine