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Emily~ I like how passionate you are about the topic, and especially because you related it to your cousin about the struggles of their everyday lives. I would try to be a little louder, sometimes I couldn't hear.

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-You seemed really connected to your presentation emotionally and you added in personal info very well
-You did well expressing the severity of the situation and how awful it is

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You spoke loudly and explained everything very thoroughly . I like that you said the facts AND your opiniont

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I like how passionate you felt about the topic, and made a personal connection to the topic.
Very well organized and presented.

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• I love how you related this back to your personal life, very passionate and emotional.
• Your presentation is very well organized and well reasearched

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You seemed very passionate about presentation. I liked the cases you provided. Good

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- I like that you that you gave a personal reason for choosing this project.
-I like that you added statistics and stories
-Good speaking volume

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I love how passionate you feel about this issue. The topic is very sad and it brings up many emotions. The information you deliver is very relevant and information I did not know about.

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The connection between the subject and your personal life was a great presentation starter as it allowed us to see that you are probably passionate about the subject.
The information distributed throughout your presentation is relevant and very well researched
Also on the Fort Worth problem the information was not completely accurate, but overall your presentation was great with very revealing information.

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I like how you chose a topic that was emotional to you, it means you were able to write with more passion about it.  I  found the information about the male to female prisoners very striking! It is very upsetting people are still labeled by their sexuality, it's even more upsetting that people would overlook those needs in order to make it easier for the guards.

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I like that you did alot  of research and made your presentation clear.

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I like how you connected a personal things in your life as a conversation starter. Good at studying on the topic

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I like how involved you were in the topic and the amount of research you did on the topic.

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-I enjoyed how you    related the project to your personal life
-inspiring real life story
-I like how passionate you were about the topic and srtories you presented
-One form of criticism I have is that you should work on presenting your ideas more fully.
-your presentation was very well organized and eye catching

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-I liked the personal connection you made at the beginning
-You pointed out that the book didn't scratch the surface of the problems transgender go through which I thought stood out
-You're very passionate about the subject and the depth you go in to get your points across is very engaging
-One suggestion I would make is to relax during your presentations, you were saying "um" a lot.

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The presentation was very informative and interesting and you explained everything clearly and I was able to understand. And I can tell you feel strongly about this topic and stand up for it. Your presentation was very organized and well thought out.

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I really enjoyed the passion you put in your presentation.  I also found the information you presented and the cases you informed us about very interesting.

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Avoid filler words such as umm and like. I noticed when you start new sentances you have the tendency to say umm. You have a very good presentation but try to relax and not be so nervous.

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I like how you related it back to your real life
Also, your research is very in depth and detailed.
Very nice 👍👍

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I think it’s good to get emotional over the topic, it show you care.

Also, how you related it back to your own life was a good connection to make

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I like how in depth you talk about each prisoners story. I also liked how you related the project to your own experience with transgender people.

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I liked that you were able  really express yourself about the topic and share about how that relates back to what you have in your life. Overall your presentation was also really good.

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I love how you are going in depth with each fact and transgender person and explaining how each story and fact and document relates to one another and the point that you are trying to convey to us. It's a great presentation.

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- Address information present on current slide
- Educated on the case your presented
- You show your emotion which captivates fellow classmates to pay attention to your presentation.

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- did a great job presenting your information
- learned a lot from your slideshow
- possibly add more pictures
- your emotions / tone of this serious topic are really good and i really liked your slideshow

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Thank you for sharing the research was really planned out your emotion really showed how much passion you felt about the subject.