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Done:

pick an organization system ( how i’m breaking down the essay and organizing them into a chart)

Introduction

summary

rhetorical analysis intro

need to be done:

reread rhetorical body paragraphs 1 & 2

work on critical analysis intro

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Done:

-Introduction

-Summary

-Intro of rhetorical essay

-1st, 2nd, and 3rd body paragraphs

Need to be done:

-Revision/editing

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1. So far I’ve drafted:

a hook

generic introduction/ summary

attempted rhetorical analysis introduction

identification of where ethos logos and pathos is represented

2. I still need to do/ need help with

the rhetorical analysis introduction so I can have a structure for my body paragraphs

3. I will complete or finalize the rhetorical introduction essay, and rougly draft at least 2/3 rhetorical body paragraphs

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Done:

-Intro paragraph

-Summary of text

- Started my into of Rhetorical Analysis

Need to do:

Body paragraphs

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Done: Intro, a body paragraph

I need to do everything.

I'm going to begin my rhetorical analysis paragraph

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Done:

-Introduction

-Summary

-Rhetorical analysis

Need to be done:

-Rhetorical 1st, 2nd, and 3rd body paragraphs

-Critical analysis

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Done:

-Intro

-Summary

-Intro of rhetorical essay

Need to be done:

-1 & 2 body paragraphs

Revised work based on feedback

Added more details

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Done

Introduction

Summary

Finishing up Rhetorical Analysis Intro

Need to be done

Body Paragraphs

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Done:

intro paragraph

the summary

rhetorical analysis intro

and the first body paragraph

Needs to be done:

the other two body paragraphs

rereading/editing

The work today was not a lot, but I did get most of the requirements except for the 3rd body paragraphs done all i need to do now is the 3rd body paragraphs and finally revision

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Done:

1. Introduction

2. Summary

3. Introduction of rhetorical analysis

Needs to be done:

1. Edit rhetorical analysis introduction

2. Rhetorical body paragraphs 1, 2, & 3

Today I edited my rhetorical analysis introduction to make it flow better together. I also had a conversation with Maya on hooks in our writing. Maya and I also reviewed each others essays and gave feedback.

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Done:

1. Topic picked

2. Intro/summary

3. Revising intro

4. Adding parenthetical methods

Need to be done:

1. Paragraphs 1, 2, and 3

2. Add transitional words

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So far I've done:

1. Introduction

2. Summary

3. Introduction of Rhetorical Analysis

Still needs to be done:

1. Rhetorical Analysis Body Paragraphs

Today I drafted 2 body paragraphs and had a conversation with Kiara about our hooks, and transitional phrases. We read over each others essays as well and gave each other critiques on what we thought would better our essays.

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I had to rewrite my initial intro due to how much I sidetracked after the hook. I went more into detail and stayed on tracking making it more of an interesting read for the reader. Also, I wrote my summary but kept on going back to edit it due to me including parts that should be in my rhetorical analysis. Since I started from scratch from being sick the majority of the week, I still have the rhetorical analysis paragraph along with my 3 body paragraphs.