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Well-done, everyone! You have completed your writing!

1. Please upload your writing / type the revised version of your work    according to your class number.

2. Read your classmates' writings. Choose five that you like the most and give them "likes" and positive comments.

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A Bad Day
Yesterday , John and his parents went to May park for a picnic . They prepared John's favourite food , such as sandwiches , fruits and sweets . They found an empty table and started to eat . John said , " What a nice day ! This place is just perfect . "
Suddenly , a monkey jumped out of the bushes and took away some of their fruits on the table . John and his parents were astonished . They took a few minutes to recover from their shock . Their emotions changed from surprised to furious . They chased after the monkey around the park for three times . They only stopped for a while to catch their breath when the monkey climbed up a tree . They shook the tree until the monkey could no longer hold on . John tried to take back his fruits but the monkey held on and refused to let go . Filled with frustration , John's parents had no choice but to call the staff .
When the staff arrived , he wasn't surprised that the monkey had stolen the fruits . " I'm sorry about this accident  , but this place's also a zoo for animals . It's also called May zoo . But it is not written on the name plate because the boss thinks it isn't important , " he said " But it should be closed today , how did you get in ? " " um....." John and his parents were speechless , they had made a big mistake . They apologized to the staff and left . " Well , we'd better be more careful next time , " Dad said as he tripped over a rock . " Oops ! "

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People with Kindness
Yesterday, John's family went to May Park to have a family picnic. John jumped up and down with excitement in the park. John felt excited about the picnic. John was starving and wanted to eat a lot of delicious food prepared by his parents.  They enjoyed it a lot.
While John was devouring his mouthwatering hotdog, a monkey appeared from nowhere and stole John's banana and apple. The monkey was ravenous. The monkey thought, "It's a lovely day for an appetizing meal! John was shocked. His mum said "Go away! Go away!"
The monkey immediately ran away with his hands holding John's apple and banana. He was very naughty. He ran as fast as an airplane. The monkey thought, "You silly human can't catch me! John's dad was furious. He ran as fast as he could and tried his best to catch the monkey as he shouted," Give us back the fruits! You naughty monkey!" John's dad felt annoyed.
The monkey ran far away and climbed up a tree and started eating. John thought the family picnic was ruined by the monkey. At that time, a kind man passed by and shared some fruit sandwiches with John's family. John thought it was a heart-warming moment of the day.
John's family had a great day out having a nice, wonderful family picnic.

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My writing -A Wonderful Day

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My writing-A Wonderful Day

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The Naughty Monkey
Last weekend was a beautiful day. John and his parents decided to have a picnic at May Park. Even his parents were over the moon. "what a great day for picnic!" John's mom exclaimed.
As they were having their lunch, a monkey suddenly jumped onto their table. The monkey had a very naughty smile on its face. The John family's mouths were as big as an apple when they saw the monkey steal their food! "Naughty Monkey!" John shouted! "Five the fruits back to me!" They were all shaking uncontrollably.
John's face fell as the monkey ran away. Dad shouted, "Come back, you naughty animal!" But the monkey just ignored him and ran even faster and faster. The John family groaned in disappointment. John's mom even had flames in her eves.
Just then, John had an idea. He squeaked, "Why don't you call the police?" John's parents quickly took out their phone and called 999. After a while, the police arrived. They quickly caught the monkey and returned to fruits to John. "Thank you for helping us!" John's mom said with tear of joy. They said goodbye to the police and return to their table. What an unforgettable day! The John family played in the park until sunset that day.
marks: 37/42 = 88/100!!! (highest ever in my writing!!!)

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DS2Y11 Calista Hung A Terrible Picnic Day

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A Terrible Picnic Day
One day john and his parents went to May Park to have a picnic. John was very excited because it was his first time to go on a picnic with his parents. John brought many things for this picnic!
While John was eating his hotdog, a naughty monkey suddenly jumped out from a tree and stole john's apple and banana! John's mum shouted furiously " STOP!!!! YOU!!!! NAUGHTY MONKEY!!!!!" John's dad chased and chased but John's dad still failed to catch the naughty monkey. John was very sad.
At Last, John's dad brought John to a supermarket to buy snacks that John loves, and told the park security guard that there were monkeys in the park. John said, " I hope the monkeys will be caught, and no monkeys will steal any foods again."

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A Terrible Day

On a warm sunny day, John and his parents went to May Park to have a picnic. John was happy and he smiled that he was as happy as frying to the space!

John’s parents took out some yummy to make John happy. John said, “Wow! All of the food look yummy! I love this picnic day!” John was over the moon! While he was eating the hotdog, a monkey jumped out from the tree. John screamed and he jumped up. He cried, “Hey you, naughty monkey, give all the food back to me!” His parents dropped all the food and drinks they were holding and stared at the monkey. John’s dad chased after the naughty monkey. John was sad and stomped the floor hard. His mom was angry and shouted at the monkey.

The monkey ran and ran. It ran until it was in front of a river. It felt frightened and it ate the apple on its hand. It turned red and became an extremely fast runner. John’s dad couldn’t catch up with the monkey anymore. John’s dad said, “No! Our food!” They were all sad. They went back to their table and they played some games.

John and his family had a sad picnic day. But, John was still happy because he could enjoy the game time with his family!

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A Nervous Day
Yesterday was a sunny day .John and his parents went to May Park to have a picnic . John jumped up and down with excitement.
While John's mum was taking out the food , a naughty monkey with a funny face jumped on the table and grabbed an apple and some bananas ! John and his parents were frightened and astonished . John's mum said , "This is terrible ! " John's dad chased the monkey .
Soon ,the monkey stopped because it wanted to eat the food . It was hungry as a lion as it hadn't been eating anything for ten days ! John's dad chased it and pretended to be a lion . He roared at the monkey . The monkey was scared and it got rid of the food and ran away . John's dad caught all the food . John said "Yay !"
Finally John's family continued their picnic and had a great day .