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Great story
-Billy K. Moon

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I liked the paranormal activity throughout the story!!
-Billy K. Moon

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Great details and plot Line!! It was amazing!!!
-Billy K. Moon

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Great exposition!
I liked the plot Line!
-Billy K. Moon

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Good story.
Wrenn

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Awesome story!
Very funny and great details
-Billy K. Moon

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Good

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It is good story

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The word choice was marvelous. #BestStoryEver -Kate

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Creepiest thing ever.
I liked how you left the conclusion unresolved so we could imagine what happened after.
-Billy K. Moon

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I enjoyed it
-Caleb

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It was descriptive.
Zach

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Very creepy-Ryan

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Very detailed I really enjoyed it
-Caleb

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Good word choice and very interesting.
Wrenn

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-sarah

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Nice detail-ryan

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A mysterious and thrilling story! I loved it.

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good setting description
ooh.  why was the kitchen empty?  I'm curious....
cold gust of wind- good descriptive language
Yuk, poor Maddy.  Where did she go?!
Mrs. S.

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This book was good and scary
Jackson

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good

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Very detailed and scary
-Caleb

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Awesome story i like how the main character passed on the mystery of the book to another girl.
-Billy K. Moon

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Good introduction and details. -Piper

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The details add a creepy atmosphere to the story.

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I like how the story ended, it could be a round, or something like that
Addeline

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Fits the season, spooky -Tim

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I like how you portray the personalities of the different characters. Its very suspenseful!
-Allison

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Mr lindens library piper tyce and Shannon 

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Mr lindens library piper tyce and Shannon 

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Very creepy
-Caleb

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The story got to the point and was really cute! -k8

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I like how Maddie was missing from the attic when she brought the police back
Addeline

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It was creepy in a good way, it really kept your attention. -Marley

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You described the house very well. Good story line and mystery. -Hadley

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Good detail and very interesting.

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It was very craetive

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It was very creative
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It was really creative

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-sarah

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The book is scary and it's weird how it does that

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The details made me squirm inside. I LOVE this story!!:) -Kate

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hmm;mm.... think your own story.  I like that concept.
Your dialogue moves the story along well.

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Great job
-jackson

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Great description and story

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The beginning grabs the reader with. Mystery and suspense.

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The dialogue is really good, and I loved the mystery with the writing on the book.

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-sarah

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Good job on the story

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Great

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Good use of words very interesting
-Caleb

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It was a super interesting story! Your conclusion was sad :|
-Kate B

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You had good details.

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It was awesome your word choices and the details of your story was amazing!
-Billy K. Moon

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Great ending and good written story

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The story was very creative and the details were great

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Your story was suspenseful, and had very good vocab

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Great vocabulary! The whole story was put together so nicely -Marley

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I like all the descriptive words you used
Addeline

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It had a really good story line.
Zach

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Nice long story

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Good word choice.

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Love the ending

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The details are great

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Your storyline is well developed.
Your dialogue moves the story along.
safety of slumber-beautiful word choice!
Sad ending.

Mrs. S.