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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_ Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_ Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going onfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous14mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous14m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous14m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous14m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous16mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous17mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy poop favorite11 commentAnonymous 15mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous5mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous4mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment

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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls  off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going onfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous14mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous14m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous14m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous14m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion     One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. 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With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. 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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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The dog ate the bone.
Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?
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The dog ate the bone,
Let’s try another verb.
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The dog could devour the bone,
Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.
The dog could snark-up the bone,
Gobble, bite or crunch it.
The dog could consume the bone,
Oh yes, that dog could do it,
Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
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Don’t use a verb that fizzles.
Think of every word you know,
And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent 

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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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It was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, 
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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls  off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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The dog ate the bone.
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The dog ate the bone,
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The dog could devour the bone,
Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.
The dog could snark-up the bone,
Gobble, bite or crunch it.
The dog could consume the bone,
Oh yes, that dog could do it,
Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
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One scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hill
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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It was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia 
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and t
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, 
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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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     One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" 
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The dog ate the bone.
Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?
The verb here is “ate”
But it needs a little tweak.
The dog ate the bone,
Let’s try another verb.
One that’s really fun to write,
One that’s quite superb.
The dog could devour the bone,
Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.
The dog could snark-up the bone,
Gobble, bite or crunch it.
The dog could consume the bone,
Oh yes, that dog could do it,
Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
So when you’re writing to impress,
Don’t use a verb that fizzles.
Think of every word you know,
And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent 

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My friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent 

SAVE AS DRAFT

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My friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent 

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"
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One scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hill
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and t
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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It was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"
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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls  off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going onfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous14mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous14m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous14m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous14m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion     One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous16mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous17mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy poop favorite11 commentAnonymous 15mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous5mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous4mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment 

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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls  off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going onfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous14mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous14m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous14m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous14m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion     One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous16mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous17mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy poop favorite11 commentAnonymous 15mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous5mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous4mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment 

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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_ Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_ Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m _ | | | | | favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous9m favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going onfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous14mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph: OAnonymous14m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous14m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment One snowy aftAnonymous14m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous16mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous17mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy poop favorite11 commentAnonymous 15mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous5mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous4mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment

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SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 22●1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mHere's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJia QiAnonymous1mJia Qifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentlololololololololololAnonymous1mlololololololololololfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentP E N I SAnonymous1mP E N I Sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m _Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vert1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous1m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous2m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentThey went to the top of tAnonymous3m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous2mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous3m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous1mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous9mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m            _  favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentsaidAnonymous1m saidfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment1m ally  Anonymous 1mAnonymous2m 1mallyAnonymous1mally favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment_Anonymous1m                _                   |  |         |   |   |   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commenthikedAnonymous3m hikedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJOLINAnonymous1mJOLIN One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls  off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentjinfeiAnonymous1mjinfei  Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ride down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and pounded with a thud. Both girls dropped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up , laughed, and shouted, "Let's ride again.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentmore_vertThey went to the top of tAnonymous4m They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two gifavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentzacAnonymous3mzacOne snowy afterfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentrashed  Anonymous 1mAnonymous4m rashedAnonymous1m rashedfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous1m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow  the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous10mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous1mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous10mSavion Paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous11m ,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottonfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabelParagraph :One scorching afternoon, Jane was walking back home from favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous12m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous1mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous11mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous11mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to thefavorite11 commentAnonymous 10mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous1mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous1mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous10mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous11mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. 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They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 11mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentallyAnonymous1mally One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentrashedAnonymous4m rashedfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment SIGN UP LOG IN  favoAnonymous5m SIGN UPLOG INfavorite_bordershare_arrowSHAREhelp_outlinemore_horizP4T Writing using vivid verbs (rewriting your paragraph)Made with the help of a typing monkeyAvatar of Jurveen KaurJurveen Kaur + 20●1mAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorchingfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEmptyAnonymous9mfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentHere's the paragraph:  OAnonymous9m Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at thfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne sAnonymous9m One sfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment  One snowy aftAnonymous9m   favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentAnnabelAnonymous1mAnnabel One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. 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With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 2mlolYour avatarAdd commentSze ShanneAnonymous14mSze ShanneOne snowy afternoon,favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentSavionAnonymous1mSavion     One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentOne lousy afrorAnonymous5mOne lousy afror The dog ate the bone.Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?The verb here is “ate”But it needs a little tweak.The dog ate the bone,Let’s try another verb.One that’s really fun to write,One that’s quite superb.The dog could devour the bone,Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.The dog could snark-up the bone,Gobble, bite or crunch it.The dog could consume the bone,Oh yes, that dog could do it,Inhale the bone, impale the bone,Swallow, gulp or chew it.So when you’re writing to impress,Don’t use a verb that fizzles.Think of every word you know,And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITMy friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent SAVE AS DRAFTSUBMITfavorite1Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"Anonymous1mOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"favorite_border0Your avatarAdd comment,Anonymous15m ,favorite1Your avatarAdd commentOne snowy afternoon,Anonymous3m One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentZeriusAnonymous1mZeriusOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentbs  Here's the paragraphAnonymous17m bs Here's the paragraph: favorite1Your avatarAdd commentJing XuanAnonymous1mJing XuanOne scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZi JieAnonymous4mZi Jie One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZaccheusAnonymous16mZaccheusOne freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentLasilyaAnonymous17mLasilyaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hillfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZhang ZiXuAnonymous1mZhang ZiXuOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy poop favorite11 commentAnonymous 15mhiYour avatarAdd commentJin FeiAnonymous5mJin FeiOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hillfavorite1Your avatarAdd commentLarissaAnonymous4mLarissa One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentZACAnonymous1mZACOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and tfavorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentYushanAnonymous15mYushan One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentEvonneAnonymous17mEvonneIt was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentJolinAnonymous4mJolinOne snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia favorite1Your avatarAdd commentSylviaAnonymous1mSylviaOne snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"favorite_border01 commentAnonymous 16mlolYour avatarAdd commentP4 Writing using vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dP4 Writing using vivid verbsDear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. favorite_border0Your avatarAdd commentParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbsJurveen Kaur16dParagraph that you need to read and change the dull verbs to vivid verbs Here's the paragraph: One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. 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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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The dog ate the bone,
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Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and rashedc with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hill
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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It was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, 
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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls rolled off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's play again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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The dog ate the bone.
Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?
The verb here is “ate”
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The dog ate the bone,
Let’s try another verb.
One that’s really fun to write,
One that’s quite superb.
The dog could devour the bone,
Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.
The dog could snark-up the bone,
Gobble, bite or crunch it.
The dog could consume the bone,
Oh yes, that dog could do it,
Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
So when you’re writing to impress,
Don’t use a verb that fizzles.
Think of every word you know,
And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent 

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill  with their sled .The sledding conditions were  perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first  moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hill
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia 
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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and t
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, 
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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below. 
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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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 One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They raced to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky. The two girls climbed on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slid down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and warned, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!" 
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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They  to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"
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One scorching afternoon, Jane was strolling home when something caught her eye. As she was curious,she turned around to see what was going on

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They drove to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon,

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they ran down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls hopped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike again!"

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The dog ate the bone.
Don’t you think that’s kind of weak?
The verb here is “ate”
But it needs a little tweak.
The dog ate the bone,
Let’s try another verb.
One that’s really fun to write,
One that’s quite superb.
The dog could devour the bone,
Nibble, gnaw, or munch it.
The dog could snark-up the bone,
Gobble, bite or crunch it.
The dog could consume the bone,
Oh yes, that dog could do it,
Inhale the bone, impale the bone,
Swallow, gulp or chew it.
So when you’re writing to impress,
Don’t use a verb that fizzles.
Think of every word you know,
And give me one that sizzles!My friend can vary his/her tone during reading. poor good excellent

SAVE AS DRAFT

SUBMIT

My friend read the poem loudly and clearly.poor good excellent

SAVE AS DRAFT

SUBMIT

My friend read with the correct punctuation. (full-stop, comma, exclamation mark etc)poorgood excellent

SAVE AS DRAFT

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sled down the hill. Before long, Felicia scouted a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's hike up again!"

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill

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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were prefect.Fluffy snow

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One scorching afternoon, Annabel was skipping happily back home. Out of the blue,she heard someone behind her ,bellowing in a loud deep voice"i will take revenge on you for betraying me!" Annabel was a bundle of nerves as she slowly turned around to see the school bullies right behind her with faces with frowns. Annabel was too afraid to run so she stood rooted to the ground, shivering and quivering non stop

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They ran to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they scurried down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, and crashed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One freezing afternoon, JiaQi and Evonne was having a nice cup of hot chocolate.

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They hiked to the top of the hill

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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They dug to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy f

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled .The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls jump on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they drove down the hill

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls hopped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and  with a thud. Both girls jumped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They sped to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect .Fluffy snow obstructed the ground and arrived from the sky.The two girls got on the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and t

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They sprinted to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow washed the ground and flew from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they slide down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and shouted, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, flew airborne, with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they climb up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's do it again!"

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It was a long afternoon and Minna was exhausted(tired).She trudged(walked)back home.On the way back home, she spotted(saw) a dog. She felt pity for it and brought it home.They became best of friends.

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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill.They raced to the top of the hill with their sled.The sledding conditions were perfect.Fluffy snow blanketed the ground and dropped from the sky.The two girls climbed into the sled and pushed off,first moving slowly and then picking up speed.Faster and faster they slid down the hill.Before long,Felicia

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They rushed to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow overlapped the ground and rained from the sky. The two girls jumped on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly then picking up speed. Faster and faster they sledded down the hill. Before long, Felicia noticed a big bump ahead and exclaimed, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on,  flew airborne, and dropped with a thud. Both girls slipped off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they stood up, laughed and shouted, "Let's play again!"

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Dear pupils, Read the paragraph that consists of numerous "dull" verbs. These "dull" verbs are in bold. Now re-type the paragraph and replace these "dull" verbs with your own vivid verbs. Once you have read it, post your work below.

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One snowy afternoon, Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill. They went to the top of the hill with their sled. The sledding conditions were perfect. Fluffy snow covered the ground and came from the sky. The two girls got on the sled and pushed off, first moving slowly and then picking up speed. Faster and faster they moved down the hill. Before long, Felicia saw a big bump ahead and said, "Get ready! We're heading straight for that jump!" She was right. Their sled hit the bump head on, went airborne, and landed with a thud. Both girls fell off the sled and rolled to a stop. With their faces covered in snow, they got up, laughed, and shouted, "Let's go again!"

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One snowy afternoon,Felicia and Priya met at the bottom of a steep hill .They hiked to the top of the hill with their sled