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Very positive and clear info, they spoke loud and looked at the audience, did repeat some stuff but overall so good.

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Had very nice and eye catching picture

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Good statistics and information

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you have really useful statistics and you highlighted an important issue

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i really liked all the evidence that you had on your slides and all the info

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They focused a lot on how to solve the problem which was good, and they backed up their points with evidence.

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Really good statistical info and very clear plan of how you will reduce food waste linked back to the SDGs.

I was a bit distracted by the cuddly toys :)

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I liked the detailed slides, clear presentation, visual explanations and statistics :)

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has a lot of facts and helpful information, linked your problem to SDG's, and had statistic to back up your claim

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Lots of details and it was a good presentation

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You have crafted a presentation that has left me speechless. The information was well-articulated, and the presenters maintained almost consistent eye contact.

The background is the only thing I think requires any form of improvement. Maybe something more RELATED might do.......

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You included a lot of statistics and spoke confidently.

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i like the graphs that u add it really explained how the worlds food waste was distributed

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You have included good information and statistics

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WWW: Clear introduction of the SDG, showed evidence using statistics and images

EBI: if you had a background similar to the topic

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it was a really good presentation but you could have included more pictures and you had a good idea

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Let Alpha Talk but good transitions

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Very unique solution to an ongoing issue, well done on the creative thinking!

EBI - didn't notice a link to a specific SDG

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Clearly presented, nice transitions but a little bit repetitive and could have included diagrams or graphs

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It was a nice presentation and you pitched confidently. You also included many statistics.

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liked the transitions a lot and the idea of using wasted paper for art and dt

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had a very nice range of info but needs a little more distribution for the speech and more pictures

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alpha's performance was truly something extraordinary. Her portrayal was both deep and authentic, drawing out a wide range of emotions that resonated with me on a personal level. Every line she delivered, every glance, and each movement on stage felt purposeful and heartfelt. She had an incredible ability to embody her character fully, showing both strength and vulnerability. It was as if she wasn't just acting but living the character's journey, which made it impossible not to get emotionally invested in the story. This video made me think about it! i really loved this video!

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i like the animation and the preswentation had alot of details and i like how you got a picture from someones work in our school

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it was good but alpha could have talked more and there could have been maybe more solutions like using more digital learning like one note

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WWW - Gave a clear solution and explained what the problem was.

EBI - Carl said 'like' too much and alpha didn't speak a lot.

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Very good slide transitions and idea but it was a bit short and you didn’t speak the same amount of time

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It is a simply captivating presentation and you have left me engrossed and focused! Next time, maybe you'd consider add some graphics or statistics that could explain why the point you're trying to make is important.

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WWW: statistics used well a good and creative solution to the problem.

EBI: had graphs,images and visuals to represent what you mean by “Artist work”

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Great information and really nicely structured and presented

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Your presentation was really nice and you spoke well. But maybe next time you could add a couple more images.

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Good graphs, imagery and statistics.

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I really loved this one! the pictures were so cool! great job on this presentation! you go gang!

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i love sharks but the presentation was a little off theme🦈🦈🦈 you had a range of solutions and i loved itt

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Their performance in the presentation was truly something extraordinary. Their portrayal was both deep and authentic, drawing out a wide range of emotions that resonated with me on a personal level. Every line they delivered, every glance, and each movement on stage felt purposeful and heartfelt. They had an incredible ability to embody their character fully, showing both strength and vulnerability. It was as if they weren't just acting but living the character's journey, which made it impossible not to get emotionally invested in their story. This presentation really made me rethink about the environment and I enjoyed it!

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I think what u should do to get better is to not read of the slide

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Gave great information, great graphs, and great solutions to the problem.

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A bit too much reading off the slide but it was overall good with a good amount of information and nice statistics and evidence

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Some really great ideas about a very real issue, well linked to SDG's, good Bibliography.

Too many sharks ;)

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Good use of information and statistics. Slide is also very creative.

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it was good and there were lots of solutions but you just read off the slides and the statistics werent really related and i couldnt really hear the talking and there could have been more photos

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WWW: a lot solutions to the problem, supportive images such as graphs and charts.

EBI: included the graphs at the starting to support your argument and it would overall make more sense and also follows the structure well

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only nathan talked but it was a really good presentation and a good idea

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Identified the problem but Nathan did the whole presentation alone

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I think that the Interactive slides were really effective but maybe next time you all should have the same amount of time talking.

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The problem was clearly identified and the solution was explained well

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nice slides and the issue was ever clearly explained

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Well done. Very well articulated and a great use of graphics.

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Interacting with the audience was very good, and while doing that, it strengthen your points.

Only Nathan really talked and Austin barely talked

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Austin really put his heart into it, i cried almost twice listening about bins. austins emotional performace and his deep, heartfelt speech really touched me inside.

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austin didnt say much but the point was well showed. good job

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You could identify the problem and find a way to fix it and also used good information.

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you should be more confident with your speaking

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cooked w that but i couldnt hear u guys talking and it was interactive and cool but also u could have added more statistics and graphs also u guys didnt really know what u were saying u read off slides

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A very simple solution to a big issue - really liked your idea. Very professional presentation, good aesthetics. Also liked the way you really highlighted the issue of confusion with the audience. You need to pitch this to the SEC.

EBI - include more statistics and local relevant information

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An absolutely phenomenal presentation I was astounded by how clever the photo between the clear bins and then the labelling of our school bins. Beautiful presentation by Nathan Austin and Esaiah and it was extremely clever

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WWW: the interactive slide was explained very clearly and made your argument more effective, solution was simple but reasonable

EBI: used statistics to support your points,made eye contact, and presented as a whole group not just one person

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reading off the slides

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really proffesional and very long and information so it was very very impressive maybe just less reading off the slides

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super good i love but u guys were reading off the slides a bit and also alisa was talking more then jeanne but there were cute photos and it helped me understand better when you gave a graph comparing to other solutions but it was a bit too long for me

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this was really good. Explained the definitions of the words/phrases, showed diagrams, showed real life examples and the two of you were talking equally.

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The slides were very well thought out including a lot of statistics and facts. It will be better if the presenters made more eyecontact and stopped looking at the slides

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Really detailed and nice explanation and the real life examples.

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WWW: explained your problem clearly with real life examples which was really engaging and effective, suggested some possible ways to solve them as well

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Amazing use of information and detail. You could speak confidently. You could speak a bit louder.

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very well designed

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Very thorough and refined presentation - great links to SDG and BPS. Visually clear, good graphs, info. I hope BPS are looking into Green Roofs for their 10 year plan.

Only small thing would be less reading direct from the slides but that's very minor!

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Exceptionally.....impressed, let's say. Good graphics.

Not preferring the reading off the slide though.

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i really liked the idea and all the pictures and your explaining was really nice and i loved the really cute pictures

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good graphs but harshi said everything and they were reading off the slides

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Well done, a detailed presentation, linked back to SDGs.

A lot of text, not easy for the audience, try to only include key info on slides then say the rest!

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Clear voices but some of the slides had paragraphs that were a bit long so you could maybe break it up into separate slides and bullet points to keep the audience engaged and the definition slide could have been put at the start

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your point was very clear and i liked the pictures but i think that next time you should work on breaking up the long paragraphs

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You could try not reading of the slides

and talk with a good loud voice

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The slides were good but some slides had a bit too much information and you guys could speak a bit louder.

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its nice.

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You left me speechless with the grotesque amount of text on the screen. Well done though. I'm hard to impress, guess you're 50% there?

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A lot of information and it was hard to be engaged becuase

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it was informative but u missed lots of the key things on the success criteria and also like about the pig things the meat is not fed to the pigs because they select food that is healthy for the animals, also it was too much information ab one topic at a time i dont rlly remember much of what hania said

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good and lots of info i kinda wasnt that engaged tho and u read off the slides

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Sam Drake Francis spoke confidently and clearly, and Ruben too. Lots of info but the slides weren't very engaging.

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SAM I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THAT WAS AMAZING

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The information on the slides were good and you spoke confidently but next time maybe you could add some more images.

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Important issue and nice use of statistics and a lot of solutions but you could have explained why it was bad for the environment a bit more.

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very important issue and you guys explained it well used nice statistics and the pictures were cool maybe add some more pictures or graphs

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Perhaps one of the most informative and mesmerising presentations I've seen. Captivating and a slight bit of emotion. Those cries were worth it, though. I've had more :(

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lots of info but a lot of text on the slides which kind of makes people a little confused, and needs to talk in a clear voice but nice presentation!!!!

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RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM RUBEN AND SAM I LOBE YOU THAT WAS AMAZING

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You could make the slides more engaging.

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Its nice and all but it could use more detail

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Good job, clear voices. Great infographic direct from BPS, well thought through solutions but could do with more about how Food Waste is bad for the environment.

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WWW: used graphs and data to show your problem, linked your problem to the SDGS

EBI: maintained eye contact for more engagement, if you explained how your SDG is effecting the environment

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Really good but you read of the slide

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i never seem him so confident and over;all i enjoyed it and it was really cold

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I think you spoke very well you used lots of statistics illustrate how big the problem is

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included SDGs which is nice but read off slide