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1. What I liked about your presenation is that you used good language and corrected any mistakes you had before the presentation. Also, you had a fantastic Quiz Slide at the end for which you used the images.

2. I think you should use less text on the slides and just explain verbally ( speaking).

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1. I really liked the video that you used as a "hook" in your presentation and how well you delivered it: you used body language and designed a great quiz at the end.

2. I think you should correct any mistakes in your slides before presenting (there were many verbs issues! E.g: go---went!)

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I don't know very well about your topic, and I think it is a little boring but I think it is good

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your hook is very good

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his writing is good but he said bad, he Slurred speech, so i don’t really understand what he saying about. and his ppt is not pretty he didn’t add pictures or some decorate， so it didn’t let me want to look at it.

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It's a lot, but next time it could be a little more concise.

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next time more emotion

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it is very good it has alot of detail but it can be more less question

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I like your video and I think the FE was speedy, so I think that was a cool video

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I like your video and I think the FE was speedy, so I think that was a cool video

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I'm unsure if that escaped Mao is the bad NPC or the good NPC.

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I'm unsure if that escaped Mao is the bad NPC or the good NPC.

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you have many friends

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Say more clearly I can't hear you what you say 

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Say more clearly I can't hear you what you say 

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Your story is written very good in your story I learned that where you go and what were you doing

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i think she did good she but a lot of picture and decorate it’s good

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i think she did good she but a lot of picture and decorate it’s good

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you write a story about you and you friend

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1. What I really liked was your PPT, pictures and how well connected the story was. It was interesting and everyone was listening;) Your pronunciation was good, too! Also, your grammar was correct almost throughout the entrie presentation. ( Correct: Which album did I bought?)

2. Next time, please stand up, then your voice will be louder;)

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very good 3

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Very good! 100 point! and it was so interesting, I love Formula E

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Very good! 100 point! and it was so interesting, I love Formula E

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When I have presentation you let me stand up instead of sit but when you do it you sit down, and you only choose your friends and your friend know the answer of your quiz, it not fair

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score3.5

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your score 4

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you write very clearly

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There is a beginning and an end, there are many details in the middle, and there are questions at the end

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1. What I really like is the amount of photos you used and the explanation for the choice of your presentation as well as the questions at the end. Your voice was good and you looked like you enjoy presenting!

2. You should correct the mistakes or ask someone to proof read it for you the text before presenting. There were some mistake, e.g: "thier", " Where are we playing?", "bill", "crystal". Can you correct these mistakes?;)

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我无脑支持Chris

4points

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tony speaks very loudly， and it's full of emotion, i like it.

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tony gave a great speech. The details, the pictures, the language are all well described. i think can get four points

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speak loudly and have many emotion

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444！

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I think your is very good your story is very interesting and you describe them really fun and you put a lot detail also you put a lot of action when you feeling and you read this kind funny so I really like it also your question is interesting

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1.What I liked about your presentation was that you had some good images and the story was interesting and funny. I like how you underlined the words you wanted the class to remember. Overall, you are a good presenter, and audience liked listening to you!

2.You should work on putting capital letter at the begining of the sentences. This is important! Also next time put shorter text on the slides and maybe have more text on the handout, paper;) You said: " I see" instead of "I saw."

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Very good but I want to know that your ppt page has a lot of word it let me hard to read

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Very good but I want to know that your ppt page has a lot of word it let me hard to read

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your grade is 3.5

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your score:3.5

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You have many details and it sound very interesting I really likes it

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1. I like that you went home, corrected your mistakes on your PPT and presented again. This shows that you work hard! Your pronunciation was very good and the story was good. Nice quiz;)

2. Youl should add pictures , any picture related to the topic

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i think it better to add some picture but i's good

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Information details A lot of sound is very loud! Pretty good

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Good but same as Tony it is so normal I want to see more funny things that can make your ppt be good and you can design more better in your ppt

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Good but same as Tony it is so normal I want to see more funny things that can make your ppt be good and you can design more better in your ppt

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your score is 3

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It is good but I think it can be better, you can add a quiz and more pages

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score:3.5

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1. I like that you worked as a team and provided some good text and pictures. Your language and grammar was correct

2. You need to work on NOT reading off the laptop (Brian and Channing), READ presentation and words before presenting (Brian), following the rubrics (you only had 3 slides and no Quiz!) Prepare better and make more effors

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Best Quiz & Effort!

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The Best Delivery (Presenter)

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i like it

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Most Creative - best PPT slides!

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Best Content

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Best Animation-Pictures!

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Best Animation-Video!

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难评

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video is good

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Prince story should do better and it is no very good design and story hard to read but your video is good so I love it

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Prince story should do better and it is no very good design and story hard to read but your video is good so I love it

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your score is 2.5

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1. What I liked is that you attached your video and used Chris as an actor. It was fun!

2. You need to improve on following the rubrics and adding more pictures. You had no Quiz

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It is very good but your video should  do more good

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It is very good but your video should  do more good

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score:2.5

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1. I like the slides, they looked very pretty and it is good that you didn t use a lot of slides and just had notes someone else. This is good !Good job for trying hard;) I appreciate it! Good quiz1

2. You need to work on memorising maybe your presentation a bit before presenting. Prepare better ! Alos there were some mistakes: "Exeiting---> Exciting. Check the words---- ancient!, Next " We were shopping NOT We was shopping, ok?

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he didn't speak very well but he try, so i think it good

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always taking pictures of herself and friends

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What did you learn about presentation skills?

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What did you learn about presentation skills?

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What did you learn about presentation skills?

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What did you learn about presentation skills?

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What did you learn about presentation skills?

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What did you learn about presentation skills?