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Boracay is the best vacation spot because of the white sand, peaceful surrounding, and high quality hotels.

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Puerto Princessa, Palawan is the best beach in the Philippines because of the fine sand, clear waters, and scenic views.

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Pico De Loro is the best travel destinations in the Philippines because the service there is good, the swimming places are clean, and the activities there are fun.

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One of the best travel locations in the Philippines is Boracay because of the nice and fine sand, the clear waters, and the cool breeze.

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Baguio is one of the many great tourist attractions in the Philippines because of its scenery, cold climate, and history.

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Boracay is a wonderful tourist destination because of the high quality sand, the crystal clear water, and the relaxing heat.

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Alisha A. Li.                                                                                                                    Palawan  is an amazing place to visit because it has beautiful islands, amazing animals, and welcoming people.

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Alisha A. Li.                                                                                                                    Palawan  is an amazing place to visit because it has beautiful islands, amazing animals, and welcoming people.

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Amanpulo, Palawan is the best beach in the Philippines because of the crystal-clear water, soft sand, and rich biodiversity.

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Palawan is the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its unique beaches , Secret lagoon, and rich culture.

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Baguio is the best tourist destination in the Philippines because it has cold weather, the food is tasty, and the scenery is beautiful.

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Best Travel Destination in the Philippines

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Best Travel Destination in the Philippines

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La Union is the best tourist spot because it has beautiful views, you can surf there, and it is near the city.
Jane Ong #22

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Palawan is the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its beaches and its natural resources like corals, underground caves, and its islands surrounding it.

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El Nido, Palawan is the best vacation place because of its knowledgeable tourist guides, preserved marine life, and many water activities.

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Palawan is the best tourist destination because it is good for our culture, other people can experience our culture and beauty of the island, and our country can be richer.

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Baguio is the best place to go in the Philippines since there is cooler weather, it is full of activities you can enjoy, and there are more sights to see.

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Palawan is the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its beautiful beaches, high quality hotels, and amazing sceneries.

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Batanes is the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its wonderful landscapes and culture.

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Boracay is the best tourist spot in the Philippines because it has beautiful white sand, amazing creatures, and high quality hotels.

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Baguio is an ideal place for tourists because of its activities, culture, and climate.

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Bohol is a good place to visit because it has nice beaches, beautiful animals to see, and a lot of fun activities to do.

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The best destination in the Philippines is Cebu because of their food, great views, and nice beaches.

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Boracay is the best travel destination because they have many kinds of delicacies, they also have types of beach sports or water sports, and they have island hopping.

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Cebu is a wonderful place to visit because of its serene beaches, delectable food, and rich culture.

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Palawan is a beauty because your experience with nature at its finest with its breathtaking views and the sumptuous food it offers are enough reason to disconnect to the metro.

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Thesis Statement                                                          Nichole Yam  CN: 38

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The Tubbataha Reef is a great place to go to for a vacation because you can explore, become more mindful of your surroundings, and be more attached to the earth, our home.

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Danica Castro
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7-Unity

Bohol is a nice place to visit because it has the unique Chocolate Hills, white sand, and a lot of fresh and cheap seafood.

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Best Travel Destinations in the Philippines

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For me, El Nido, Palawan is so far the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its beautiful surroundings, clean beaches, and friendly people.
(Adrianna Ang #3)

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Thesis Statement, Best Tourist Spot,Gabbie Chan

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The best tourist spots in the Philipines are in Vigan because of the beautiful sceneries from "The Dancing Water Fountain" to Calle Crisologo, and there are so many other sights to enjoy.

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Palawan is beautiful because it is clean, peaceful, and has good views.

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Jade Ongpeng                                                             #24
7-Unity
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I think the best travel destination is Las Casas De Acuzar in Bataan because it is historic, the houses were part of Philippine history, and while you experience the historical houses, you can also swim or just relax on the beach.

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Boracay is a nice place to visit because it is newly cleaned, it has good food, and it has nice beaches.

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The Philippines is the best travel destination for its natural scenic spots, beaches, and culture and traditions.

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Boracay is the most breathtaking and captivating spot in the Philippines because of its pearly shores and crystal clear waters.

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Palawan is one of the most beautiful islands in the world because you could take a break from reality, connect with others, or simply see wonders it may present.

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Surigao del Norte is the best getaway destination for those tired of mainstream society due to its relatively hidden and uncommercialised natural attractions like forests, caves, rivers, and the Britanya group of islands.

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The best travel destination in the Philippines is Tagaytay because it is known for its mild climate, it sits on a ridge above Taal Volcano Island, and it is surrounded by Taal Lake, a tourist destination of its own.

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Baguio is the summer capital of the Philippines because it is the coldest spot in the Philippines , the only plantation of strawberries in the country , and it is a famous tourist attraction.
Jana Sy
7-Unity
CN 30

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Giselle Tan
7-Unity
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Baguio is the best travel destination in the Philippines because of its cold temperatures, tourist destinations, and its mountain view.