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Activity: Rewrite vague sentences to make them precise. You need to rewrite the 2 sentences below using specific data, evidence or measurable details.

Example 1: "A lot of users had problems with the system."

Example 2: "The software runs fast on fast devices."

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Activity: Rewrite casual sentences into formal academic style.

Example 1: "This program is kinda slow and doesn't work."

Example 2: "Lots of people think AI is cool."

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Activity: Convert the sentences into evidence-based statements. (Hint: You can consider inputting a fake in-text citation for this activity)

Example 1: "I think Python is better than Java."

Example 2: "In my opinion, cloud storage is safer than hard drives."

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Activity: Rearrange and connect sentences into a logical, flowing paragraphs. You may add transition (such as however, therefore, in addition etc.) to help you.

1. Cloud computing is increasingly popular among organisations.

2. Data security is one of the biggest challenges in cloud adoption.

3. Many companies are shifting to cloud services for scalability.

4. As a results, firms must invest in robust cybersecurity measures.

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Using 1 to 4 sentences, what is the key idea of this article?

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What do you find hardest about academic writing?

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🧠 Planning & Organizing Ideas (Struggling to structure thoughts, outline arguments, or stay focused)

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📚 Research & Referencing (Finding credible sources, citing correctly, avoiding plagiarism)

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✍️ Writing Style & Tone (Using formal language, avoiding casual expressions, writing clearly)

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🕒 Time Management & Motivation (Starting early, staying on track, avoiding procrastination)

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In your group, discuss and compare the difference between Example 1 and 2.

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