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Students choose their favourite image to complete the story. In term 3, writing is moderated against the KPIs that have been taught over the year that are relevant to this genre.

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We agreed that this piece of work used deliberately well chosen sentence structures to hook the reader. Their choice of vocabulary and attention to detail made this writing way above the objectives we have taught this year.

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Please add a photo of the moderated work to the appropriate column (1-4) and write a description below to summarise the moderation. 2/3 secure examples per level would be great. 

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Please add a photo of the moderated work to the appropriate column (1-4) and write a description below to summarise the moderation. 2/3 secure examples per level would be great. 

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E.g.

Excellent control of causes

Punctuation accurate

Powerful, thoughtful imagery

Very confident

Subtleties conveyed by word choice

Better than Y8

Strikes us as an avid reader

Specific verbs

Greater Depth

Target: paragraphing

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