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Part (a) Solution:

Part (b) Prompt:

The response from AI:

Your critique:

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A) Austin = 3,250 x 4% = 130 , 10% x 3,250 = 325 , 3,250 + 130 + 325 = 3,705

Keagan = 2,200

Meagan = 4,600

New hire (grade 3) = 2,600

Total = (3,705 x 12) + (2,200 x 12) + (4,600 x 12) + (2,600 x 12) = 157,260

B) Current = (3,705 x 12) + (2,200 x 12) + (4,600 x 12) = 118,200

Total additional = 157,260 – 118,200 = 39,060

Percentage = (39,060/118,200) x 100 = 33.04%

AI response and critique: Dear Alex,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to formally request an exception to the current freeze on hiring, promotions, and salary increases for my team.

Our team plays a critical role in identifying new leads and opportunities in the market, which has become increasingly competitive. Unfortunately, the current restrictions will significantly hamper our ability to keep up with market demands and may lead to resignations among key team members due to lack of growth and increased workload.

Based on my calculations, the total annual salary budget required, including the proposed hire, would be $157,260, representing a 33% increase from our current budget. I strongly believe this investment will directly support our division’s goals and ensure we remain competitive.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss this with you further and provide any additional data or context needed to support this request. Please let me know if we could arrange a short meeting to address this urgently.

Thank you for your consideration.

Best regards,
Sandra

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Part 1,

a)Keagen - (Range minimum – current monthly salary) x 12

= (2,200-2,000) x 12 = 2400
Keagen’s RP

= (Current Salary - Range Minimum / Range Maximum - Range Minimum) x 100%

= (2,000 – 2,200) / (2,800 - 2,200) * 100% = -0.33 (underpaid)

Range minimum, Keagen should be paid range minimum, $2200.

Austin’s RP

= (Current Salary - Range Minimum / Range Maximum - Range Minimum) x 100%

= (3,250 – 2,600) / (3,400 – 2,600) * 100% = 81.25% -> 4th quartile

Performance Rating: A → Merit Increase = 4%

Promotion Increase = 10% (on current salary)

Merit = 4% of $3,250 = $130
Promotion = 10% of $3,250 = $325
New Salary = $3,250 + $130 + $325 = $3,705

Meagen’s RP

= (Current Salary - Range Minimum / Range Maximum - Range Minimum) x 100%

= (4,600 – 3,500) / (4,500 – 3,500) * 100% = 110%

--> Red Circle (Overpaid) - No Merit Increase

Total annual salary budget required for the Team

= 26,400+44,460+55,200=$126,060​

b)Current Annual Salary – $24,000 + $39,000 + $55,200 = $118,200

Total Additional Salary Required

= New Total−Current Total=126,060−118,200=$7,860

Annual Incremental %

= (7,860 / 118,200) * 100 = 6.65%

Total additional salary required: $7,860

Annual incremental percentage: 6.65%

Part 2

(a) Prompt:

You are: A professional business writer with HR and corporate communication expertise.

Write a: Persuasive and concise email (max 300 words).

Sender: Sandra, a team lead managing a lead generation team.

Recipient: Division Vice President, Alex.

Context:

Company has frozen hiring, promotions, and salary increments due to global economic shifts.

Sandra seeks an exception to:

Hire 1 new staff at Job Grade 3.

Approve a total salary increment budget of $43,860.

Purpose of email:

Explain business risk if request is not approved (e.g., resignations, missed market opportunities).

Justify need based on data (performance, merit matrix, salary misalignment).

Request a meeting to present supporting information.

Tone:

Professional, respectful, and persuasive.

Show understanding of constraints but emphasize strategic importance and urgency.

Structure:

1. Acknowledge current constraints.

2. Present rationale (team performance, risk of attrition, growth potential).

3. Highlight salary calculations and hiring justification.

4. End with a respectful request for approval or a short discussion.

Email:

Subject: Urgent Request for Exception: Critical Talent Needs in Lead Generation Team

Dear Alex,

I understand and respect the company’s decision to pause hiring, promotions, and salary increments in light of the current global economic climate. However, I am writing to respectfully request an exception for my team, which plays a key role in generating new business leads for our division.

Over the past year, the team has consistently met and exceeded expectations, with Austin even setting a record for lead generation. However, the increasing demands of the market are putting pressure on our limited resources. Without additional support and salary adjustments, we risk team burnout, decreased morale, and potential resignations—which could significantly impact our ability to maintain momentum in a competitive landscape.

I am requesting approval for:

The hiring of one additional team member at Job Grade 3, and

An incremental salary budget of $43,860 to address range misalignments and reward strong performance fairly.

These figures are based on a detailed analysis of current pay ranges, merit increase guidelines, and promotion eligibility. Investing in this team now will help us retain key talent and position us to capture more market opportunities in the second half of the year.

May I request a short meeting to present the full breakdown and discuss the impact on our Q3 pipeline?

Thank you for considering this request. I truly appreciate your time and support.

Warm regards,
Sandra

b)Stronger subject line

Original AI version: “Request for Exception: Hiring and Salary Adjustment”

Improved version: “Urgent Request for Exception: Critical Talent Needs in Lead Generation Team”

Why: Adds urgency and specifies the strategic function (“lead generation”), making it more likely to catch the VP’s attention.

Clear business justification

Added details like:

Team has exceeded expectations.

Austin’s record performance.

Risks of burnout and resignation.

Why: Quantifies the cost of inaction and shows that the team is high-performing and worth investing in.

Tone should be respectful and confident

Balanced professionalism with assertiveness.

No emotional or vague language; every sentence supports the ask.

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a)Austin: 3250X12=3900X114%= $44,460

Keagan: 2200X12= $26,400

Meagan: 4600X12= $55,200

New hire: 2600X12= $31200

Total annual salary budget=44,460+26400+55200+31200=$157, 260

b)Austin rating: A (No performance increase since he is within the red circle)

Keagan rating: B (10%)

Meagan rating: C (No performance increase since he is within the red circle)

New Hire: N/A

Keagan: (2200x110%)-2000= $420

Austin: 3575-3250=$325

Meagan:4600-4600=$0

Total: 420+325+0=$725

Total annual incremental % increase: (157260-118200/118200)X100=33%

2a) Dear Alex,

I hope this message finds you well.

I am writing to formally seek your consideration for an exception to the current freeze on hiring, promotion, and salary increments within our division. While I fully understand the broader business context and the need for prudence in view of the recent global economic shifts, I would like to highlight some pressing concerns within my team and propose a solution that I believe will safeguard both morale and performance.

The current constraints are causing growing uncertainty and concern among my team members. Several have expressed their frustrations privately, and I am increasingly concerned that we may soon face a wave of resignations. This risk is particularly critical as our team supports several high-priority projects, and a loss of manpower or engagement would significantly impact our delivery timelines and service levels.

To mitigate this, I would like to request:

1. Approval for one critical hire to address a key resource gap that is currently straining team capacity.

2. Approval of the incremental salary budget (as worked out in Part 1) to provide minimal yet meaningful adjustments that can help retain high-performing employees and maintain team stability.

I’ve carefully reviewed our team’s needs and prioritized this request based on the most urgent gaps and potential impact. I strongly believe this measured exception will help us retain core talent and maintain momentum without compromising the broader cost-saving goals of the organization.

I appreciate your time and consideration of this matter and am happy to provide further details or discuss this in person if helpful.

Warm regards,
Sandra

2b)Dear Alex,

I hope this message finds you well.

I am writing to formally seek your consideration for an exception to the current halt on hiring, promotion, and salary increments within the company. While I fully understand the broader business context and the effects of the recent shifts in the global economy on the company, I would like to highlight some pressing concerns within my team and propose a solution that I believe will safeguard both morale and performance.

The current constraints are causing doubt and concern among my team members. Several have expressed their frustrations privately to me. I am concerned that we may soon face a wave of resignations due to this. This risk is particularly critical as our team supports several high-priority projects, and a loss of manpower or engagement would significantly impact our delivery timelines and service levels.

To mitigate this, I would like to request:

1. Approval for one critical hire to address a key resource gap that is currently straining team capacity.

2. Approval of the incremental salary budget to provide minimal yet meaningful adjustments that can help retain high-performing employees and maintain team stability.

I’ve carefully reviewed our team’s needs and prioritized this request based on the most urgent gaps and potential impact. I strongly believe this measured exception will help us retain core talent and maintain momentum without compromising the broader cost-saving goals of the organization. Moreover, it may avoid our high-performing employees from resigning and not creating a negative impact on the team's motivation and productivity. I believe that the Return-on-investment will be beneficial for the company if we are able to continue with hiring, promotion and salary increment.

I appreciate your time and consideration of this matter and am happy to provide further details or discuss this in person if helpful.

Warm regards,
Sandra

-changed the grammar and way of writing to be less formal

-added in the impacts of resignation of the people in Sandra’s team and how it can be beneficial to continue with hiring, promotion and salary increment

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A)

Keagen

-        Range Min: $2200

-        (current salary $2,000 < $2,200 minimum)

-        Adjustment: Salary increased to range minimum = $2,200

-        Merit: No merit increases beyond this, as green circle is only corrected to minimum

-        New Monthly Salary: $2,200, Annual Salary: $2,200 × 12 = $26,400

Austin

Promotion Increase

-        10% of $3,250 = $325

-        New base = $3,250 + $325 = $3,575

Merit Increase

-        $3,575 falls in 1st Quartile of Grade 4 (Min $3,500)

-        Merit % = 13%

-        Merit increase = 13% × $3,575 = $464.75

-        Final Monthly Salary = $3,575 + $464.75 = $4,039.75

-        Annual Salary: $4,039.75 × 12 = $48,477

Meagan

Meaga

MEAGAN

-        (Salary above max of $4,500)

-        Merit Increase: None (Red circle employees do not get merit)

-        New Monthly Salary: $4,600

-        Annual Salary: $4,600 × 12 = $55,200

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Total annual salary budget:

Amount = $26,400 + $48,477 + $55,200 = $130,077

B)

current Annual Salary (2024 figures):

Keagan: $2,000 × 12 = $24,000

Austin: $3,250 × 12 = $39,000

Meagan: $4,600 × 12 = $55,200

Current Total = $24,000 + $39,000 + $55,200 = $118,200

Increase = $130,077 - $118,200 = $11,877

Incremental % = ($11,877 / $118,200) × 100 ≈ 10.05%

A) You are a professional HR business partner. Write a formal and persuasive email from a team leader named Sandra to her Division Vice President, Alex. In the email, Sandra requests an exception to the hiring and salary freeze policy. She needs approval for hiring a new team member and implementing the planned salary adjustments (including a promotion and green circle correction) outlined in the merit budget. She should highlight the team's recent success, the potential market opportunities, and the risk of turnover without these changes. Use a polite yet assertive tone. Keep it clear, concise, and well-structured.

B) Subject: Request for Exception to Hiring and Salary Budget Freeze

Dear Alex,

I hope you are well. I understand and respect the company’s current position on hiring and salary adjustments due to global economic conditions. However, I am writing to request an exception for my team, based on urgent operational needs and strategic opportunity.

Our team has seen strong market traction, and the volume of leads continues to grow. To fully capitalize on this momentum, we need to bring on an additional team member at Job Grade 3. This will significantly increase our reach and ensure sustainability of performance.

Additionally, our current team members – especially Austin – have consistently delivered outstanding results. Freezing promotions and merit adjustments risks demoralization and possible attrition, particularly among our top performers.

The total incremental budget required is $47,877 (a 40.5% increase from the current budget). This investment would directly support revenue growth and protect the company from potential productivity losses.

I respectfully seek your approval for this exception and would welcome the opportunity to discuss this further.

Thank you for your consideration.

Warm regards,
Sandra