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(The ordinal timing)

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To improve our film, and to appeal to our audience, we made some changes too the film. We took out about 45 seconds of the title sequence to make it shorter, and more exciting, as some of the shots were boring. We also improved our editing, and made the shots look tighter. We zoomed in, and reviewed the footage frame by frame, cutting out any frames without action happening on screen. The faster editing, quickened the phase of the film overall and made it more enjoyable to watch. We also planned a detailed soundscape to made the film look more authentic

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We showed this second rough cut of our film 'Emily' to members of our target audience and got their feedback, so we could improve our final product. They said:
-It was too long (losing interest)
-Needs sound (as we didn't put any on at the time)
-Shots were too long
-A bit boring over all

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