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8_15_31 - Brand Awareness Advertisement Poster

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Ayang Hunter w0w's Group Worksheet Video Presentation

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Ayang Hunter w0w's Group Worksheet Video Presentation

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Mama's Boy Group
Neil Bima Rajendra/20
Rafael Arthur Immanuel Hady/25
Varrel Anthony Jhazero/29

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Copy of Investment Opportunity in Mexico by Slidesgo

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8_15_31 - Direct Selling Advertisement Poster

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1. First, you pick a brand by considering its value. nice!
2. Next, please set the headline, slogan, that based on the highlighted feauture/ benefit you want to offer through brand awareness and direct selling ads.
3. Please check the advertising project slides if you need some references in making headline.

Overall, it's an excellent progress!
Cheers!

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1. The headline and the way you set the element based on the target audience are amazing. great!
2. Next step: pick a symbol / visual look that can help you deliver your offering. Remember that your target audience is kids.
3. Improve the body part on both ads. make it more persuasive. Remember the very important assessment is on how you use English to promote your product.

Great one! Cheers!

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1. The way you present the body of the ads is interesting.
2. It will be better if you select a more specific target audience. why? because it will help you much build the storyline / the symbol to represent your value/benefit/product.
3. Headline and slogan in direct selling are cool and interesting. good job! It convinces people to buy. but... you need to consider the strategy and the body (your explanation about your offering). And then see, whether the headline and slogan still represent the body or not.
4. For the brand awareness, try to decide the value/features/benefits that you want to offer first, then you can think about the headline.

Great progress, everyone!
thanks!

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1.  I do appreciate your progress. It's significant.
2. You can check my detailed comment on your PPT.
3. Check any typos, especially your media is poster.
4. The brand awareness body and headline are just pefect. you can continue the progress!
5. Reconsider the headline and slogan. make it in line with the body/offering and tyour strategy for the direct selling.

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1. Good points on references. You made a clever move! You observe their typical ads well. Now it's time to jump to the next step:
Do steps by steps so that each element in the advertisements (headline, body, storyline, media, etc) is in line with one another.

Ex.: decide the value first, then the target audience, then the offering, last, the media --> storyline/symbols.

2. Make your headline more persuasive and specific.
3. Check your CTA.

Thank you, really appreciated! ;)

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1. You already have a very very good reference. Now please go to the next step: creating your own headline, slogan, etc.
2. Check the strategy, sense of appeal need a representative and interesting symbol.

Thank you for the progress! ;)

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Thank you for the progress!
1. as a note, since you are recreating Starbucks, the product that you need to repromote is Starbucks itself.
2. For your headline/slogan you can make it in line with the value.
So, the first question is:
- what value / benefit / feature i want to highlight from this product?
- what is the offering?
then...
you can create your headline.
(agar headline, slogan, dll nyambung dengan value atau sesuatu yg hendak ditampilkan)

Good job, everyone! ;)

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100% excellent work!
you just need to sharpen the details; strategies.

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Thank you for submitting the progress.
1. Having the colour trademark is an excellent move.
2. Please work on strategies for direct selling.
3. The slogan on direct selling is nice.

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Gabriel Yotasae Jevon / 11

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1. CTA: subscribe. you use the word subscribe, so it means you need to be clear on what is being offered?
apa yang hendak ditawarkan.

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- Oddie Christian Tamzil/22

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Steam is the ultimate destination for playing, discussing, and creating games.

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It's super excellent!
- the tone represent Tesla's value.
- Clear and representative.

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maaf mis gaada tempat untuk submission