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Great job on the topic of water pollution! I loved the colorful poster and the solutions you have added to the poster. It gives us hope for less polluted waterways. I would love to hear more about other pollutants and solutions for the future

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What a wonderful and informative project! I love the colors you used and the easily consumable format. I'm curious about your call to action- what would you suggest individuals do about this? You did a great job making the topic approachable for people who might not know anything going in.

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You did a really great job telling us why water pollution is important and how we could begin to stop it. You could think about different kinds of water pollution and how all of us could work together to control or begin to stop water pollution. Thank you again for your project, and for making clear how this is a very important topic for New York City to confront.

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Thank you for your interest and passion for keeping our water healthy and clean. I'm excited to think about how your thinking about this subject will evolve over the years, as you continue to consider these issues.

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Amazing job today! The colors that you used and your great organization drew me to your project and left me wanting more. I would love to know more about the causes and possible solutions so I encourage you to keep going. Thank you for participating and I can’t wait to see what you’ll do next!

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Great job! I loved that I could tell how passionate you are about water pollution. You laid out the issues with this problem in NY, and I'd love to know about about your experience doing this project and what we can do to help with water pollution in our everyday lives!

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Thank you for bringing such an important topic to a wider audience. You’ve done terrific work making water pollution an interesting and high priority for local residents

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Amazing job summarizing the effects of water pollution and how we can help! The poster is so eye catching and colorful and made me want to learn more! What are some of the ways we can all help prevent water pollution?

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Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this beautiful presentation. I learned a lot about water pollution and how it affects our world. Thank you for tackling a problem in the Harbor, and I cannot wait to learn more from you in the future!

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Great job on the project! I loved seeing your enthusiasm for solving water pollution, which is a really important problem. I would've loved to hear more about ways that the audience can join you in learning and doing more to address the problem. Keep on going, your care for the world around you will help accomplish big things :)

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You have a very good understanding of what water pollution is. I would love to continue learning more about how it impacts NY. I would love to see examples of polluted water. I look forward to learning what more you have for us to learn about water pollution.

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I really appreciate your interest in water pollution! This was a very informative and inviting project. I would love to know more about what types of animals suffer the most from water polution!

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Thanks for bringing your colorful approach to a not-so-fun topic. You gave a very clear and actionable summary of pollution. What are some more specific examples of pollution that we should be aware? Keep up the good work learning and caring about the Harbor!

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Great job today! I was so excited to learn about water pollution and I was drawn to your project because of how colorful and eye-catching. One thing I would have liked to learn more about was other specific examples of water pollution. What types of pollution are in NY Harbor? You did an amazing job summarizing the problems and solutions to water pollution in this bright and colorful poster!

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Your project was very colorful, and began to draw some great connections. I am left wondering how water pollution affects you specifically, and would love to see a deeper dive into your examples. Amazing job thinking about ecosystems! 

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Your project was very colorful, and began to draw some great connections. I am left wondering how water pollution affects you specifically, and would love to see a deeper dive into your examples. Amazing job thinking about ecosystems! 

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i liked the drawing of the band-aid - i think it's a band-aid - i interpreted that as some understanding that our current solutions are not adequate fixes

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Its important to make research like this visually appealing and easy to consume, and you did a great job accomplishing this.

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Great job thinking about it ecosystems! Not just impact on humans

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This is an amazing overview of water pollution and the NY Harbor. If you could dive deeper, what part of the project most excited you?

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You picked a great topic, and it's super cool that you're thinking about improving the world around you

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I can see you really care about solving this problem and protecting our waterways

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You did an amazing job summarizing the effects and solutions to water pollution, and in a really bright beautiful poster!

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Keep informing people about water pollution and ways to stop pollution. Its a very important topic! Great work!

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This was a great poster and has great information that will be helpful to teach others about water pollution!

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You do a nice job of outlining a topic in which you are clearly interested!

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You do a nice job of outlining a topic in which you are clearly interested!

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She put time into creating the poster which means she did good research to prepare the information.

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Thank you for highlighting the importance of controlling or stopping water pollution. Keep telling your friends to stop water pollution.

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Thanks for bringing your colorful approach to a not-so-happy topic.

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Great job organizing your thoughts!

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Great research! Would like to see continued research on water pollution. What more can you help us learn?

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You seem like your really understand this material.

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I love how passionate you are about protecting our waters! Great examples of pollution, cannot wait to see what else you come up with as you further your research!

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I enjoyed the proposed solution of cleaning the water before putting it back in the harbor. Shows initiative to treat the problem and not just the symptom of the problem

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You give me hope foe the future of our city that you took the time to do this project!

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great enthusiasm about tackling such an important problem

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You did excellent research. This can be helpful to scientists!

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Include more specific examples of the impact on NY Harbor. Practice writing out the text on scrap paper and then copy it over so it is easier to read.

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Write the name down of where you did your research/discoveries

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Dive into more about NY harbor and water pollution in the solution space

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white posterboard with pictures taped/glued to it

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What can you do to help with water pollution?

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How does NY harbor compare to other water?

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Spreading content out over poster - using the space more

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Use a bit more specific examples of water pollution, perhaps how individuals (not factories) contribute to it

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Expand the definition given to not use the word pollution itself. 

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Expand the definition given to not use the word pollution itself. 

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This poster is so eye-catching. Would love to see more pollution-specific imagery rendered with your artistic style!

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This poster is so eye-catching. Would love to see more pollution-specific imagery rendered with your artistic style!

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A little more about what makes "dirty water" pollution

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Some more examples of ways to stop pollution, especially for individuals

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Could have wrote things more carfully to make them clearer

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Could have wrote things more carfully to make them clearer

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Make a list of several different kinds of water pollution.

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Specific animals and how they are impacted by dirty water

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Specific animals and how they are impacted by dirty water

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Take/Add pictures of your time doing this project!

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More specific examples

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Worth mentioning ways that people who see the project can help!

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Talk more about the type of impact on NY Harbor (ie what fish are being hurt or displaced)

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Maybe a picture of polluted water? Visuals.

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Maybe add some more illustrations of pollution examples

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How does water pollution affect your environment?

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Thinking of some more specific examples beyond litter

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What are some examples of pollutants?

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Do you have any direct experience with water pollution

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Do you have any direct experience with water pollution

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Have you seen some of these examples of water pollution in your community?

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How do you interact with NYC waters?

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What information was challenging to find?

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How does the water get dirty? Are there things you and all of us can do to help?

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How does the water get dirty? Are there things you and all of us can do to help?

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what are some other things we can do to help stop pollution?

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Did you interview people you knew or researched the answers?

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How do you think water pollution impacts NY?

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What can we do to reduce pollution?

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How does water pollution effect you in your life?

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How does water pollution effect you in your life?

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What was your favorite part of working on this project?

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What do you think the best way for us to stop polluting is?

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How did you find out about pollution and what kinds of pollution there are?

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Colorful and has solutions

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Why does the issue of water pollution matter to you?

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Why does the issue of water pollution matter to you?

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WHat are some examples of water pollution

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How does the student think they contribute to water pollution, as an indivdual?

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What made you want to study this?

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Why did you decide to work on water pollution?

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What made you interested in water pollution?

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Included a description of the problem and some solutions to the problem.

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There was a clear connection to NY Harbor. Had a solution section.

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The presentation was done with a variety of good colors, and it mentioned multiple effects of water pollution

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Student clearly defined water pollution and gave examples, and connected to NY Harbor as well as gave a solution.

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Clear focus and organization

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I like that she made the project localized.

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Coherent connections across the sections regarding water pollution

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Defined problem, gave examples of solutions, and how it impacts

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Defined problem, gave examples of solutions, and how it impacts

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It was clear their understanding of what water pollution.

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I enjoyed the band aid art work, connecting water health to human health

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Student provided both impact and recommended solutions.

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Student provided both impact and recommended solutions.

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Broke a complex topic into different parts.

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I loved that the student thought about and listed some solutions to pollution

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Gave a great example of how water pollution impacted the NY harbor

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Organization of overview, impacts, solutions

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Organization of overview, impacts, solutions

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How we can work to stop the problem.

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I liked how you connected pollution to real people by talking about fishermen!

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The ideas were easy to follow

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great selection of a really important topic and clear connection to NY Harbor