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Jorge, you answered the question partially and tried to use "may" in your response. Although you wrote down some ideas before you recorded, you were not able to connect them easily, and therefore your speech was hesitant. For future tasks, make sure you use correctly the target language and improve your vocabulary. The more you work, the better results you get.

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Jorge, you achieved the content objective for this task and tried to use past perfect in your speech. Although you talked about you and the role of technology in your life, you need to connect ideas a lot more so your speech is less hesitant. I recommend you review topics covered in previous courses such as gerunds, pronouns, and the use of "the" to improve your current level of English. You may also want to record your voice to identify strengths and weaknesses in your speech. Keep working hard.

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First, I didn't know what disadvantages  could have conventional medicine. Second,  I was very nervous, I couldn't connect my ideas, I didn't ask any question with "tag question" and although I tried to use "May be" the sentence wasn't coherent. Finally, I didn't make any conclusion.

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Benjamin Button sentences- Feedback by Diana Bernal

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Benjamin Button sentences- Feedback by Diana Bernal

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Great job! Your sentences followed the grammar structure.

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Hello Jorge, How has been your weekend? I was listening your video, and I have some comments about it.

During recording you were  most of the time in contact with the camera, some times, when you forgot a word you stopped seeing the camera wich can improve.

Your ideas in all video were clear and consistet, you told us about your life using the language learned in the unit 1, such as, tag question in the first part, past participle and past simple.

You must be careful when you are talking about always using the subject in sentences like “When graduted in 2004…”

It’s important to have on mind the time because you coldn’t finish it. I hope my comments had been to help to improve.

See you tomorrow.

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He started  by making an introduction about what he is going to say. He spoke clearly about his age, where he was born and how he come to Bogotá. He said correct sentences in simple past and past perfect, about his two careers, university and what happen whith his first laptop. Julian made sentences in past perfect using by and after. He spoke of his beginning in the university, difficulties he had and programs that he use to improve and develop his habilities.
Finally, he concluded by asking a tag question correctly.

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https://youtu.be/sn4mdyJm9IA

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· My name.

·       Tag question.

·       My Nick name.

·       Age and career.

·       University graduation.

·       Come to Bogotá.

·       Hobbies.

·       My home and my motorcycle.

·       Digital literacy.

·       Conclusion.

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1. Before the lady left the house, she had already spoken on the phone a couple of minutes.
2. Deisy had already rehearsed when the lord crossed the street.
3. By the time Deisy got dressed, the taxi driver had already taken his coffee.

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My strengths

Since I started my process in Colombo Americano, it has always been easy to me to learn English concepts and grammatical structures. I´m also very disciplined to do home and virtual work, and I have been watching videos for several months to improve my vocabulary and pronunciation.

My weakness

It’s difficult to me to talk in public because I must think a lot before expressing my ideas. I will talk better when I have more practice with my classmates and feel calmer. I should practice more listening because I’ve good understanding to slow speaking but I can’t understand so well when this speaking is faster.