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I think it has good information in the presenter notes but the slides are very plain

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Moritz, Raphaela, Illienia Presentation (Mr Bish)

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Moritz, Raphaela, Illienia Presentation (Mr Bish)

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You have included PSE well, there is some attempt at using Short, Medium and Long-terms. A conclusion slide with some interplay to summarise would be welcome.

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You should’ve separated the causes into political, social, and economical.

Your presentation was very clear and easy to understand. Next time try to add if the statements are political, social or economical. Good job! - Stella

You had clearly separated the causes into political, social and economic but next time you could maybe put the reasoning for them. Well done! - Maddy

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Really nice description of of short term long term and intermediate causes. It’s missing a clear description of why the Roman the Roman Empire collapsed. On the first slide there is only one sentence. You also missed out on the political social and economical factor. But besides these few things it’s good

Your presentation was well organized and contained good ideas. Next time try to mention if they are political, social or economical. Well done! - Stella

Very nice presentation, I like the way you had short term, intermediate and long term in there. I would have liked if you added some pictures and reasoning behind your bucket points. - Sofia

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By: Moritz, Raphaela, illiena

Really good presentation but maybe try and shorten your answers and don’t bulk it up with to much information

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By:Moritz,Raphaela, illiena

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You guys added in lots of useful information and I liked how you added in the short term and long term causes in the end. There isn’t much to improve on, maybe just shorten the paragraphs to make it quick and informative-Jacob

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By:Moritz, Raphaela , illiena

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Very informative but could of distinguished between the long term causes, medium term cause and short term causes but it was really good-tanisha

You had a lot of good information about the collapse of Rome but couldn’t really identify which were the long, intermediate and short term effects. Well done! - Maddy