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WWW: He clearly showed the different sections of information.

EBI: There was no colour scheme so he could use colour on the background and the pictures aren’t similar, there was very few pictures so you could add some pictures for each of the parts of info, there was no information so you could say what a target audience is and some examples, the numbers all need to be the same size.

Overall there needs to be improvement.
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WWW: Alot of good information with good reasoning and good examples. Very clear font and placing of everything.

EBI: Could use a more attracting colour scheme to help bring in more readers, Maybe put a little less of the mains texts as some people may not want to read it all.

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WWW: Your text is very clear to read and you have added good images to support your text. A lot of information was added but it wasn’t too much. The color of your images match each other in the same sort of color scheme.

EBI: Change the text color to make it stand out and match the color of the images. Maybe use like a light or dark orange.

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Www: You have a good amount of information, and you have a clear and understandable definition. I like the colour of the text, it looks very neat. The image also fits in well with the text, as the colours make sense.

Ebi: You have only used one image, and I think it would stand out more if it was to have more images. Also, it’d be more eye-catching. If you were to add more images, make sure the colour scheme works well and makes sense so it doesn’t ruin the appearance. I think a background colour would also be nice.

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WWW: You have used a good range of images to aid the text well. Your colour scheme  fits together and your text is very detailed, as it stands out.

EBI: You have a bit too much whitespace and should cover it with more information or images

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WWW: Henry’s Work has a good colour scheme with blue. Good variety of images with ones that fit your background but also ones that don’t, but it works. I like that it is sectioned with each one to do with something else.

EBI: Although it looks good it could use different colour shades or some complementary colours to make it pop. You could add an outline for each section and a different text font to look better.

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WWW: Good use of images also the title of the homework stands out also good use of colour scheme to make the homework eye-catching to others, the images match the text well, it explains what ‘target audience’ is in good detail.

EBI: The text could be more of a vibrant colour, it’s sort of hard to read with the green background, also make the background more lighter so it’s not hard to read the text.

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WWW: It has a nice, vibrant colour scheme that will attract the reader’s attention. I also like how the images match each other so they look professional. Lots of good information aswell.

EBI: the font used for the information is not easily readable so maybe change it to something that has a block colour. You could also maybe put the text in the middle so it doesn’t look too randomly placed (no offence). For the headings you could make the text all the same size so they look more even??

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Aidan Ruxton

WWW: it has a good background and the small words around the work are informative.

EBI: your work has very little information filling the power point which leaves a lot of space surrounding the small amount of information as well as the little information  has very little context if I didn’t know what the homework was about I wouldn’t understand the random words. The only two pictures were not that good either there should be more of them to show examples of the types of audience.

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WWW: there was a good variety of section such as gender, age and family friendly. He has put enough space between each tittle he was describing and has used a good colour palette.

EBI: one of the images he has included doesn’t match with any of the titles so he could change it by using an appropriate image for each section but you have to be careful when using images because the images colour scheme might not blend in well with your blue/ purple background.

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Archie reviewing tom kirk WWW: There was a lot of information and It was very bold and easy to read and it wasn’t to much info that overloads the reader. It also had a good background color to grab the audience of your info graphic.                           EBI: You could make you pictures go with the color scheme because your black bubble doesn’t go well with the blue background so change it to a darker blue and the picture of the car doesn’t go well with rest of the pictures because of its color so use lighter blue.

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Archie reviewing tom kirk WWW: There was a lot of information and It was very bold and easy to read and it wasn’t to much info that overloads the reader. It also had a good background color to grab the audience of your info graphic.                           EBI: You could make you pictures go with the color scheme because your black bubble doesn’t go well with the blue background so change it to a darker blue and the picture of the car doesn’t go well with rest of the pictures because of its color so use lighter blue.

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*WWW
#Very detailed verbally.
#Plenty of images.
#Included all information that was required.
#Good layout(not all squished together etc.)
#Portrays infographics descriptively.

*EBI
#Maybe use a bolder background to help the infographic stand out more.
#Use a more stylish font as the current font being used is pretty blunt and not stylish enough for an infographic.
#Design the title so that it's clearler that that is the title.
#Show examples of infographic types. EG. Promotion.

Overall a good piece.

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Www: Josh’s colour scheme works really well because he put a black background around his boxes which make them really stand out also I like the pictures that went with the text.6/10

Ebi: I think josh should add some effects to his text e.g fade. And change the heading of your text as it doesn’t match the other text writing. 8.5/10.

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WWW: There were a lot of relevant pictures that fitted with the colour scheme and some words were a different colour so they stood out more
EBI: You could move some of the boxes of text so that they are structured a bit better as everything is cramped in one corner, maybe move each box to each corner and have the pictures next to each box

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WWW: You’ve shown a good example of a target audience, Bold title to attract a reader, Highlighted the main part with a circle which made it clear, The colours you’ve used would attract a reader.

EBI: Choose a different font to make it clearer, Put more than 1 example of a target audience, Choose a more complimenting but attracting colour scheme as it is a bit bright.

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WWW: Nice layout,eye catching and well designed, with good illustrations to go along with them, giving a clear example of target audiences. The colour scheme works very nicely, not overly complex which makes it more appealing to the eye. It is an original design which also makes it stand out among any basic graphics on the same topic.
EBI: Add some text to go into further detail about target audiences, explaining what they are, what they do and how they can be used, as a pose to simply giving examples. For example, you could explain how products can be designed with multiple target audiences in mind, and as a result have to be made with a broader set of interests in mind to appeal to everyone.

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Tom Assessing ChrisWWW: The layout is good and the information is clear. You have also used pictures well in your boxes.EBI: Use different colours and fonts to make sure that your titles and subtitles stand out from your information. You could also use similar colours that complement each other to make it look less bright. For example similar blues or greens.

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Tom Assessing ChrisWWW: The layout is good and the information is clear. You have also used pictures well in your boxes.EBI: Use different colours and fonts to make sure that your titles and subtitles stand out from your information. You could also use similar colours that complement each other to make it look less bright. For example similar blues or greens.