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I would RATHER be rich and ugly THAN POOR AND BEAUTIFUL because HAVING money CAN give you MORE oportunites than JUST HAVING A beatiful face. For exemple you can buy a house, a car, food AND clothes. If you have money you COULD EVEN do a surgery to IMPROVE YOUR BEAUTY

-Irene Blanco

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I will rather be poor and hansome because I think that money do not give you  hapiness. It's TRUE that  IF YOU HAVE MONEY you can IMPROVE YOUR LIFESTYLE A LOT but IT IS ALSO TRUE THAT YOU MAY BE rich  TODAY AND BE POOR NEXT DAY. Ilham 

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I will rather be poor and hansome because I think that money do not give you  hapiness. It's TRUE that  IF YOU HAVE MONEY you can IMPROVE YOUR LIFESTYLE A LOT but IT IS ALSO TRUE THAT YOU MAY BE rich  TODAY AND BE POOR NEXT DAY. Ilham 

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I love trying new experiences but  I ALSO  I WOULD LIKE to be with my family and my friends all my life. IF I JOINED The aliens I WOULD NEVER KNOW IF THEY WOULD BRING ME BACK HOME.SO, NO I WOULDN'T JOIN THE ALLIENS .
Ilham

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I wouldn’t go with the aliens because  ON THE ONE HAND I’m a very FEARFUL person.iI ALSO WOULDN'T JOIN THEM BECAUSE I’m very rational AND I WOULDN'T TRUST THEM I THINK.HOWEVER, If there WAS the possibility to speak to them I WOULD do it because I AM curious about THEIR LIVES
(PAY ATTENTION TO TENSES)

-Irene Blanco

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I think I WOULD join them BECAUSE I want to know how their own planet Is. I WOULD LIKE ALSO  TO learn  ABOUT their culture although  I KNOW IT COULD BE A DARING trip

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DUE TO THE FACT THAT+SUBJ AND VERB( due to the fact that it was raining)
GOOD You tried tricky words

Martí Ginard 4ESO C

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I will choose be poor and handsome cause the money is not everything for me and working I can get some money to buy food, clothes and rent a small house for me . Being handsome is important cuase I will have more opportunities, maybe a rich man will fall in love with me and when we've got married I'm going to be handsome and rich at the same time.

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I think that I would join them so I COULD  learn and discover new things and also live different experiences
NEXT TIME TRY USING CONNECTORS AND EXPLAIN A BIT MORE YOUR IDEAS

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It WOULD depend on the situation.ON THE ONE HAND  if they FORCED  me TO JOIN THEM   iI would go. I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN INTERESTED IF THERE ARE OTHER  civilizations  on other planets. 8¿It is a bit mysterious, but if I would join, since I could experience new things like meeting other civilizations and new more advanced technologies?
ALL THIS PARTS IS REPETITIVE I THINK, BUT I LIKE YOU WANTED TO EXPLAIN THINGS.THANKS

-Lautaro Baiz

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Pau Barceló

If aliens came in TO the  earth, I would join them in an interstellar trip because I think it is a very nice?? way to visit the beautiful AND  MYSTERIOUS space. There iS ALWAYS THE DANGER of joining random visitors that you don’t know.HOWEVER, THE CURIOSITY TO LEARN ABOUT UNKOWN CULTURES WOULD BE TOO  STRONG TO SAY NO.  also wanted to join in an unknown culture and in a different live in other planet. In conclusion, it WOULD BE an amazing oPportunity for an amazing experience out of the world.
GOOD THAT YOU DID A PARAGRAPH WITH INTRODUCTION , BODY AND CONCLUSION.

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Although my life here is an ordinary life I wouldn't go with the aliens because I love my life as it is. I don't need to change anything about it.

Niyire García

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Mainly because I WOULDN'T know their intentions. MAYBE I WOULD ACCEPT THINKING THAT THEY WOULD GIVE ME WHATEVER I WISH OR EVEN BEING THEIR KING, BUT WHAT IN FACT THEY WANTED COULD BE USE ME AS LAB RAT OR EVEN TORTURE ME. Maybe I’m being invited to being a lab rat and being tortured and I’m thinking that they will give me everything that I want and I will be their king. However, it could be that they know more than us and they HAD predicted that thereWOULD l be an apocalypse and I’m the chosen one to survive and live with the aliens.

Even though they could be really friendly people JUST offering me an unbelievable CHANCE TO MEET A new planet, the lack of knowledge  OF THEIR TRULY INTENTIONS about their people is telling me that i MAKES ME THINK THAT IT WOULD BE a bad idea to go with them. -Adrià Gili

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I would not go because it scares me that they do something to me

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No because I thinK the aliens ARE  bad PEOPLE and I WOULD prefer  TO stay with my family and my friends.
Ibtisam
REMEMBER "I" IN CAPITAL LETTERS...

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I would go with them because I HAVE  already lived toO many years in this planet and  I would like to know how other planets LIKE VENUS are, like Venus.

Francina Mas TRY SOMETHING MORE RISKY IF YOU CAN . THANKS

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Obviusly, I wouldn't go with them, because I'm not sure what they would do with me. ¡MOREOVER I AM a CAUTIOUS PERSON SPECIALLY WITH THINGS that can be dangerous.
So I WOULD prefer TO stay home and notTO LEAVE with aliens.
Thiago Galán

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If aliens landed tomorrow, would you go with them?(WHO ARE YOU?)

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If aliens landed tomorrow, would you go with them?(WHO ARE YOU?)

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I don’t think so because I haven’t visited many places in the earth and I would like to go it, in conclusion no, I wouldn’t gl with aliens to another planet.

Claudia Duran Tapia

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Firstly, I think I would be very scared and this could make me take bad decisions. However, if I were in that situation I think I wouldn’t go with them because here I’ve got a good life. On the other side, if I were an outcasted boy I would TAKE INTO CONSIDERATION their proposal deeply. Maybe they live in a better world with no wars or a world where nobody dies.
In conclusion, I wouldn’t join them  nowadays but if THEY EVER COME AND I AM AN OUTCASTED BOY when they offer me that I’m an outcasted boy I would probably go.
Xim Castilla.
GOOD VOCABULARY AND PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE

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I would prefer being poor and handsome rather than being rich and ugly because I think that having a lot of money doesn’t give you happiness. I think that happiness is given by your good health, your dear ones’ good health, your social relationships and having a good self-esteem. For me, being very handsome would improve my self-esteem but being rich wouldn’t.

In conclusion, even though having a lot of money allows you to buy lots of things, I'd prefer being handsome and poor rather than ugly and rich.
Xim Castilla.

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I will not go with them cause I like my life I the earth. I love my family and my friends and I can't go without them to any place. And maybe if I join them they can do something to me so I prefer to stay safe here in my planet. Maybe is not the best option but gor me is it.

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I had this Math teacher in 5th and 6th grade. He was my least favourite teacher because he was always rude and negative to me. MOREOVER, HE also send lots of homework.

-Mika

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My English teacher in primary was a good person .I HAVE TO SAY THAT HE  also explained very well .HOWEVER,  he COULD GET angry EASILY, AND I was scared of her BECAUSE USED TO  yelled A LOT.
Ilham.
MY CORRECTION ARE JUST TO IMPROVE STYLE OR TO SHOW YOU NEW WORDS.

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MY WORST PRIMARY TEACHER WAS MY (SUBJECT) TEACHER.She seemed to me a very demanding teacher BECAUSE she always sent US LOTS OF homework. MOREOVER I if you didn't do THEM, SHE USED TO CALL call your parents

-Lauti
YOU NEED TO MAKE A LITTLE INTRODUCTION SAYING WHO WAS YOUR LEAST FAVOURITE TEACHER

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When I was in 3rd of primary I had a very demanding teacher who always thought that pupils had to GET a ten in all the subjects she WAS TEACHING. CAUSE SHE WAS SO DEMANDING/ SO STRICT I was scared of she  HER

-Irene Blanco

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In primary, I had a music teacher called Maria Bel. She was very burdensome and in her classes, we didn’t take any music lesson until 5th. THEN IN  fifth GRADE, we did music history but A  very bASIC ONE. We studied the princpals composers like Mozart or Beethoven. HER  classes never endED. From 5th to 6th, we HAD TO DO   lots of exams and we started playing the flute. With the flute, he was SPECIALLY  very demanding BUT CAUSE WE WERE LEARNING IT WAS HARD FOR US. as we didn’t know how to play it,. AS A CONSEQUENCE,  she was ALWAYS  on a very bad mood DURING THE LESSON.MOREOVER, SHE WAS ALSO STRICT ABOUT OUR BEHAVIOUR IN CLASS  and if you talked she took you out of class. I remember one time  ONCE I was TAKEN OUT OF THE CLASS with a firend for half an hour. In conclusion, she was the worst teacher I’ve ever had.

Pau Barceló
A BIT TOO LONG, BUT IT IS A GOOD STRUCTURE. IN SOME SENTENCES YOU USED PRESENT

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MY PRIMARY PE TEACHER was A very good  and happy person ,but when I GOT VERY SCARED OF HIM /HER WHEN HE / SHE GOT ANGRY he gets    angry it was very scary.

Ibtisam

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I don't remember anything bad  NEGATIVE  a bout ANY OF  my primary teacherS. iI REMEMBER ONE WHO WAS REALLY A NICE PERSON ALTHOUGH WHEN SHE GOT ANGRY I USED TO GET REALLY SCARED.she is a really nice person. But sometimes when she was angry, she scared me.

Valentina.

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This teacher that I had in 5th Grade was my teacher for almost every subject, and I did not personally like her. She was really strict because we had to stay in our seats without talking with anyone.
The classes were repetitive and boring. Her explanations didn’t help but rather confuse us, and when she was trying to impose order she was quite frightening.
-Adrià Gili

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When I was in primary school my Music teacher makes MADE  me life impossible because he forced us to dance ridiculous songs.MOREVER, apart from that he was always in A  bad mood with us. In conclusion it was the worst teacher I have ever had.

Martí Ginard
IF YOU SAY "APART FROM THAT " THEN YOU HAVE TO SAY AN OPPOSITE IDEA, IN THIS CASE SOMETHING NICE ABOUT THIS TEACHER
REMEMBER TO USE PAST TENSES WHEN YOU TALK ABOUT PAST

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In primary I had a very burdensome teacher. He was my tutor and he thought  TOUGHT all the subjects (except   FOR English and Music) I saw him all day. I didn't like him  because he was in a bad mood all days, and he was too demanding, I'm going too class 5 and 6 of primary.

Claudia Duran Tapia
THE LAST SENTENCE SHOULD BE AT THE BEGINING OF THE PARAGRAPH AND IT SHOULD BE WRITTEN IN PAST BECAUSE YOU D0N'T GO TO PRIMARY ANYMORE.

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MY WORST PRIMARY TEACHER WAS MY TUTOR FOR 2 YEARS  ,IN I in 3th and 4th term  GRADE She was so burndensome that we always critizeD her  ALTHOUGH I KNOW IT WAS NOT FAIR.(i know it's wrong) and every single thing that we do  DID in clas she GOT mad at us.

Francina Mas
TERM IS AVALUACIO , AND GRADE CURS.
YOU GET MAD ( T'ENFADES)
REMEMBER TO USE PAST TENSES, NO PRESENT TENSES

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My least favourite primary teacher was my mentor when I was nine,  AND she taught me almost all the subjects for two years. She used to yell at my classmates and at me .SURPRISINGLY,   my brother, WHO HAS THE SAME  teacher was this one last  THIS year, has told me that now she is cheerful and empathic. Even though my brother says that,I CAN'T FORGET HOW HARSH SHE SHE WAS she was very demanding and I hated the way she explained. Furthermore, her exams used to be very long and COMPLEX complicated
. Most people didn't pass them even THOUGH  they had studied hard.

In conclusion, I’ve never had such a worse teacher and I hope my future teachers will be better than this one.
-Xim Castilla.
YOU USED WHOSE IN THE WRONG WAY ( sorry but I eareased it )
my brother, whose is his teacher this year"(I think you wrote something like this )

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O  I   would rather to go to BE  a month without internet THAN A MONTH WITHOUT A BATH. WE HAVE STARTED TO  SPEND OUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS  IN OUR SILLOT HOUSE WHERE THERE IS NO INTERNET CONNECTION AND I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT IT .Since last year, in s’Illot, the place where i go in the summer, hadn’t internet connection and it wasn’t  ISN''T as bad as I thought. LAST SUMMER I was  SPENT all day with friends or outside whithout the necessity NEED of beeing  BEING in front of a screen. HOWEVER,I CAN'T IMAGINE SPENDING  I couldn’t stay a day without having a shower.

Pau Barceló

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I think I would rather stay one month without internet because I need TO  get a shower or went  TO HAVE A to a bathroom ALMOST EVERYDAY.AND ALTHOUGH staying without internet CAN BE difficult ,I WOULD prefer to stay without it, AND TO BE SURE THAT I COULD HAVE A SHOWER EVERYDAY

Claudia Duran Tapia

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because I think that hygiene is more important than Wi-Fi. HOWEVER, I THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO BE WITHOUT INTERNET only for a month if I could, but NOT MUCH  longer BECAUSE I AM NOT SURE IF I WOULD BE ABLE NOT TO CONNECT TO PEOPLE FOR MORE THAN A MONTHI don't know if I would be able.

-LAUTARO BAIZ
YOU WROTE SOME IDEAS BUT YOU DIDN'T EXPLAIN IT TO TOO MUCH

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I would rather  BE a month without internet because I need to take a shower everyday. SHOWERS make me feel relaxED. I also think that I don't need internet in my life SO MUCH. AND I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT , I can live without it and also in my  IN MY daily life I don't use it so much.
Ilham
MAYBE THE LAST SENTENCES ARE REPETITIVE AND YOU DON'T GIVE EXAMPLES OF HOW YOU DON'T USE INTERNET EVERYDAY

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I would rather be one month without a bath because internet is very important for me- for many things, and. if I have had  to be one month in my house (for the security of the nouse the people????) without a bath iIT WOULDN'T BE AS BAD AS NOT HAVING INTERNET FOR A MONTHs not too bad than one month without internet.

-Irene Blanco
THE ??? SENTENCES DOESN'T MAKE SENSE
IT IS REPETITIVE AND YOU DON'T GIVE REASONS WHY YOU CHOOSE INTERNET,,JUST BECAUSE YOU USE IT A LOT.

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I would rather go a month without internet. because I  AM SURE I can do a lot of activities without it BUT I KNOW FOR SURE THAT IF I SPENT 2 DAYS WITHOUT A SHOWER I think that in the second day of the month without a bath I would feel really dirty/UNCONFORTABLE/UNEASY.

Valentina Girón

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I would rather be a month without internet.I love reading paper books and beeing BEING a month without internet is not a problem for me.

Francina Mas

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I would rather be one month without internet bacause I think that higiene  BEING CLEAN is an esenTialPART  for human BEING. plus if you don't take care of it you will smell a lot,.however MOREOVER being without internet could be stressful.

Martí Ginard
YOUWOULD USE MOREOVER ( AND NOT HOWEVER) BECAUSE YOU ARE SAYING MORE POSITIVE THINGS TO CHOOSE HAVING A SHOWER INSTEAD OF INTERNET.

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I would rather go a month without internet because HAVING A SHOWER is more important taking a shower than having internet.Also I don't want to smell bad because it's embarrassing WHEN that people don't come close. STAY AWAY FROM YOU BECAUSE YOU STINK

Miquel Barceló

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I would rather be one month without internet because I think that having a good hygiene is more important than having internet. If I were in that situation, I would take up some new hobbies or activities that I’m not used to do or practice. Despite of having lots of entertainment activities I think I  would use internet somehow before the month had finished.(??)

In conclusion, I would rather be one month without internet but I think I wouldn’t be able to do it.???(I AM A BIT PUZZLED

-Xim Castilla
YOUR PARAGRAPH IS NOT COHERENT..YOU SAY SOMETHING AND THEN YOU SAY THE OPPOSITE...IT IS CONFUSING

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Héctor Fernández Sánchez

My least favorite primary school teacher was the first grade English teacher, because I could never ask him questions and he explained badly. I also think he sat down to play candy crush with his cell phone

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Héctor Fernández Sánchez

I prefer to be without internet, because above all I prefer my personal hygiene to the internet, I can be calmly without internet for a month

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Being a teenager, is good and bad  CAN BE POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE at same time. ON THE ONE HAND BEING A TEENAGES Is good  IS QUITE POSITIVE because you can spend lots of time with your friends going  ON parties and having fun. In ON  the other hand,BEING A TEENAGER CAN BE QUITE HARD is bad because you want TO HAVE MORE freedom and your parents DON0T ALLOW YOU TO DO AS MANY THINGS AS YOU WOULD LIKE TO because you haven’t turned eighteen YET . It’ CAN BE VERY  frustrating but is normal.YOU KNOW THAT IS QUITE FREQUENT AND IT WILL BE OVER SOON

Pau Barceló
MY CORRECTIONS ARE TO IMPROVE THE VOCABULARY ( DON'T USE "GOOD AND BAD ")

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I think the worst thing of being a teenager ist that you suffer a lot because you are incomprehensible DON'T FEEL UNDERSTOOD BY MOST PEOPLE .HOWEVER, THE BEST ABOUT BEING A TEENAGER IS and the Best think is that you have more LIVELY  emotions that THAN an adult / GROWN-UPS
and I love that.

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The best thing about being a minor /UNDERAGE is not having so many responsibilities.HOWEVER THERE ARE NEGATIVE POINTS LIKE NOT BEING ABLE TO DRIVE A CAR you cannot drive, being of legal age you have to act accord( DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS LAST IDEA)

Lautaro

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I always thought that the best PART OF of beING  a teenager is takING advantage of your parents money, because you depend oN theIR money. The worst think  PART is the CHANGING MOODS WE GO THROUGHmood changes  and the decisions you have to take about your academic future.

-Irene Blanco
SPELLING PROBLEMS( THING/K, THEY/THEIR)

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I think the worts WORST  SIDE OF BEING A TEENAGES IS FEELING CRITIZED BY ADULTS .SPECIALLY WHEN YOU TALKS ABOUT YOUR FUTURE IDEAS .I ALSO DON'T LIKE  WHEN THEY COMPARE THEMSELVES WITH US, OR WITH YOUR  SIBLINGS. is when the adults criticize what we want to be when we grow up and compere you with your siblings and with your family. And HOWEVER, THE best PART OF  BEING A TEENAGER ARE ALL THE  is the experiences you live. GO THROUGH

Francina Mas

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The worst and the best thing of being a teenager

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The worst and the best thing of being a teenager

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In my opinion, one of the best things of being a teenager is that your relationships with your friends tend to be  GET stronger. You can rely on them and tell your problems. Also, you spend more time with them.

On the other hand, the worst thing are the mood changes. Some days you might wake up moody and without motivation to do anything, and then feel really well and excited.

-Adrià Gili
GOOD CONTENT AND WELL ORGANIZED

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The NEGATIVE SIDE  of being a teenager is that you can't do a lot of things UNTIL YOU TURN 18 SUCH AS DRIVING A CAR , OR OWNING A HOUSE. than if you are more than 18 years old (for example: drive a car, have a house...)
And the best PART  of being  A teenager is that you don't have a lot of responsabily RESPONSABILITIES like a adultS HAVE BECAUSE MOST OF THE TIME your parents take care of you AND TAKE CARE OF THOSE RESPONSABILITES
-Thiago Galán
DON'T USE PARAGRAPHS , USE WORD TO CONNECT AND EXPLAIN IDEAS

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The worst thing is that I have to do all that  WHAT my parents TELL ME TO DO and the best THING is when I can hang out with my friends.ALTHOUGH I H I have to go back home WHEN MY PARENTS TELL ME time that they say me, but I STILL ENJOY BEING WITH MY FRIENDS can go with my friends.

Valentina Girón
USE CONNECTORS. A BIT SIMPLE STYLE

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that the worst thing about beeing BEING  a teenanger is the pressure we have ON US. WE ALSO SUFFER FROM OUR  the family problems and  MOREOVER WE MUST also that our  HANDLE WITH OUR  hormones are fluttering WHAT t makes us TO have a constant mood swings.

Claudia Duran Tapia

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I think the best think THING  of being a teenager is that ALONGSIDE THESE YEARS  age you learn a lot of things to face life IN THE FUTURE. You also meet a lot of new people and you have a good time with they. THEM
HOWEVER,  I think that is the worst stageIN ONE PERSON'S LIFE, because you have a lot of EMOTIONAL   ups and downs sentimentally. In this age you  MAY EVEN  suffer depression and anxiety many times.
SPELLING OF "THINK",
PRONOMS PROBLEMS.

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The best with you  PART OF BEING A teneger  TEENAGER is THAT WE ARE FULL OF ENERGY have to much energy and i AND WE CAN Take of the mosT OF IT. HOWEVER,  the worst PART is THAT WE ALSO FEEL LOTS OF SOCIAL PRESSURE AND SOMETIMES WE SUFFER  have a most presion of the society and suffer for no reson.

Ibtisam
PAY ATTENTION TO SPELLING

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What is the best or the worst of being a teenager?

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What is the best or the worst of being a teenager?

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The best  PART thing of being a teenager is you can do a lot of ACTIVITIES things, for example meetING  with your friends, have a car ( YOU CAN'T HAVE A CAR)or a motorbike, etc.
Also you can work?? and if you live with your parents you don't have to pay a rent.

Miquel Barceló
DON'T REPEAT THING SO MUCH
PROBLEMS WITH CONTENT

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I think the best thing of being a teenager is that you spend the most of your time with your friends. As a consequence,  you have a great time with them. But this is also a bad  CAN ALSO TURN INTO SOMETHING NEGATIVE thing because you waste a lot of life DON'T SPEND SO MUCH TIME time with your most loved people which is your family.

Martí Ginard

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The bad thing NEGATIVE SIDE OF BEING A TEENAGER IS THAT  is that you have to study a lot.MOREOVER,you put yourself under a lot of stress. You GO UNDER MANY CHANGES very big change in physique and metal since you are maturing GROWING UP.

HOWEVER, The BRIGHT SIDE  is that you make friends, learn and discover things in life and GROW UP to become an adult

Héctor Fernández Sánchez
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS.USE FULL STOP
GOOD CONTENT

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The good and the worst of being a teenager

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The good and the worst of being a teenager

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I think that being a teenager has many advantages. ON THE ONE HAND, YOU DON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT MONEY AT ALL
1- Money, because you don't have to worry about that because you depend on your parents financially.  MOREOVER,
2- You can go out every weekend with your friends and have a good time.

The DARK SIDE  about being a teenager I think IS THAT YOU are the moody, .BUT APART FROM YOUR EMOTIONAL SWING I CAN'T THINK OF ANY OTHER NEGATIVE  POINTS ABOUT BEING A TEENAGER and I don't know an other thing because has more things good than bad.

Niyire García
DON`T MAKE A LIST WITH NUMBER. CONNECT IDEAS WITH WORDS

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ALTHOUGH Being a teenager CAN BE  sometimes a bit stressful and difficult because you’re moody and angry very Even though you suffer occasionally ,it is one of the best stages in your life.

In my opinion, the best of being a teenager is that you have a
lot of time TO SPEND WITH YOUR FAMILY AND FRIENDS to meet your friends and to spend with your family. Moreover, living without paying nothing  ANYTHING or almost nothing  ANYTHING is very comfortable because you don’t have to worry about money.

The worst thing of being a teenager is that you have lots of spots on your face and you FEEL YOU look very ugly. What’s more, if you pop the spots it hurts a lot.

-Xim Castilla.
WITHOUT IS A NEGATIVE WORDS SO YOU MUST USE ANYTHING AND NOT NOTHING
GOOD CONTENT...LAST PARAGRAPH A BIT SILLY THOUGH

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May last primary teacher was ver nice to me and I don't remember any situation that she shouted out to me. In conclusion, she was very lovely and I appreciate her a lot.

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I would prefer a month without Internet because is not important to me. I always dream about a world without Internet, phones, laptops... I think it will be so funny and interesting at the same time. People would spend more time with her family and would  try new things that they never thought of doing before.
I'm a person who loves water, and I love taking shower because It calms me down and makes me reflect on myself day by day .

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When I was a kid my favourite toy was the scalextric due to THE FACT THAT  I could play with it during all the day. ALL  DAY LONG .Moreover I remember when my friends came to my home we made races with it and it was a very good way to GET entertainED us.

Martí Ginard
DUE TO +NOUN PHRASE
DUE TO THE FACT THAT S+ VERB

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When I was a kid I didN’t use to spend a lot time playing with toys because I thought they were boring. Instead of playing with toys, I used to play with a football or a tennis ball because I was, and I still am, very sporty. My cousins, who are more or less my age, used to come home and we all played together with any ball.

Nowadays, I don’t use them very often because I don’t have time and mY cousins don’t visit us as they did a few years ago. Anyways, I have a great memory about the time I spent playing in family with balls.

-Xim Castilla.
GOOD CONTENT AND WELL EXPLAINED

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When I was a kid my favorite toy was a santoro ??brand ??stuffed toy. MY mother gave it to me and I have always loved it.

Claudia Duran Tapia
USE FULL STOPS TO CONNECT SENTENCES.NO COMMAS

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My  favourite toy when I was a kid it was a big doll. She was blonde and she had a long and bright hair. I liked her a lot because I could comb her hair and I also could dress her as I wanted.

Ilham
NO  "A" HAIR( I SUPPOOSE IT HAD MORE THAN 1 HAIR)
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When I was a kid my favorite toy was the nerfs(EXPLAIN WHAT NERFS ARE PLEASE) .I played with the nerfs a lot of years and now im still playing WITH THEM SOMETIMES .I always played with my cousin and brother.It was very funny but the NEGATIVE SIDE thingWAS  that the bullets were GOT  Lost.

Miquel Barceló
WHEN YOU WRITE ABOUT SOMETHING THE READER MAY NOT KNOW ( NERFS) YOU HAVE TOEXPLAIN SHORTLY WHAT IT IS ( NERFS,J TOY WATERGUNS? THAT WERE POPULAR WHEN I WAS A BOY)

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If I had to do a bucket list, I would put INCLUDE THE FOLLOWING IDEAS.
First of all, I WOULD visit the USA, BECAUSE  I think IT  is a great country.
After, I’d put IN MY LIST to become a pro basketball player.
An last, FINALLY I’d put to live in my dream house.
I think IT is a very good list to try to complete in all my life.
DON'T USE :  USE CONNECTORS AND FULL STOPS

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I would like to visit the most dangerous jail in all IN  the world to see the behavior of the pressmen  PRISONERS and how they survive it THERE. I think it will be a great INTERESTING experience for me and maybe I will make new friends.
SUHAILA DEAR THIS SOUNDS VERY WEIRD TO ME.YOU WILL HAVE TO EXPLAIN IT , THANKS

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What would you write on your "Bucket List"

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What would you write on your "Bucket List"

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I would like to do a parachute before I  die.
Because I think jumpING with a parachute is a great idea and I believe that is a thing that you should do ONCE in your LIFE and also I like the adrenaline AND I AM SURE THERE IS LOTS OF ADRENALINE RUNNING THROUGH YOUR BODY WHEN YOU PARACHUTE
But I don't know so much what to put i my Bucket List, because I have  AM  ONLY 15 years old and I don't like think THINKING about the dead. DEATH
-Thiago Galán
YOU ARE 15 ( NO YOU HAVE 15)
DEAD( LOS MUERTOS) DEATH( LA MUERTE)

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Before I die I would like to goTO   a concert of “Badbunny”, aN international trap singer.I WOULD ALSO  LIKE TO  travel around the world, try to parachute, study a lot of  things, read many books, and above all  I would like to get a dream work and a healthy live.

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I would like to meet Harry Styles before I die. It's my favourite singer. Harry is the kindest person I HAVE ever known. MOREOVER, His music touches me.(YOU COULD WRITE A BITMORE HERE AS A CONCLUSION)

Francina Mas

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Currently, there is not any activity that I would like to do BEFORE I DIE. I think that the thing that I would like to do is  TO  ENJOY having aSIMPLE/ good life with a family and enjoying what I am doing at the moment. Life is about living in the moment, and in my opinion this is what I want. Although there are some exciting things to do, this ENJOYING HERE AND NOW Is essential.

-Adrià Gili
OK YOU COULD HAVE USED SOME MORE ELABORATED WORDS

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I would like to travel to Dubai, dive in the Caribbean with the animals are there THAT LIVE THERE. and buy a boat and travel AROUND THE SEVEN SEAS.

Claudia Duran Tapia

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I WOULD LIKE TO TRAVEL Is go on trip arround the world,becauseni  I would like to know each place in the world and its different culteres and ITS most beatiful places

Héctor Fernández Sánchez

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I would like to do bungee jumping because I think that it would be exciting. DoING  scuba diving is my second dream because I love the sea and the fishes are amazing. Also, beING an architect has been always my dream.

Valentina Girón
REMEMBER VERB WITH ING WHEN IT IS THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE

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I would like to meet Mike Tyson before I die because  HE  is my idol and my favourite boxer, AND I THINK HE IS  one of the best in the world.Also I would like to parachute.HOWEVER
Above all I would like to be millionaire to be like Mr.Beast, a philanthropist.
Miquel Barceló

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My favourite toy when I was a kid it was an A  scooter that my father buy to  BOUGHT me. I was always playing with it and I still KEEP it as a memory.
A + CONSONANT
AN+VOWEL
PAY ATTENTION TO TENSES

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I would like to traveling for all  AROUND the world and go to the Bahamas.  I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO Do the parachute and bungee jumpi because ????i'm afraid of everithing and i would like everthing before i die.???

Ibtisam.
THERE IS A PROBLEM WITH THE CONTENT(NO TE SENTIT PER QUE DIUS QUE TE FA POR TOT I QUE VOLDRIES TIRAR-TE AMB PARACAIGUDES, M'HO EXPLIQUES?)

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What I would like to do before I die is : (YOU HAVE TO WRITE A PARAGRAPH, DON'T MAKE A LIST.USE CONNECTORS)
-Parachute
-Bungee jumping
-Travel to the Maldives
-Travel to Milan to see the fashion quadrangle
-Go to Dani Martin's concert
-Travel to Hollywood and las vegas

Niyire García

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If I had to write a bucket list before I die, I would include visiting Maldivas Islands due to THE FACT THAT  I think that is one of the most beautiful places of IN the world. I would ALSO like to travel to the USA because there, THERE  are the most famous persons PEOPLE  of  IN  the world

Martí Ginard
IN THE WORLD( NOT "OF THE WORLD")
DUE TO +NOUN PHRASE( DUE TO THE RAIN)
DUE TO THE FACT THAT+S+VERB( DUE TO THE FACT THAT IT RAINED)

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I would like to travel all over the world and I also want to study my career and then find a good job. I want to find a person who loves me  A LOT much and make with him a big family.
Ilham Nassiri
CAREER( IS YOUR PROFESSIONAL LIFE)
DEGREE( IS WHAT YOU STUDY AT UNIVERSITY)

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There are many things that I would like to do before I die today I am only going to talk about three of them.

Firstly, I would like to travel to Tailandia because it is a country with a different lifestyle compared with the lifestyle in Spain SPANISH ONE.. I am really interested about their culture and food too.Secondly, I would like to watch the Olympic Games in real time because I have always watched THEM on the TV with my family. Finally, I would like to play a tennis match against Rafa Nadal because I love playing tennis and he is my idol. Even though it is almost imposible I have got a bit of hope TO MAKE ALL MY DREAMS COME TRUE

-Xim Castilla.

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I'm irrationally scared of snakes cause I have ophidiophobia and whenEVER I saw a SEE A picture of a snake  I just start crying and when I SEE a real one  IS EVEN WORST.I just fall down / FAINT and and I'm not aware of  WHERE I AM OR WHAT I WAS DOING what I do or where I am.
WELL  EXPALINED BUT TOO LONG SENTENCE.

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I’m scared of snakes, not only if I see one in front of me,  I CANN0T SEE ONE IN A also in pictures or videos. I think that If I see one probably I would cry and run veru FAST. My grandma made me feel scared of them since I’WAS very small.

-Irene Blanco

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I am phobic  TO closed sites. I hate beeing in caves or in narrow places where I can not see the sun. I’”m not scared of nothing else. There’s nothing comming into my mind that scares me.

Pau Barceló
BEING
LAST SENTENCE IS REPETITIVE

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I'm scared of gekos. They are all over the place??? and I don't like their touch. It gives me shivERS to see them STUCK  to the wall and see them running everywhere.

Francina Mas
GLUE MEANS WITH GLUE( FERRAMENT)

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I am scared lot of insects and also I have trypophobia, THAT is that I can't see a lot of holes.
When I see a lot of holes I have the FEELING of barf?? and sickness.
Ilham

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I'm irrationally scared of the darkness. in the nigth  AT NIGHT  when a  I go to sleep I turn on the TV. Also I hate the holes, when I go to the dentist, I can't see the ceiling, because it have a lot of holes and that's why I hate goING to the dentist.

Valentina Girón Posada
IT IS AT NIGHT ..NOT IN THE NIGHT

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What scares me are the dark waters that  WHERE YOU CAN'T SEE do not what is below. Because I am afraid of not seeing well where I am walking  SWIMMING OR STEPPING ON  and it causes me anxiety not knowing what is below
Héctor Fernández Sánchez
WELL EXPLAINED

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I have scarry   AM SCARED OF  spideRS .  Ever since i  Iwas little i  I have been afraid of theM and whenever i see them i get a shiver down my spine andI run to another place far away from them.

Ibtisam.
I GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS

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I'm scared of high heights.Im acrophobic because one day I was in a excel??? with my familiy and friends excursion in (Sa Foradada
and when we were going down I slipped from QUITE height and almost fell. SINCE THAT DAY I DON'T LIKE WALKING NEAR HEIGHTS

MIQUEL BARCELO

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I am irrationally scared of heights since I was very young. Because of this fear I have never enjoyed going to very high buildings or riding roller coasters.

When I was five years old I stayed a few days in my aunt’s house, which is in Valencia and it is in the eleventh floor. One of those days we had a dinner all together on the balcony. I didn’t want to go there because I thought the balcony was going to fall down and I started crying. Finally, I had to eat on the balcony with all the family and I was very afraid. Since that day I have never gone to that balcony more.

-Xim Castilla.
SCARY BUT TRUE..GOOD TEXT

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From a very young age I have been afraid of cockroaches and spiders. Every time I see one I satrt to scream.They disgust me soo much and TAHT  I can't even look at them. My mum always laughs at me because I look silly WHENEVER I COME ACROSS ONE

Claudia Duran Tapia
PUCNTUATION PROBLEM. USE FULL STOPS AND NOT COMMAS TO CONNECT SENTENCES

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I'm irrationaly scared of a lot of insects but especially bees makes me feel in panic bacause when I was younger one of them bite me in the arm and I couldn't move it. Nowadays when I saw one of them I start running away due to the bad experience they caused to me.

Martí Ginard

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I consider myself good at  helping people resolving their problems and that makes me so  VERY happy. And I am also good at  sport because I'm a pretty energetic person and practicing sport makeS me feel free.
IF YOU USE "SO" THEN YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE SENTENCE LIKE...IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY THAT I AM CONSIDERING WORKING AS A PSYCHOLOGIST( FOR EXAMPLE)

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I don’t know lots of things I am good at. It comes into my mind that I am very sportive. I love playing basketball, swimming and in general all KINDS OF sports.
And in  ON the other hand, I think i   I  am friendly. I have LOTS OF friends and i  I love meeting them.

Pau Barceló
"I" GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS PLEASE

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2 things that I consider that I'm good at

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2 things that I consider that I'm good at

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Fistly, I think that I'm an sportive person due to  THE FACT THAT I practise a lot of sports during the week. THIS  these thing benefits my health. Apart from that I'm a hardworking person because I work a lot to get good results.

Martí Ginard
DUE TO + NOUN PHRASE( SINTAGMA NOMINAL)
EX: DUE TO MY SPORT ROUTINE, I WOULD SAY THAT I AM QUITE AN SPORTY PERSON
DUE TO +THE FACT THAT + SUBJ+VERB
EX. DUE TO THE FACT THAT I PRACTICE A LOT OF SPORTS, I WOULD SAY THAT I AM A SPORTY PERSON
THIS ( AQUEST) THESE( AQUESTS, PLURAL)
GOOD MARTI THAT YOU TRY EXPRESSIONS YOU MAY NOT BE SURE ABOUT. THANKS

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Always I ALWAYS  think that I’m a person who have a lot of positive things, so for me It’s not difficult to think  CHOOSE only two. One of the positive things about me is HOW WELL I COOK my facilitie to cook whatever, even so  WHEN I don’t know the recipe , it’s  QUITE very easy for me TO COOK ANY KIND OF DISH. Also I CONSIDER MYSELF a person with good habits, . that means I MEAN I have a routine SUCH AS  I woke up early, if I have to study I do it.IN A NUTSHELL,  I’m not a lazy person which I think is very important to be constant  TO SUCEED in  ANY FIELD SUCH AS your studIES , sport AND SO ON

-Irene Blanco
GOOD IDEAS IRENE,
IN A NUTSHELL MEANS "EN POQUES PARAULES"
PLURAL OF STUDY / STUDIES
DON'T PUT ... WRITE THE WORDS "AND SO ON "

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I consider that I am very sociable .that's mind  I MEAN that I am TRY TO BE a good person with everyone. BUT ABOVE ALL , the best thing ABOUT ME is that  I am a very funny person and I make people laugh.
I am also a hard-working person because I am very responsable and I like always to feel satisfied WITH MY JOB/ WHAT I DO .
Ilham

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I'm good at being good at what I want to be good AT ( COULD YOU BE A BIT MORE SPECIFIC?) and I'm good at doing practical things specially outside.(OUTDOORS YOU MEAN?)
Mika