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Background Information- The usual folklore tale which is told at camp fires and slumber parties to scare young children is altered throughout time to be a scary bedtime story. The usual tale which is told is if you go into the bathroom and look in the mirror  and turn off the lights. That once you say Bloody Mary three times you will see her in the mirror. When she sees you in the mirror she would either hurt you or murder you.

The whole story is a narrative.
Overall objective is just to show the audience on how mary is a victim in this tale.

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(Suppress) in this intro Mary is longing for a different life and is suppressing her desire for the moon- beat 1- routine/ Tonight is like any other night as I sit in front of my window looking at the night sky. {this line expresses her boredom and distress}/ beat 2- deeper meaning/ The moon is shown bright through my window and I can't help but wonder what it would be like. {this line shows her curiosity, wonder, and longing}/ beat 3- expression/*Sigh* {shows her defeat}/ beat 4- dream/ What it would be like to be free of my chains, to stand tall and boldly up in front of everyone. Just like how the moon is with the stars. {shows her passion for the longing to be free}/ beat 5- defeat/*Sigh* {shows that she thinks it will never happen} / beat 6- submit / I turn my back to my moon, because I know that dream is far out of my reach tonight as I simultaneously hear my bedroom door creek open. {you can hear her fear in her voice}

the photo explains how Bloody Mary is suppressing her dreams and future

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(Submit) in this part of the intro Mary hears the shivering (disgusting) sound of her bedroom door creek open- beat 7- he comes/ I shiver in fear of what always comes next. "Hello, my darling," he says. {you can feel the tension in her stance and you can feel what she feels when he speaks}

submission

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(Desperation) in this part of the intro she tries to come to terms with something, anything- beat 8- anger/ That is always what he says when he greets me on these nights. {she speaks with malice and hate but mostly disgust}/ beat 9- quickness/ I move to the bed so I can get this over with as I sit down and wait for him./ beat 10- wonder/ I hear his light footsteps as he comes near me and I can't help but think as always should I try?/ beat 11- questioning/Should I try to escape? To run? Can I d-.. No stop thinking those thoughts you know it will never happen!/ beat 12- expression/ *Sigh*

Desperation

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(Hopelessness) in this part of the tale you can feel her vulnerability- beat 13- hurting / I get brought out of my deep thoughts when I feel his slimy lips on my neck. He is a monster. He is my monster. He always comes at night. I never know exactly what it would be each night and sometimes I wish for beatings instead of.... it. *Moan* He likes that. So there is nothing that I can do besides lay on my bead and dream of my beautiful mother and how someday soon I will see her again. So I can get away from him. From my own father. {the shock which should resonate from the audience should be profound}

Hopelessness

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30 minutes
beat 14- determination/ The door to my room creeks as it closes after that vile man was done for the night. I lay there in agony of complete disgust of myself. The monster... that monster is not my father, not a doctor at this moment he is the darkness which is still lingering in this room. Maybe I should do it tonight? Maybe I should end this torment for once and for all? I... I can do this. You can do this Mary! I slip off of my bed while trying to hold back a groan so he won't come back in here tonight and wobble my way to the bathroom. As I reach and turn on the bathroom light I slump onto the toilet to flip on the nozzle as the water starts to rise in the tub. *Sigh*
beat 15- finding peace/ My body aches with each move I make its okay though since soon... since I decided that tonight I will finally be with my mother. I flip off the nozzle and slowly inch myself in the water plunging in it. As I start letting my breathe go I can't help but wonder why did this life have to happen to me? My moon here I come.

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(In the middle of the tale its all about her confusion of what happened to her pointing blame which results in her anger when she dies.)

beat 16- pain and hurt/ *Gasps* (deep and hard and fast breathing)
beat 17- confusion/ What happened? Is this suppose to be Heaven? Its dark and as I start to feel around I hear a *Ring*. What was that? *Ring* *Ring* As I start flinging around more the constant *ring* keeps up as I touch my wrist which I feel a string attached to. *Ring*
beat 18- panic/ *Ring* I'm so con-.. HUH OH NO, this can't be happening! I can't be in a coffin! This wasn't the plan! I didn't want to die this way?! I need to get out of here! *Ring* *Ring* "HELP ME," I say. *Ring* As I keep ringing the bell harder and faster. Cmon they have to be able to hear me! Is this coffin getting tighter in here or is it just me? *Heaving Breathing* *Gasps* *Ring* *Ring* Its getting harder to breathe.
beat 19- rage/ Why? How? I KNOW IT WAS HIM! He did this! It was his fault! I wish he was in here instead of me! He is the devil! Argh! I'm so mad I can kill him! I'm going to kill him! Maybe not in this life, but I will find a way. And that is the last thought I had as I took my last breathe in the retched box.

Confusion

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(In the end of the tale its all about anger and vengeance. The only regret that she has is that she made a vow and now she may never return to her moon.)

beat 20- confusion/ *Gasps* How did I get in my bathroom? I look all over as my eyes reach the mirror I am stunned to see myself so pale? I take my fingers to press it on the glass but it goes through it which is strange. Is this some sort of afterlife?
beat 21- intrigued/ I can't finish my train of thought cause I hear that retched door creaking. My anger is flourishing to the point of breaking when I see him walk into the bathroom with a bottle of whisky as he stands there and stares at the tub. beat 22- enemy/ I wait and than I hear it. I hear him say my name. No not darling. He said "Mary." How dare he do that! He has no right to speak my name! And I get more angry when he says it again! NO! I watch as he turns from the tub and looks in the mirror. I am so angry that I can feel it overcoming me as I glare at him.
beat 23- kill/ I hear him gasp as he drops the bottle and it shatters on the tile ground and he says for the last time "Mary". Thats it! I've had it! Its his time to feel pain! Yes! And those were the last thoughts I had as I killed my father on the bathroom floor. Never again will someone as the likes of him be living if I had a say in it. Never again!
beat 24- regret and guilt/ I'm sorry my moon.

The moon is her mother with whom passed away in her young years of childhood.

Kill

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In the country side so the father can have his privacy. Oklahoma possibly, but anywhere I can get the old view. Around the 1800s.

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I'm thinking like Pride n Prejudice type style and Sense n Sensibility. (Mary)/ Either her in the picture or Anne Hathaway.

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I like the style of his coat for the father. The actor will be a no name cause the light is suppose to be shadowed to Mary.

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I love the level of the stage with the lights over it.

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Her voice will be the bold thing throughout the audience including the sounds (door creaking, ringing).

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The lighting will be low and shine bright on only Mary. Especially for example when she is in the coffin. Throughout the play the mood will have tension in it and a deep sadness for mary and anger for her father.

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I will have a makeshift window with drapes.

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Panic Attack. It will be pushed up in front of the stage so the audience will get the full affect.

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Intense with tension in the air.

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When Mary is questioning to why she is still living this horrid life.

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Brian Justin Crum Creep America's Got Talent July 19, 2016 AMAZING

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When Mary finally decides that she is giving up, because nothing will be enough for her to stay living when she can be with her moon.

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Jenny Lind - Never Enough / The Greatest Showman