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I feel as though my length and word choice were very good.

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I feel as if my word choice and reasoning were my two strongest points to my essay. My word choice added detail and depth to my essay. I also think it helped my reasoning throughout my essay. I also feel like my length was good.

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I feel like the length of my essay was good.

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I feel like I had a good understanding of what we were supposed to write because we spent a lot of in class time to go over it step by step.

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In my essay two of my strengths where my analysis and my intro to my essay. I think that I analyzed very well. And i think I had a good intro. I had a good quote and a good starter for the rest of the paper

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In my essay, I feel like I wrote a in-depth analysis with good word choice.

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I think i did a good job with finding evidence and analyzing it. i done good.

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I think that one strength was in the analysis section, where i think I did well considering the amount of work I put in

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I think i my strengths were length and finding good evidence

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I think my two strengths were analysis and length partly due to the step-by-step composure of the outline.

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I think that my intro paragraph was probably my best. I noticed that it was easy for my to write. I also had an easier time finding textual evidence that supported my claims.

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I think that my strengths were length and quotes

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Length and quotations

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I feel I wrote a good length paper and my strength was length of the Essay. I also had good textual evidence because we practice this every time we right an Essay

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The strengths I believed I had for this essay was definitely word choice. I have always thought of myself as more of a creative writer then a factual one. So I love using creative words that recapture someones attention as they their mind slowly fades away from reading the boring paper. I also thought my conclusion was pretty swell, I really liked the way I put it together and the words I used for it. I also really enjoyed the way I ended the conclusion.

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I feel like textual evidence was one of my strengths because I had found some that seemed pretty strong that would support my claim well. Also, I feel like length was also a strength because it wasn't a two page essay with really short paragraphs. I feel like they went in depth somewhat and pretty good explanations of each piece of evidence.

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I feel that two of my strengths were using relevant textual evidence and connecting all my claims well.

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I felt like I had a diverse word choice for a lot of it and with analyzing, I really went in depth with explaining the evidence and connecting it with the book.

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I feel that my strengths were in my paragraph length and my ability to not re-use the same words over and over again

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I think that my main strengths in my essay was my textual evidence.

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In my essay i believe i did a good job on finding text support due to in-class time, I also feel like i did better in my annalists

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2 of my essay strengths was my textual evidence was very well used and analyzed. And my length was the longest I've ever written. This was all due to staying up till 10:30-11 working on this when i should've been sleeping.

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I thought that using peer editing helped me improve my essay because I would have missed doing some of the corrections.
I also thought the length of my essay was pretty long for me because I normally dont write long essays because I cant think of any thing to write.

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In my essay, I felt that two of my strengths was the length of my essay and my thesis. I tried to get my paragraphs longer as I went on, and I ended up making it a pretty long essay, with deep analysis. I also felt that my thesis statement was pretty good, but that also may be because it was given to us.

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In my essay I think I did really good at working outside of school. I also had long paragraphs that I had worked hard on.

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In my essay I think that my strengths are choice of words throughout my essay and also my analysis to support my claims.

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In my OMAM essay, two of my strengths were word choice and reasoning. I expanded my word choice to more detailed words that helped my claim. I also feel as if I had logical reasoning which would persuade a reader if they read it. I also feel as if I had good length to my essay.

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I thought that this S.A challenged me a lot by letting me take my time, and focus on the topic. I learned a lot with the right way on writing a correct S.A.

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Two of my strengths were that I had good word choice and I also had great grammar. This was due to my previous experience writing essays.

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My strength was explaining the quote way more and going into depth with it. This is one of the longest papers i've ever written due to my explaining. The explaining I felt was the easiest part but another one of my strengths was my word choice.

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In my essay, I felt I had strong in-depth analysis. I used to struggle with this, but I noticed that once I stopped being afraid of really trying to understand the text and dig deeper, analysis became much easier.
Also, I improved in the length of my essay. This is probably the longest essay I've written for school! In-depth analysis definitely helped with this, but I think that trying to push my paragraph length to more than three sentences was a challenge that I did a nice job accomplishing. Peer editing feedback and completing the essay step-by-step was a nice way to make the essay not as taunting of an assignment.