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E.g. I intend to allocate more time for Paper 1 essay and have shorter recons for Paper 2.

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E.g. I would make new mindmaps from the school notes.

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E.g. I would familiarise myself with different argumentative techniques like POC.

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i'm going to analyse more essay questions on my own and get a stronger feel for the links between certain content/concepts

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I want to work on the clarity of my arguments and also increase how fast I can break down passages by practicing more

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I will read more detailed resources on A01 content so that I can form big-picture connetions

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Practice more! And read more samples/essays so that I can learn from better-organised essays and apply tips to my own writing

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-properly analyze all the key terms and fully plan out the argument before starting

-be able to bring up any relevant taught content knowledge

-write concisely

-stop not reading the question

-get a B 🙏🙏

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Apply A01 content better for essay and long passage so I can get my A!!!!

Also improve on making more accurate reconstructions and identifying premises and main conclusions better...

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-memorise the main theories and views present in every knowledge field by rewatching lectures

-read the provided readings on ivy in more detail

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Goal for Promos:

Essay:

Able to recall relevant content

Able to substantiate an argument with multiple examples and strong elaboration

Long Passage:

Able to analyse the author’s argument and identify assumptions in it

Able to relate the argument to ideas of the relevant discipline

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Re-reading and consolidating content knowledge from own notes and lectures.

Make summaries

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Look through the notes I have made to refresh the ideas and relevant proponents of them. Do essay plans to practice making arguments with relevant content.

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-read model essays in KS bull and identify writing techniques (ways you can agree/disagree with the question)

-practice writing essays and get chatgpt to mark

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Keeping previous comments from previous essays, spam write essays and long passages to practise writing speed and content application and reconstruction

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Review previous comments and keep them in mind when writing my responses.

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hope to be more concise in my essay and long passage answer

be able to frame my examples and A01 knowledge to better support my arguments and be more persuasive

plan out my essay more thoroughly for better time management

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Improve! And be more used to doing prose reconstruction & more proficient at long passage questions

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Read through my notes & the given readings & do short summaries

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Analyse KS Bull, do more practice

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look more at the long passage format so that i can write shorter recons and identify assumptions better

improve on framing my points and planning out my essay so that all my points are relevant and well substantiated

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I will condense the content from math and science and categorise it into ontology and epistemology

I will also read up more (ask chatgpt) and find more math and science examples to spam in my essays and evals

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read some sample essays so i can get an idea of what writing style i should use

practice framing and coming up with relevant and well elaborated points

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For both essay and LP:

explain and elaborate on my examples more

Use more AO1 content

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Honestly I think I am doing well so I just want to maintain my standards 🤩 and maybe to write things that I can be proud of (i.e. find good points to make and write well stylistically)

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I hope to be more meticulous in unpacking my examples. I would also like to be more careful and precise in my phrasing, and go less by gut instinct when attacking arguments

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i'll revise more of my AO1 content and understand the long passages better, so that i can link the passage arguments to underlying epistemological theories better! will also review essays and improve on my argumentation.

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practice more long passage recon + re-read my past essays so i can hopefully bump my grades to an a :'')

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I'll transfer my (terribly) handwritten mindmaps into content summaries and read up more on topics I'm interested in. also maybe manifest math questions for the promos

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will be creating notes and working on understanding the content better so that i can apply it in my arguments. i will also be abusing SEP and IEP.

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read more examples that i could hopefully bring into my essays esp for math/science since im less familiar w those case studies

revise ao1 content again :D

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read more model essays and look at their logic flow, do a few more essay plans on my own and practice more

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I hope to provide clearer and more in depth explanation. I also hope to be able to demonstrate a comprehensive and insightful understanding of the NACOK, improving in the A01 aspect.

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i will be scouring the writings of Raphael Niu and other model essays in the KS bull, as well as learning relevant lexicon to use in my writing to be more precise when talking about domain-specific content

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collate some examples to support the A01 content

Revise A01 content

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I shall read the model essays to better understand how ideas are phrased and expressed.

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familiarise myself with the necessary AO1 content to improve my arguments on the whole

better time management so i don't end up rushing

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Review past practices

Practice...? Where can I find practices??

Familiarize myself with diff types of arguments and syllogisms etc

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I will be reading model essays and be more aware about time management

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read TOK 😁

fish for more examples in the articles on ivy

memorise the basic content knowledge

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I shall transplant my (poorly written) mindmaps into content summaries. I also want to read up more on the topics I enjoy :) also manifest easy math question

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time management - cut down on planning + more time for writing

just more practice in general

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Essay:

Improve the way my points are structured such that my argument is more coherent

Come prepared with more examples that can reinforce my content knowledge

Long passage:

Be more concise with my recon

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I will be revising the content in the slides, lectures and my notes in order to have a more comprehensive and clear understanding of A01 content

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Memorise an array of examples for the different topics and create mindmaps for each topic

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I will be doing up some essay plans and writing a few out in full

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Read KSBull

Do essay plans

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Remember key concepts

Relate A01 content to essay questions

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Stop using goofy language

Tailor my arguments specifically to directly answer the question

Bring in more A01 content

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Paper 1:

Be more familiar with the subject-matter content and various relevant examples I could bring in to substantiate my points

Improve the structure of my essay with better planning

Discern the relevance of discussing things and whether they will help me to answer the question

Paper 2:

Bring in more AO1 content by analysing the implicit premises/assumptions made by the author regarding various areas like science, math, etc.

Critique more significant flaws of the argument which will help reduce my need to nitpick on small details to fill my essay

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Understand the various theories and positions in the different areas of knowledge and then memorise the relevant examples

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Practice writing more and try to take inspiration/learn from the good works of the good people of yore in KS Bull