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Thank you for sharing your photos. I really liked them. This is a very good way to practice your written skills, so I hope you enjoyed writing about yourself, what you like to do and about your hobbies. The key to writing well is by practicing and in speaking. It is also important that you read texts in English so that you can learn how to structure sentences in the right way.

Kind regards,

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Thank you very much for doing all the activities proposed during these three months. We have finished the course this way. I hope you have improved your knowledge in a second language and you can master it during the next courses that you do in the future inside or outside the university.

Good luck,

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Good job! I wish you are enjoying the platform lessons...
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Here the corrections about your writing:

My favorite teacher is Juan Carlos, he dictates TEACHES class of electronics, he measures 1.75 cm, is white and his  hair is black . He likes to see WATCH football and  go to cinema, he has A wife and 2 children. He is my favorite teacher because he explains very well all the topics of class, is demanding but he can explain. The classes with Juan are very interactive and dynamic, IT is not boring.

In my last vacations I was WENT to villavicencio, there my father and his wife lives there , last in this place 1 week, I went to the park the Ocarros to see animals, it is a zoo. I went to a typical restaurant of meat llanera, the meat more delicious that I have proved. I was in villavicencio from January 8TH to January 14TH. I went to a swimming pool near my house where I met my friends. To go to the department of Meta is the whole pleasure for his ITS landscape and his ITS late afternoons, they are only.

My birthday is ON April 28, for this day I think to make a familiar meeting where we could meet all and spend a good moment. I would like to have a celebration with my friends to be going to dance or go out  of Bogota. We Usually we meEt in the house of my grandmother to eat cake and to sing THE Happy Birthday. I wait for this day for many gifts but overcoat to be assembled in family. To celebrate my birthday is grand but I would like to have more money and I the one that gives gifts.

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your reading skills.

Here juat some examples to show you you are using a translator:

- a great step for the humanity who believes herself  ITSELF since always I have always liked

-to be able to realize algun??? SPANISH?  project with solar

and for my form SPANISH?more dangerous of travelling it is in motorcycle, I have a motorcycle and that are very insecure and you prop ??? the drivers estan SPANISH? exposed to climatic problems and of falls.

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My favorite teacher is Juan Carlos, he dictates class of electronics, he measures 1.75 cm, is white and his  hair is black . He likes to see football and  go to cinema, he has wife and 2 children. He is my favorite teacher because he explains very well all the topics of class, is demanding but he can explain. The classes with Juan are very interactive and dynamic, is not boring.

In my last vacations I was to villavicencio, there my father and his wife lives, last in this place 1 week, I went to the park the Ocarros to see animals, it is a zoo. I went to a typical restaurant of meat llanera, the meat more delicious that I have proved. I was in villavicencio from January 8 to January 14. I went to a swimming pool near my house where I met my friends. To go to the department of Meta is the whole pleasure for his landscape and his late afternoons, they are only.

My birthday is April 28, for this day I think to make a familiar meeting where we could meet all and spend a good moment. I would like to have a celebration with my friends to be going to dance or go out  of Bogota. Usually we met in the house of my grandmother to eat cake and to sing Happy Birthday. I wait for this day for many gifts but overcoat to be assembled in family. To celebrate my birthday is grand but I would like to have more money and I the one that gives gifts.

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Hi!

Awesome! The participation in the forum is well written in terms of punctuation, grammar, spelling, coherence, and cohesion. It includes information about you, the things you did last weekend and things you do on a long weekend.

Here some mistakes:
- I live in the town of kennedy, (neighborhood)
- companion (what do you mean?) and social person
-The food I do not like is the vegetable, (The food I do not like ARE the vegetableS
- we ran the hacienda on Friday ( Not clear! )
- living room, comedir (Dining room)
and other things to adore?? DECORATE the apartment.

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The shared article is amazing, is a great step for the humanity who believes herself to create this type of projects with renewable energy; I liked very much the article since always I have liked the corresponding thing to the solar power, always wanted do a project with renewable energy; I expect for my future in particualar to be able to realize algun project with solar power like that small sea for the use in the home. The solar planes are the future of the aviation and the solution of some problems with the fuels.

B) For the form and the safety of travelling it is in the car since it is more of protection for the factors as the rain, the wind, some blow, besides which they can sleep in if they travel in the road and these far from a hotel; and for my form more dangerous of travelling it is in motorcycle, I have a motorcycle and that are very insecure and you prop the drivers estan exposed to climatic problems and of falls.

C) The human beings already went to the space, we must demonstrate that we are capable of living well in another planet, for my way of seeing seriously fantasticly as that we would have the second opportunity to have a more intelligent civilization and more worried by the neighbor. If we believe civilization in another world it is necessary to take to the minds mas the brilliant diamond of the world this way of having the possibilities more of having a better world.

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Hi!
Thanks for the video you shared. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, there were some grammar and cohesion mistakes. You read all time and I wanted something more fluent. You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for know.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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Hello ...
My name is Diego Barreto I am 25 years old, I am studying technology in electromedicine, I live in the town of kennedy, I like to watch and to play soccer and to share with my family, and at the moment I am single.

I consider myself a cheerful, committed, fulfilled, honest, companion and social person; My height is 1.73 cm I am white with blond hair, brown eyes.

I love chocolate, meat, Mexican food, Italian food, Colombian food etc.
The food I do not like is the vegetable, I think it tastes horrible.

Last weekend, moving my house with my family, we ran the hacienda on Friday, Saturday and Sunday we finished. The members of the house went to live in the separate apartments with their bed, TV, computer, living room, comedir and other things to adore the apartment.

A holiday usually use to sleep and do college jobs and if the time goes out with friends and shares with the family.

I share a little of my life, have a good week ...