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(Examples)

Stormed - moved angrily or forcefully in a specified direction.

Pursuit - the action of chasing or pursuing someone or something

(Describing a problem)

Tom was at a lost on what to do. However, without hesitation, he stormed off in pursuit of the thief.

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Wrenched - to snatch away forcefully

Building the climax

I wrenched the ball away from him

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lack of tidiness.

"Clothes were strewn across the floor, and empty snack wrappers lay crumpled on the desk."

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bolt: To run away suddenly and quickly.

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Excitement: Instead of "I was excited," try, "My heart raced, and I could hardly sit still, bouncing on my toes as I awaited the big news."

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Telling: I was scared.

Showing: My heart raced, and my palms felt clammy as I peered into the dark hallway.

Notice how the second sentence uses sensory details to convey fear. How might you apply this technique to your own writing?

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Luminous: Giving off light

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example : sight instead of saying, "the garden was beautiful," try "vibrant flowers burst with color, their petals dancing in the gentle breeze."

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Darted: quickly or suddenly

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Luminous: Giving off light

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example: Showing: Savory aromas wafted through the air, and the first bite melted in her mouth, bursting with flavours that danced on her tongue.

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meaning: announce something officially

Declared

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Bolted - To move quickly and suddenly

Blared - Loud and harsh sound

Describing a character action

John bolted out of the classroom, heart racing, as the fire alarm blared and smoke filled the air

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Luminous off light

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Dash - to indicate a break in thought

Building the climax

She took a dash of hope as she opened the letter, heart racing, unsure of what the words would reveal.

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Her heart raced as she clutched the letter, her hands shaking and her breath coming in shallow gasps.

meaning

This sentence shows that the character is anxious or nervous without stating it directly. The physical reactions—racing heart, shaking hands, and shallow breathing—convey her emotional state vividly.

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Example: The chocolate melted in my mouth, sweet and bittersweet like a warm hug

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Fly

ascend 一 to rise; to go up; to climb up

Run

sprint 一 ​to run or swim a short distance very fast

Drink

quench 一 to drink so that you no longer feel thirsty

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Example: Trickling- flowing very fast

" My heart raced, and I could feel the sweat trickling down my back.

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The old bakery was alive with the scent of warm bread, the sweet taste of cinnamon lingering in the air, while the golden crust crackled under my fingers, and the soft glow of the oven illuminated the dust motes dancing in the sunlight

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(Examples to describe the problem)

Nervousness: My palms were slick with sweat as I glanced at the clock, each tick echoing in my ears.

Fear: A cold shiver ran down my spine as shadows danced ominously on the walls.

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Sight: Vibrant colors of the movie poster.

Sound: Crunch of the popcorn.

Smell: Warm, buttery scent.

Taste: Smooth, sweet flavor of the popcorn.

Touch: Implied through the warmth of the popcorn

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he lunged and went to snatched the ball

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Symbolism

A dove often symbolizes peace.

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Example: I was super angry

My heart raced, and heat surged through my body as I clenched my jaw tight, glaring at him with fury in my eyes.

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promenade=to walk in a leisurely and social manner.

Circumambulate=to walk around something ritually or deliberately.

He promenaded at the mall, like an ordinary but friendly person.

She circumambulated around her home, as she has mysophobia.

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example As i stare at my hands beads of sweats and nervousness started rolling down my head everything seems like the gaze and hatred was on me i started breathing heavily without i,myself knowing it.

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Happy : She/he jumped up and down , clapping her/his hands as he/she received a gift from her mother , unable to control his excitement

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Anger

Show, not tell

She stood there, fuming, her breath coming in short gasps as she glared at the mess he had left behind.

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"Soar" to fly or rise high in the air Example: With a powerful flap of its wings, the eagle soared high above the mountains, gliding effortlessly against the backdrop of a brilliant blue sky.

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Example: The garden was a riot of colors, with vibrant red roses, sunny yellow daisies, and deep purple violets blooming everywhere.

that mean it is very beautiful.

Example: The distant sound of laughter echoed through the park, mixing with the cheerful chirping of birds and the soft rustle of leaves.

that means it is very peaceful.

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Falling

As she stumbled, gravity pulled her down, her heart raced, and she felt the rush of air against her face as the ground rushed up to meet her.

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I was so angry I crumpled the paper.

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Breezy: A light wind. Example: The breezy day felt refreshing.

Searing: Very hot. Example: The searing sun made us sweat.

Gloomy: Dark and sad. Example: The gloomy sky looked like rain.

Radiant: Bright and shining. Example: The radiant sun lit up the park.

Torrential: Heavy rain. Example: The torrential rain soaked everything.

Frigid: Very cold. Example: The frigid air made me shiver.

Sweltering: Too hot. Example: The sweltering heat made us stay indoors.

Misty: Filled with fog. Example: The misty morning made it hard to see.

Tempestuous: Stormy or wild. Example: The tempestuous weather scared us.

Balmy: Warm and pleasant. Example: The balmy evening was perfect for a walk.

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The weather was bad. Rain lashed against the window, and thunder rumbled like an angry giant

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Scared: Jack was walking down a dark path. Shadows danced around him. Suddenly, a hand gripped his arm. A voice growled, “Give me your wallet.”

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lt was a beautiful day

The sun beamed down,casting a golden glow on the blooming flowers,while a gentle breeze whispered through the trees

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Crashed-heightens the dramatic effect of the storm.

Building climax

The thunder crashed overhead, shaking the ground beneath my feet.

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Simile: Her smile was like sunshine breaking through the clouds.

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1. Facial Expressions: Isabella’s eyes sparkled as she watched the grandma smile, a warm glow spreading in her chest.

2. Physical Reactions: She danced on her toes, her laughter bubbling up like a joyful melody as the grandma hugged her tightly.

3. Environment: The sun peeked through the trees, casting a golden light around them, making the moment feel even more special.

4. Dialogue: “I’m so glad I could help!” Isabella exclaimed, her voice bright with excitement, as the grandma’s eyes twinkled with gratitude.

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Metaphor

Time is a thief that steals our moments.

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example i shut my eyes closed spreading my arms in the air finally feeling the nice cold breeze of the wind in the sand i let out a sigh.:D

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Sweet fragrance: This appeals to the sense of smell.

Surged: This word conveys a sense of movement and intensity, related to the feeling of memories flooding her mind.

Carefree days: This evokes a sense of nostalgia and emotion, tapping into memories and feelings associated with sight and emotion.

"As the sweet fragrance and vibrant colours of the flowers enveloped her,memories surged her mind like arrows,pulling back to her carefree days,even the weight of danger crept closer,reminding her she couldn't linger"

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Sound Example: The thunder rumbled ominously in the distance, a deep growl that echoed through the valley, warning everyone of the approaching storm.

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dont let the cat out of the bag.

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Example:

Glancing - looking around

Heart racing - heart beating quickly

Example of a sentence:

She wiped her sweaty palms on her jeans, glancing around at her classmates who seemed so calm, making her heart race even faster.

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As she stepped into the bakery, the warm aroma of freshly baked bread enveloped her, the sweet scent of cinnamon tickling her nose. The golden crust crackled beneath her fingers, and she could taste the buttery richness as she took a bite, while the cheerful chatter of customers filled the air, making her smile.

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Touch

5 Senses

The cold metal of the doorknob sent a shiver through her fingertips as she hesitated, feeling the weight of what lay beyond the threshold.

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Desperate: This word conveys urgency and intensity effectively.

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Taste:The first bite was a burst of sweetness, rich and satisfying

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example:Lessons Learned: Instead of saying "I learned a lot," you could show it: I stood quietly, the weight of my choices heavy on my heart, as I watched the sun set—each colour a reminder of the journey I’d taken.

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sound : the drumbeat resonated like a thunder , echoing through the air and sending vibrations through the crowd , burst into flames in their heart

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example: other than the boy rushed toward the school in the hurry

simile: the boy rushed toward his school alike startled rabbit darting for cover.''

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The clouds were fluffy cotton candy, floating lazily across the bright blue sky.

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The garden exploded with a riot of colours--crimson roses unfurled their petals like dancers greeting the sun, while golden sunflowers stood tall, their faces turning eagerly towards the warm rays. A soft breeze whispered through the leaves, carrying the sweet scent of blossoms, as the sun dipped low, casting a golden glow that made the flowers shimmer like jewels in a treasure chest

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personification Example: The waves danced playfully against the shore, laughing as they splashed and retreated back into the sea

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suspense: suspense is a feeling of excitement or anxiety about what might happen next in a story. It keeps readers on the edge of their seats, wanting to know more.

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Terror: An intense, overwhelming fear. Often used in life-threatening situations.

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Assertion: a statement the person thinks is correct.

As she thinks that unicorns are real, a mean adult said that her assertion is inaccurate; as the facts clearly demonstrate a different reality.

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example:dinner on the table "My eyes sparkled when I smelled the aromatic flavour of the dinner on the table"

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similes :He ran like the wind, swift and uncontainable, racing toward his goal.

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1.smell what scents are in the air?

2.taste what flavour can you describe

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The candy melted in my mouth, its vibrant colors offering no sweetness, leaving only a hollow sensation and the scent of disappointment.

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Creepy: The room was filled with a suffocating silence, broken only by the sound of her ragged breathing. She felt a cold grip tighten around her throat as she realized she was not alone. The shadows loomed closer, and a chilling whisper sent shivers down her spine, leaving her paralyzed with fear.

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I’m so hungry I could eat a horse!

Meaning: Very hungry

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(Examples for a Conclusion)

Sight: The sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple, a final farewell to the day.

Taste: The rich flavour of hot cocoa lingered on my tongue, warming me from the inside as memories flooded back.

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Stormed: Instead of saying "went into a rage," you might say, "He stormed into the room."

Shattered: Replace “broke” with “shattered” to add intensity: "The vase shattered on the floor."

Whispered: Instead of “said quietly,” try “she whispered, her voice barely audible.”

Precise Adjectives

Frantic: Instead of “worried,” you could use “frantic” to describe a character's state.

Desperate: This word conveys urgency and intensity effectively.

Chaotic: Use this to describe a disorderly situation, like “The chaotic scene left everyone in shock.”

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Example: “The velvety petals brushed against my fingers, soft as a whisper.”

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1. Use Physical Reactions: Instead of saying "He was scared," show it like this: His heart raced, and his palms were slick with sweat as he approached the door.

2. Create a Suspenseful Atmosphere: Describe the setting to build tension: The wind howled outside, rattling the windows, as silence filled the room.

3. Focus on Actions: Show the character's struggle: She clenched her fists, her breath coming in quick bursts, as she prepared for the confrontation.

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The lion crouched low in the grass, its sharp eyes fixed on the gazelle. The air was thick with the earthy scent of soil and the sweet smell of wildflowers. With a sudden roar, the lion leaped, and the gazelle's frightened bleat broke the silence. As the lion sank its teeth into the warm flesh, blood dripped onto the ground, mixing with the rich taste of meat. The cool breeze ruffled its fur, carrying away the echoes of the hunt.

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Weak Legs: Instead of just saying "my legs were weak," you could describe the physical sensations or actions, like: "Each step felt like wading through mud, as my knees threatened to buckle beneath me."

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Example: The sky was a deep crimson, as the sun sank below the horizon, casting long shadows across the ground.

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The restaurant hummed like a gentle breeze, filled with the rich aroma of simmering sauces and fresh herbs. Candlelight flickered, casting dancing shadows across the tables, where plates were vibrant with colorful dishes. The air was a symphony of sizzling sounds and laughter, enveloping guests in a warm embrace. Dessert trays glided by, tempting with chocolate creations that sparkled like jewels in the dim light.

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there was a dragon that died.because a girl which was pretending to be sleeping took a knife and killed it!

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In the dimly lit chamber, a massive dragon lounged beside a grand dining table, its emerald scales glistening like jewels. The air was thick with the scent of roasted meat, and the flickering candlelight danced off the ornate chest at the table’s end, hinting at treasures untold. As the dragon's amber eyes flickered open, a low growl rumbled from its throat, vibrating through the stone walls, warning any intruder of the riches—and dangers—that lay within.

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The magic talking dragon was very hungry. he saw a enormous dining hall but he saw a treasure chest lying in the corner. he was eager to take the chest but he knew the king was coming soon it was hard to pick but he went to the dining hall and had his lunch.

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it was a sunny afternoon when I went to the movies with my friends when I went in I saw vibrant colors of the movie

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once upon a time, there was a empty dining room.

but then someone promenaded in, not knowing there was impending doom.

a dragon broke the wall, with a treasure chest within in possession.

the chest gleamed and shined, but the dragon was danger, showed by its expression.

the dining room fell leaving no one behind.

but when there is death, there is always life.

why did I do a poem again

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On a sunny morning, the kings and queens of castles decided to have a feast. Even though it was a long journey, they still made it to the main castle. But, at the dining room, the chest that only worthy kings could see what was inside was there. During their feast, a menacing, red dragon swooped in and took the chest. From that day on, they could not get the chest back.

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"grrrrrrr...." The red hungry growling dragon stare at the empty dinner table the dragon let out a long hungry sigh frowning in anger frustrated that he's hungry and helpless he got up from his chair walking around the castle in hunger as he gaze slowling landed on a big shiny chest that had delicious scent he immediately ran to the chest opening it quickly opening a whole chest fulled of food the dragon frown turn into a smile! He quickly started eating hungry munching on everything but of food.

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There lived a dragon, he always used to roam around without knowing what to do.When he roams around, he will see this house full of food.He would droll when he passes by the house.So he made a plan to break in. He realised something, there was a treasure chest behind! So he flew but sadly injured himself by getting cut by the glass. so he had to go to the dragon hospital.

what you have learnt:dont make dumb decisions.

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Once there was a mighty dragon who lived in a dining room. One day the dragon went for a tough mission. He went to find the chest which was filled with gold

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I was send of by my father to slay a dragon that was sleeping,and the dragon would cause 100 years of smoke. I was climbing the mountain were the dragon was sleeping and I slayed the dragon in his sleep.

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One day a dragon was flying then it suddenly lost its ability to fly so it crashed into a castle and it saw a chest and a lot of food. He ate all the food because he was starving. After eating he grabbed the chest and used his teeth and he was able to open it and he saw a cockroach so he ate it and died.

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There lived a king in an enormous grey castle living with his family of three. The king was r

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THERE WAS A DRAGON.THE DRAGON WAS FINDING A... TREASURE. THE TREASURE WAS HIDIN . The TREASURE WAS HIDIN IN THE LIVING room. HE DID NOT FIND IT.

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the king from the kingdom of ventured dragon

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A bright and cheerful sunny day, It was the dragon's birthday! The room was filled with chatter in the air. He was very excited to feast on his food! There was a delicious aroma of spaghetti and more, He ate so much, maybe a little too much. He needed to go to the bathroom to do his business but on his way he slipped! He woke up confused and his mind was blank but he found a mysterious chest, he figured he was in a dream. He opened it but found the chest filled with chocolate coins!

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once a upon a time, there was a billion people in the dinner room. there was a treasure chest on a chair. there was a dragon who used it fire breath to attack the people

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"Grrrrrrrrrrrr," The hungry dragon's stomach rumbled."I'm so hungry, I could eat every human on earth! I will roast them with my flame and eat human skewers." The dragon stomped his feet and clenched its fist and bang it on the table. "Thump!" The dragon heard something coming under the table. It look under and saw a huge chest. It curiously opened the chest but it was locked. How will the dragon open it?

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There was a kingdom full of dragons called,dragon life.the king, Alex, will always invite dragons to celebrate their kindness. the whole kingdom will be invited. Alex will set up the dinner every Sunday. whoever gets awarded, will earn a chest with gold. Everyone wanted to earn it. There was one girl who will get the award every week. Her name was Sheila. Everyone admired her Kindness and wanted to be her. Whenever she earned her gold, She would share with the poor

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Once upon a time in Edinburgh Castle in the UK, the sun was shining brightly. The king had awoken. The yellow sunlight filtered through the curtain. The air was warm and smelled of leaves. The king was just about to eat breakfast until he saw a dragon invading the city. The dragon took the glimmering, gold chest and left. There was nothing they could do and the city was defeated and the land was claimed by the dragons.

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ones upon a time a dragon was having dinner, the dragon was going out to go find some gold,the dragon find some gold.the gold was very heavy the dragon try to push it with it's head, suddenly the dragon broke his head. After he broke his head he died.

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There a dragon a protecting a treasure with a lot gold . Many people want to get the gold but they never gone back, there a group of people trying to get the gold . When they gone in the case they saw a table with a lot of food as they were hungry they start to fed on the food and the dragon found them and kill them.

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There was a lonely dragon, he did not have anyone with him so he was flying around the town to look for friends but every person he approached was in a cold sweat so he was flying home he saw a shiny golden chest on the floor he went down to take a look and was shocked to find..... a Kitten he screamed with joy! so he took it home and was happy he had tea with it, went to bed with it, and played toys with it and after all that he went to sleep with a great companion.

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1. Simile: A comparison using "like" or "as."

Example: Her smile was like sunshine breaking through the clouds.

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The sleepy night wanted ice cream to keep him awake. However he had to make it across the maze. he was walking seeing side to side, corner to corner until he got out and saw his amazing sprinkly ice cream.

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Personification: Give human qualities to non-human things. For example, "The wind whispered secrets through the trees."