# data[].attributes.attachment_link.description
See all the wonderful things Anke van der Wijst has made

# data[].attributes.body
s:pace is good, confident
afi:expression

# data[].attributes.body
s

# data[].attributes.body
S:very confident
AFI: stammer quite a lot

# data[].attributes.body
S:pace, tone is good
afi:try not to stammer

# data[].attributes.body
S:very expressive, super confident
AFI: stops quite a lot of time

# data[].attributes.body
Strength: Loud, clear and concise, confident,
AFIs: Lack eye-contact, too short

# data[].attributes.body
Strength: loud voice
AFI no personal stories, TOO SHORT SPEECH

# data[].attributes.body
Strength: Loud, clear and concise, confident,
AFIs: Lack eye-contact, too short, needs to convey in-depth content on respect, did not include personal experience

# data[].attributes.body
s:monotone,  delivered mesage
aif:too short :[ :(

# data[].attributes.headline
Bryan Ong       oS:Has eye contact,is loud,clear and confidentAFI: No personal stories

# data[].attributes.subject
Bryan Ong       oS:Has eye contact,is loud,clear and confidentAFI: No personal stories

# data[].attributes.body
Pacing:
Volume:
Tone:
Body language:
Eye Contact:
Dramatic Pauses:

# data[].attributes.body
Strength:Confident, Loud
Area of Improvement: Tone, eye contact, no personal stories

# data[].attributes.body
Strengths:
Eye contact: 3
AFI:
Pacing:2
Volume:2
Body language :2
Dramatic pauses: 2
No personal stories
Too short

# data[].attributes.body
s:pace is good
afi:need more pause. a bit monotonous

# data[].attributes.body
S:Good points!
AFI: More eye contact please...

# data[].attributes.body
S: 5 TIPS
AFI: He cannot explain what he is trying to say. It is to short. He should have more eye contact to everyone. He can add some more things about Respect. He also can add on where people can find more about Respect. There is no personal story.

# data[].attributes.body
S:

Loud

Clear

AFI:

Pace too fast

Little body language

Tone not set right

Little Eye Contact

Little pauses

Cannot see the message

No Stories

# data[].attributes.body
Strength: loud and clear, eye contact , confident
AFI: Should show body language , only gave tips of being respectful but did not deliver the message, did not give personal stories.

# data[].attributes.body
Bryan Ong
S: Not too fast not to slow. Eye contact, speech prepared quite well
AFI: Not much tone change, not confident. Give personal experience. how do I say this
Remarks: Good job for your first public speaking

# data[].attributes.body
S: Loud enough, good pace, good eye contact, relates to topic (message is delivered to audience clearly)
AFI: Not much tone change, can improve on vocabulary (using some broken language), does not have much body language, no personal stories shared

# data[].attributes.body
S: Loud enough, nice pace(1)
Awesome points, quite confident. Keep up the awesome work!:)(2)
AFI: Hand gestures please:) (1)
Please try to improve on your hand gestures, overall, quite great:)(

# data[].attributes.body
S: --5 tips--good volume--Respect our parents?
AFI:--"how do I say this"-- more eye contact--hand gestures?- speech sounds too short. Maybe more expressions and gestures added?--personal stories?--Humor added?

# data[].attributes.body
S: Loud, confident, have eye contact
AFI: Can have more pausing, more tone, more body language and dramatic, should have personal stories.

# data[].attributes.body
S: Good volume and pacing
AOI: Have more eye contact,Use more body language , use some personal experience in your speech..

# data[].attributes.body
Bryan Ong
S: Natural, Good volume, Good pace, good eye contact, good tips
AFI: Some pauses, some broken English, little appropriate gestures, include personal stories

# data[].attributes.body
strength:good eye contact.
area for improvement: hold the mike closer to you and dont keep pausing.

# data[].attributes.body
S:Good volume, good eye contact
AFI: not really good expressions, not good poses, quite monotonus.