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Andrew/03
Carollus/08
Marcel/20

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- Gede Kanadeva Hariyanto/13​

- Jonathan Exl Theodore/18​

- Yohanes Kurnia Febriyanto/33​

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Agape Dimas/1
Michael Kevin/23
Michael Titan/25

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Arthur Isa Nararia/4
Banuseta Anindita/5
Christian Widodo/9

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Yohan Christian Saputra/31
Hermawan Aditya Saputra/15
Yohanes Imannuel Rosantiant/32

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Jovan Gunawan/19
Marcello Chriswanto/21
Theodorus Nugroho/30

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Benedictus Bagas / 7
Ganesya Juan / 12
Gregorius Hassya / 14

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Hi King Barca!
This is very significant and nice progress.
However, you may consider several points here as an improvement:
1. since you use the poster as the medium, making sure that the punctuation like a full stop, comma, Capital letters, etc. is very important.
2. you can complete the "Don't miss it" phrase with a clear Call to Action.  --> on your direct selling ad.
3. Check the slide on my given G-slide about this project on how to compose a more persuasive headline. Persuasive skill (copywriting) is important. But, the good thing is, you make the headline in line with your offering (body). Good job!

Above all, I really appreciate that you have made your own headline and body.
Oh, anw, the progress presentation is very clear. appreciated!

Cheers!

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Thank you supergroup for the excellent move. Now, lemme share some inputs for you:
1. Check on worksheet 2 - Call to Action and headline share different functions. Therefore, please check your headline.
My best recommendation you can check the G-Slide that I gave you earlier (G-Slide: Advertising Project). There you can find "how to compose persuasive words/phrases"
2. Call to Action is the expected action. Please recheck your  CTA. I also put some CTA references on the google Slide (G-Slide: Advertising Project). Make sure that your CTA is in line with your offering. (CTA nya nyambung sama penawaran Anda pada iklan tsbt.)
3. Try to pick a more specific target audience. It will be easier for you to set a strategy (association and graphic). The more specific the target audience the clearer symbol/strategy it will be.

Well done! Keep it up!

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Hi there!
Thank you for the meticulous and detailed observation. I really love the way you capture their value and strategy. You can see that Microsoft pays attention on small detailed opportunity.

Here are some feedbacks to make your nice progress better.
1. The brand awareness is cool! However, you can improve the font. Make it bolder / catchy for your important value/offering/keywords that you wanna promote from the product.
2. The body of the brand awareness has not mentioned about the feature / logical information above your claims.
Meaning, you mean that the product can afford multi-purposes but you missed mentioning the 'why'.
3.  Do the headline and the body of the worksheet 1 your own pieces? If so...
the two statement: 1) Surface Pro does All and 2) 'Surface pro gets your back' are very persuasive! You rock!

Continue the progress to the next leve: worksheet 2.
Please check the detailed elements on the given G-Slide (advertising project).

Excellent, everyone!

Cheers!

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Thank you for submitting your progress.
Now you can continue the details and promote Spotify.
Make sure you check the detailed advertisement elements on G-Slide.

Cheers!

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It's very great progress. Appreciated much!
Here are some feedbacks for you:
1. The headline and the body are cool! You just need to pick a more specific target audience(s) to help you select a representative symbol/figure/ strategy.

2. Storyline is your scenario on how you deliver your offering/promotion to the target audience.

3. Last, please check your claim! make sure that your offerings do not share false promises, especially you mention a free product/access.

I can say that this progress deserves an A score!
Proud!

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Thank you for the progress!
there are some recommendations for you:
1. Where is the CTA on direct selling?
2. Make the font for the body clearer. Besides, you have a cool headline.

Keep it up!
Cheers!

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Thank you for the very great progress!
1. The headline is epic! Good job team!
Grab: Easy life, Grab-it easily.
2. For the body, I think it can be better and more persuasive to explain the "easy" part as the value that you want to highlight from this brand.
You may elaborate in a catchy phrases / senetences on how people can fullfil their needs easily through grab.

Brilliant work! Please continue to worksheet 2.

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Banyu/6
Jaya/17
Satya/29

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Ayus/10
Rio/11
Marvin28

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/10thFRqd_JuLlmqQwSK3pNsqwezFToaZPI3ssFM3pUmQ/edit#slide=id.g118c809fa4d_0_81

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Agape Dimas/1
Michael Kevin/23
Michael Titan/25

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Isa/4
Seta/5
Christian/9

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1QSscpclw9ViSo-KFlhDSKUWYIbET26MBPCwUBBiYjZM/edit?usp=sharing

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Bendictus Bagas / 7
Ganesya Juan / 12
Gregorius Hassya / 14

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next time please check the idetailed instruction. It requires you to upload the worksheets, direct selling ad and brand awareness.

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Persuasive word - not brought but it brings you
(brand awareneess)
The rests are cool.

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Please update the final submission properly, check the instruction on GC.