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Meat dairy and rice production - Intermediate

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Hi Rik,

Good afternoon! It’ s a great honor for me to introduce myself.

My name is Hu Boya and my English name is Echo. I’m from Changsha, Hunan located in south of China. What’s more, I have a lot of hobbies, like singing, dancing and playing badminton. The main reason why I chose accounting as my major is that my family recommended it to me. Moreover, I’m not interested in physics and literature majors, so even though I didn't learn a lot about accounting before entering the college, I ‘m willing to learn it and have expectation for it. As for the outline of my aspirations for the future, during my college years, I aspire to study diligently, engage in various activities actively, and live a fulfilling and enriched college life. Later, my hope is to be admitted to the graduate program in accounting. As for the future, whether I choose to work or pursue a PhD, I haven't made a final decision yet. But I know that I needn’t to worry about distant things, just focusing on the present Currently. My aspiration is to organize my life well and enjoy my daily life.

Yours sincerely,

Echo class 2308

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Oxford EAP - 4D Task 6 (p61) - Writing a paragraph (120-150 words) 

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The True Cost of Fast Fashion - for students

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Hi Echo

In general, you completed this task to a satisfactory standard. You could have included more facts gained from research to support your opinions. You cited one source to support your points and included all necessary details to reference the material. You explained some of your reasoning well, but there could have been more evaluation and critical thinking. You considered some ideas from different perspective, but you could try to improve on this to show a deeper understanding of the topic. You sometimes referred back to other students' ideas, but you could ask more questions to keep the conversation flowing. You used some signposting to structure your discussion and used some expressions to fulfil different functions within the seminar, but this could be improved on. Your wide range of subject specific vocabulary allowed you to explain complex ideas accurately and demonstrated that you had researched the topic well.

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Hi Echo

In general, you answered the essay question very well. Your thesis was very clear and gave your stance on the evaluation of the solutions. You gave a clear outline for your essay that matched each of your body paragraphs. You gave clear topic sentences that explained the main idea of each paragraph and summarised the main points well in your concluding sentences and supported your stance. You included some very good evaluation where you justified your stance quite well. You also used some great evaluative language which makes your writing sound academic. Your in-text citations are mostly accurate, but you tend to always use the same form. Try to include a variety of reporting structures. For example, you can use structures like "according to …" or you can use reporting verbs like "argues that …". Reporting verbs have many different meanings that can be used to emphasise your interpretation of the author's ideas.

Rik