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you need a literal box

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introduction:
mc lived in a wealthy household. mc's parents could afford buy her anything she wanted to make her happy.

problem:
mc was never happy. mc was very lonely as her parents were always away. her father lived in another country and her mother was constantly on business trips and didnt have time for her.
so she had to always be alone in singapore without her parents or anyone to accompany her. she didnt care about the things her parents bought her, she just wanted them to spend time with her.

problem worsening:
mc had not seen her parents in 1 year and they said they wouldnt be able to come for the family reunion dinner.

resolution:
mc's surprised mc by coming for the reunion dinner and her father moved back to singapore.

conclusion:
mc was happy and got to spend time with her parents and once again be happy.

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Your story is nice,but i do not see the picture in your story at all. If your MC does not have any family ,then who is she going to celebrate with?In fact ,she will not even celebrate anything .So your story does not have anything to do with the picture,only the title

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you can explain more about why the grandfather was in the hospital.

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Is the MC's grandmother her only relative?
Does she have any relatives?
And the topic is a dream come true so only one of her dreams came true and is that not slightly out of point?

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INTRODUCTION:

*START OF STORY: MC clutching recent family photo that was taken last 6 years ago...* MC is an orphan. Parents died in a fatal car accident when MC was four years old. Ever since then, MC's grandmother was the one taking care of MC. MC feels very blessed.

PROBLEM:

MC has a congenital abnormality in her heart (a.k.a hole in her heart.) MC was born with it. (Usually children with that disease, have a slim chance of survival/ cannot live for long/ can live for less then half of life.) Eventhough MC's grandmother fills up the hole in her heart, (figuratively) MC has a dream: to live for a long time like other children and grow up. Furthermore, there were no donors...

PROBLEM WORSENING:

After a period of time, MC's grandmother's health started deteriotating. MC realised that her nonagenarian grandmother does not have much time left as she was diagnosed with stage 3 Lung cancer. If she were to go through chemotherapy, it would only worsen her health as she is old and her body is not capable of generating new cells efficiently. Slowly, MC starts to give up on her dream. She felt a sense of injustice that life was unfair to her. When MC told her grandmther about her dream, MC' s grandmother merely nodded and assured her- not behaving like her typical exaggerated symphathy towards MC- and this made MC feel suspicious.

RESOLUTION:

A few days later, MC's grandmother passed away. MC felt so stressed. How would she cope without her loving and doting grandmother? MC also felt depressed. On the same day of the death of MC's grandmother at the hospital, MC felt so pressured that she lost consciousness and collapsed on the hospital floor. (It was also due to MC's disease.)

CONCLUSION:

When MC regained consciousness, she was on the hospital bed and heard one of the doctors saying, " It is a successful operation!" It turned out that MC's grandmother had stated it in her will that she intended to donate her heart to MC. MC had tears of gratitude in her eyes. MC was truly touched by her grandmother's act that allowed her dream to come true. In a way, her grandmother would always be with MC.

MAIN DREAM: to live for long like other children and grow up.
OTHER DREAM: for her grandmother to always be with her.

MSS: Dream must be established AT THE START of the story. Why was the dream so hard to achieve - make sure you include how tough it was for the MC.

What is the link of this story to the picture?

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Introduction:
MC's birthday is coming and dreams about having a birthday party with her entire family.Tells her close friends about it .MC's dad always travel the globe doing business and always misses her birthday due to work ,MC  wants to have a birthday party with her entire family.
Problem:
MC asks mom if she is free and mom says she needs to go for her part time job and will not be free,totally forgetting about MC's birthday.MC is than about to ask dad ,but overhears one of his phone calls saying he needs to travel.MC becomes very sad and does not look forward to her birthday party .
Problem worsening:
MC's best friend tells MC about her plan for her birthday party as it is also coming.MC's best friend tells MC about her birthday party with all her family members there to celebrate her birthday with her .MC feels worse after that.
Resolution:
MC's mom realises about MC's upcoming birthday after her friends told her all about their daughter's awesome birthday party.MC's mom tells the dad and they try to be free on that day ,clearing their schedule to make time for her.Gives MC a surprise birthday party. MC feels so touched and that was her best birthday in all her life as it was the only birthday she had with her entire family so far.
Conclusion:
MC learnt the importance of family and treasured it.

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Mihika to Aabidah on your comment to Huda

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Mihika to Aabidah on your comment to Huda

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i actually think she stayed on the topic pretty well as she kept reminding the reader in different ways throughout the story what her dream was. its also okay that only one dream got fulfilled because then she can elaborate more about mc's feeling

TOHUDA:

actually we learnt in science that our lungs are connected to our heart and if some one has stage three of any cancer, the disease in the cells  would have already spread so MC would still have a disease but this time,cancer. ( unless you change it to bone cancer or something

how does the story relate to the picture?

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After re-reading my composition planning, I realised that it had the most connection with picture 3. So, would it be alright if I were to write my composition based on picture 3? Furthermore, picture 3 can be taken as a literal and figurative meaning of a present, right? Or must it be something in a box... Does this mean that I can delete the fist part of the story where th MC clutched the family photo and started reminscing?

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Introduction:
• dream of having a happy family after a divorce
• divorce affected MC very much and MC just wanted to hav a happy family with a functional mother unlike her past two who were felons and dysfunctional.

• Introduction:

Growing up, I always spent more time with dad rather than my mother who hung around smoking, drinking and coming home to go straight to the toilet to puke. She was never sober enough to sit with Dad and I at the dinner table to savour Dad's out of this world cooking. Se never felt like a true part of the family. I always loved Dad more. He was doting ad he never gave up. I always admired how he overcame adversity.

Problem:
• Dad filed a divorce from that nightmare of a woman,
• Divorce became official
Problem Worsening:
Just after the divorce, Dad started getting depressed and lonely, desperate to find true love. When he wasn't spending time with me, he was on dating websites looking for love. When I thought things were taking a turn for the best after the divorce, Dad turned into a moping man, not the man I knew.
Resolution
• Found a lady he liked, started going out, knew they were meant to be and got married.
• For the first time in MC's life, she had dinner with both Mom and Dad, like a true family. MC's dream came true
• Blessed with a baby sister soon after.
• Finally, MC's dream came true.
Conclusion
• Things always took a turn for the best
• Never underestimate the power of love
• Blood is thicker than water

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Resham, I like how you showed that it was not "Dad" as the bad guy and "mum" as the good guy but you've kind of   turned it around and showed that the dad was also hard working.

I also like that there was a twist in the story as in the 'family' after the divorce was not with the old mother but with a new mother> as you said never underestimate love! I would really like to read your story but also remeber that the ending should be really strong and impactful. It should also link back to the story.

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the dream come true is the parents coming back from overseas to celebrate christmas with them
intro: the mc and her brother stay with their grandparents. their parents are overseas for a work trip and only came back when it is chinese new year.

MSS: How did they feel? Establish how they missed their parents so much that it has become their dream that their parents will come back soon for a meal.

problem: mc and brother feel very lonely during christmas when their grandparents do not celebrate it and their friends are all happily celebrating with their parents.

MSS: Did they share this with their parents? What happened?

problem worsening: grandfather was in hospital and it was hard for grandmother to look after them

MSS: So, because of grandfather being sick, their parents came back? Isn't that sad? Their parents came back (dream come true) but at the expense of grandfather's health?

solution: their parents came back from overseas to take care of them and celebrate christmas with them.

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My Dream:
My dad would spend some quality time as a family.

Introduction:
My Dad was the sole breadwinner of my family of 4. Thus, he was so busy that he hardly had time to bond as a family.
Problem:
He was rather vanilla. He would come back from work with a frown. Eat in silence before heading straight to bed. No ‘hello’ or ‘how is your day’ or compliments for my Mother’s cooking. I grew up thinking that my Dad never cared about us. Only when I grew older. I realized he worked hard for the family. However, I was unhappy that he chose work over family.
Problem Worsening:
Other than being a workaholic, he is a thrifty person, always finding ways to save some money. Whenever I ask for money, he would ask me why I need it and give me a lecture about how he is not and ATM machine. This obviously annoyed me.
Resolution:
There was actually a motive to why I asked him for money. I discovered that he earns $80/day. My savings were enough to pay him for a day’s worth of work. I hoped that I could ‘buy’ a day from him so that he could spend a day with my family, even if it was just for half and hour. I went up to him and asked if I could pay him $80 just to spend quality time with our family. He was touched. He agreed to do so despite not accepting my money.That day when my Dad took leave, my mom cooked all of our favorite dishes to celebrate the rare occasion.We ate peacefully without any distractions, cherishing every moment.

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Introduction:
MC( Cassey)

- Cassey came from a stable family and her parents both worked.
- She attended school like any other child and she was rather smart.

Problem:
- Her parents both lost their jobs and it was hard for them to get new ones as they did not go to University.
- soon her whole life crashed down on her  as her family was living from hand to mouth.
- her parents then started to work as canteen vendors in a driving school.
- Cassey felt depressed

Problem worsening:
- All of a sudden, her  parents started fighting as her mother had spent some of her sallary on a handbag and her dad was angry at her. As a result, her dad left the house.
- To make matters worse, Cassey’s grades were stooping as she was distracted with the issues at home. Cassey’s mother already stressed 😩 started scolding her and reprimanding her for not studying properly.
- Cassey felt like she wanted to crawl under a rock and die.
- She concluded that her family was broken and she wished that they could have one last dinner together and hoped it would make her dream come true by the family back together again.
Resolution:
The MC secretly planned a ‘get- together ‘ dinner for her family by calling her dad over and bought food 🥘.

Conclusion:
It was very tense 😬 and awkward at first but then they started to apologise to one another and the dad finally moved back in.

The author felt like it was a dream come true for her as her family was back together and they could all face the obstacle they had altogether

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It's after World War 2 and MC and her family have been torn apart for 6 years.
Post WWII her family is still settling down and getting adjusted to life.
Her parents are working full time to provide for the family of 6 and are very busy.
MC has not propely seen her family and misses her brother Atticus who was killed - her brothers dying wish was to be able to have a family dinner after the ordeal was over as written in his preserved diary.

MC stumbles upon the book before going to school.
In school she reads the book and hatches the plan of saving her pocket money to invest in a decent home cooked dinner. She tells her siblings and they too start to save up.
After coming back from school, they start to prepare the food -a simple dish of soup and grilled chicken.
The parents are shocked and touched upon realising the plan and say that as much as it was a dream of atticus, it was a dream of theirs too.
The family back in memories and are brought closer by the dinner. ( See how great food is.)

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Intro:
~MC (Ellen) is a studious girl.
~Her birthday is in September, right in the middle of P6 SA1, so no one had ever celebrated it.
~MC's biggest dream is to celebrate her birthday but hoping could do nothing other than making her sad.
~MC is getting ready for P6 SA1which is already there.
~MC had already finished her oral and listening compre exams.

Problem:
~MC was burning the midnight oil everyday revising her work.
~She hoped she could get good results
~But she would often daydream in class as she had not been sleeping very well.
~When the oral and listening compre results came out, MC was disappointed as she had not reached her expected level.

Problem worsening:
~ MC's bad results only lowered her spirit level, and her performance was worse than ever.
~Worst of all, the papers are coming and MC is nowhere near ready.
~On the day before the first written paper, MC came home feeling drowsy.

Resolution:
~She was surprised when she saw a birthday party for her.
~Touched. Celebrated her birthday for the 1st time with her family.
~Relaxed when doing exam.
~Results turned out well:)

Conclusion:
~Did not stress herself out before exams again.
~MC want to thank parents, grandparents and sis for supporting her along her journey of studies.
~Glad 2 dreams came true*︶*

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MC is a orphan. Name is Bharka. She was the best student in the whole of the school. She lived in the orphanage. The owner of the orphanage always loved her for she was the most best and diligent girl in the whole orphanage so the owner of the orphanage provided education and love for her.
Problem:
She was not able to adopt her as her rightful owner. Even Bharka loved the owner of the orphanage and she so badly wanted to question her why she cannot be adopted by her and also questioned herself why no one ever wanted to adopt her.
Problem Worsening:
Owner very scared whether one day Bharka will question her saying that why no one has adopted her though sh has been in the

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Introduction:
- Kailee (MC) had a busy family. Her family never got to eat a meal together.
- Her parents were always working, leaving her and her older brother, Kayden, to care for themselves.
- She would always get handwritten notes that her parents had written the night before. She always wished that they would say that to her verbally, not through writing it down.

Problem:
- Chinese New Year was around the corner and it was time to have their reunion dinner.
- The day that Kailee’s family planned to have their reunion dinner was highly anticipated by the siblings.
- However, on the day of the reunion dinner, her father got called back to his office for some emergency work even though he had applied for leave.
- Disappointed, the siblings only had that dinner with their mother.

Problem Worsening:
- They rescheduled the reunion dinner date and the siblings still kept their hopes high, but this time a little lower than before.
- On the day of the reunion dinner, everything was going smooth and the siblings thought that that would be the day that they would finally have a proper meal together.
- When they reached the restaurant they were going to have dinner at, their mother got a phone call from her office saying that she needed to finish up some undone work for her presentation the next day.
- The siblings went home sulking.

Resolution:
- The next day, being sorry for always not being able to eat a meal with their own children, the siblings’ parents decided to surprise them with a lunch together.
- When the siblings came home from school, they were shocked to see their parents’ car parked in the parking garage.
- The siblings were shocked beyond words when they reached home and saw their dining table full of food that they liked to eat.
- They had a good day together as one family and treasured every moment they spent together

Conclusion:
- From then on, their parents learnt to spend more time with their children and to always put family before work. They never know when they cannot see each other anymore.
- They spent much more time together as a family

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MC:old grandmother
Husband gone out to friend's party,only son lives far away.It is MC's birthday but she is alone at home.She goes to her room and finds herself looking through old family photos and wishing her husband,son,daughter-in-law and granddaughter were ther to celebrate with her.While she's in her room,the other family members listed above start decorating the dining room and taking out the birthday cake🎂prepared at the son's house.While doing so,they accidentally make noise and MC goes out of room to investigate.Luckily,not many things are out and the room is quite dark so MC doesn't see anything.MC then decides to take a nap on the couch and family members are worried 😟 that they'll be found out but then decide to carry out their plan.Nothing else goes wrong and MC celebrates her birthday with her family

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Planning of Picture 1:

- Jane(MC)
- Came from a very poor family
- Father, who worked as a woodcutter, was the sole breadwinner of the house
- Every year, however, whenever Jane's birthday approached near, something always went wrong
- That year, as Jane's

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Look at Picture 1. Consider the following points when planning the story.

1. What was the dream? Why was it so important?

2. Was it hard to be fulfilled? Why?

3. How was the dream realised?

Plan your story using IPPRC

Introduction
Problem
Problem Worsening
Resolution
Conclusion