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I love how you used your hands a bit to motion at certain things. The positive turn was very nice at the end, but it was very emotional and raw and real

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Intense. Great rhythm!

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You had a great opening. And you used really powerful language.

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Super powerful due to language, and a beautiful introduction that set the poem's mood.

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That was really amazing. Great job. It was really powerful, and you did a great job of presenting it in a really impactful way.

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I like how you made eye contact for the majority of your poem. You had a great message and showed a ton of emotion.

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Powerful theme and great words

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Great tone

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-Engages a powerful theme
-Emotional roller coaster

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I appreciate the risk taken and I really like the powerful ending

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Very powerful and a good way to say the hard truth

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Great tonality! love the allusions to 13 reasons why. incredible imagery. raw and real. so personal even through 3rd person...Great effect.

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raw and real
the third person was very interesting, it was general knowledge that the poem was about you, but it could have been about anyone.

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-powerful
- strong emotion
-positive spin
-raw

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"My body is not a temple its a conversation on your tongue" beautiful Josie SO beautiful.

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I thought it was very very brave to talk about something that personal. It was pulled off beautifully delivered.

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Emotion! Great job!

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Content was powerful, but i also love the way you performed it

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very personal
nice turns