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Collaborating with my peer in order to revise my written response helped me improve my written analysis. I was able get feedback on the way my writing was structured and on my grammatical errors. My partner gave me constructive criticism and allowed to see the flaws in my paper. This assignment enabled me to see my written literary analysis from a new perspective. I was able to make my analysis more concise and well-structured because of the feedback I received.

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My collaboration with my partner helped me understand what exactly was expected of me in grading the narratives. I was able to use better words to review my narrative and understand what I did wrong and what I could improve. I was able to use better words that made my narrative have more context and made it more clear and coherent.

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The collaboration with my peer helped me improve my response to the literary analysis response. Their feedback about my grammar, structure, helped me realize what aspects of my writing needed improvement. For example, their feedback touched upon grammatical errors I commonly made such as comma splices, misspelled words and sentence fragments. Feedback also concerning how the structure of my text was good but I should have elaborated more on the story in order to make the end of the story more understandable to the reader. Through this feedback, I was able to fix errors that I would not have noticed at first glance.

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My partners introductory paragraph was very organized well but it had a few grammatical errors. The only thing I suggested from the writer was to use transition words and add more length to their paper.

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I told my partner that his introduction was very well made but he needed to improve on background information on the speakers.

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A few tips I would add are
• Capitalize names
• Make indentations when writing paragraphs
• Write the person's entire name before shortening it
• The information contained was pretty concise, however, more sentences are needed in order to make a complete paragraph.

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My Partner introduction was well written and precise.

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I suggested that my partner fix their hook sentence and describe who the presidents were.

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My partners introductory paragraph was written very well. The only suggestions I gave were to place quotation marks around the titles of the speeches.

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I told my partner that he should examine his introduction for grammatical errors.

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My partners introduction was written in a very well manner. My only suggestion was to fix minor grammatical errors. These errors did not change the understanding of their introduction. However when my partner fixed the mistakes, the introduction was wonderful.

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I told my partner that he had to revise his thesis statement, and include more information about the presidents.

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I told my partner that he should change words like "many" to "countless" or "numerous."

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My partner's introductory paragraph was well written but had some minor grammatical issues.

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My partners speech was well organized and it let me know what her paper was going to be about and let me know the differences between the two speeches.

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I suggested that my partner revise her thesis and add more background information

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My partner's introductory paragraph was good and included lots of background information. A tip I would give is to add quotation marks around the name of the speech if it is needed and include more from the prompt in the thesis.

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My partner had a very good amount of background information in their introduction. The only tip I gave was to restructure the thesis statement to make it more evident and clear that the essay would be comparing and contrasting the speeches.

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I reviewed Jennifer Rubio's introductory paragraph. Her paragraph was very thorough and met all of the requirements. The only suggestion I would make is for her to add more background information about the topics of the speeches in her introduction.

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I told my partner to add quotations around the title of the speech, add indentations, and start thesis statement with a contrasting adverb. Also to add more background information. Overall she had a good introduction paragraph.

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I told my partner that she used creative words that enhanced the purpose of her paragraph. You described and explained the speakers tone and gave its meaning.

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I peer-reviewed my partners paragraph overall it was great but, it had some grammatical errors that needed to be fixed.

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I told my partner to add quotations to the speech and add a contrasting adverb to the thesis statement and add a bit more background information otherwise it was well written.

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My partner's introductory paragraph was obviously thought-out and well-rounded. The only correction I gave my partner was to change the wording and combine a few short sentences

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My partner's introduction was very well written and intriguing. His thesis is well structured. I think all he needs to do to his introduction is add more background information about the events that the president is addressing.

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My partner's introduction was well organized. However, I told her to add a little more detail for the background information of the presidents.

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My partners introduction paragraph, was written well and well organized. I suggested that she didn't start the paragraphs with a date not spelled out. She also needs to keep in mind of grammatical errors.

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My partner's introduction paragraph was well written and very detailed. The only thing i suggested was to move the thesis to the end of the paragraph.

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I revised my partner's intro, and I was good. Although I changed "even though" to "although" in his paper. I also added a comma in the thesis.

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My partner's introduction was well written, however she needs to include the name of the speeches.

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I believe my partners introduction to the culminating project was overall very well done. He just had a slight grammar error in the beginning

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In Ms. Mack's introduction to her culminating project she lucidly and completely explained each of the President's goal in writing the speech. The only tip I have is to add quotations between the speech names.