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i liked when you used elepses .

tell the reader why it was amazing.

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I like how you used the ellipsis.

you did not write a longer endin

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I like the verb you used..

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I like your first sentince.

you could of told the reader why it was amazing.

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I like the word amazing.

I wonder why it was amazing.

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i like your writing because you put ell

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I like the way Cooper used the word loud.

You could have done more details and sentences.

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I liked the first sentence because it was nice and long.

What I think you need to work on is why it was amazing.

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I like how you wrote ,many

babies were crying very loud and you need to tell why it was amazing.

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I liked how you used an ellipsis.

You need to tell the reader what the dance was called.

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I like how you put the ellipsis and tell us why it was amazing.

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I like the seod part of the sentence that you did.

You could tell us why it was amazing.

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i like your writing cooper. becasue you are geting good at your writing but you need a biger story.

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I like your long first sentence with the word and.

You could have given the reader more details about what you looked like.