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Powerful
Good references

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i thought you had a great tone, and great allusion.

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Very strong and really made me think. I liked how passionate you were about it.

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Incredible use of alliteration.

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Great language and imagery, used a lot of repition and refrences, call to action

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Poem had a good flow with great expression

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I loved the description you used, it took me to a new place. Made me imagine a new future, and want to fight for it

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Eye opening

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Great job. I especially like the allusion to popular culture such as Divergent and Wall-E (Eeevaaa).

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flowed very well
very expressive changes in your voice
made eye contact

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-Very expressive talking
-several pop culture references which helps Poem become relatable

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great repetition: the world...... the world......
connection to real life
dark imagery turned into a happier tone.
I loved the references: Hunger Games, Divergent,  Fahrenheit 451, etc

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Strong imagery!!! Love the repetition: the world, the world, the world. powerful!

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There is a very colorful use of langue. Used great creativity to describe the theme

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The descriptions of all the different potential realities set the tone well