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Some people believe that it is a good idea that old people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree.

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Some people believe that it is a good idea that old people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree.

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🟥𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴
✨TR: 6; CC: 6; VC: 5.5; GR: 5.5✨

Whether it is for the social economic growth 💥 wc: -> socio-economic growth or the deficiency of employees 💥 wc: dùng từ 'deficiency' không phù hợp vì mang nghĩa là sự thiếu hụt nghiêm trọng hơn so với cần, nên chuyển thành 'shortage' sẽ hợp lý hơn the importance of increasing the amount 💥 gr: 'amount' dùng cho danh từ không đếm được, nên ở đây phải dùng 'number' vì workers là đếm được of workers is undisputed. However, when it comes to the elderly labors 💥 wc: không nói 'labors' ở đây mà là 'laborers' vì đang nói về người lao động, the debate have been particularly intense 💥 gr: động từ phải chia số ít vì 'debate' là số ít -> has been particularly intense. Proponents argue that hiring elderly workers are bound for plummeting the productivity 💥 gr: 'are' không chia đúng, và cụm từ này không tự nhiên -> will inevitably lower productivity. Nevertheless, I completely disagree with that notion in the light of their experience and the satisfaction of elderly people.

The irreplaceable knowledge and experience is most compelling 💥 gr: knowledge và experience là danh từ số nhiều -> are most compelling when we consider the recruitment of elderly people that simply cannot be replicated outside of a economic environment 💥 wc: -> cannot be replicated outside an economic environment. It stands to reason that the old workers also define as senior employees who have a lot of respect coming from everyone 💥 wc -> Older workers are often respected as senior employees with vast experience. Their experience has accumulated for a long -time period 💥 wc: không tự nhiên, cụm 'for a long time' không cần gạch nối -> has accumulated over a long period of time. Such experience can feasibly tackle any tough issue in a perfect way. We need look no further than the case in 2020 when the workforce reduction has been a trend in the light of Covid-19 💥 gr: chia không hợp lý, nên dùng quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã hoàn thành -> We need look no further than 2020 when workforce reduction became a trend due to Covid-19. A multitude of young workers have fired 💥 gr: câu bị thiếu động từ bị động -> were fired instead of those who are seasoned. Without seasoned workers, a company is not inclined to be a up-and-coming company 💥 wc: 'not inclined' không tự nhiên -> unlikely to become an up-and-coming company.

Added to this, the satisfaction of working with age, which by all counts, is beyond compared 💥 gr-> as one grows older, is beyond compare. To be specific, nowadays, old people have a high self-esteem, therefore, should individuals define them as a burden, it is a offence 💥 gr: lỗi chia câu, phải chia lại với 'if clause' -> if individuals define them as a burden, it is an offense. Besides, not only do work in the old age incentivise to seek for intrinsic pleasure 💥 gr -> does working at an old age incentivize them to seek intrinsic pleasure but it also opens up to all of the possibilities to do well financially 💥 wc -> opens up many possibilities to do well financially. Aftermath 💥 wc: 'Aftermath' chỉ dùng cho thảm họa hoặc tai họa, nên sửa thành -> As a result, their inner world is likely to be satisfied, plus it is a incidental 💥 gr: -> an incidental benefit for the social economic growth 💥 wc: phải sửa thành 'socio-economic growth' như ở trên. Telling the example is in Japan in which there is a lot of restaurants, hotels owning by elderly people 💥 gr: -> Take Japan as an example, where many restaurants and hotels are owned by elderly people.

Conversely, the argument against the acceptance for people working in the old age 💥 wc: câu này không tự nhiên, sửa thành 'accepting older people working' -> accepting older people working is rooted in the percentage of unemployment in young generation 💥 gr: dùng sai 'in' và thiếu mạo từ -> in the younger generation. To be specific, there is a correspondence between the increase in old workers and the reduction in 💥 gr: dùng sai giới từ -> of young employees. Yet, this assumption is superficial 💥 wc: -> However, this assumption oversimplifies the issue. In reality, even if the older generation works with the younger ones, there is no guaranteed that 💥 gr: -> there is no guarantee that young workers might be replaced due to 💥 gr: cần dùng thì tương lai ở đây -> will be replaced because of their creativity, innovation, and - the most prominent value - their long-term contribution.

In conclusion, in this era where the phenomenon of hiring old people to work is familiar with individuals and companies 💥 wc -> elderly workers has become familiar to individuals and companies. In light of that, I hold the notion that this is a positive trend.

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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it? 

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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it? 

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🟥𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴

✨TR: 6.5; CC: 6; VC: 6.5; GR: 6✨

The poor standard of life is a growing concern, and questions about its root causes have been looming large. Therefore, it is crucial to take action to tackle the issue, and all shareholders 💥 wc: từ này không phù hợp vì nói về người góp vốn, nên thay bằng 'stakeholders' , including policymakers, investors, and the general public, have a role to play this 💥 gr: thiếu giới từ, nên viết 'in this regard'.

The downward quality of life is rooted in a complex interplay of factors, but it is mainly attributed to social pressure, if not urbanization. It is social pressure that fails to escalate 💥 wc: từ này không phù hợp vì 'escalate' nghĩa là tăng mạnh; nên dùng 'fails to improve' the standard of life. Having competed against other individuals, people are likely to be under pressure in a multitude of criteria such as rewards, scores, careers, and wages, in stark contrast with the older generation, in which their environment don't have to notice severely on these problems 💥 gr: câu này khó hiểu; nên viết lại là 'whose environment did not place such severe emphasis on these issues'. These criteria, irrefutably, are a stereotype 💥 wc: 'stereotype' không phù hợp; nên dùng 'a set standard' to acknowledge being a "successful person" in this society, but individuals are immersed in it. People, sadly, are always hungry for a better job or to attend prestigious universities. As a result, should people stuck in 💥 gr: cần dùng 'be stuck in' this phenomenon, psychological problems are bound to emerge, which will plummet the standard of life.

In addition, urbanization also creates a worse quality of life. The influx of people from rural areas seeking for convenient life migrate urban 💥 gr: câu này diễn đạt rời rạc, nên viết lại 'seeking a more convenient life migrate to urban areas'. This setting, undeniably, creates overcrowded cities having a deficiency in quality facilities, accommodations 💥 gr: nên viết lại là 'with a deficiency in quality facilities and accommodations.'.

At the heart of the combat against the decrease in quality of life is the need for a happier life that prioritizes altering some old-fashioned opinions and enacting new legislation on migration. People should ensure that individuals don't have to endure the old-fashioned criteria 💥 wc: cụm từ này không tự nhiên, nên viết 'outdated standards' in any situation. Furthermore, policymakers must take action to decrease the quantity of migration, with rules encouraging people to develop in their hometowns, plus concessionary 💥 wc: từ này không rõ nghĩa trong ngữ cảnh, có thể thay bằng 'incentives'..

In conclusion, the quality of life, which has plunged, is a problem that affects most, if not all, people worldwide. Policymakers, investors, and the public must take action, but it will take a collective effort to make the most significant impact.

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Bố cục bài

Mở: 2 câu gọi tên đồ thị nhận xét chung về những thay đổi chính

Thân 1: 4 câu nói về những thay đổi

Cấu trúc 1 câu: Sự thay đổi diễn ra ntn, ở đâu, để làm gì

Thân 2: 4 câu nói về những thay đổi còn lại

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The two map compare the changes which....

Overall, it appears (thay đổi ), with far more....

The area that has seen the biggest improvements is.....

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Đặc điểm đề

Dùng các hình để đánh số hoặc có mũi tên nối với nhau

Viết về 1 quy trình hoặc là quy trình sản xuất/ vận hành của máy

quy trình vận hành cua máy -> biết nhiều từ về kỹ thuật, thậm chí là kiến thúc VẬT LÝ =((( tỷ lê ra đề rất thấp =))))) để đọc được kết cấu máy.

Quy trình sản xuất thì dễ hơn (có chú thích + các bước rõ ràng)

Bố cục bài

1 Mở bài: Gọi tên đồ thị + chia các quy trình lớn. Quy trình được chia theo ý nghĩa của hình

Chuẩn bị, sơ chế, chế biến, kt chất lượng, đóng gói, vận chuyển, tiêu thụ

2 Thân -> mỗi thân gồm 3 đến 4 câu tóm tắt quy trình lớn (sử dụng hiện tại đơn, bị động, nhiều từ chỉ quy trình, kèm các từ chỉ mục đích và đại từ quan hệ mở rộng ý nghĩa)

Cấu trúc chung của 1 câu gồm: quy trình, vật thể, được/bị PII + để làm gì.

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Given is the .....

Quy trình vận hành máy

Mở: 3 câu - Câu 1: Tên đồ thị

Câu 2: Tả qua về kết cấu máy

Câu 3: Cách vận hành (nhiên liệu, được dùng để làm gì)

Thân: 2 đoạn - Tả kỹ về cỗ máy theo chiều mũi tên

- Tả kỹ về các vận hành

-> Làm được bài này cần nhiều từ kỹ thuật (tham khảo list từ cuối link)

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9/9 - IELTS SPEAKING PART 1 + NEGATIVE EVENTS

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9/9 - IELTS SPEAKING PART 1 + NEGATIVE EVENTS

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1. T-shirts: Do you prefer wearing t-shirts or formal clothes? Why?

I'm a kind of person who not interested in clothes so much, you know.., so I often prefer something that comfortable - like T-shirt. However, who knows, in the future, there might be some occasion that I tend to wear formal clothes more often.

2. Outer space and stars: Have you ever been interested in learning about space and stars? Why or why not?

I'm a pisces, you know, my zodiac sign, so I'm kind of dreamy and I tend to find myself lost in romantic themes. Meanwhile, space and stars science is somehow complicated and I find them mundane.

However, who knows in the future, I have to learn it because of my major, i may give it a go.

3. Chocolate: Do you like eating chocolate? What kind of chocolate do you prefer?

Honestly, I gotta say, yes. Back in the day when I was small, I was a sweet tooth so I was all about eating white chocolate. But fast forward to now, my tend to eat dark chocolate more than white one.

4. Sharing things: Are you someone who likes to share things with others? What do you usually share?

Well, I'm a pisces, you know, my zodiac sign, I think I'm an emotional person. So I always tend to share things with others. But you know, sadly I'm wired with my school projects so this habit is delayed for a while.

5. Morning routines and breakfast: What is your typical morning routine like? Do you always have breakfast?

Well, I get up at 6 a.m to do my daily routine, like brushing my teeth, preparing for school subject, having breakfast, getting my bike and going to school, like a clockwork.

Honestly, I gotta say, yes. Back in the day when I was small, I used to skip by breakfast. But fast forward to now, eating breakfast is an important step in my daily routine.

6. News: How often do you read or watch the news? Why do you think it's important to stay informed?

Honestly , I gotta say sometimes. Back in the day when i was young, I used to prefer watching films. But fast forward now, I tend to watch the news in the morning.

For me, staying informed allows you to keep in touch with the world and gain some useful knowledges.

7. Art: Do you enjoy visiting art galleries or museums? Why or why not?

Honestly, I gotta say, yes. Back in the day when I was small, I used to go to the museum. I was all about art and elegant style in there . But fast forward to now, I don't have time to visit it anymore.

8. Music and musical instruments: Can you play any musical instruments? Which one would you like to learn?

Honestly , I gotta say, yes. Back in the day when i was just small, I used to play music with my friends at some special occasions. I was all about playing the piano. But fast forward now, I'm wired with my school projects so this habit is delayed for a while.

9. Holidays: What is your favorite holiday? How do you usually spend it?

I gotta say, Independence day. I used to go back to visit my hometown with my parents But you know, sadly I'm wired with my school projects so this year I didn't comeback to my hometown.

10. Relax: How do you usually relax after a busy day?

Well, I always tend to watch some movies which I prefer a lot, or sometimes I take a bath with bath bome to relax myself. But, recently I rather a nap.

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T-shirts: Do you prefer wearing t-shirts or formal clothes? Why?

To be honest, I’m not big on clothes, you know? I usually just go for whatever’s comfy, and that’s always a T-shirt. But who knows? Maybe down the road, there’ll be some events where I’ll have to go all fancy and start wearing formal clothes more often.

Outer space and stars: Have you ever been interested in learning about space and stars? Why or why not?

I mean, I’m a Pisces, right? So I’m naturally a bit dreamy and romantic. Space and stars are fascinating, but all that science stuff is a bit too dry for me. But then again, who knows? Maybe I’ll give it a go someday if my major ends up requiring it.

Chocolate: Do you like eating chocolate? What kind of chocolate do you prefer?

Oh yeah, for sure. Back in the day, I was a total sweet tooth and went crazy for white chocolate. But fast forward to now, I’m more into dark chocolate. It just hits differently, you know?

Sharing things: Are you someone who likes to share things with others? What do you usually share?

Well, being a Pisces and all, I tend to open up and share stuff pretty often. But lately, with all the school projects piling up, I haven’t had much time for it. I guess that habit’s on hold for now.

Morning routines and breakfast: What is your typical morning routine like? Do you always have breakfast?

I’m up at 6 a.m., go through the usual – brush my teeth, get my stuff together for school, have breakfast, hop on my bike, and head to class. I used to skip breakfast when I was younger, but now it’s become a must in my routine.

News: How often do you read or watch the news? Why do you think it's important to stay informed?

To be honest, I only keep up with the news sometimes. When I was younger, I was all about watching movies, but now I tune in to the news in the mornings. It helps keep me in the loop and gives me useful info.

Art: Do you enjoy visiting art galleries or museums? Why or why not?

Yeah, I used to love checking out museums when I was a kid. I was really into the art and the whole vibe. But these days, I just don’t have the time to make it out there anymore.

Music and musical instruments: Can you play any musical instruments? Which one would you like to learn?

I used to mess around with the piano back in the day during special occasions with my friends. But now, I’m so swamped with schoolwork that I’ve had to put it on hold for a while.

Holidays: What is your favorite holiday? How do you usually spend it?

I’ve always loved Independence Day. I used to head back to my hometown with my family. But, you know, this year I couldn’t make the trip because I was buried in school projects.

Relax: How do you usually relax after a busy day?

I usually just chill out with a movie or maybe take a bath with a bath bomb to unwind. Lately though, I’ve been all about just taking a quick nap to recharge.

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MSLYIELTS - PART 1 + PART 2 NEGATIVE EVENTS.mp4

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Có 5 dạng viết cần lập và thuộc template:

1. argumentative 100 (đánh đối lập)

2. argumentative 80 (công nhận đối lập)

3. discussion (gần giống arg 80)

4. cause - effect - solution

5. advan hơn disadvan?

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ARGUMENTATIVE 80

TOPIC + influence: XXX được coi là chìa khóa... để.., với ý tưởng là (đề bài) ... đang làm dấy lên dư luận.

DEBATES + reason: Một số người coi đó là .... (tốt). Trong khi người khác nghi ngờ. Họ cho rằng (giải thích ý nghi ngờ)

THESIS + reasons (chỉ đưa reason là 2 ý nhỏ sắp trình bày ở thân, thuận theo ý mình): Tôi tin rằng trong khi (nó: nhượng một chút), thì ....

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ARGUMENTATIVE 100

TOPIC + contradiction: Dù nó là ... hay ..., không thể phủ nhận tầm quan trọng của .... Tuy nhiên, khi nói về ..., các cuộc tranh luận lại gay gắt.

DEBATES + 1 side + their reasons: Bên .. cho rằng... quan trọng vì...

THESIS + my reason (outline for body): Tuy nhiên tôi cho rằng... vì ...

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Main argument: quan điểm tôi giống câu nói

Idea 1: So sánh: Luận điểm này rõ nhất khi cân nhắc trường hợp.. cái mà không đâu có được

Support: Nhưng cái ... này, đặc biệt là cái..., điều mà giúp 2

fact (khái quát) + example (cụ thể)+ impact 1 (đại từ quan hệ) + impact 2 (rút gọn đại từ quan hệ)

Idea 2: Đòn bẩy (có từ this, quàng vào ý 1), so sánh đối thủ

Thêm cái này là,... cái mà.... không bì được

Support: emphasis, rút gọn 2 mệnh đề cùng chủ ngữ

We need look no further than x and y to see their impacts

Ving, these (nc, nơi..) V TO V (giải thích VD)

Link: connect the topic (lật ngược lại vấn đề)

Vậy ....nên -> nếu không thì chết

Vậy.... không nên -> nếu thế thì vô lý

Trừ phi nếu ko thì vẫn cứ phải..

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Thân đoạn có 1 ý - triển khai ý đối lập

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ĐOẠN CÔNG NHẬN VẾ ĐỐI LẬP

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THÂN BÀI - LINEAR

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27/8: The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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27/8: The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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🟥𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴 ✨TR: 7.0; CC: 6.5; VC: 6.5; GR: 6.0✨

Having a job is seen as a key pathway to better future prospect 💥 gr prospects, with the idea of the sole reason for working is 💥 gr: dùng giới từ "of" ko hợp lý mà e. Đảo lại là "that the sole reason people work is..." -> that the sole reason people work is money money sparking debate. Some view it as essential for maintaining the standard of life, while others is 💥 gr: -> are are skeptical. Critics highlight that there are a multitude of factors motivating individuals to work hard. I believe that while working hard for money is one of the foremost reasons for individuals, not everyone should be equate with that reasons 💥 gr: đây là "be equated with" chứ ko phải equate, "reasons" thì chia thành số ít chứ ko phải số nhiều -> equated with that reason equated with that reason.

The case for going to work is most compelling when we consider the enthusiasm that simply cannot be replicated outside of individual's 💥 gr: thiếu từ "an", e ạ -> an individual’s an individual's soul. These setting 💥 gr: đây ko phải số nhiều mà là số ít, với cả "setting" ko hợp lý. "Work environment" thì đúng hơn. -> This setting This setting, especially employees 💥 sp: employees ko hợp lý. E đang mô tả workers chứ ko phải môi trường của nhân viên -> for workers, plunges the experience feelings 💥 gr: lặp từ e, "the experience" là danh từ chung rồi, ko cần feelings -> experience of of boredom and stress, satisfying their passion for career 💥 wc: career nói chung thì ổn nhưng chỗ này nghe cụ thể hơn nên dùng "their careers" -> careers careers. Added to this are the desire to contribute to society which, by all account💥 sp -> by all accounts, are beyond compare. We need look no further than the case of firefighters to see their impacts 💥 gr: số nhiều nhưng firefighters là danh từ chung, nên dùng số ít -> impact impact. Being one of the most dangerous jobs, firefighters are willing to help people even if their life will be detrimental 💥 wc: "detrimental" sai nghĩa rồi e, phải là "at risk" -> even if their lives are at risk are at risk. So we should not equate everyone going to work for money, if we do that, psychological problem will be appeared 💥 gr: "psychological problems will be appeared" sai ngữ pháp, ko dùng bị động như này -> psychological problems will appear problems will appear.

Conversely, we cannot deny the crucial 💥 wc -> importance importance of money in life, often tied to the intensity work 💥 gr -> of work of work. Money is the mean 💥 wc -> means means to fulfill the basic needs in life such as clothes, food, utility bills, making ends meet. Yet, this assumption is superficial. In reality, even if increasing the quantity of work, it is not a guaranteed having 💥 gr -> guaranteed to have guaranteed to have high work productivity. In this light of that 💥 wc -> In light of that, workers are more likely to have accidents.

🟥TR: 7.0
Bài viết của e trình bày được quan điểm và lý lẽ, nhưng có những chỗ chưa phát triển sâu. Ví dụ, câu "Critics highlight that there are a multitude of factors..." chỉ nêu vấn đề nhưng chưa cụ thể hóa được những yếu tố đó là gì. E có thể mở rộng thêm những yếu tố khác ngoài tiền, như "self-fulfillment, recognition, or a sense of duty to community."

🟥CC: 6.5
Mặc dù các ý được sắp xếp rõ ràng, nhưng sự kết nối giữa các đoạn chưa được mượt. Ví dụ, câu "Conversely, we cannot deny the crucial of money" có thể cần thêm câu kết nối rõ hơn từ đoạn trước về "psychological reasons". Gợi ý của cô là: "While passion plays a significant role in many cases, the financial aspect cannot be overlooked. In this light, money is undeniably..."

🟥VC: 6.5
Từ vựng của e ổn, nhưng vẫn có những từ chưa đúng ngữ cảnh.

🟥GR: 6.0
Ngữ pháp của e còn mắc khá nhiều lỗi cơ bản về chia động từ, giới từ, và cách dùng bị động. Để nâng điểm GR, e cần chú ý dùng các cấu trúc phức tạp hơn, như câu điều kiện, câu đảo ngữ, hoặc các cấu trúc so sánh. Ví dụ, thay vì viết "if we do that, psychological problem will be appeared", có thể viết "Should we continue to think this way, psychological problems are bound to emerge."

🟦 Hook and Engagement: E có thể mở bài bằng câu gây tranh cãi, ví dụ: "Money might be at the forefront of everyone’s mind, but the true motivation behind work often lies beneath the surface."

▌ꪑకꪶꪗỉꫀꪶᡶక _𝒽𝓊𝑜𝓃𝑔𝓁𝓎.𝒶𝓂𝓈@𝑔𝓂𝒶𝒾𝓁.𝒸𝑜𝓂 ▌
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Pens and pencils: Do you prefer using pens or pencils? Why?

Honestly , I gotta say I would like to use pencils. Back in the day when i was small, I used to expect to use pen because well it made me feel like I become older. But fast forward now, I prefer using pencils because it can edit easily.

News: How often do you read or watch the news? What kind of news interests you?

Well, I gotta say not often. I'm kinda quick absorption, yeah so the news I absorb in diverse fields. But if I were to choose, I would opt for politic news.

Science: Did you enjoy science lessons at school? Why or why not?

I'm a Pisces, you know, so I'm kinda dreamy and often find myself drifting off into romantic daydreams. Meanwhile, when it comes to science , I gotta admit, it bores me a bit.

Libraries: Do you think libraries are still important in the digital age? Why?

Languages: How many languages can you speak? Which one is the most difficult for you?

Well, I think I can speak three languages. First is my mother tongue, Vietnamese, next is English. And I can also speak a little bit French.

Honestly , I gotta say, French. Back to the day when I learnt it, it was too complicated for me to pronounce perfectly

Art: Have you ever tried creating any form of art yourself? What kind?

Honestly , I gotta say never. Back in the day when i was small, I used to expect to create something by myself. But fast forward now, I realize that I don't have enough patient and dexterity to do that.

Weekends: What do you usually do on the weekend? Do you prefer to relax or be active?

Well, I'm a kind of person who is not prefer doing anything at the weekend. Yeah, I'm all about oversleeping so I tend to spend my weekend to do that. Honestly, I gotta say I prefer relaxing at the weekend more than being active. For me, weekend is the reward for me after working hard all days. But, sometimes I think it is good to be active on the weekend.

Staying up: Do you often stay up late? What do you usually do when you stay up late?

I'm a kinda a night owl so I often stay up late. Meanwhile, I gotta admit, my productivity at night is highest so I often do homework, or finish things which I haven't finished it. However, this habit is harmful to my health so I try to change it.

Music and musical instruments: Can you play any musical instruments? How long have you been playing it?

Honestly , I gotta say, yes. Back in the day when i was just small, I used to play music with my friends at some special occasions. I was all about playing the piano and until now I have played it for almost 10 years. But fast forward now, I'm wired with my school projects so this habit is delayed for a while.

Films: Do you prefer watching films at home or in the cinema? Why?

Honestly , if I were choose, I would opt for watching at home. Back in the day when i was small, I would like going to the cinema with my friends. But fast forward now, as I grow up, I prefer watching at home because I want to have more private space.

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Pens and pencils: Do you prefer using pens or pencils? Why?

Honestly, I gotta go with pencils. Back when I was a kid, I always looked forward to using pens because, you know, it made me feel all grown up. But fast forward to now, I prefer pencils since I can easily erase and fix my mistakes.

News: How often do you read or watch the news? What kind of news interests you?

To be honest, not that often. I skim through different news here and there, kinda just pick up bits from all over. But if I had to pick, I’d go for political news—it’s what grabs my attention the most.

Science: Did you enjoy science lessons at school? Why or why not?

I’m a Pisces, so I’m always floating in my head, daydreaming. Science just wasn’t my thing, to be honest. It didn’t click with me and I found it a bit boring.

Libraries: Do you think libraries are still important in the digital age? Why?

In all honesty, I think they are. Even though we live in a digital world, libraries still give off that quiet, focused vibe you can’t get online. Plus, some people just love the feel of a real book in their hands.

Languages: How many languages can you speak? Which one is the most difficult for you?

I speak three languages—Vietnamese, English, and a bit of French. French is definitely the toughest for me. Back when I was learning it, the pronunciation really threw me off—so tricky to get right.

Art: Have you ever tried creating any form of art yourself? What kind?

Honestly, I haven’t. When I was a kid, I always wanted to make something cool, but fast forward to now, I’ve realized I don’t have the patience or the steady hand for it.

Weekends: What do you usually do on the weekend? Do you prefer to relax or be active?

I’m all about chilling on the weekends. To be honest, I usually oversleep and just take it easy. For me, weekends are like a reward after a long week. But hey, every now and then, I get the urge to be active and mix things up.

Staying up: Do you often stay up late? What do you usually do when you stay up late?

I’m a total night owl, so yeah, I stay up late a lot. My brain really kicks in at night, so I usually catch up on homework or finish things I didn’t get to. But it’s a bad habit—I know I should try to change it.

Music and musical instruments: Can you play any musical instruments? How long have you been playing it?

Yeah, I used to play the piano back when I was younger. It’s been almost 10 years now, but I haven’t had much time to play lately because I’ve been swamped with school projects. I really miss it, though.

Films: Do you prefer watching films at home or in the cinema? Why?

If I had to pick, I’d go with watching at home. Back when I was younger, I loved going to the cinema with friends, but now that I’m older, I prefer the comfort and privacy of home. Plus, no crowds—it’s way more chill.

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1. Kì thi 10-15/10 phú. Mặc đồ trang trọng (formal sporty/ elegant/ nerdy). Không tỏ ra biết tuốt/ kinh nghiệm trong thi.

2. gồm 3 phần: part 1 (about yourself, hobbies, likes, dislikes, habits, personal information) - part 2 (describe something + telling a story) - part 3 (social issues = essay)

3. part 1 (ko nói vội, to rõ ràng, trôi chảy

TRÔI CHẢY: 6.5+

ẤP ÚNG: 6-:

1. câu hỏi luôn xuất hiện: do you work ? are you a student?

I'm 15 , so I'm currently studying chuyên ngành at trường.

2. khi tập ở nhà, có 2 phương án:

1. viết script, chữa script, thuộc script, tập chuẩn âm, nói trôi chảy

2. tập nói nhiều lần, cùng 1 bản, nói trôi chảy (trình độ thấp, nếu nói ko có script trước thường hay sai ngữ pháp và từ vựng, thường mỗi lúc 1 ý, thường quên ý trong phòng thi)

3. thành thật: authentic/ genuine

Part 2: Topic liền tù tì trong 2 phút

Khi viết 15 câu/2 phút.

Dành 1-2 câu đầu trả lời các câu cue không cần thiết

Phần còn lại chia làm 2 ý lớn: đưa ra đặc điểm đặc trưng/ chi tiết đáng nhớ + đảo triều quan điểm/ mặt trái/ điểm tiêu cực (1 chút) rồi nói đỡ cho nó

Part 3: Câu hỏi về xã hội nhưng liên quan đến part 2

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ĐẶC ĐIỂM ĐỀ

CÓ TRỤC THỜI GIAN: Bám theo trục thời gian, coi các cột giống như dạng đường = cách chấm 1 điểm giữa các cột và nối chúng với nhau -> sẽ nhìn ra được xu hướng tăng giảm -> phân tích giống line graph.

1. Kết cấu đề

Thực trạng đằng sau số liệu và kết cấu chính.

2. Cách chia đoạn trong thân bài

Tạo tất cả các cột trong điểm thời gian đầu tiên. Sử dụng ngôn ngữ xếp hạng (nhất nhì ...) để tả và trích dẫn số liệu.

Tả điểm thời gian cuối cùng. Cũng tả tất cả các cột sử dụng ngôn ngữ xếp hạng đầu giữa cuối NHƯNG có tương quan với đoạn 1

KHÔNG CÓ THỜI GIAN

1. Giới thiệu tên đồ thị + nhân xét chung

2. thân bài: 2 đoạn mỗi đoạn 3 câu. Để biết đoạn nào viết gì cần đánh stt các cột trong nhóm, đánh số -> tìm ra xu hướng chung của các nhóm

3. trong mỗi đoạn sử dụng ngôn ngư ssanh và xếp hạng đẻ tả.

NGÔN NGỮ SO SÁNH VÀ XẾP HẠNG

1. A, which was SS lần B

2. XH A, making it SS hơn B

3. XH A< SS LUÔN B

4. TẢ Fact, bao nhiêu người làm gì, SS luôn với B

5. Dùng logic tương phản để kéo 2 số liệu vào cùng 1 câu

XH A, although this B

XH A, while SS B

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✨TR: 6.5; CC: 6.5; VC: 6.0; GR: 5.5✨

HẠNH ƠI, TRƯỚC KHI EM NỘP BÀI, EM CẦN CÓ THÓI QUEN SOÁT LẠI LỖI NGỮ PHÁP

The bar chart compares four countries in term 💥 gr: thiếu 's' cho danh từ số nhiều -> terms of the proportion of spending for particular categories in 2009.

Overall, it is noticeable that the United States stood out as the highest ranked country with outstanding figure 💥 wc: không tự nhiên, có thể thay thế bằng từ vựng đơn giản hơn -> had the highest spending in four out of five criteria. As can be seen clearly FROM THE CHART, the most striking feature of the chart is that in almost countries 💥 gr: thiếu từ 'all' -> almost all countries, the percentage of housing is the most dominant category for spending.

The United States led the top 💥 wc: từ này không tự nhiên -> ranked first in terms of the percentage of spending on housing among the four countries, with 26%, whereas the that of clothing was lowest 💥 gr: không đúng -> spending on clothing was the lowest, at 4%. For the other three categories—transportation, food, and health care—the United States spent about 18%, 14%, and 8%, respectively. Similarly, the United Kingdom had by far the highest percentage of spending on housing; however, the figure for health care was the lowest, at only 2%. The figure for food was twice as much as that of transportation 💥 wc: cấu trúc không tự nhiên -> double that of transportation, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

In comparison to the United States and the United Kingdom, where housing made up the highest spending proportion, Canada followed the same pattern, although spending on health care was the lowest. Meanwhile, in Japan, the expenditures for food was the most preferred criteria 💥 gr: không đúng dạng -> food accounted for the largest share of spending, at 23%, while housing was slightly lower at 22%. Health care in Japan had the lowest percentage, at 4%.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of spending in four countries across five categories in 2009.

Overall, the United States consistently ranked highest in four out of the five categories, with housing being the largest expenditure category in most countries. A notable trend is that housing dominated the spending distribution across all countries except Japan, where food took the lead.

In detail, the United States allocated 26% of its spending to housing, the highest among all categories, while spending on clothing was the lowest at just 4%. For transportation, food, and health care, the US figures were 18%, 14%, and 8%, respectively. Similarly, the United Kingdom showed the highest spending on housing, though its expenditure on health care was the lowest at 2%. Interestingly, the UK spent twice as much on food (20%) as on transportation (10%).

In Canada, the same pattern of housing expenditure dominance was observed, with health care again receiving the lowest share. Japan, however, prioritized food expenditure, which accounted for 23%, slightly higher than housing at 22%. Health care was also the least prioritized category in Japan, at just 4%.

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PART 2:

Hồi xưa tôi từng có cơ hội đi chợ với bà- điều mà bây giờ tôi ít khi làm nữa- nhưng cho đến tận bây giờ, tôi vẫn luôn ấn tượng với bà tôi mỗi khi nhớ lại. Văn hóa Việt Nam là luôn ưa thích "mặc cả" mỗi khi trả tiền (điều này tôi thường thấy ở những người thế hệ trước), và bà tôi cũng là người như vậy. Tôi vẫn còn nhớ lúc đó, tôi nắm tay bà đi chợ, khi đến trước hàng cá, bà xem xét kĩ lưỡng, tỉ mỉ từng con một, nói chuyện với người bán hàng một lúc về hàng bán hôm nay: " Có bán đắt hàng không?", " " Con này nhiêu tiền?" Sau đó đến đoạn trả tiền, vì tôi lúc đó còn nhỏ - nên ấn tượng sâu đậm nhất của tôi là bà " úm ba la" xong, giá tiền con cá đó đã giảm. Đến tận giờ suy nghĩ lớn nhất trong tôi là: " Bà thật lợi hại".

Đối với mọi người ở Việt Nam, việc mua hàng rẻ ở chợ là điều bình thường tuy nhiên với tôi bây giờ, đôi khi việc đó mang lại bất lợi với những người bán. Chẳng hạn như họ đồng ý giảm cho 1 người, người sau nghe tin lại đến đòi giảm thì họ sẽ bị lỗ hơn lãi. In brief, sau ngày hôm đó, bà đôi khi vẫn dẫn tôi đi chợ nhưng tiếc rằng bây giờ vì việc học nên tôi không còn đi nhiều với bà nữa.

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I used to get a kick out of (rất thích) going to the market with my grandma—something I don’t do much anymore—but even now, I’m still blown away (ấn tượng) whenever I think about her. In Vietnamese culture, there’s this thing with haggling (mặc cả) whenever you pay for something (you’ll mostly see this with the older generation), and my grandma was no exception. I still remember holding her hand as we strolled through the market. When we got to the fish stall, she’d take her time sizing up (kiểm tra kĩ lưỡng) each fish, chatting with the vendor for a while about the sales that day: “Did you sell much today?” “How much is this fish?”

Then came the part that always blew my mind (khiến tôi kinh ngạc): the price negotiation. Since I was just a kid back then, what stuck with me the most was how after a little “abracadabra,” the price of the fish magically went down (giảm giá). Even now, I’m still thinking, “My grandma’s a real pro (cao thủ) at this!”

For most folks in Vietnam, getting a good deal at the market is pretty standard. But now that I think about it, sometimes going all in for a discount (cố mặc cả) can actually be a bit of a hassle for the sellers. Like, if they agree to lower the price for one person, the next person who hears about it comes along and demands the same deal, which might leave the seller in the red (lỗ vốn).

In any case, after that day, my grandma would still take me to the market now and then. But sadly, these days, with school and everything, I don’t really get to go with her as much anymore. It’s a shame, really (thật tiếc).

P3:

Why do you think some people prefer shopping at street markets over supermarkets?

Văn hóa Việt Nam thì ưa chuộng việc mua hàng ở chợ hơn, thứ nhất là vì giá cả, hàng hóa sẽ tươi hơn. In Vietnam, people really love shopping at street markets, mainly because it's cheaper, and the produce is fresher. Trong khi siêu thị thì sẽ có cả hàng tồn, hàng từ những hôm chưa bán được. Supermarkets, on the other hand, sometimes sell stuff that's been sitting around for days. Tuy nhiên, với tôi việc mua ở chợ sẽ gặp bất lợi vì sự đa dạng hàng hóa. But for me, shopping at markets has its downsides—there's often less variety. Đôi khi ở chợ sẽ không có đầy đủ hàng chúng ta cần như ở siêu thị. Sometimes, you just can't find everything you need at a market like you can at a supermarket.

What are some advantages and disadvantages of buying items at street markets?

Tôi nghĩ là đầu tiên là liên quan tới giá cả. First off, price is a big one. Việc mua ở chợ mọi thứ chắc chắn sẽ rẻ hơn, thậm chí có thể mặc cả về giá mua, đây là điều mà không thể làm ở siêu thị. You can always get things cheaper at the market and even haggle, which is impossible in a supermarket. Bên cạnh đó, chúng ta không thể phủ nhận rằng mua ở chợ thì đồ sẽ tươi hơn vì họ chuẩn bị hàng xong bán trực tiếp. Plus, let's face it, the stuff at street markets is fresher since it's often straight from the source. Tuy nhiên, với tôi, như tôi đã nói ở trên, việc mua ở chợ sẽ gặp bất lợi vì sự đa dạng hàng hóa. However, like I mentioned earlier, the downside is the lack of variety. Thậm chí, hàng chúng ta đã mua ở chợ nếu chất lượng có vấn đề -> ko thể trả lại, đổi như ở siêu thị. And let’s not forget, if the quality’s bad, there’s no return policy like in supermarkets.

How can street markets contribute to the local economy?

Thứ nhất, tôi nghĩ street market sẽ nói lên về văn hóa ẩm thực của khu vực đó -> điểm unique càng thêm thu hút khách du lịch tới. First off, street markets really showcase the local food culture, which draws in tourists. VD: Điều đó thể hiện rõ ở Thái Lan nổi tiếng với những khu phố có street market chất lượng, rẻ. Just look at Thailand with its bustling, affordable street markets—those places are tourist magnets! Bên cạnh đó, street market còn giúp tạo nên cơ hội về việc làm, tạo nên công việc "bread and butter" cho mọi người. Plus, they create jobs, helping many folks make their daily bread. -> góp phần tăng GDP cho khu vực đó. All of this boosts the local GDP too, which is always a win-win.

What are some common items people buy at street markets in your country?

Vì việc mua hàng chợ là điểm độc đáo trong văn hóa Việt Nam chúng tôi, vậy nên tôi thấy có rất nhiều hàng hóa ở chợ, sự đa dạng về mặt hàng hóa là không thể chối cãi. Shopping at markets is so deeply embedded in Vietnamese culture that there's a huge variety of stuff to buy. Tuy nhiên nếu phải chọn, tôi nghĩ rau củ là common goods ở Việt Nam. But if I had to pick, I'd say veggies are the most common thing people buy. Thường thì số cửa hàng rau củ sẽ nhiều hơn thịt cá, như tôi quan sát ở khu vực của tôi. In my area, you’ll find way more vegetable stalls than meat or fish vendors. Bên cạnh đó, quần áo Việt Nam cũng là common items với khách du lịch khi mua tại street markets. Clothes are another big hit with tourists, especially traditional stuff like the 'ao dai' and 'non la'.

Do you think street markets are becoming more or less popular? Why?

Hồi xưa tôi nghĩ việc mua hàng ở street markets là điều khá phổ biến, nhưng bây giờ thì không còn nữa. Back in the day, street markets were the go-to, but now? Not so much. Với thời đại công nghệ thông tin như ngày nay, việc ra ngoài mua đồ với mọi người sẽ là việc tốn thời gian. With the rise of e-commerce, going out to shop seems like a waste of time. Trong khi họ có thể ở nhà đặt trên các ứng dụng như Shopee, Lazada,... I mean, why bother when you can just order on Shopee or Lazada? Tuy nhiên tôi nghĩ, ở Việt Nam việc mua hàng chợ dường như sẽ không less favour vì dường như đây là thói quan, nét đặc trưng riêng của Việt Nam. That said, in Vietnam, I don’t think street markets will lose their charm anytime soon—it’s part of who we are.

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In the context of the growing interest among individuals in media, the question of whether the media should intensify the quantity of stories carrying good news looms large. While it is a common assumption that there is a multitude of benefits due to its moral norms, others argue that the downsides, by far and large, surpass the benefits. The following essay will give my own opinion about this issue.

In the positive light, the superior quantity of good information has significantly enhanced people's awareness. It stands to reason that watching information of humanity has the capability of maintaining the moral norms of societies. Nowhere are such this issue more evident than in the case of the man who saved children drowned in the river, aftermath, the video interviewing him has spread quickly to the public. This video, undeniably, made him a role model for the morality for helping people. In the absence of this kind of media, the society would have been in moral decay.

On the flip side, the increasing in good news undeniably comes with its share of problems, with affected individuals likely prone to decrease the cognitive of reality. When the escalation of bad news absent, we cannot deny that people's perception of reality will always in rosy life. People in this kind of setting will overlook the dark side of life and even more will immerse in rosy life. It is, irrefutably, individuals will get stuck in the sentiments of naive and believe blindly in good news without any doubt and hesitation in considering it.

In conclusion, in this digital era, where technology is indispensable, collecting information via technology platforms is an universal issue. In the light of that, I hold the notion that the quantity of goof news via media should be good trends; however, only by valuing the number of stories containing good news can we set ourselves on course for a happier, more balanced life.

🟥𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴 ✨TR: 6.5; CC: 6.5; VC: 7.0; GR: 6.0✨

In the context of the growing interest among individuals in media, the question of whether the media should intensify the quantity of stories carrying good news loom large. While it is a common assumption that there is a multitude of benefits due to its moral norms 💥 wc: multitude hơi quá -> are many benefits tied to promoting moral values, others argue that the downsides, by far and large 💥-> for the most part, surpass the benefits. The following essay will give my own opinion about this issue 💥 -> provide an opinion on this matter.

In the positive light 💥 wc đưa quan điểm thì phải -> From a positive perspective, the superior quantity of good information has significantly enhanced people's awareness. It stands to reason that watching information of humanity 💥 -> content highlighting acts of humanity has the capability of maintaining the moral norms of societies. Nowhere is such this issue 💥 -> this issue more evident than in the case of the man who saved children drowned 💥 gr -> drowning in the river; aftermath, the video interviewing him has spread quickly to the public 💥 gr -> after the event, the video interview with him quickly spread to the public. This video, undeniably, made him a role model for the morality for helping people 💥 -> morality in helping others. In the absence of this kind of media, the society would have been in moral decay 💥 -> society could face moral decline.

On the flip side , the increasing in good news undeniably comes 💥 gr: động từ ko chuẩn -> increase in good news undeniably comes with its share of problems, with affected individuals likely prone to decrease the cognitive of reality 💥 -> weakening their perception of reality. When the escalation of bad news absent 💥 gr -> is absent, we cannot deny that people's perception of reality will always in rosy life 💥 gr -> will always remain overly optimistic. People in this kind of setting will overlook the dark side of life and even more will immerse in rosy life 💥 wc -> immerse themselves in unrealistic optimism. It is, irrefutably, individuals will get stuck in the sentiments of naive and believe blindly in good news without any doubt and hesitation in considering it 💥 gr + wc: -> individuals will become naive and blindly believe good news without any doubt or hesitation.

In conclusion, in this digital era, where technology is indispensable, collecting information via technology platforms is an universal 💥 sp: e ơi -> a universal issue. In the light of that 💥 -> Therefore, I hold the notion that the quantity of goof 💥 sp -> good news via media should be good trends 💥 gr: ko logic -> seen as a positive trend; however, only by valuing the number of stories containing good news 💥 dài dòng quá e -> balancing the amount of good news can we set ourselves on course for a happier, more balanced life.

🟥TR: 6.5
Bài viết đã trả lời câu hỏi đề bài và trình bày các quan điểm chính. Tuy nhiên, có một số điểm e có thể khai thác sâu hơn. Ví dụ, ở đoạn thứ nhất, e nói về việc truyền thông giữ gìn giá trị đạo đức, nhưng chưa nêu rõ tác động cụ thể như thế nào ngoài ví dụ "man who saved children." Có thể bổ sung thêm các ví dụ khác về ảnh hưởng lâu dài của tin tốt đến xã hội, chẳng hạn như làm tăng tính đoàn kết hay khích lệ những hành động tử tế. Ở phần đối lập, em có thể đào sâu hơn về những nguy cơ của việc bỏ qua mặt tiêu cực của cuộc sống trong khi chỉ tiếp nhận thông tin tốt.

🟥CC: 6.5
Mặc dù các đoạn văn có sự kết nối, nhưng vẫn còn một số phần chuyển ý chưa mượt mà. Ví dụ, chỗ "In the positive light" nghe không tự nhiên và không gắn kết lắm với câu trước. E có thể kết nối các ý tốt hơn bằng cách dùng các từ ngữ chuyển tiếp rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ: “Across the spectrum, it's clear that...” hoặc "Beyond the immediate impact, good news also..." để nhấn mạnh sự thay đổi mạch văn mà không bị rời rạc.

🟥VC: 7.0
Từ vựng của e khá đa dạng nhưng có một số chỗ vẫn chưa tự nhiên và không chính xác.

🟥GR: 6
Ngữ pháp của e có một số lỗi cơ bản, đặc biệt là về thì và cấu trúc câu. Ví dụ, "escalation of bad news absent" là câu sai thì và thiếu động từ chính. E cần chú ý dùng đúng thì và cấu trúc câu phức tạp hơn để cải thiện điểm này. Ngoài ra, những lỗi nhỏ như chia động từ số ít, số nhiều cũng cần được sửa để tránh mất điểm không đáng có.

🟦 Hook and Engagemen: Thay vì mở bài như hiện tại, e có thể bắt đầu bằng một câu ấn tượng như: "For certain, the role of media in shaping society is beyond question, but the extent to which it should focus on good news is still up for debate."

▌ꪑకꪶꪗỉꫀꪶᡶక _𝒽𝓊𝑜𝓃𝑔𝓁𝓎.𝒶𝓂𝓈@𝑔𝓂𝒶𝒾𝓁.𝒸𝑜𝓂 ▌

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Well, I'm a pisces, you know, my zodiac sign, I think I'm an emotional person. So I always look forward to seeing my grandparent, my friends in my hometown that I haven't met them for a long time. However, fast forward to now, I am too busy to visit it again.

Buổi tập trung dặn dò quan trọng về định hướng đại học tại trường tôi và tôi đi trễ.

Thực ra bình thường đi muộn thì cũng không sao, tôi không bị quá để tâm đến đó, nhưng riêng hôm đó là buổi quan trọng, trực tiếp ảnh hưởng đến việc học đại học của tôi <- muộn là điều không được phép.

Hôm đó, tôi dậy sớm chuẩn bị, lúc xuống nhà để chuẩn bị lấy xe đi, tôi phát hiện ra xe tôi đã bị bố dùng để đưa em gái tôi đi học. Lúc đó tôi khá là panic, gọi điện cho bố thì phát hiện bố để điện thoại ở nhà, ông tôi thì an ủi bảo không sao đâu, bà tôi thì cứ than phiền tại do tôi dậy muộn, diện thoại cứ thông báo tin nhắn từ bạn hỏi tôi đang ở đâu. Tôi vừa tủi thân, vừa tức, còn suýt khóc để nhắn tin cho cô chủ nhiệm xin phép đến trễ.

Lúc bố tôi về, tôi chạy để lấy lại xe, nhanh nhanh chóng chóng chạy đến trường. Dù đến nơi tôi đã miss mất khá nhiều information quan trọng về tuyển sinh nhưng may thay, bạn tôi đã take note lại để gửi cho tôi.

anyway, hôm đó dù tôi có tức đến mấy nhưng thông tin đến tay tôi vẫn đủ với lại bố đã đổ đầy xăng cho tôi là tôi đã hết giận bố tôi rồi.

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There was this super important (rất quan trọng) meeting at school about university orientation, and guess what? I showed up late (đi trễ). Normally, being late doesn’t bother me too much—I’m not that stressed about it—but that day was different. It was a meeting that would directly affect my uni applications, so being late was not an option (muộn là điều không được phép).

I actually woke up early and was all set to go, but when I got downstairs to grab my bike, I found out my dad had taken it to drop my sister off at school. Panic mode (panic) hit me hard right then. I tried calling my dad, only to realize he’d left his phone at home. My grandpa tried to calm me down, saying it wasn’t a big deal, while my grandma kept blaming me for waking up too late. Meanwhile, my phone was blowing up with messages from my friends asking where I was. I was so upset, nearly on the verge of tears (suýt khóc), when I texted my homeroom teacher to let her know I’d be late.

As soon as my dad got back, I jumped on (leo lên) my bike and rushed to school. By the time I got there, I’d already missed a lot of important information about admissions, but thankfully (may thay), my friend had taken notes and shared them with me.

Anyway, as mad as I was that day, I ended up with all the info I needed, and on top of that, my dad had filled my tank with gas. So, in the end, I couldn’t even stay mad at him! All’s well that ends well (vậy là tôi hết giận luôn).

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Some people think that language school be taught in a small class while other people think that the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your answer. 

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Some people think that language school be taught in a small class while other people think that the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your answer. 

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🟥𝓕𝓮𝓮𝓭𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴

✨TR: 7; CC: 6; VC: 6.5; GR: 6.5✨

Whether it is pursuing well-rounded education or learning languages, the importance of opting for a suitable class is undisputed. However, when it comes to the quantity of students in each class, the debates have become particularly intense. While it is a common assumption that minimum students 💥 wc: e ơi, đây phải là 'fewer students' chứ ko phải minimum e ạ are the instrumental step into 💥 prep: ko đúng, phải là 'to' e nhé well-rounded learning, passionate supporters of the number of student 💥 gr: số nhiều mà dùng singular hả e? -> students claim that this does not influence to 💥 prep: ko có "influence to" đâu, bỏ "to" luôn the quality of students. This essay will analyze these views before giving my opinion, which argues that the key lies not in a one-size-fits-all approach, but rather in the decision made based on personal priorities.

Advocates of restricting the number of students in language classes often highlight the teacher's attention to students that smaller classes can bring to the support their argument 💥 wc: gì thế -> to support their argument. They argue that this setting is more enriching in comparison with the foreign classes without controlling the number of students 💥 spdài và ko rõ ý -> with large, uncontrolled class sizes. By joining a class which is not being restricted the quantity of students, they say, cannot be influenced to the results 💥 gr: chỗ này lủng củng -> Joining an unrestricted class, they argue, does not influence the results if the teachers still concentrate on students but does little to paying perfectly attention to students or have attentively students 💥 gr -> do little to pay perfect attention or stay attentive. To see this, we need not look further than the case of successful advertisements about the 1-1 classes 💥 sp: mình ko nói 1-1 class, nói "one-on-one classes" e ạ in some English centers like DOL and IELTS Fighter. CÁCH DẪN CHỨNG KO THUYẾT PHỤC, KHÔNG DÙNG VD ĐƠN LẺ ĐỂ SUPPORT LUẬN ĐIỂM. These visionaries, concentrating on limiting students in one class, proved that the experiences in this type of class can catapult one to success 💥 wc: ko tự nhiên, nên sửa -> these classes can help catapult students to success. Even if it means taking a huge notice 💥 wc: awkward e ạ -> requires close attention, the journey to success still attracts many.

On the contrary, the case for not paying attention on 💥 prep: sai, phải là "to" the number of students in foreign language classes is most compelling when we consider the diverse methods , that cannot be replicated 💥 gr: dư dấu phẩy rồi em -> that cannot be replicated outside of a structured academic environment. This setting allows teachers to apply a multitude of learning methods, diversifying the approach to knowledge. Added to this are the competitive environments which, by all accounts, are beyond compare 💥 -> which are, by all accounts, beyond compare. A telling example is the environment in foreign classes in some schools in Hanoi, where students concentrate in the classes 💥 wc: lạ lắm e, sửa cho tự nhiên -> focus well in class. On a psychological level, these classes incentivize students to study as hard as their classmates.

In conclusion, in this era where foreign languages are indispensable, learning a new language is a universal issue. In light of that, I hold the notion that only determining the learning styles which is suitable for individuals can we set ourselves on course for a effective result. 💥 gr: câu rườm rà -> I believe that only by finding suitable learning styles can we ensure effective results.

🟥 TR: Bài viết có cách tiếp cận ổn, nhưng điểm luận thiếu sâu và ko giải thích đủ sâu để hỗ trợ luận điểm. Ví dụ, thay vì nói chung chung rằng lớp nhỏ tốt hơn lớp lớn, e nên đưa ra các chi tiết hơn về lợi ích cụ thể mà giáo viên và học sinh nhận đc trong các lớp này, và tại sao lại có sự khác biệt.

VD: "Advocates of smaller classes argue that teachers can provide more individualized attention, fostering stronger language skills and tailored feedback. This focused interaction allows students to engage more deeply with the material and participate more frequently in lessons, ultimately contributing to a more immersive learning environment."

🟥 CC: Kết nối giữa các ý chưa chặt, còn hơi rời rạc. Để mạch văn tốt hơn, e có thể làm rõ sự chuyển từ quan điểm này sang quan điểm khác, ví dụ bằng cách dùng từ nối mạnh hơn để cho thấy sự đối lập hay sự đồng thuận giữa các ý.

VD: "On the other hand, larger classes, despite the perceived disadvantages, offer a unique dynamic that encourages peer learning and competition."

🟥 VC: Từ vựng của e khá tốt, nhưng vẫn có một vài chỗ ko tự nhiên hoặc chọn từ chưa phù hợp. Thay vì dùng những từ đơn giản, hãy thử thêm một số buzzwords hoặc các cụm từ mạnh để nâng cấp vốn từ.

Gợi ý từ vựng:

individualized attention (thay vì “teacher's attention”)

peer learning (thay vì “competitive environment”)

tailored feedback (thay vì “attentive students”)

VD: "The tailored feedback provided in smaller classes ensures students receive direct and constructive input on their progress."

🟥 GR: Ngữ pháp của e ổn nhưng có một số lỗi về chia động từ và giới từ. E cần chú ý đến sự phù hợp của các động từ với danh từ và tránh lỗi cơ bản như dùng giới từ sai.

VD: "Influence the results" -> "Influence results"

Other feedback:

🟦 Hook and Engagement: Câu mở đầu có thể cải thiện bằng cách gây tranh cãi hơn: "Whether class size affects learning outcomes or not may be up for debate, but one thing is clear: the personal preferences of students play a pivotal role in determining success."

🟦 Câu có thể cải thiện: Câu gợi ý (1)-(7) ways cải thiện về clarity và style: (1) metaphor: "language classes are not simply places of learning, but arenas where students are shaped and molded by their experiences." (2) emphasis shift: "Smaller classes are not a luxury, but a necessity in today’s educational landscape." (3) prepositional phrase: "At the crossroads of personalized attention and diverse peer interactions, students flourish."

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PART 1: space and stars (3-4 CÂU)

FLUENCY

CONTRAST (trong câu trả lời, làm thế nào để có từ yet/ but/ despite/ however/ ...)

hồi xưa thì... nhưng bây giờ...

bây giờ thì... nhưng ai biết sau này...

thường thì/ mọi người thì ... nhưng tôi

tôi là cái loại mà ... nên là (GIẢI THÍCH TÍNH CÁCH, CUNG HOÀNG ĐẠO, NIỀM TIN VĂN HÓA)

theo văn hóa VN thì... nhưng tôi thấy...

Have you ever learned about outer space and stars?

hồi xưa bây giờ:
Honestly , I gotta say....
Back in the day when i was just ..., I used to ...
I was all about ....
But fast forward now, I ....

1. honestly speaking, I have to say never.

2. hồi xưa khi học c2, mới học lý, tôi kì vọng là có đc học về space. Tôi mê space và myths out there lắm.

back in the time when I was ..., I used to expect

3. nhưng hoàn toàn ko có cái đó trong ctrinh.

but there was no such thing in ...

4. Đến tận bây giờ tôi lớp 12 rồi, vẫn ko thấy đc học về vũ trụ gì cả.

up to now, I haven't seen ...

Honestly, I gotta say, never. Back in the day when I was just starting out with physics, I used to expect being taught about space. I was all aboutmê space and the myths out there. But there was no such thing in the curriculum. Fast forward to now, in my senior year, and I still haven’t come across anything about the cosmos.

INTRIGUING/ repetitive/ complicated/ mundane

tôi là cái loại mà... nên .... NHƯNG MÀ...
I'm a .., you know.., so I'm kinda ... and often find myself Ving
Meanwhile, when it comes to ..., I gotta admit, it... me...
However, who knows, in the future, there might be... that...
and I might just give it a go.

tôi phải nói là ... có/ không (honestly I gotta say...)

I'm a pisces, you know, my zodiac sign, so I'm kind of dreamy and I tend to find myself lost in romantic themes./ I'm the kind of person who V... so I tend to V

Meanwhile, space and stars science is somehow complicated and I find them mundane.

HOWEVER, who knows in the future, there may be some movies or work of art that can romanticise this topic, i may have a loot at it.

I'm a Pisces, you know, so I'm kinda dreamy and often find myself drifting off into romantic daydreams. Meanwhile, when it comes to space and star stuff, I gotta admit, it bores me a bit. However, who knows, in the future there might be some movies or artwork that romanticize this whole space thing, and I might just give it a go.

1. Are you interested in films concerning outer space and stars?

2. Do you want to know more about outer space?

3. Do you want to go into outer space in the fu ture?

Honestly, I gotta say yes. Back in the day when I was just small, I used to watch a lot of movies about space. I was all about mê space and the myths out there. But there was no such thing in the curriculum. Fast FORward to now, in my senior year, and I still haven’t come across anything about the cosmos.

4. Do you enjoy watching sci-fi films related to outer space and stars?

I'm a kind of person who wants to know all, you know.., so I often read a lot and find myself watching a lot of sci-fi, including outer space.
Meanwhile, when it comes to enjoying them or not, I gotta admit, many of them don't intrigue me.
However, who knows, in the future, there might be... that can enliven the topic
and I might just give it a go.

PART 2:

Describe a thing you want to replace

Describe a thing you really wanted

Part 3:

1. What do you think space exploration will be like in the future?

2. Do you think humans will ever live on other planets? Why or why not?

3. How do you think our understanding of stars and galaxies will change in the coming years?

4. What advancements do you predict will happen in space technology?

5. Do you think space tourism will become common in the future? Why or why not?

6. What role do you think private companies will play in space exploration in the future?

7. How do you think scientific discoveries in space will impact life on Earth in the next century?

8. What do you think the main challenges will be for future space missions?

9. Do you believe humans will find life on other planets in the near future?

10. In the future, how do you think space exploration will affect international relations between countries?