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Topic Sentence: It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in India are shaped by academic pressure and family expectations.

Main Point 1:One of the reasons for this is that  many young people in India devote a large portion of their time to preparing for competitive exams.
Supporting Detail 1: That is, they spend long hours attending coaching centers in addition to their regular school hours.
Supporting Detail 2: In addition to this, they often have little time for extracurricular activities or socializing with friends.

Main Point 2: Another pertinent argument is that their lifestyle is also influenced by a strong focus on family responsibilities.

Supporting Detail 1:　For example, young adults are often expected to assist with household chores or to help care for younger siblings.
Supporting Detail 2:　Consequently, combined with academic stress, this can lead to a lack of free time and increased pressure on their mental well-being.

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Topic sentence: It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in China are influence by their busy schedule and different pressures.

Main Point 1: One of the reasons for this is that many Chinese young people who live in a city must follow a busy schedule created by their parents.

Supporting Detail 1: That is, they frequently go to cram school, and they rarely possess free time to do other activities in a day.

Supporting Detail 2: In addition to this, maybe their holiday's have arranged art classes because going to extracurricular school subject courses is illegal.

Main Point 2: Another pertinent argument is that they have pressure from their family and peers.

Supporting Detail 1: For example, student are often pressured by parental expectations and college’s exams, which can make young people feel extremely stressed.

Summary sentence: In conclusion, many young people face different stresses, which can reduce their leisure time.

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(Do you know that: There are several small islands between the country Iceland and Ireland. Their names in order: IDELAND, IEELAND, IFELAND, IGELAND, IHELAND, IIELAND, IJELAND, IKELAND, ILELAND and so on…)

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Topic Sentence: It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in Iceland are affected by their geographical conditions and societies.

Main Point 1: One of the reasons for this is that teenagers in Iceland spend lots of time exploring nature.

Supporting Details 1: That is, teenagers and young adults are heavily involved in outdoor activities such as hiking, swimming or even just having fun and covering themselves with snow.

Supporting Details 2: In addition to this, Icelanders have a strong cultural identity. For example, teenagers are taught extensively about their history, geography, and traditions.

Main Point 2: Another pertinent argument is that teenagers and young adults in Iceland are more close to their peers and families rather than social media.

Supporting Details 1: For example, the Iceland schooling system is focused on creating a collaborative and stressless environment for students. That is, there is less emphasis on standardized testing and much more on project-based, experiential learning.

Supporting Details 2: Consequently, with strong social welfare, high standards of living and work-life balance, both teenagers and adults in Iceland can spend more time accompanying each other and also embrace their harmonious culture.

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S.D. 1 + 2

M.P. 2

S.D. 1 + 2

Your paragraph should look like this but be about another country:

Topic Sentence: It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in Taiwan are affected by their busy schedules and modern technology.

Main Point 1: One of the reasons for this is that many young people in Taiwan balance multiple responsibilities and social activities.

Supporting Detail 1: That is, they often have to manage their time between studies, part-time jobs, and extracurricular activities.

Supporting Detail 2: In addition to this, the use of smartphones and social media is very common among them.

Main Point 2: Another pertinent argument is that social pressure and family expectations also influence their daily lives.

Supporting Detail 1: For example, students preparing for their university entrance exam often face intense pressure to do well, which adds to their stress and reduces their free time.

Supporting Detail 2: Consequently, many teenagers and young adults feel extremely stressed and have limited time for leisure activities.

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It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in the UK are influenced by their focus on social activities and educational flexibility. One of the reasons for this is that British teenagers and young adults tend to balance their academic responsibilities with a variety of extracurricular and social activities. That is, many students participate in clubs, sports, or part-time jobs while maintaining their studies. In addition to this, socializing in pubs, cafes, and bars is a common way for them to spend their free time. Another related argument is that the UK's education system offers flexibility and choices, which can affect their lifestyle. For example, after completing their GCSEs, students can choose A-levels, vocational courses, or internship opportunities based on their interests. Consequently, this range of options allows young people to seek different paths, arguably giving them more control over their future.

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T.S. It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyle of teenagers and young adults in Korea is a combination of their busy schedules and some unique social habits.

M.P. 1 One of the reasons for this is the strong academic and work pressure that many young people in Korea face.

S.D. 1 That is, students go to school, then often go to extra classes or do activities, so they do not have much time to rest.

S.D. 2 In addition, many of them have part-time jobs to earn money. One reason for this is that, in Korea, companies not only place a lot of importance on education but also highly value work experience. This makes their day even busier.

M.P. 2 Another pertinent argument is that their social culture, often includes late-night outgoings.

S.D. 1 For example, it’s normal for them to hang out with friends after school or work, eating and having fun until late at night.

S.D. 2 However, even though they stay out late, they still manage to get ready and go to school or work early the next morning.

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T.S. It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in UK are affected by declining living standards.

M.P.1 One of the reasons for this is that many young people issues of concern including money, jobs and the climate crisis so they often feel negative about their future.

S.D.1 Furthermore, children also believe their lives would be harder than their parents ; as a result, they are often concerned about money.

S.D.2 In addition to this, teenagers also struggle with money worries because they believe they are unlikely to have enough money to live comfortably by the age of 30.

Main Point 2: Another pertinent argument is that teenager's parents frequently have economic payment problems.

S.D.1 For example, they will have to pay the school's prices and also the tutor class prices, which can limit their economy.

S.D.2 Supporting Detail 2: Moreover, many teenagers are also influenced by inequality, environmental concerns, health concerns and an out-of-control housing market.

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TS: It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in Japan are affected by social media and spend significant amounts of time on social media.

MP1: One of the reasons for this is that social media has a lot of information.

SD1: There is a lot of information, and there is also significant amounts of false information.

SD2: Furthermore, some of that misinformation is dangerous, especially money related scams and phishing crimes, which can be dangerous.

MP2:Another pertinent argument is that anyone can easily post hurtful and insulting comments about someone else.

SD1:For example, cases of bullying, and slander had led to some suicides.

Summary : In conclusion, many teenagers and young adults are overly influenced by social media.

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It seems reasonable to assert that the lifestyles of teenagers and young adults in Myanmar have been shaped by traditional and modern influences and recent conflicts.

Mp1:

One of the reasons for this is that they often participate in religious activities

Sd1:

This is because their Buddhist faith provides spiritual support during times of instability.

Sd2:

In addition to this, many teenagers and young adults from Myanmar still take part in traditional festivals such as the Water Festival, which can allow them to temporarily escape turmoil and strengthen their connections with society and family.

Mp2:

Another pertinent argument is that the recent war has influenced them significantly.

Sd1:

For example, due to the effects of war, a significant number of young people face economic pressures, forcing them to leave school or work to support their families, while others have joined protests or escaped aboard.

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Furthermore, social media has become a crucial tool for young people to organize protests and express their political views.

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TS: Despite its reputation for elegance, the dining experience at a sushi restaurant in Osaka was really surprising.

MP1: The first issue was the excellent service.

SD1: Especially staff were welcoming and attentive.  On two occasions, the waiter took our order quickly and it arrived promptly.  Furthermore, the waiter explained the origin of different dishes with they try to made the experience more enjoyable.

MP2: The second concern was the high quality of sushi.

SD2: the presentation was visually appealing with incredibly fresh. The rice was perfectly cooked that balancing texture and flavor was extremely satisfying. In addition, the portions were quite large and good value for money which left us feeling satisfied

SS:In conclusion, this restaurant, while amazing service, delicious food, ultimately leaving diners with sense of satisfaction and feeling that it does great choice for anyone visiting Osaka.

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Latterly, the sushi restaurant in Osaka was visited by me, and the dining experience is brilliant.

MP1.

The first case of great experience is excellent service.

SD1.

The first let me surprising service is the staff cordial and attentive, and the couple issue was orders were taken quickly, and the meals punctually arrived. The last great service experience was explained the origine of different dishes, which promote experience’s hedonic degree.

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The high quality of sushi was second greatness.

SD2.

The ingredient is exceeding fresh with presentation being fantastic, and the rice was springy, balancing texture, cooked was perfectly and flavor. The portion was a good deal.

SS.

In conclusion, The Osaka sushi restaurant has a fantastic service, zesty foods, high quality meals and good value, and the restaurant was recommended from me.

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The ruin tells a story of a once-thriving civilization, showcasing the remains of a historically significant building.
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Additionally, this ruin symbolizes the fading presence of historical heritage within urban development.
The contrast between the ancient structure and the modern cityscape in the background emphasizes the passage of time.

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The dinner experience at a sushi restaurant in Osaka was extremely good. The first point was the excellent service; that is, the service staff's attitude was superb. The staff was friendly and attentive staff also providing excellent service by taking our orders quickly, and everything promptly and also exchanging the experience with each other. The second point was the taste, the quality of the sushi was great. It was incredibly fresh.

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Recently I have been to a sushi restaurant in Osaka, and the dining experience there was fantastic .

First of all , their service was excellent ,the staff were really friendly and attentive and the orders were taken quickly ,and everything arrived promptly. They even explained the origin of different dishes which made the experience more enjoyable.

Secondly ,the sushi there was high quality ,the ingredients they used were incredibly fresh ,also the presentation of the dishes was very beautiful. Furthermore ,the rice was perfectly cooked and balanced the texture and flavor . In addition ,the portions were quite large and good value for money.

I recommend everyone to visit this sushi restaurant in Osaka.

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The dining experience at this expensive restaurant in Osaka was brilliant. The first positive point was the service. The friendly and attentive staff provided excellent service by taking orders quickly, serving everything promptly, and enhancing the experience by explaining the origins of the dishes. The second positive point was the taste. The quality of sushi was high. It was incredibly fresh and beautifully presented. The rice was perfectly cooked, achieving an ideal balance between the texture and flavor. The portions were generous, offering excellent value for money. The restaurant provided amazing service, delicious food and great choices.

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Choose a mysterious place... like the Nazca lines.

Write 6 Q and A about it...

For example:

1.Where are the Nazca Lines located?
The Nazca Lines are located in the Nazca Desert of southern Peru.

2.When were the Nazca Lines made?
The Nazca Lines were made between 200 BCE and 600 CE.

3.What do some people think about aliens and the Nazca Lines?
Some people think that the Nazca Lines were made by or for aliens.

4.Why don’t experts believe the alien theory?
Experts don’t believe the alien theory because there is no scientific proof.

5.Who wrote a book that made the alien idea popular?
A Swiss author named Erich von Däniken wrote a book that made the alien idea popular.

6. What do you think about the Nazca lines?

Answers will vary

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Choose a mysterious place: Cave of the Crystals

Write 6 Q and A about it...

Q1: Where was the Cave of the Crystals located?

A1: The Cave of the Crystals located in Naica, Chihuahua, Mexico.

Q2: Is the Cave of the Crystals still forming?

A1: Yes. It is actively forming in a narrow band of marble rock.

Q3: Why is Cave of the Crystals so hot?

A3: Because the Naica Mine is located over an intrusion of magma so that it makes the temperature in the cave so hot.

Q4: How old are the crystals in the Cave of Crystals?

A4: The crystals were 500000 years old.

Q5: Who owns the Cave of Crystals?

A5: The property was bought by the "Dole family" in 2021.

Q6: Can people visit the Cave of Crystals?

A6: NOPE! Tourists are not allowed to visit the Cave of Crystals.

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1. What is Stonehenge?

Stonehenge is a prehistoric standing stone ring located in Wiltshire, England.

2. When was Stonehenge built?

It was probably built between 3000 BC to 2000 BC.

3. What is the purpose of Stonehenge?

Its exact purpose is unknown till now, but it may have been used for religious, astronomical, or ceremonial functions.

4. How tall are the stones at Stonehenge?

The tallest stones stand around 13 feet (4 meters) high.

5. Who built Stonehenge?

The builders are unknown, but we believed it have been constructed by Neolithic and Bronze Age people.

6. Can visitors go inside the stone circle?

Yes, visitors can go inside the stone circle during special access visits, but typically they must stay outside the main circle.

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Creating a prosperous neighborhood requires a significant financial investment. For instance, amenities such as transportation networks, theaters, supermarkets, parks, and office spaces all contribute to the development of an area and make it attractive to residents and visitors alike.

In this essay, I will explore why people are drawn to Tokyo, the unique features Tokyo offers, and how it differs from other regions. My opinion is that Tokyo's appeal dates back to the Edo period when Japan’s capital was relocated from Kyoto to Tokyo. This shift concentrated economic and political efforts on developing the city, gradually transforming it into a vibrant, bustling metropolis

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Choose a mysterious place... Aokigahara Forest

Write 6 Q and A about it...

Q1 Where is Aokigahara Forest ?

A1 it is located on northern side of Mt.Fuji in Japan.

Q2 Why was it created ?

A2 It was created by lava flows.

Q3 What is it known for ?

A3 It is known for being easy to get lost in.

Q4 can you camp in it ?

A4 Camping is generally prohibited.

Q5 Is it any interesting rumors about it ?

A5 It is a lost forest Where compass don't work.

Q6 What cultural meaning does it have ?

Q6 It is deeply related with japanese myths legends, That's why it is said to be a mysterious place.

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Q1:What is the origin of Area51,and why did it become a secret base for the U.S. government?

Built in the 1950s to test the U-2spy plane,used during the Cold War for secret military technology testing.

Q2:What is Area51’s main purpose or function?What kinds of research or testing are conducted there?

Development and testing of advanced aviation technology,like drones and stealth aircraft.

Q3:Is Area 51 really involved with aliens or unidentified flying objects?What evidence supports or refutes this claim?

Rumored to research alien technology,but no concrete evidence;most UFO sightings likely stemmed from aircraft testing.

Q4:What conspiracy theories are associated with Area 51?What are the origins and credibility of these theories?

Includes claim of alien bodies,time travel,and more,though credibility is low and mainly speculative.

Q5:Has anyone ever successfully infiltrated or explored Area 51?If so,what did they discover?

No one has successfully breached it.

Q6:What has the U.S. government officially stated or declassified about the existence and activities of Area 51?

In2013,the CIA confirmed Area 51’s existence,mentioning Cold War military uses but no alien technology.

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The unforgettable dining experience at a sushi restaurant in Osaka.

Recently, I went to a sushi restaurant in Osaka. The restaurant was so extraordinary and conscientious that I really want to visit again.

The first thing that springs to my mind is their excellent service, the staff were very affable and thoughtful, for example, they prepared a hot towel and hot matcha for me just after I took my seat, which was very heart warming. Besides, the waiter helped me to hang my coat before I even asked him to. Then, the chef introduced the menu for me with genuineness, and took the orders quickly and correctly. Without too much time for waiting, the dishes arrived. The chef kindly explain the origin of every dish and the best way to savour them, which made the experience more delightful.

Secondly, the quality of the sushi was outstanding.

The fish was fresh and well prepared, with excellent knife skills and a special sauce. You could taste the aroma of fish fat and also the umami flavour. Also, the various presentation of the dishes had shown the chef's professionalism and ambition. Furthermore, the rice was cooked perfectly, it was soft, moist, and chewy. The rice absorbed the elegant flavour of vinegar and salt, after the combination with the fish, it was just like a symphony playing on my tongue. On top of that, the portions of the sushi were large and value for money.

In conclusion, this sushi restaurant includes the necessary elements of a high standard restaurant such as affable service, appetizing and high quality food. I would sincerely recommend this outstanding sushi restaurant for anyone who is visiting Osaka.

This is an excellent piece of writing - Well done Timmy

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Choose a mysterious place...

mysterious place: Area 51

Write 6 Q and A about it...

Q1: Is this area located in USA?

A1: Yes, located in Rachel Nevada in USA.

Q2: What kind of place is that area?

A2: A highly classified facility at the US Air Force Nellis test and training range. Officially, it is called Homey Airport.

Q3: Why do people say this area is a mysterious place?

A3: Because of unidentified flying object that look like UFOs are frequently sighted around the base.

Q4: There isn't a lot of evidence but why are people believing this area is related to UFOs?

A4: This area is very secretive, and not much is known about what doing inside. So, people believe in the UFO theory.

Q5: When did conspiracy theories start being mentioned?

A5: People say blame it on the U-2 reconnaissance aircraft program that started in 1955.

Q6: Which theory do you believe? Please tell me more?

A6: I believe in UFO and alien theories about this area because unidentified flying objects have been seen in the area and there are too many secrets.

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The Great Blue Hole.

Ｑ1: Where is the Great Blue Hole Located?

Ans:The Belize Blue Hole is located approximately 100 kilometers (62 miles) offshore of Belize City. The perimeter of the Blue Hole is Lighthouse Reef, a natural coral atoll.

Q2: How big is the Great Blue Hole?

Ans:The Great Blue Hole of Belize, is circular in shape and roughly 1,000 feet across (300 meters) and over 400 feet deep (120 meters). It's so big that people can see it from the outer space.

Q3:Why is The Great Blue Hole so famous ?

Ans:The Great Blue Hole is famous not only because it's the UNSECO heritage site, it's also the biggest sea hole in the world. It's famous for tourism by boat or plane and also the paradise of divers, stalagmites and stalactites under the sea cave wast listed "The 10 Most Amazing Places on Earth."

Q4:How old is The Great Blue Hole?

Ans: The cave was believed formed 153,000 years ago, and submerged approximately 15,000 years ago since the last ice age.

Q5: Who can dive in The Great Blue Hole?

Ans:Because of the challenges of diving in the Great Blue Hole, only divers who have completed at least 24 divers are allowed to explore the Belize Blue Hole.

Q6:Who found The Great Blue Hole?

Ans:It was first discovered by Jacques Cousteau, who brought his research vessel Calypso to investigate its depth in 1972. He filmed it for his TV series The Undersea World of Jacques Cousteau, and declared it one of the top 10 scuba diving sites in the world. Even today, it still is considered a bucket-list dive. But the name Great Blue Hole was not coined by Cousteau. British diver and author Ned Middleton called the site by that name in the book Ten Years Underwater, published in 1988.

https://youtu.be/hTMuiRPIn8U?si=j4WidSGUdWJGJ31f

An Australian band called " We lost the sea" wrote a song to commemorate the true Hero's story-Dave Shaw.

Dave Shaw died during the salvage mission at the Boesmansgat cave.

The story was filmed as a documentary called "Dave Not Coming Back" in 2020.

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Massive Stone Jars

1. Q: Where can you find the Massive Stone Jars?

A: They are found in a place called the Xiangkhouang Plateau in Laos, a country in Southeast Asia.

2. Q: How old are these jars?

A: The jars are really old! They were made around 2,000 to 2,500 years ago.

3. Q: What were the jars used for?

A: No one knows for sure, but some people think they might have been used for burying people or for storing food and water.

4. Q: How many jars are there?

A: There are thousands of jars spread across more than 90 different places in the area.

5. Q: Why are the jars mysterious?

A: The people who made them left no records, so we don’t know exactly why they made them or how they used them.

6. Q: What makes it hard for scientists to study these jars?

A: The area still has unexploded bombs from past wars, which makes it dangerous to explore and dig around the jars.

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Sailing Stones

Write 6 Q and A about it...

Q1: Where is the event located?

A: The place of sailing stones is Racetrack Playa of Valley National Park, and the frequent places is south of Racetrack Playa. The stones types of Sailing stones are syenite, dolomite black dolomite.

Q2: Who are the event finder?

A: The first documented about found the myterious phenomena is a prospector call Joseph Crook.

Q3: What is weather of the place?

A: The site is dry for almost the entire year and has no vegetation, but it has both of tainy season in summer and especially winter.

Q4: Why the stones can sailing in the desert?

A: The stones of there will sail in the night of rainy season, because this night temperature is lower than morning and then water will breeze to ice layer and the stone will be moved by ice layer and wind.

Q5: How was the mystery, movement finally solved?

A:In the 2013, the mystery is finally solved by both of geologist who James Norris and Richard Norris. They used time-lapse photography to recording the process of phenomena.

Q6: Do you believe the solution?

A: The solution finally solve the problem, and give more detail about the reason, so I believe the explication is a main fact for the phenomena.

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Stonehenge, England – A prehistoric stone circle with unknown origins.

Easter Island, Chile – Famous for its massive stone statues, the Moai, whose purpose is still debated.

Bermuda Triangle, Atlantic Ocean – Known for mysterious disappearances of ships and planes.

Area 51, USA – A top-secret military base linked to UFO sightings and conspiracy theories.

Nazca Lines, Peru – Massive geoglyphs in the desert that can only be seen from the sky.

Pyramids of Giza, Egypt – Built with incredible precision, their construction still puzzles researchers.

The Great Blue Hole, Belize – A giant underwater sinkhole that remains largely unexplored.

Loch Ness, Scotland – The lake rumored to be home to the legendary Loch Ness Monster.

Mount Roraima, Venezuela/Brazil/Guyana – A table-top mountain with an isolated ecosystem.

Magnetic Hill, India – A place where cars appear to roll uphill against gravity.

Sailing Stones, Death Valley, USA – Stones that mysteriously move across the desert floor on their own.

Bhangarh Fort, India – Said to be one of the most haunted places in the world.

Socotra Island, Yemen – Known for its alien-like landscapes and strange plant life.

Devil’s Bridge, Germany – A perfect circular reflection is said to be made by supernatural forces.

The Catacombs of Paris, France – Underground tunnels filled with millions of human bones.

Door to Hell, Turkmenistan – A massive burning crater that’s been on fire for decades.

Aokigahara Forest, Japan – A forest at the base of Mount Fuji associated with paranormal activity.

Cave of the Crystals, Mexico – A cave filled with gigantic natural crystals.

Skinwalker Ranch, USA – Known for paranormal activity and UFO sightings.

Moeraki Boulders, New Zealand – Large, spherical boulders scattered along the beach with unknown origins.

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The world of work is changing, and digital nomads are leading the way in this conversation.

Main Point 1:

Digital nomads utilize technology to work remotely, providing them with flexibility and location independence.

Supporting Details:

Nearly eight million Americans were already digital nomads even before the pandemic.

Many digital nomads are entrepreneurial millennials who piece together freelance gigs anywhere with WiFi.

Erick Prince, a digital nomad, provides digital marketing and social media consulting services to multinational corporations.

Mike Holp works for Airbnb as an independent contractor, highlighting the flexibility and lack of a boss that comes with being a digital nomad.

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This part is about the world of the digital nomads. In the beginning, they are really confuse about their work, especially remote workers. Because the technology revolution so they need to change their lifestyle. The great thing is, if they have the Wi-Fi and then they can easily to do their work anywhere. The one of the person is called, Erick prince. He is the one of the remote person and he is in the foreign country, so he needs to be able to do some different connect with the client. The other person is called, Mike Holp. He is the youngest of the remote worker. He is in low cost of living to do his remote work. He works in "Airbnb" as an independent contractor. He said, "he can easy to do his work and plan his own time to relax." So, the digital nomads life is, the opportunity to keep seeing new place and trying new things. The part of the great thing is, the digital nomads can create their freedom to do their own lifestyle.

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The notes introduce about digital nomads. The digital nomads meaning is them working at home or anywhere else and don't work for a company. They usually work freelance such as digital marketing, making content and consulting services. That lets them efficiently manage time for freedom. They can plan and balance their working time or leisure time for themself, like planning time for travel or rest. In the COVID-19 period, they became the exports for working in remote offices, and that is a new chance for them. Which makes them have so many companies study for them.

Their advantage is managing time for themself but that also is a problem for them like not having a stable revenue.

During the COVID-19 period, many companies finally know the advantages and power of remote working.

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Topic:

The rise of digital nomadism in the modern workforce.

Main Points:

Digital nomadism allows people to work remotely from anywhere while travelling.

This lifestyle offers freedom, flexibility and independence.

Challenges include job stability, access to community, and work-life balance.

Supporting Details:

Digital nomads have flexible work setups due to technology.

They often face visa limitations and need reliable internet.

The lifestyle encourage new personal experiences but it can isolate them from the traditional way.

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Vincent - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Vincent - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Background:

A prosperous neighborhood is a community that is growing and doing well. It also has low crime and healthy environment. Also, there have a lot of transportation and stores, so you can easily to get anywhere. In addition, there has a good areas for student to study.

Thesis:

This essay will explore the main course of neighborhood prosperous, focusing on factors such as good environment, convenient transportation, and good government. It will let us know the good environment of the prosperous neighborhood.

Position:

In my opinion, the prosperous neighborhood is perfect environment because it helps a lot of things to make this environment become perfect. Otherwise, it also keeps improving, so people can live more comfortably.

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Caspian - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Caspian - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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A prosperous neighborhood is a community that is suitable for living, the crime rates there are low, and the economic is stable .These advantages often make a neighborhood prosperous.

This essay will explore the reasons why the neighborhood is prosperous , focus on the things such as good healthcare services, good education, and the police that can protect the society.

In my opinion, it’s important to find the reasons behind a prosperous neighborhood, as this can help the other neighborhoods to learn and help them grow.

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Shu - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Shu - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Learning efficiently is important for everyone, especially students. It helps save time and achieve better results. This essay will discuss simple strategies to improve learning efficiency.

Many students feel stressed because they spend too much time studying but do not see good results. Improving learning efficiency can help reduce stress and make studying more enjoyable. By using the right methods, students can focus better and reach their goals faster.

This essay will explore three key strategies for learning efficiently: staying active, celebrating small successes, and making a study routine.

I believe these strategies are easy to follow and can make a big difference in how students study. By using them, anyone can improve their learning experience and achieve success.

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Max - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Max - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Background Information: A prosperous neighborhood is a community there have very perfect environment, for example, there are many transportation options and you can easily get to different areas. We can move around town with peace of mind. Because there are a lot of great police officers. Furthermore, there has good environment for student as well, so students' families don't need to worry about education their children. That why there have great environment.

Theses Statement / How the Discussion is Structured : This essay will take about the causes of why everyone said their neighborhood is good environment.

Your Position: In my opinion, the prosperous neighborhood is perfect environment because of the already build great rule of citizen by an ancestor's. So that mean the quality of our citizens influences of future neighborhood.

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Sen - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Sen - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Topic Sentence
The sky lantern festival in Shifen, Taiwan, is a special event where people release lanterns into the sky with their wishes written on them.

Main Point 1
The festival is a meaningful tradition in Taiwanese culture.
Supporting Details
The lanterns represent hope and good luck. During the festival, families and friends write their wishes, such as health, happiness, and success, on the lanterns. After writing, they light the lanterns and let them float into the sky. This tradition has been part of Shifen for a long time and is loved by both locals and tourists.

Main Point 2
The festival is also a beautiful and popular tourist attraction.
Supporting Details
At night, the sky is filled with hundreds of lanterns glowing in different colors. Many people take pictures and enjoy the magical atmosphere. Tourists from all over the world visit Shifen during the festival to experience this unique event. It is a perfect way to learn about Taiwanese culture and create unforgettable memories.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　position

I believe this festival is auspicious and to keep away evil spirits

As a result.it is highly recommended that visitors to Taiwan join it.

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Emily - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Background:

A prosperous neighborhood is a place where people live comfortably and happily. These neighborhoods have important things such as clean parks, good healthcare, good schools, and lots of job opportunities, making them great places to live.

Thesis:

This essay will explore what makes a neighborhood prosperous, focusing on things such as money invested in the area, people working together, and caring for the environment. It will also explain how these things make life better for people who live there and help the neighborhood grow.

Position:

I believe that learning about what makes a neighborhood prosperous is important because it helps improve the lives of the people living there and can be a good example for other areas to follow.

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William - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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William - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Background:

In my opinion, a prosperous neighborhood has three reasons. The first is that the People's Happiness Index will be higher than in other places and will gradually rise. The second is that it has complete basic equipment such as medical, transportation, security systems, a communications center, etc. The third is that it has many entertainment places such as cinemas, game shops, tasty food, and sports centers.

Thesis:

Has lots of parts that compose a prosperous neighborhood. The first one is the People's Happiness Index will be higher than in other places and will gradually rise, and there will be a very low Unemployment Index which lets the residents have a fixed revenue and can save money. The place will have very integrated infrastructures such as medical and transportation, and there also must be entertainment places just as shopping malls, cinemas, and sports areas.

Position:

The fantastic and unreal neighborhood does not exist or is difficult in the world, and the places will be rich areas or just a Utopia in fantasy, that is my opinion. But there we don't have a so complete place we just talking about a comfortable neighborhood that will be better than now.

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Angus - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Angus - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Timmy - A prosperous neighbourhood 7th Nov

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Background Information

A prosperous neighborhood is a community that overcame some challenges or changes, including a stable social structure, steady growing in economy, and safeness. The reasons that help the neighborhood develop to a harmony phenomena are consist of stable housing environment, investment, well develop public transportations. These makes the community happiness yet concordant.

Thesis statement

The article will delve into the key idea of booming community, revolving about details such as steady increase in economy, enterprises investment, and social engagement. Furthermore, the discussion will emphasize how these elements improve residents' daily lives and community engagement, including diverse working opportunities and complete social welfare.

Position

In my point of view, comprehending the details behind a prosperous neighborhood are necessary for carrying through effective strategies that can help rebound other communities and improve the living quality of their residents.

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A successful academic journey requires setting clear goads, developing strong study habits, and managing time effectively. Despise challenges such as academic pressure this strategies help students grow and achieve their educational objectives. This essay will discuss essential strategies for academic success, including discipline study routine, mentorship, and motivation, explaining why they are crucial for studies. In my opinion, these strategies are essential as they not only enhance academic performance but also build skills that are useful beyond academia.

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Timmy-15th Nov /A successful Academic Journey.

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Timmy-15th Nov /A successful Academic Journey.

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Background:

Achieving a successful academic journey requires following some critical plans. These including set up clear goals, strengthen and widen your abilities, and a wide connecting web. Many people also have to conquer dilemmas such as doubting oneself, missing direction and intention.

Thesis:

The article will discuss important strategies for academic achievements, such as growing skills, keep innovative and engaging, also founding a strong team. It will also express why these strategies are essential for academic improvement.

Position:

In my point of view, applying these techniques is extremely important as they can help people improve in their academic careers and complete their missions.

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Attention

I invite you to experience the essence of island hotel.

Background

With 110 staff ready to serve you every thing and make a perfect stay.End your day with a beautiful fireworks show lighting up the night sky for you .

Why you should stay in this room:

You can relax on the peaceful, private beach, you can take a ride on a private plane and enjoy fragrant, unlimited, unique seafood.

Stay in this room then you can experience both relaxation and exciting moments.

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Attention grabber:

Stroll into your mesmerizing and captivating underwater stay in our sea villa, surrounding by diverse fish and gorgeous corel reefs.

Background:

Enlightened by vivid painting of nature, this hotel provides a cozy vibe adorned with beautiful treasures of the world. By staying here, you can bath in the presence of Poseidon, and collect all the natural-craft beauty of the ocean. After an elegant dive in the ocean, we provide a high-end omakase sashimi dinner for you.

Why you should stay in this room:

Savouring the elegance and mouthwatering umami treasures from the sea is an unforgettable decision in your life.

Plus, you can enjoy your own beach and the magnificent milky way with a delicious tastefulness glass of champagne.

Summary:

For a captivating memorable stay filled with warmth and breathtaking beauty, check it out as soon as possible.

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Steven - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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Steven - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E8jpSXrxBng

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MAX - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because... 

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MAX - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because... 

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1)Easy to understand as there are images from various angles.

2)This ad has a great impact.

3)Easy to understand explanation.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0dcpE0kSanc

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Noida Gets A FlyDining Restaurant For Your Mid-Air Meal | Curly Tales

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Angus

Escape to the Depths of Romance in the cave hotel 200 meters underground! This unique cave hotel offers two cozy beds, one extremely large living room, and a half private bathroom. Disconnect from the world with no Wi-Fi, you can reconnect with your partner in many unforgettable ways. Set the mood with a keyboard for music lovers, hang out or chat with each other, and create your own vibe with your friends. Perfect for those seeking serenity, romance, and adventure. Book your stay today and we will prepare right away!

Vincent This hotel is really adventurous to explore. Because we an find some different meterial or do some adventurous things. So, I think thet if your like adventure, you must come and experience this unique room. Otherwise, this place so can help you enjoy connecting with your friends.

max

step into our cave hotel room.

where strunning lights and a serene atmosphere invite you to unwind.

this hotel offers a unique escape from city life. furthermore ,elegant lighting creates chill ambiance.

this hotel lets you experience a unique hidden retreat designed for special moments.

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Attention-gragger

When you have arrived the hotel will feel unreal and peaceful beacause it is built in middle of the sea.

Background

The hotel possesses advantages in the middle of the sea allowing it to build a room under the water.

Why you should stay in this hotel

If you step into the hotel you will be unreal and don't want to leave. The room allows customers to take meals under the water. In the morning, you will face the beautiful view of all of the sea.

Summary

The hotel will become a unreal experience you'd never forget. The view and the accommodation experience will help your spirits raise to next level.

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Vincent- This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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Vincent- This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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1) the video detail is really clearly, to show the location of the popular place.

2) the music has different style to present the atmosphere and to attract the tourists.

3) the visual will give lot of people to know the advantage of this restaurant.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO7XH8Lcd1g

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Restaurant Le Panoramique, Chamonix | allthegoodies.com

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Caspian - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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Caspian - This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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1) It has a attractive visual design and food display

2) Good atmosphere transmission emphasizes the characteristics of the restaurant

3)

https://youtu.be/76Y58DKndvc?si=A4a2wobA_mHWcs9S

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The Most Legendary 3-Michelin Star Restaurant in Japan

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Attention-grabber

On the water and underwater experience two worlds at once. The ultimate extraordinary experience is here.

Background

Surrounded by emerald green sea. This room is very open and comfortable and heal your spirits.

Why you should stay in this room ?

At first, it has prepared welcome food such as delicious pizza and special seafood. Because it is surrounded by the sea. You can enjoy marine active such as water skiing and water jet packing. When you sleep, You can sleep together with fish.

Summary of pitch

For a unforgettable stay filled with delights, reserve your spot today.

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Angus-This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because.... 

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Angus-This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because.... 

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1) Blending gourmet food with theatrical performances and virtual reality.

2) limited seating (only 12 guests per session) and the high cost ($3,000 per person), the ad appeals to exclusivity and luxury.

3)The ad shows how vividly the restaurant engages all five senses through dynamic visuals, soundscapes, tactile interactions.

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William - Special advertising about the restaurants

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William - Special advertising about the restaurants

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Ms. Koizumi Loves Ramen Noodles

1) Ms. Koizumi Loves Ramen Noodles is a Japanese comic, anime, and TV series. Its topic is a high school girl who is crazy about Japanese ramen. The comic is a bit like the ramen topic's Kodoku no Gourmet. The series will recommend ramen stores in Japan, for example, Kikanbo (鬼金棒), Ramen Kanteshi(ラーメン巌哲), and Tenkaippin(天下一品).

2) The advertising is special for that broadcasting time. The ramen store is recommended by its will become famous because the series is just like a recommending guide.

3) The series uses an interesting expedient to advertise restaurants, something like the routine of the high school girl, the expression of has eaten the ramen, and what is the store's advantages.

【公式】第1話～第12話　ラーメン大好き小泉さん 期間限定本編配信

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Timmy-This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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Timmy-This is an amazing ad for a restaurant because...

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noma2.0

https://youtu.be/HGKzwgoyVp0?si=7uk4uOe7GprpD5eF

These two videos(ads) convey the stories about the restaurant "noma", which was selected as the best restaurant of the world for many years.

I found these ads amazing because...

1. These not only introduce the food, but also go deeper about the chef's and the restaurant's goal, mission, and why they doing this, how do they interact with the region, why are they so important.

2. We can know how the staff's works, and what are their feeling about this job, what are their name and position. Not just waiter Mr.A or cook Ms.B, we can get closer and feel the emotion and interaction with them. In addition to this, viewers are more expected to go to the restaurant someday, because they want to find out more about the restaurant's culture, the region and more, not just for a luxury dinner.

3. These two videos are customized for the restaurant, the storytelling, the shot, the sceneries can not be easily copy, we can feel the staff's sincere about their job.

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Attention:

Would you like to stay in a magical jungle hotel? At Keemala, you can enjoy nature and a little bit of fantasy.

Background:

Keemala Hotel is in Phuket, Thailand, surrounded by green forests. The hotel has unique rooms like treehouses, bird’s nest villas, and pool villas. Its design is inspired by stories of ancient tribes, making it feel special and peaceful.

Summary of Pitch:

Keemala is perfect for people who want a quiet and relaxing trip. You can enjoy luxury, spa treatments, and amazing views in this one-of-a-kind hotel.

https://www.keemala.com/

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An experience beyond enchanting

Retreat to a lavish hideaway amidst the lush greenery of Phuket, perched on a hill overlooking the sea.Immerse yourself in a holistic experience, inspired by local traditions and natural splendor.

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our unique hillside villas are inspired by nature. Experience Keemala's harmonious blend of luxury and tranquility.

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1)You can more deeply about the taste and texture of the food than ever before.

2)Deepening understanding of visual impairment

3)Share a story worth telling, as dining at O.Noir is a rare experience that stays with you.

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Visite du restaurant O.Noir, rue Ste-Catherine à Montréal

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

Based on Books or Stories:

1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)

Based on the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

2. Pinocchio (1940)

Adapted from The Adventures of Pinocchio by Carlo Collodi.

3. Cinderella (1950)

Inspired by Cendrillon by Charles Perrault and versions by the Brothers Grimm.

4. Alice in Wonderland (1951)

Based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

5. Peter Pan (1953)

Adapted from Peter Pan, or The Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up by J.M. Barrie.

6. Sleeping Beauty (1959)

Derived from Charles Perrault's La Belle au bois dormant and the Brothers Grimm’s version.

7. The Jungle Book (1967)

Based on The Jungle Book by Rudyard Kipling.

8. The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1996)

Loosely adapted from Victor Hugo’s novel Notre-Dame de Paris.

9. Tarzan (1999)

Based on Tarzan of the Apes by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

10. The Princess and the Frog (2009)

Inspired by The Frog Princess by E.D. Baker, which is loosely based on the Brothers Grimm tale.

11. Frozen (2013)

Loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen.

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

Based on Books or Stories:

1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)

Based on the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

2. Pinocchio (1940)

Adapted from The Adventures of Pinocchio by Carlo Collodi.

3. Cinderella (1950)

Inspired by Cendrillon by Charles Perrault and versions by the Brothers Grimm.

4. Alice in Wonderland (1951)

Based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

5. Peter Pan (1953)

Adapted from Peter Pan, or The Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up by J.M. Barrie.

6. Sleeping Beauty (1959)

Derived from Charles Perrault's La Belle au bois dormant and the Brothers Grimm’s version.

7. The Jungle Book (1967)

Based on The Jungle Book by Rudyard Kipling.

8. The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1996)

Loosely adapted from Victor Hugo’s novel Notre-Dame de Paris.

9. Tarzan (1999)

Based on Tarzan of the Apes by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

10. The Princess and the Frog (2009)

Inspired by The Frog Princess by E.D. Baker, which is loosely based on the Brothers Grimm tale.

11. Frozen (2013)

Loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen.

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Sleeping Beauty

Disney's Sleeping Beauty(1959) the original fairy tale from a part of a medieval courtly romance story called Perceforest, was first translated into French and completed between 1330 and 1344. Both talk about very different stories, the original release talks about a princess who loved a man but the man rape her when her at a deep sleep but in Disney's movie the princess who was imprecated was saved by a prince. The original release shows medieval comments and Desiny's show is about deep love and the prince's courage.

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

I chose Frozen (2013)

Disney’s Frozen (2013) and the original story    from Andersen fairy tales that written by Hans Christian Andersen, first translated into Denmark(1844), both tell the serious and love tale of the Snow Queen appears.

However, the story in the movie and the fairy tales are very different. While the Disney version adds music and relationships, the original tale has a unique worldview. The emotions and backgrounds of the characters are carefully depicted.

Both versions explain importance of the love makes big power. This essay will compare the themes, characters, and main differences between these two versions of the famous story.

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

Based on Books or Stories:

1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)

Based on the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

2. Pinocchio (1940)

Adapted from The Adventures of Pinocchio by Carlo Collodi.

3. Cinderella (1950)

Inspired by Cendrillon by Charles Perrault and versions by the Brothers Grimm.

4. Alice in Wonderland (1951)

Based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

5. Peter Pan (1953)

Adapted from Peter Pan, or The Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up by J.M. Barrie.

6. Sleeping Beauty (1959)

Derived from Charles Perrault's La Belle au bois dormant and the Brothers Grimm’s version.

7. The Jungle Book (1967)

Based on The Jungle Book by Rudyard Kipling.

8. The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1996)

Loosely adapted from Victor Hugo’s novel Notre-Dame de Paris.

9. Tarzan (1999)

Based on Tarzan of the Apes by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

10. The Princess and the Frog (2009)

Inspired by The Frog Princess by E.D. Baker, which is loosely based on the Brothers Grimm tale.

11. Frozen (2013)

Loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen.

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Disney's Frozen(2013) was inspired by "The Snow Queen" from a Danish fairy tale written by Hans Christian Andersen(1844). Both tell the story about the powerful snow queen and how can use love to defeat the cruel ice magic.

The story shared the bravery and the deep relationship between a boy and a girl who are childhood sweatheart and get married in the end. While the Disney's movie more focus on the relation changed between the snow queen Elsa and her sister Anna, and also the evil prince who wants to takeover the kingdom. Besides, the wild spread of the original songs and outstanding animation bring the fame of Frozen to the next level.

Then, We will discuss about the more detailed differences between the two version.

One important difference between the two version is the story settings, the fairy tale story tells the story about the little boy Kai became cold-blooded because of the snow queen's magic, and being kidnapped, and also the the journey of the little girl Gerda who met some kind people during path she went to rescue Kai. As for the movie version, Elsa is the snow queen herself. She was separated with her sister because she can't control the ice magic and accidentally harm her sister. The movie then convey the more mind change between the siblings, and also the creatures and the kind people they met.

Another main difference is the plot, the challenge of the fairy tale is to be brave and kind to rescue one's love. On the other hand, the movie's challenge is how to use love and emotion to break the unmelted ice and also repair the relationship.

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

Based on Books or Stories:

1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)

Based on the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

2. Pinocchio (1940)

Adapted from The Adventures of Pinocchio by Carlo Collodi.

3. Cinderella (1950)

Inspired by Cendrillon by Charles Perrault and versions by the Brothers Grimm.

4. Alice in Wonderland (1951)

Based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

5. Peter Pan (1953)

Adapted from Peter Pan, or The Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up by J.M. Barrie.

6. Sleeping Beauty (1959)

Derived from Charles Perrault's La Belle au bois dormant and the Brothers Grimm’s version.

7. The Jungle Book (1967)

Based on The Jungle Book by Rudyard Kipling.

8. The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1996)

Loosely adapted from Victor Hugo’s novel Notre-Dame de Paris.

9. Tarzan (1999)

Based on Tarzan of the Apes by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

10. The Princess and the Frog (2009)

Inspired by The Frog Princess by E.D. Baker, which is loosely based on the Brothers Grimm tale.

11. Frozen (2013)

Loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen.

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Alice in Wonderland

Disney's Alice in Wonderland(1951) was a children's novel by Lewis Carroll. Then, this story was talking about the little girl is playing on the garden and the rabbit was looking at him. After, the little girl saw the rabbit and walked to there. But, the rabbit saw the little girl and the rabbit run away from the girl. For a while, the girl was looking around the rabbit, after she finally found the rabbit. So, the rabbit dicided to drop down the dark hole. But the gril didn't think about it, she drop down as well. Then, they went to the fantasy magic world. She saw lots of different amazing visual. Otherwise, she saw the different natural can speak, she shocked and happy. So, this story was talking the girl and the rebbit drop into the fantasy magic world, and the girl knew a lot of different natural. Finally, the story was different from the movie, actually it was really close to the story, but the book story was still different from the movie.

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Choose a Disney story (that has also been a book)) and write a comparative introduction and main body paragraph like we practiced in class.

Based on Books or Stories:

1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)

Based on the German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm.

2. Pinocchio (1940)

Adapted from The Adventures of Pinocchio by Carlo Collodi.

3. Cinderella (1950)

Inspired by Cendrillon by Charles Perrault and versions by the Brothers Grimm.

4. Alice in Wonderland (1951)

Based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass by Lewis Carroll.

5. Peter Pan (1953)

Adapted from Peter Pan, or The Boy Who Wouldn't Grow Up by J.M. Barrie.

6. Sleeping Beauty (1959)

Derived from Charles Perrault's La Belle au bois dormant and the Brothers Grimm’s version.

7. The Jungle Book (1967)

Based on The Jungle Book by Rudyard Kipling.

8. The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1996)

Loosely adapted from Victor Hugo’s novel Notre-Dame de Paris.

9. Tarzan (1999)

Based on Tarzan of the Apes by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

10. The Princess and the Frog (2009)

Inspired by The Frog Princess by E.D. Baker, which is loosely based on the Brothers Grimm tale.

11. Frozen (2013)

Loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen.