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As the scene in Act 3 Scene 1 progresses, Shakespeare presents Macbeth changing attitude towards Banquo : "Our fears in Banquo, Stick deep, and in his royalty of nature, Reigns that which would be feared. The phrase "fears in Banquo" indicates that Macbeth has more than one fear towards Banquo, furthermore he continues to prattle on about all of Banquo's qualities. Additionally the expression "stick deep" shows that their trust in him is no longer present whereas their fears in him are still skin deep. Seeing that his sons are destined to be king, he decides to take action beforehand. This would likewise change the audience's perspective on Macbeth's character due to the progressive change of emotions towards Banquo. 

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Shakespeare presents Macbeth's changing attitude towards Banquo as Act 3 Scene 1 progresses and after Macbeth commits regicide. Macbeth's attitude changes towards Banquo as he knows that Banquo is suspicious about him. The phrase "our fears in Banquo stick deep, and in his royalty of nature reigns that which would be feared" suggests that Macbeth fears the natural nobility that looks king-like that Banquo possesses. Additionally, this could also suggest that Macbeth would be afraid of Banquo snatching the title of king away from him. His attitude changing towards Banquo can also be seen in this phrase "He chid the sisters when first they put the name of king upon me and bade them speak to him. Then, prophetlike, they hailed him father to a line of kings." this phrase presents how Macbeth was upset at Banquo for making the witches change their minds and place the title of king onto Banquo instead of him. The audience might change their attitude towards Macbeth but instead of pitying Macbeth as we did in the beginning of the play to slowly view Macbeth as a criminal that commits treasonous crimes such as regicide instead of pitying him and believing he was a pitiful man that has a atrocious wife that controls him.

Self assessment
WWW: I managed to select quotations to support my point and identify some points that are relevent to the question

EBI: I should vary my punctuation and vocabulary. I should also sustain a consistently fluent analytical response.

Grade: B(?

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As the scene in Act 3 Scene 1 progresses, Shakespeare presents Macbeth changing attitude towards Banquo : "Our fears in Banquo, Stick deep, and in his royalty of nature, Reigns that which would be feared. The phrase "fears in Banquo" indicates that Macbeth has more than one fear towards Banquo, furthermore he continues to prattle on about all of Banquo's qualities. Additionally the expression "stick deep" shows that their trust in him is no longer present whereas their fears in him are still skin deep. Seeing that his sons are destined to be king, he decides to take action beforehand. This would likewise change the audience's perspective on Macbeth's character due to the progressive change of emotions towards Banquo.

WWW: I consistently selected quotations to match points with relevant examples
EBI: I sustained a consistent analytical fluent response
Grade:

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Shakespeare presents Macbeth's attitude towards Banquo as a scared and confused attitude.Macbeth thinks of Banquo and how he is close to knowing that Macbeth committed regicide. So at first Macbeth is scared because Banquo is a honest man and that he is a loyal person too.Macbeth thinks of doing something heinous to his best friend. He says this to the murders "As long as Banquo lives, I am sick. I’ll be healthy when he is dead" by this sentence Macbeth wants the murders to kill Banquo. Macbeth also says this if Macbeth "play'dst most foully for't"  . The word foully implies that he gets a feeling that Macbeth has cheated in becoming king. So in conclusion Macbeth will do anything to keep himself safe so if someone has suspicions on Macbeth he will kill them.This makes the audience infer that Macbeth was a noble person with a good heart but now he is a criminal and a man with a rotten heart.
WWW: I think i identified some clear points and used the quotes to support my point , it was well structured and it was a clear understanding.
EBI: i think it would be better if i could sustain a consistently fluent analytical response.
Grade: B

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After the regicide of King Duncan surceasing his life, Act 3 Scene 1 begins with Macbeth changing his attitude towards Banquo because Banquo has frets about Macbeth killing him. The line: "Thou hast it now, King, Cawdor, Glamis, all." creates a sense of a coincidence.The verb "hast" has a meaning of to have which creates a sense of using a metaphor of having everything handed to Macbeth on a plate. However, when Banquo and Macbeth were in the forest in Act 1 Scene 3 the witches prophesied that Macbeth will become King, Thane of Cawdor and Glamis. This can be conveyed in a way where the play can link back to the beginning because the audience can keep up with play. Furthermore, the audience intuits their feelings towards Macbeth by feeling not sorrow for him because he committed deadly sins that can't be undone.

WWW: I think I did well on using connectives as well as comparing this scene to the beginning.
EBI: To further improve, I need to zoom in on words and identify whether or not if it's a noun, verb or adjective.
Grade: B+

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In act 3 scene 1 we see banquo starting to suspect macbeth of his regicide this leads to macbeth changing his attitude towards banquo he becomes more fearful of banquo’s mind. We can see this when macbeth says these parts of a line “our fears in banquo … would be feared”  the words “fears” and “fear” show that macbeth is very worried about banquo digging too deep and finding out his secret which creates a sense of tension which the audience would view as awkward because you see macbeth lie so easily to his best friend which causes them to see him differently.  Furthermore I believe banquo knows macbeth will kill him or hurt him in some way due to the awkwardness between them.

WWW:
I confidently chose quotes  relevant  to the question.
I showed a confident understanding and evaluation of how the audience responds
EBI:
Think more about the texts form, structure and language
Try and mention how macbeth mentions fleance (banquo's son)

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In act 3, scene 1, Macbeth starts to feel insecure, from Banquo. ' Our fears in Banquo stick deep.' Macbeth is frightened from Banquo's noble character, knowing well that he (Macbeth) himself didn't deserve to become King. Macbeth starts to notice Banquo's 'natural nobility' and 'dauntless temper', because he doesn't want anyone else to take the crown from him. the phrase 'stick deep' implies Macbeth's fear and clarify's that deep down Macbeth is anxious, that he will loose to Banquo, and he loathes that though as it was extremely challenging to commit regicide in the first place. This scene lies in contrast with the first and second scene, where Macbeth was sympathised by the audience, now he has turned into a villainous character, thinking like his wife.

In addition to the point above, Macbeth is also frustrated with the prophecy, that the weird sisters made. 'There to be wrenched with an unlineal hand...' Shakespeare uses the verb 'wrenched' to emphasis the fact that he doesn't want anyone to snatch the crown from Macbeth's head. This again leads the audience to think of Macbeth as a very greedy character, not like the tame and meek character in Acts 1 and 2. These unsettling thoughts of Macbeth lead to another heinous crime: the murder of Banquo and his son; Fleance.
WWW: Select quotations to match points with consistently relevant examples. Consistently identify a range of relevant points and develop interpretations across a text. Show a consistent understanding of how a reader responds to a text and how a text is influenced by context.
EBI: Sustain a consistently fluent analytical response. Where relevant show awareness of links between texts with similar themes, characters and context.
GRADE: A (I guess)

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Shakespeare presents Macbeth's change in attitude towards Banquo through the language and the control he has as he prattled after the regicide was committed. In Act 3 Scene 1  we can see the fear Macbeth has in Banquo being alive as the phrase"And in his royalty of nature reigns that which would be feared."highlights this as Macbeth wanted the throne and did not want anyone else on the throne.Moreover,the verb 'sticks' from the phrase"Our fears in Banquo sticks deep" highlights how much that he concerns. The audience might infer that Macbeth is a person who can be manipulated easily as Lady Macbeth manipulating him is the main reason for his change in attitude.

WWW:Select quotations to match points with consistently relevant examples
EBI:Sustain a consistently fluent analytical response
A-

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As the scene progresses, Shakespeare presents Macbeth changing attitude towards Banquo in act 3 scene 1 after Macbeth has committed regicide, Banquo surmised and has began suspicion of Macbeth as he says in the line "As the weird women promised, and, I fear, Thou play'dst most foully for't." The word "foully" means immoral or wrong with indicates that Macbeth has cheated his way to the throne. Macbeth is fearful of Banquo because the three prophetic witches said that Banquo's children would be heirs of the throne. Macbeth has then taken over his murderous trait and has ordered two murderers to assassinate as one of the stage directions implied "Enter Servant and two Murderers"
The contemporary audience of this play would've been shocked but thrilled as Macbeth has showed a new attitude after he committed regicide, before Act 3 scene 1, in Act 2 scene 2 Macbeth would be symphatized and we would be emphatic towards him, but now he has taken on a murderous trait and is killing his best friend for the throne.

WWW:Used relevant quotes to support points referring to the answer,  had some analytical responses, zoomed in to words in the quotes.
EBI: Link back to context

Grade:B

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As the scene progresses, Shakespeare presents Macbeth's fear towards Banquo through his soliloquy in Act 3 scene 1. "His royalty of nature reigns that which would be feared." This line illustrates Macbeth's fear of Banquo as he mentions Banquo has a natural nobility almost king-like. Furthermore, this perhaps suggest that Macbeth is  fearful of someone taking his spot as the king. Further on the scene, Macbeth said : "Thence to be wrenched with an unlineal hand, no son of mine succeeding." This could highlight Macbeth's frustrations towards the prophecies of the witches. The verb "succeeding" suggest that his won't have anyone from his family to continue to take the throne. As a audience we could see Macbeth's sense of rancour when he links back to the prophecies at the beginning of the play because he is bitter at the fact that Banquo's sons will be king. The audience's attitude towards Macbeth might change as we no longer feel sympathetic for Macbeth but a murderous character.

WWW: Used Relevant and clear points. Selected relevant quotes to support the point. Shows clear understanding of the structure and language and create a meaning.
EBI: To link between similar themes, characters and context where relevant. Show a consistent understanding of a reader's response. Identify a range of relevant points and develop interpretations across a text.
Grade: B

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As soon as act 3 scene 1 begins, we see Banquo catching on to Macbeth's heinous crimes. Banquo knows of what the "weird women promised' and he fears that Macbeth "play'dst most foully for't". In this case, he is undeniably correct. To the audience, this would be dramatic irony, because we know what macbeth has done. All this builds onto the fact that Macbeth is considering to murder Banquo :"Banquo, thy soul's flight"  not long after he suspects Macbeth for regicide. Macbeth in the begining of the play is potrayed as a cowardly but goodhearted character. He is easily manipulated and controlled by his wife. His wife is seen as the one in control, one of the ways shakespeare makes this obvious is by putting Lady Macbeth's dialogue in iambic pentameter. This illuminates the control she has over Macbeth. However, as the scene progresses we see Macbeth speaking in iambic pentameter when he plots to murder Banquo : "Both of you know Banquo was your enemy". To a contemporary audience, this will have a big impact on them because most of shakespeare's plays were conveyed in this form.

WWW: Good analysis
EBI: -Use more relevant quotes
-identify relevant points
-Link back to context
Grade: B

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As act 3 scene 1 progresses, Shakespeare presents Macbeth's changing attitude towards Banquo. Macbeth starts to fear Banquo as he becomes suspicious if Macbeth "play'dst most foully for't"  . The word foully implies that he gets a feeling that Macbeth has cheated in becoming king and have not took the right way in becoming king. Furthermore, Macbeth fears his crown as the witches have prophesized that Banquo's sons will also be king. The line "Fruitless crown...my grip" suggests he has greed over his crown now, when he was a kind hearted, and a noble person at the start of the play. The line suggests that he doesn't favour for Banquo's sons to take his crown. This makes us as an audience lose our sympathy towards Macbeth who was a noble character at the beginning.

WWW: Used relevant quotations to support the points. Showed some clear points about the language. Mostly well structured.
EBI: Try and make links between similar themed texts and develop interpretations across text.
Grade : B

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After Macbeth has committed regicide on King Duncan (Act 3 Scene 1), Macbeths attitude towards Banquo changes. He increasingly becomes afraid of him as he knows Banquo is becoming much more suspicious of him. "Our fears in Banquo stick deep, and in his royalty of nature reigns that which would be feared." The phrase "sticks deep" implies that his fear in Banquo is large. Furthermore Macbeth describes Banquo on the line "in his royal of nature reigns that which would be feared." This highlights that Macbeth fears Banquo because he describes him as noble. The viewer might think about Macbeth's solutions of what he fears. They may think Macbeth is going to kill Banquo or either capture him. Now the audience will change their opinions of Macbeth and think he is a murderer instead of a hero.

WWW:  Used points relevant to the question and used quotes to support the point
Zoomed in to a phrase
Developed Interpretations across a text.
EBI: Show clear understanding of the text's form.

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As the scene progresses,  Macbeth becomes increasingly frightened by Banquo as he fears that Banquo would take his place of the throne. Macbeth starts fearing Banquo when Banquo said "I fear thou played'st most foully for 't". The adverb "foully" could have made Macbeth incredibly uncomfortable as he could have thought that Banquo might have already caught him. Furthermore,  Macbeth's fear of Banquo had him hire assassins to slay Banquo in order to have no one interfering with his life as a King. This could be quite surprising to the audience as
Banquo used to be one of Macbeth's closest friends and yet, Macbeth would still want him to be annihilated just so he could keep the little jewel on his head. Additionally, this had all happened because of Lady Macbeth and her desire of power. If Lady Macbeth were to live life like the women of  those times, none of this would have even happened. King Duncan would still be alive, Macbeth would not have became King and Macbeth would still be great friends with Banquo.

WWW: I have identified clear and relevant points and develop. interpretations across a text.
EBI: I could put more evidence to support my points.
Grade: B

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Shakespeare presents Macbeth's changing attitude towards Banquo, after he had committed regicide on King Ducan. Macbeth is quite worried about Banquo, when he says "And in his royalty of nature reigns that which would be feared."  He fears that someone could overthrow his throne. He says this to the murders "As long as Banquo lives, I am sick. I’ll be healthy when he is dead" by this sentence Macbeth wants the murders to kill Banquo and including Banquo's two sons. The phrase "sticks deep" implies that his fear in Banquo is immense. The audience will have an effect to lose their hope and sympathy on Macbeth.

WWW: Quotes were relevant to text and supportive. Well structured and provided useful evidence. Clear effect of the audience.

EBI: Could use a range of vocabulary and should have zoomed in the word for analysis.

Grade: B