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I Had a Cold

One years ago,I had a cold and I felt very
sick and tired.
I had high fever and headache.
I also had a sore throat. At that time, I missed school and went to see a doctor.
I took some  medicine for my cold. I had to lie in bad bed all day, too.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side. She made me some soup and I felt better than before.
I hope I never get sick again.

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When I had a Fever
Last year, I had a fever and I felt sick.
I had a cough and headache. I also had a cold.
On Friday, I missed school. And I went to the hospital. I took some medicine for my fever. I had to stay indoors because of my fever, +too.
When I was sick, my mom gave me some hot water. She made me some porridge and I felt better.
I hope I never get sick again.

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When I got Sick.
Last year,I had a cold and I felt very tired.
I had a high fever and cough
I also had a headache.
The next  day,  I went to see a doctor.
I eat  +took medicine for my cold.  I had to lie in my room all day because of my cold.
When I was sick, +my mom took me to the hospital.
She made me some delicious food
and I felt good+.
I hope I don't got sick again.

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A Fever

Last year, I had a fever and I felt very sick.
I had a fever and I also had a cough.
At that time, I ate porridge and slept.
I even had to take medicine for my fever.
I had to lie in bed all day because of my fever.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side.
She made me some porridge and I felt very +much better.
I hope I don't get sick again!

24/25

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My Worst Day
Last year, I had a cold and was very sick.
I had a high fever and cough.
I also had an earache.
Last year, I had to lie in bed all day and keep warm.
I even missed school because of my cold.
I had to +take some medicine because of my fever.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side.
She made me rice soup and I felt much better.
I hope I don't get sick again!

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Last year, I had a cold and
I felt very sick.
I had a cough and runny nose+.
I also had a high fever.
The next day, I missed
school and went to see a doctor.
I took medicine for my cold.
I had to stay home all day because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side.
She made me healthy food and I felt much better.
I hope I don’t get sick again.

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A Flu
2 years ago, l had the flu and I felt very sick.
l had a cough and a runny nose. l also had a headache. On the following Monday, l went to see a doctor
and l took some cough syrup. l even got a shot for my flu. l had to lie in bed all day because of my flu. When l was sick, my mom stayed my side. She gave me medicine and l felt much better.

l hope I don't get sick again 😎😎

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When I Had a Cold

Last year, I had a cold and
I felt very tired.
I had a cough and runny nose+.
I also had a high fever.
The next day, I missed school and went to see a doctor.
I took  medicine for my cold.
I had to stay home all day because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side.
She made me healthy food and I felt much better.
I hope I don't get sick anymore.

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When I Had a Fever

Last month, I had a cold and felt very tired.
I had a fever and a headache.
I also had a stomachache.
Three weeks ago, I took some medicine and went to see a
doctor.
I got a shot from the doctor for my cold.
I had to stay in bed the whole day
because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom cooked some delicious food.
She took care of me and I felt much better.
I hope I will never get sick again.

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When I had a Cold

Last year, I had a cold and a runny nose.

I had a high  fever and a hoarse voice.
I also had a headache .
The next day, I missed school and I went to see a doctor. I took some medicine for my cold. I had to lie in bed all day because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side. She made me some delicious food and I felt much better.
I hope I don't get sick again.

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When I had a Cold
Last week, I had a cold and I felt very sleep+y.
I had a fever and a runny nose.
I also was very sick. On Sunday, I went to see a doctor. Then, on Monday, I missed school
I took medicine for my cold.
I had to stay home all day because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side.She gave me some medicine and I felt sleepy.
I really hope my runny nose goes away!

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When I had a +Cold
On +Sunday,I had a cold and a cough.
I had a headache and high fever.
I also had a hoarse voice. +The next day,I missed school and I went to the hospital.
I had to lie in bed all day because of my cold.
When +I was sick, my mom and dad were by my side.
She made me some delicious food and I felt much better.

I hope I don't get sick again.

23/25

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When I had a Cold

Last year, I had a cold and I felt sick.
I had a fever and sore throat.
I also had a headache.
I missed school and went to the hospital.
I got medicine from a doctor for my cold.
I had to stay indoors because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom gave me hot water.
She made me some porridge and I felt better than before.
I don't want to sick again.

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A Cold

Last year, I had a cold and I felt tired.
I had a cough and high fever. I also  had a runny nose.
On Tuesday, I slept all day+.
I even  took some medicine for my cold.
I had to drink hot water because of my cold.
When I was sick, my grandma stayed by my side.
She made me soup and I felt much better.
I hope +I don't get sick again.

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A  cold

When I was young, I had a  cold and I felt very sleepy.
I had cold and  a runny nose.
I also had a  high fever.
On Tuesday, I missed school and I went to see a doctor.
I even got a shot for my cold.
I had to lie in bed all day because of my cold.
When I was sick my mom stayed my by side.
She made me delicious food and I felt better.
I really hate being sick.

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A Cold
Last year, I had a cold and I felt sick.
I had a fever, was sneezing  and had a headache.
On Monday, I missed school and went to see a doctor.
I slept for a long time because +of my cold. I had to take medicine because of my cold, too.
When I was sick my mom bought me my favorite food.
She gave it to me ,I ate it and then I felt much better.
I hope I don't get sick again.

24/25

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When I had a Fever

Last year, I had a cold and I had a fever.
I had a cough and a hoarse voice.
I also had a high fever.
Last year,I missed school and went to the hospital.
I had to lie in bed all day because of my cold.
I  had to take medicine because of my cold.
When I was sick,my mom stayed by my side.
She made me food and I felt much better.
I hope I don't get sick again.

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When I had a cold

Last week, I had a cold and I felt very hot.
I had a headache and sore throat. I also had a high fever.
On Monday, I missed school and my mom took me to see a doctor.
I even sleep +slept all day because of my cold.
I had to stay home and just play by myself because of my cold.(repeat)

When I was sick my dad played with me after he came +home from work.
We played board games and video games and he showed me a funny TV show and I felt happy and much better.

I hope never I have a fever again.

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When I had a cold.

This year, I had a cold and runny nose.
I had a sore throat, +too.
On Friday afternoon, I had to go to the hospital.
I get +got a medicine from the doctor for my cold.
When I caught a cold, my mom made rice porridge.
I hope I don't get sick again.

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When I had a Fever.

In the last two years,I had a cold and I felt tired and sick.
I had a cold,a high fever and cough.
I also had a runny nose.
On the weekend,I went to the hospital and kept warm.
I took some medicine for my cold.
I had to go to bed early because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed by my side all day.
She made soup for me and I felt better then +than before.
I don't want to have a cold again

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Sad Day

Once I had a cold and I felt very sick.
I had a fever. I also had a  headache.
Last year, I missed school and stayed indoors. I took some medicine for my cold. I had to keep warm because of my cold.
When I was sick, my mom stayed home with me. She made me some soup and I felt much better.
I never want to be sick again.

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A cold
Last week, I had a cold and I felt very sick.
I had a runny nose.
I also had a high fever.
On +Friday, I missed scool school and went  to see a doctor.
I even take +took a medicine for my cold.
I had to lie in bad all day because of my cold.
When l was sick, my mom stayed home with me.
She made me some delicious  food and+ I felt mush much better.
I hope +I don't get sick agin again.

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+When I had a +Cold Last +Year

I missed school and I went to the hospital to get medicine. I saw a doctor for my cold. When I was sick, my mom gave me water and made me some delicious food. I felt much better. I hope I don't get sick again.

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Paragraph 1: What were your symptoms (problems)?

Paragraph 2: What did YOU do to fix the problem?

Paragraph 3: What did ANOTHER PERSON (Mom, Dad, friend) do to help you?

Conclusion:

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When I had + a +Cold
Last year, I had a cold and I felt sick.
I had a cough and a headache.+. I also had a high fever.
+The following  +Monday, I missed school and went to see a doctor.
I even got a Lingerling? for my cold. I had to stay at home +the whole time because of my cold. When I was sick, My mom gave medicine +and she made poirige +porridge and I felt much better+.
I hope I dont get sick again+.

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