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1. It towered thirty feet above Half of the tree
2. It came on great oiled resilient striding legs.
3. The dinosaur is a great evil god.
4. It’s delicate watchmaker’s claws close to its oily reptilian chest.
5. Each lower leg was a piston.
6. A thousand pounds of white bones sunk in the thick ropes.
7. Pebble skin like the Mail of a terrible warrior
8. Each ton of meat ivory and steel mesh.
9. His arms are delicate

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delicate arms dangled in front, each thigh was a ton of meat, its tallied feet clawing damp earth, pelvic bones crushing aside trees and bushes,

4/4 Well done. DL

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Glem of peppled skin like a mail of a terrible warrior
Delicate watchmaker's claws
Exposing a fence of teeth like daggers his teeth are sharp and pointy
The word delicate suggest that he is fragile and

Q1 4/4 Well done Emily. DL

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Gleam of pebbled skin
Towered thirty feet above half of the trees
Great oiled resilient striding legs
Ran with a gliding ballet step
A fence of teeth like daggers

Q1 4/4 Well done Jasmin. DL

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Resilient striding legs
Towered thirty feet above the trees
Delicate watchmakers claws
Oily reptilian chest
A fence of teeth like daggers

Q1 4/4 Well done Jordan. DL

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Towered thirty feet above half of the trees

exposing a fence of teeth like daggers.

Q1 2/4 - Just need to make sure in the exam that you add 4 things. DL

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oiled, resilient, striding legs
thousand pounds of white bone
Each lower leg was a piston
Each thigh was a ton of meat

Q1 4/4 Well done Leona. DL

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Great evil god implies that its gigantic and hideous
The term evil suggests that its mighty and powerful

Is this Q2? DL

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The writer uses descriptive language such as “oiled, resilient, striding legs” to describe what the trexs legs are like, the verb “striding” suggests that the trexs legs were wide and long for him to be able to take long strides for walking and stomping around. This also implies the pace of the trex by showing how far he can stretch his legs

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The writer uses different language techniques to describe the Tyrannosaurus rex. For example the first language technique that the writer uses is a metaphor at the beginning of the story or extract, the writer uses the metaphor in the quote” it came on great oiled, resilient striding legs.
The writer again uses a second language technique when describing the dinosaurs skin: the writer uses the technique of a simile and this is in the quote” gleam of pebbled skin, like the mail of a terrible warrior.

The writer also uses a simile again when describing the dinosaur’s teeth, this is supported in the quote” exposing a fence of teeth like daggers.

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Oiled, resilient, striding legs

Q1 1/4 Any thing else that you can add?

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great evil god tells us that people look up to him because hes big and powerful

Q1 2/4 John is there anything else that you can add about the T-rex? DL

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his arm is delicate,

Q1 1/4 Any thing else that you can add about the T-Rex?

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The writer uses similes to describe the creature. ‘A fence of teeth like daggers’ the similie shows how sharp and large the creature teeth are it almost sounds unrealistic. It also shows how large the creature is and how scary it would be seeing the creature, This creates a terrifying atmosphere.
The writer uses adjectives to describe the creature. ‘Resilient, striding’ legs. This shows how unstoppable the creature is and nothing will stop it. It also shows how the creature is taking long unstoppable steps. This would create a tense and scared atmosphere.

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The writer uses descriptive language to describe the creature, they do this by explaining that the charter is enormous. The quote that shows this is ‘towered thirty feet above half of the trees ‘ this would immediately make the reader picture how tall the T rex is and how frightening it is. The adjective ‘towered’ implies that it really is gigantic, this would also make the reader feel nervous for the other characters in the extract.

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The writer highlights that the arms of the Trex are out in front of him, by using adjectives. The quotation shows "Two delicate arms dangled out in front" The quotation highlights that his arms are out in front and not at the side. The word delicate is an adjective and means he is fragile and can be easily damaged. This makes the reader feel like his are hugemous.

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The writer highlights that the creature towered thirty feet above half a tree this means that the creature is horrifying and scary. This is shown in the quote “it towered thirty feet above half of the tree”. This quote shows that the creature is very and horrific. This is
creating imagery to tell the writer how tall and scary it is this could also mean that the creature is making everyone in the story scared and frightened.

The writer highlights that the T-Rex has great oiled resilient striding legs this could suggest that the creature has big striding legs that make it look huge and scary it also makes it look horrific this is shown in the quote “it came on great oiled striding legs. This quote highlights that the creature is hungry and wants food.

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The writer uses language to describe the creature and using descriptive language he does this by using the phrase, ”It came on great oiled, resilient, striding legs.” This is creating imagery for the reader to imagine what the creature actually looks like in relation to how powerful the te-rex is. By the writer using the adjective ‘striding’ is creating a sense of empathy for the other characters in the story this is due to the word striding indicating the creature is a chilling character and is humongous.

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the writer implies that the t rex is big scary and evil this shows people are terrified of the beast

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1. It towered thirty feet above Half of the tree
2. It came on great oiled resilient striding legs.
3. The dinosaur is a great evil god.
4. It’s delicate watchmaker’s claws close to its oily reptilian chest.
5. Each lower leg was a piston.
6. A thousand pounds of white bones sunk in the thick ropes.
7. Pebble skin like the Mail of a terrible warrior

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the writer implies that the t rex is big scary and evil this shows people are terrified of the beast

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The writer uses language to describe the creature in the quote "evil god" this suggests that the T-rex has dominance and strength. The noun "God" emphasizes that the creature is all mighty and powerful. The reader would feel intimidated because of how immense the T-rex is.

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Setting-jungle
Time- past
Opening-The jungle was wide and full of twitterings, rustlings, murmurs, and sighs
Atomosphere- end of the extract the atomosphere shows that it is a terrifying place
Shift- it goes silent then all of a sudden there is a sound of thunder that came out of nowhere
Event/ending- jungle/ending- it is horrifying
Character-T-REX

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At the beginning of the story the writer focus’s on the Misty atmosphere and then the appearance of the Tyrannosaurus rex. The focus is mainly on the dinosaur throughout  the whole extract or story, and the story seems to be told by only person. The ending of the story is ominous and ends with a cliffhanger.

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STOPASEC
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Time
Opening
Perspective
Atmosphere
Shift
Events /Ending
Character

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STOP - A - SEC
SETTING
TIME
OPENING
PERSPECTIVE
ATMOSPHERE
SHIFT
EVENTS/ENDING
CHARACTER

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Shift
Event/ending
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STOP A SEC
Setting- it is set in a jungle with a dinosaur abs there is a volcano
Time- the time looks like it is set in the dinosaur times past.
Opening- the opening starts with quotes
Perspective-
Atomsphere- the atomsphere is light and colours that are used are light and dark colours
Shift- the shift in focus is that all of a sudden it went quite then there was a sound of thunder then a TRex appeared.
Ending/events- the extract finished with the monster lunging forward with a terrible scream.
Character- the characters are running away from the monster

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The has used to structure as the writer started with Tavis and Eckels .Then the writer focuses on the Trex and by using the adjectives. In this extract they use short sentences to make me as a reader interest and want to read more.

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A Sound of Thunder by Ray Bradbury

Travis raised his hand. "Ahead," he whispered. "In the mist. There he is. There's His Royal Majesty now."

The jungle was wide and full of twitterings, rustlings, murmurs, and sighs.

Suddenly it all ceased, as if someone had shut a door.

Silence.

A sound of thunder.

Out of the mist, one hundred yards away, came Tyrannosaurus Rex.

"It," whispered Eckels. "It......

"Sh!"

It came on great oiled, resilient, striding legs. It towered thirty feet above half of the trees, a great evil god, folding its delicate watchmaker's claws close to its oily reptilian chest. Each lower leg was a piston, a thousand pounds of white bone, sunk in thick ropes of muscle, sheathed over in a gleam of pebbled skin like the mail of a terrible warrior. Each thigh was a ton of meat, ivory, and steel mesh. And from the great breathing cage of the upper body those two delicate arms dangled out front, arms with hands which might pick up and examine men like toys, while the snake neck coiled. And the head itself, a ton of sculptured stone, lifted easily upon the sky. Its mouth gaped, exposing a fence of teeth like daggers. Its eyes rolled, ostrich eggs, empty of all expression save hunger. It closed its mouth in a death grin. It ran, its pelvic bones crushing aside trees and bushes, its taloned feet clawing damp earth, leaving prints six inches deep wherever it settled its weight.

It ran with a gliding ballet step, far too poised and balanced for its ten tons. It moved into a sunlit area warily, its beautifully reptilian hands feeling the air.

"Why, why," Eckels twitched his mouth. "It could reach up and grab the moon."

"Sh!" Travis jerked angrily. "He hasn't seen us yet."

"It can't be killed," Eckels pronounced this verdict quietly, as if there could be no argument. He had weighed the evidence and this was his considered opinion. The rifle in his hands seemed a cap gun. "We were fools to come. This is impossible."

"Shut up!" hissed Travis.

"Nightmare."

"Turn around," commanded Travis. "Walk quietly to the Machine. We'll remit half your fee."

"I didn't realize it would be this big," said Eckels. "I miscalculated, that's all. And now I want out."

"It sees us!"

"There's the red paint on its chest!"

The Tyrant Lizard raised itself. Its armoured flesh glittered like a thousand green coins. The coins, crusted with slime, steamed. In the slime, tiny insects wriggled, so that the entire body seemed to twitch and undulate, even while the monster itself did not move. It exhaled. The stink of raw flesh blew down the wilderness.

"Get me out of here," said Eckels. "It was never like this before. I was always sure I'd come through alive. I had good guides, good safaris, and safety. This time, I figured wrong. I've met my match and admit it. This is too much for me to get hold of."

"Don't run," said Lesperance. "Turn around. Hide in the Machine."

"Yes." Eckels seemed to be numb. He looked at his feet as if trying to make them move. He gave a grunt of helplessness.

"Eckels!"

He took a few steps, blinking, shuffling.

"Not that way!"

The Monster, at the first motion, lunged forward with a terrible scream. It covered one hundred yards in six seconds.