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why should you go to an exchange program?
- build diverse network
- developing new social skills
- developing the target language
- self improvement
- building a strong and potential curriculum
- a rich input

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Reasons to participate in a exchange program.

Learn a new language;
Learn a new culture;
Personal development

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why should you go to an exchange program?

Introduction:
For many years, exchange programs have been used as a way to seek development and growth. This is because these trips promote a rich experience based on building networks, being in contact with rich input and having the opportunity to use the target language.

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Conclusion:

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Talk about the theme, develop, make arguments for why it's a good thing to do.

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Exchange programs have been a common practice in education for many years, specially for language studies. The reason is the direct contact that students have with the language and culture, which facilitates the learning process. Now many students try to participate in these programs as they know how good it will be for their future, it's a experience that brings a vast amount of knowledge and personal development, which is why you should do it.

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Why you should go to an exchange program?;
- meeting native speakers;
- developing skills in the target language;
- strong language input;
- diverse network;
- Immersing in a new culture.

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Explain why exchange programs are important to students;
Reasons to go on exchange programs;
What can students develop/ learn during this experience?

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Intro: every year millions of students travel abroad to study;
Argument: learning a second language; contact with different cultures; developing social skills;
Conclusion: that's why the opportunity to go on an exchange program is so important;

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Intro.: Exchange programs as a lifetime experience
Arg.: Going on an exchange program will bring you a lot of good experiences for you life, that will help you improve as a second-language speaker, such as...
Conclusion:

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Everybody knows that developing new skills is essential to learn a new language. One of the many ways for the student to immerge in an environment where the target language is used 24 hours, so they can have a richer language input, is participating in an exchange program.

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Every year millions of students participate in exchange programs. At the same time, parents worry about their children and wonder about the losses and benefits of this kind of experience for teenagers. What they usually don't know is that one year abroad may help students develop several different skills.
Studying one year abroad is a great oportunity to learn a second language, but besides that students can get in touch with different cultures and develop important social skills. Nowadays, social skills are required in the labor market and it  can be important to get a job.

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can be a great opportunity to learn a new language and experience a new culture

you learn english as a second language and it's different than as a foreign language

can expand your mind because you get to be in touch with different people with different perspectives and points of view

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introduction

going on an exchange program has many opportunities for your career ;

development
learn a new language and experience a new culture
english as a second language
get in touch with different people with different perspectives
expand your network
scholarships and ways of paying for it

conclusion
if you can you should invest in an exchange program because this can distinguish your resume from others in the work market especially in areas where english is value

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- experience a new culture
- learn a new language as ESL
- expand your mind
- different points of view

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introduction: scholarship, investment

development: experience a new culture
learn a new language as ESL
expand your network
different points of view

conclusion: excellent
opportunity to your career development

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If you're lucky enough to be contemplated with a scholarship or have enough money to invest, an exchange program can be a great experience to broaden your world view, both culture and language-wise.
When going on an exchange program, you get to know different cultures and ways of thinking, as you may live with people from all around the globe. As for language, you get to experience it 24/7, and your day-to-day life will depend on how you get by with the language you're learning.

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You have a good English knowledge. You are capable of using complex and objectives sentences with an impressive grammar. Just wish you could have written more and just pay more attention on the small details like for example: articles rules and etc. Besides that, you are an excellent writer with clear ideas.

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Going on an exchange program has many opportunities for your career. If you can, you should invest in an exchange program because this can distinguish your resume from others in the work market.

This can be a great opportunity to learn a new language and experience a new culture. Because you will learn English as a second language and get in touch with different people with different perspectives and expand your network.

So, you can try to get a scholarship or maybe an au pair program. In any case, this is a great way to improve your language skills, to achieve better positions in the work market and to experience a different culture.

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Your text is very good. You didn't make any major grammar or spelling mistake and you managed to explain your point of view. You could improve the content, maybe using more arguments to convince the reader. Also working on the planning process can help you organize your ideas. Above all, you showed a big developement in your writing. Keep it up!

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You're a great writer and have a rich vocabulary, so just be careful with forgetting the articles and the time management. Besides that, the structure of the text is clean and well written.

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You have great ideas and a vast vocabulary of English. Just pay attention to the choice of words. For example, instead of writing "going on an exchange program has many opportunities", write "going on an exchange program will give you many opportunities". But anyway, congratulations! Your planning was great and the text was very well structured.

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Great text, you have a impressive grammar knowledge and did a great job structuring the text, but while you are not wrong, you could have used words that connected better in certains points, like gains instead of benefits since you used losses before. But other than that you created a great text.

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You have a great domain of your written skills. I liked the introdution because you make your point that going on an exchange program is expensive and requires money to invest. I like the development too, because you show how an exchange program works for a person who is trying to learn a new language. I saw that you didn't finish the text, and the conclusion was missing, but I understand the time was short. But try to keep up with the time, and practice your writing with this limited time, so you can accomplish good results during your tests in the future.