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This discussion board is made by:

Name: Hassa Saeed Al Ali

HCT ID: H00500956

Course name: ECE 2403

CRN: 30168

Instructor name: Ms. Maryam Al Sereidi

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Lesson Plan - ECE 2403 summer - HASSA SAEED - H00500956

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Peer feedbacks: Strengths & Improvements

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Peer feedbacks: Strengths & Improvements

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FEEDBACK #1:

Hessa's Areas for improvement:

1.⁠ ⁠Hessa's personal goal about spending an hour each day improving teaching could be more specific. Consider detailing particular strategies or areas of focus.

2.⁠ ⁠The first lesson outcome, "Students will be able to identify and write numbers 1-10," can be refined to specify how students will demonstrate this skill, for example, "Students will write numbers 1-10 correctly and in order on a worksheet".

3.⁠ ⁠Adding a visual or interactive element to the introduction, such as a short video or a song about "Jack and the Beanstalk," could make the lesson more engaging for students.

Hessa's Strengths:

1.⁠ ⁠Hessa's lesson plan is well-structured and integrates a classic story to make learning numbers and height concepts fun and relatable for students.

2.⁠ ⁠The plan addresses potential problems and provides practical solutions, ensuring that the lesson runs smoothly even if issues arise.

3.⁠ ⁠The use of technology, such as tablet games, to reinforce number writing and counting is a modern approach that can enhance engagement and learning.

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FEEBDACK #2:

Hessa’s Strengths:

The outcomes are well-defined, focusing on number identification and writing, as well as understanding height concepts.The lesson aims to make learning enjoyable, using a familiar story to teach numbers and concepts of tall and short.

Suggestions for Improvement:

Add a quick, engaging warm-up activity related to the story, such as a song , to capture students' attention from the start.

Overall, the lesson plan is comprehensive and thoughtfully designed to engage young learners in an enjoyable and educational experience

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I agree that all the feedback I received is correct. These suggestions will be taken in consideration and I will apply them for sure.

To begin with, I will make my personal goal more specific. I'll spend an hour each day improving my teaching by focusing on specific strategies such as learning new dictionary words and exploring different education curriculums. I'll use this information in my class to benefit my students.

In addition, I will re do the first lesson outcome to be more specific. Students will write numbers 1-10 correctly and in order on a worksheet," to clearly demonstrate how students will show this skill.

Moreover, I will add engagement things such as a warm up activity at the beginning of the lesson or a short video or a song about "Jack and the Beanstalk" to make the lesson more exciting for the students.

These improvements will make my lesson plan more engaging for the students.

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AFTER EDIT - Lesson Plan - ECE 2403 summer - HASSA SAEED - H00500956 -

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Integrated Lesson Plan Rationale - Hassa Saeed