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I think, wearing uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages. When wearing uniforms, taking pictures will be more beautiful and less flashy. The lines will be easier to see and create more equality. But if the weather is hot and the uniform is thick, it will be very hot and uncomfortable for other students. If you wear uniforms, when you go out, people will know you are a student. Wearing uniforms can be very ugly in some schools, making students not want to wear them. But what can you do, you have to accept it! In general, wearing uniforms has advantages and disadvantages, so I accept it.

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Play sports is very good for students.It helps us stay healthy and strong.When we play sports we can make new friends and learn how to work in a team.Sports also help us relax after studying hard at school.For example playing football or badminton makes me happy and full of energy.I think playing sports every day is a good habit.It keeps our body fit and our mind fresh.That’s reason students should play sports usually.

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I think wearing school uniforms is important for students. Uniforms make students feel proud of their school and help them look tidy. When everyone wears the same clothes, there is no difference between rich and poor students. This helps all students feel equal and friendly with each other. Wearing uniforms also saves time and money because students don’t need to buy or choose many clothes. It helps them focus more on studying. In my opinion, all schools should have uniforms for their students because it brings unity and makes school life better for everyone

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Students need to wear uniforms because it is a rule that shows respect and order in school. Wearing uniforms helps create equality among students, regardless of rich or poor. At the same time, it trains students to be disciplined and neat and serious. Uniforms also show solidarity and pride in the school they are studying at. When wearing uniforms, students are easily recognized and contribute to creating a good image in the eyes of everyone. Those are some of the benefits of wearing uniforms.

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I think, wearing uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages. When wearing uniforms, taking pictures will be more beautiful and less flashy. The lines will be easier to see and create more equality. But if the weather is hot and the uniform is thick, it will be very hot and uncomfortable for other students. If you wear uniforms, when you go out, people will know you are a student. Wearing uniforms can be very ugly in some schools, making students not want to wear them. But what can you do, you have to accept it! In general, wearing uniforms has advantages and disadvantages, so I accept it.

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Ôn tập thi Cuối khóa - Phần Vocab & Grammar

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Ôn tập thi Cuối khóa - Phần Vocab & Grammar

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Hoàn thành link Blooket sau: https://play.blooket.com/play?hwId=68e9b2329f907b3bb3a7cbe6

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Join a game of Blooket to answer questions and compete in a fierce clash to determine who is the best and what Blook will come out victorious.

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Write a paragraph following the requirements:

1. Answer all parts of the request.

2. Write at least 100 words.

3. Clear and concise topic sentence.

4. Use correct grammar and spelling.

5. Bonus for strong ideas, examples, and vocabulary.

Choose ONE of the following topics to write about:

Topic 1: Playing sports brings many benefits to students. What are the advantages of playing sports regularly?

Topic 2: Many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than in the city. What are the disadvantages of living in the countryside?

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Many schools require students to wear uniform, some people agree and disagree of this topic. Some of its benefits, first is creates equality. Many students are underclass and some in middle class, that some time got sneered from rich students. They look down on underclass and some in middle class because their clothes not as expensive or fancy like richer. So when all students wear all the same, there can be less opinions from other students. Secondly, when students wear uniform, it improves school’s image, make better look about the school from other people. Lastly, it helps people easy to recognize the school you study. That’s my opinions about this topic

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In my opinion, wearing school uniforms is good because when you wear uniforms, people will easily recognize that you are studying at that school. If not, the teacher will think that you are not studying at that school. Wearing uniforms shows respect for the school. On the other hand, I think wearing uniforms is not a good idea because it is too hot or too cold, it will be uncomfortable. I think if poor people do not have money to buy uniforms to wear during the week, they should wear the clothes they have instead of school uniforms.

Goood

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I think wearing school uniforms is important for students. Uniforms make students feel proud of their school and help them look tidy. When everyone wears the same clothes, there is no difference between rich and poor students. This helps all students feel equal and friendly with each other. Wearing uniforms also saves time and money because students don’t need to buy or choose many clothes. It helps them focus more on studying. In my opinion, all schools should have uniforms for their students because it brings unity and makes school life better for everyone.

Perfect

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I think students should wear uniforms when they go to school. Because uniforms help us be equal differentiate of poor or rich. First, wearing uniforms to school promotes equality because if students wear the same outfit, they do not feel stressed to follow fashion trends. It helps create the dignity of the school. Uniforms also help the school be proud of us. So we should wear uniforms when we go to school.

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I think, wearing uniforms has both advantages and disadvantages. When wearing uniforms, taking pictures will be more beautiful and less flashy. The lines will be easier to see and create more equality. But if the weather is hot and the uniform is thick, it will be very hot and uncomfortable for other students. If you wear uniforms, when you go out, people will know you are a student, especially high school students who cannot deny going anywhere if they ride a motorbike over 50cc. Wearing uniforms can be very ugly in some schools, making students not want to wear them. But what can you do, you have to accept it! If someone sneaks in on you, it will be easier to distinguish. In general, wearing uniforms has advantages and disadvantages, so I accept it.

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7-10 sentences

topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence

sequencing words

variety of sentence types: simple, compound, complex sentences

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Homework check | Last update: 3:49 PM 10/10

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Homework check | Last update: 3:49 PM 10/10

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Khôi: done

Khang: done, photos of the book should be taken more clearly for me to check

Hoàn: 1/2 done (missing the writing exercise)

Hà My, Gia An, Thái Hà: no homework received

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The clock is a great human invention.because it helps people know the time.it helps people go to school and work on time.helps scientists control time to make new chemicals.clocks are very important in life.

Feedback: Con đã có ý tưởng, tuy nhiên bài viết còn ngắn và còn mắc tương đối nhiều lỗi sai. Con xem lại kĩ phần gợi ý sửa từng câu của thầy ở dưới.

Câu 1:
The clock is a great human invention.because it helps people know the time.
→ Sai dấu chấm giữa hai mệnh đề.
→ Sửa: The clock is a great human invention because it helps people know the time.

Câu 2:
it helps people go to school and work on time.
→ Thiếu viết hoa đầu câu.
→ Sửa: It helps people go to school and work on time.

Câu 3:
helps scientists control time to make new chemicals.
→ Thiếu chủ ngữ “It”; cụm “control time” không tự nhiên.
→ Sửa: It helps scientists measure time accurately when doing experiments.

Câu 4:
clocks are very important in life.
→ Thiếu viết hoa đầu câu.
→ Sửa: Clocks are very important in life.

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1. Hoàn thành Activity 5-7, 9, 14-17. Activity 5 là bài viết -> cần viết ra padlet để thầy sửa.

2. Học từ vựng Unit 8 ở link sau: https://quizlet.com/vn/1086924365/gw1-u8-flash-cards/?i=4r4p5u&x=1qqt

Lưu ý: Các con cần hoàn thành đúng deadline. Làm xong cần chụp lại, upload lên padlet để thầy kiểm tra và nhận xét.

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4.Therefore you need to make new friends

3.Therefore, you should go there once

5.Therefore, it is necessary to prohibit phones when driving

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4,Some students don't like the new student

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4,Some students don't like the new student

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5, It`s dangerous while you driving in your car

1, take some time,go explore something new^^

-> Xem lại, đây chỉ là các supporting sentences

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Therefore, cellphones should be banned while driving.

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I think that is a good idea. There is will near nature and the air is fresh. They can spend time in nature and enjoy the fresh air. They can move, run and jump to stimulate their appetite and hunger. Then, Also, there will be it is good for children's health. In summary, I still agree with the idea of ​​letting children be active outside.

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Some parents schedule a lot of activities for  their children.I’t not good for children.Because, Over time they will be stressed.They will work like machines because they have no time to rest and entertain.So we shouldn’t schedule a lot of activities for children

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In my opinion, it should not be because forcing children to do too many activities after school may make them overexerted and tired without having time to rest and relax after studying tiring days

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1. Học thuộc từ vựng tại link quizlet sau: https://quizlet.com/vn/1083084552/gw1-u12-flash-cards/?i=4r4p5u&x=1qqt

2. Hoàn thành bài đọc Unit 12B, trang 167-170 sách Reading

3. Viết đoạn văn 5-10 câu cho chủ đề sau: Some parents schedule a lot of activities for their children outside of school. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not?

Lưu ý cần làm bài và nộp bài/chụp lại sách vở đúng deadline để thầy chấm chữa!

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1.b 2.B 3.c 4.A 5.C

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✨Paragraph 👀👇 i think most of kids use smartphones and tablets to watch YouTube, so i write about this part quite a lot.

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✨Paragraph 👀👇 i think most of kids use smartphones and tablets to watch YouTube, so i write about this part quite a lot.

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I’m not a mother who have kid, but as a sister, i also use some kinds of devices and have a younger sister who contacts with technology early than me, i can selected out some should and shouldn’t opinions about this topic. First, it can be shouldn’t because young children and babies aren’t grow enough to contact to much with tablet and smartphone, they can’t know what are the kinds of content they should watch and shouldn’t. Like you already know, there are many news about ‘kids is copying what they actually watch and see in their daily life’ girls want to be princess, boys want to be heroes, because of that dream, they start use makeups to look like princess, some even jump from the window to act like heroes. But don’t you know that, makeups born to use but “not for kids” or “stay away from kid”(in makeups have these sentences). So what will happen if kids use these things?! Yes, they will cause worse problems on their lips, especially their skin (if they use too often). So how about boys? Like i said, they will trying to act like the characters, it’s okay if they just play like normal, BUT nope, they will climb, run fast like superhero, some kids even think that they can fly:)))so they try it real:)), and both of girls and boys always copy what they say, so if they watch negative videos they start do and say that negative things, not good. Second, it’s not good for their eyes and health. So, what about should? First, if they contact with the content that fit with their age (study, some skills), they can learn a lot from that. Second, they can use them to learn (apps, game) too. Third, reduce time to look after the kid:))because if you ask them sit there (ex: sofa), let them use smartphone, tablet then select the content that perfect for them, when you done work, you still see them sit on that sofa:))). So that why should let babies and children use tablet, smartphone and why shouldn’t.

Feedback:

Con đã có nhiều ý tưởng tốt, tuy nhiên con cần chú ý hơn về lỗi từ vựng, ngữ pháp. Bên cạnh đó, con chưa đọc kĩ yêu cầu đề bài.

Một số lỗi cần sửa:

"i" → phải viết hoa "I".

"mother who have kid" → "mother who has a kid".

"contacts with technology early than me" → "comes into contact with technology earlier than me".

"i can selected out" → "I can select".

"aren’t grow enough to contact to much" → "aren’t grown enough to have too much contact".

"kids is copying" → "kids are copying".

"makeups born to use" → "makeup is made to be used".

"they will trying" → "they will try".

Dùng so, because, and quá nhiều → cần chia câu ra để dễ đọc.

Lần tới khi viết, con cần chú ý những điểm sau để cải thiện:

Chia bài thành đoạn rõ ràng: 1 đoạn nói về tác hại, 1 đoạn về lợi ích.

Dùng sequence words (Firstly, Secondly, On the other hand, Finally) để mạch lạc hơn.

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I think babies and young children shouldn’t use their your phones too much because of the following reasons. First, using phones for a long time can harm their eyes and make them tired. Second, watching videos all day can make them lazy and less creative. Finally, I believe that they should only use smartphones for a short time to study on the lesson app for children.

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I think babies and children can use smartphones and tablets but they should not use them it too much. First ,use using smartphones too much is bad for our their eyes .Second ,they will tell their family that they study but they play video games or watch cartoons instead. Third, they only care for the smartphones but don't talk with their family. Next , usinge smartphones too much can limited their language and expression Finaly, play sport iss good for children than smart phone. All in all, babies and children can use smart phones and tablets, but should not use them it too much.

Con chú ý những điểm sau nhé:

phần punctuation (đánh dấu câu): ngay sau sequence words

gerund (V-ing) đóng vai trò chủ ngữ

chưa để plural nouns

một số lỗi ngữ pháp khác

Studying English is boring.

V-ing ~ N: đóng vai trò là chủ ngữ

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No,

I think babies and young children shouldn’t be allowed and only to use smartphone and tablets for some reasons. Because? First, It is not too good for their there eyes or our eyes too. Second, It can make them our wear glassses and get sore eyes eyesore. Finally, I think they should play with have toyss or any thingk except for smartphones, TV, and Ipad,…

Con còn sai rất nhiều lỗi chính tả và lỗi ngữ pháp. Con xem kĩ lại những lỗi thầy đã sửa ở trên.

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Deadline 24/09. Ai nộp muộn thầy tính là chưa làm và không được thầy sửa bài nhé!

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Deadline 24/09. Ai nộp muộn thầy tính là chưa làm và không được thầy sửa bài nhé!

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1. Làm activity 13, 14 (p.161 - 162)

2. Viết đoạn văn 6-10 câu cho topic "Do you think that babies and young children should be allowed to use smartphones or tablets? Why or why not?"

Cần có topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence (như bố cục thầy đã dạy ở lớp)

Sử dụng sequence words (First, Second, Third, In addition, Next, Finally,...)

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Avoid misunderstanding the opponent from listener

Make the listener be positive and happy

Help the relationship be good (sometimes just because telling the truth makes the relationship become worse badder because listener doesn’t like what the speaker says)

make sb + V (bare inf)/adj

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It is hard to trust the machine

It can't cross the road

It can't stop when there's an accident

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1.Zalo is have a lot people download -> A lot of people download Zalo / Zalo has a lot of users

2. Zalo is multifunctional

3. Zalo users can make phone calls for free

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-I think that driveless car is dangerous

-I think that driveless will be very helpful in the future.

-I think that driveless car is very expensive so not anyone can buy it.

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I don't think that online class is as good as traditional class.First, in the online class student can cheating but when in the real class they can not cheating. Second, student can say that their camera is broke or their internet is lag to don't learn everything .Thrid, student can play games or watch youtobe and don't focus on the lesson.All in all online class is not as good as traditional class.So we must go to schol if we can. That all

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Studying at school is better than studying online.Because,first studying at school will have science lab.Second at school have yard for break time.Third studying online will have students don’t study,to cheat at an exam.Finally studying at school is better than studying online.🗿🗿🗿

Feedback:

Chú ý theo sau các sequence words (First, Second,...) con cần dấu phẩy

Cần sửa lại câu cuối, câu này con đang để giống hệt câu topic sentence, trong khi con đang cần liệt kê lí do.

Cần có concluding sentence (câu kết)

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Thầy gửi BTVN nhé:

1. Học lại từ vựng ở link quizlet sau: GW1 U7 Flashcards | Quizlet

2. Làm blooket ôn từ vựng: https://play.blooket.com/play?hwId=68c43e67c2b1b57e3a66b289

3. Hoàn thiện Activity 5,6 trang 155-156 trong sách.

4. Viết đoạn văn 6-10 câu cho topic "Do you think an online class is as good as a traditional class? Why or why not?"

Cần có topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence (như bố cục thầy đã dạy ở lớp)

Sử dụng sequence words (First, Second, Third, In addition, Next, Finally,...)

Cố gắng làm và nộp bài đủ nhé! Bạn nào thiếu thì hôm sau thầy cho ở ngoài phòng chờ làm bù mới được join lớp.

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I prefer eating in the restaurant, special Hong Hanh restaurant in Quang Ninh city. It have many food I never can eat, it so yum. The air in restaurant is so noble, I very like it. In the weekend, I all way ask my mom tho eat in any restaurant. I like restaurant.

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BTVN:

- Hoàn thành bài đọc hiểu Unit 5B trong sách Reading Explorer 1 (trang 70-74), sau đó cần chụp bài làm lên padlet.

- Học từ vựng link quizlet sau: https://quizlet.com/vn/1072103371/gw1-u7-flash-cards/?i=4r4p5u&x=1qqt

- Làm bài tập từ vựng Activity 8-11 sách Great Writing (trang 158-160), sau đó chụp bài làm lên padlet.

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2.A

3.B

4.B

5.A

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I like Van Gogh's starry night painting. The picture is about the starry night in a village.Van Gogh draw it with black ,blue ,... The picture is very beautiful. I always feel very happy when i see it

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I like a painting called Mona Lisa by Leonard da Vinci. It presentS a lady sitting with a smiley face that makes me feel very interested ing and the more i looked the picture the more mysterious and the colors is in a warm tone with brown is the main one

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I love coloring van gogh's paintings, especially the starry sky. I once went to an exhibition of van gogh's paintings and colored his paintings myself. The main colors are blue, a little yellow and black, and many masterpieces have dark brown. I feel a strange peace when looking at his paintings.

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I like van gogh's starry night painting.I hope to see it once.The main color of the painting is dark blue,black and yellow.The painting has a lot of stars in the sky at night.I feel very relaxed when looking at this picture.

Chú ý lỗi dấu câu, thầy đã nhắc con nhiều lần về lỗi này

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- Hoàn thành activity 20 trong sách.

- Học từ vựng link quizlet sau: https://quizlet.com/vn/1069858333/re1-u5-flash-cards/?i=4r4p5u&x=1qqt

- Viết đoạn văn chủ đề sau và upload lên padlet "Describe a painting that you like. Who painted it? What is in the painting? Describe the colors. What do you feel when you look at the painting?"

Sau khi làm và học từ xong cả lớp cần chụp lại sách + cap màn hình minh chứng lên padlet.

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I like a painting called Starry Night by Vincent van Gogh. It shows a night sky with many bright stars and a big moon. There is a small town and a tall tree in the picture. The colors are mostly blue and yellow. The sky looks like it is moving. When I look at the painting, I feel peaceful and relaxed.

Good

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At the weekend, i prefer cooking at home because i like to enjoy cooking the things i want to eat. Secondly, I also want to try cook something new, especially with my friends. Third, I really love my kitchen. Every daily i spend more than three hours in the kitchen to cook every meals, and wash the dishes, and i add more light effect to make it bright and keep me stay in the kitchen. Fourth, when i cook and eating at home, i can listening to music, that in my favorite playlist and i can watch movies while eating. I also like to eat foods at the restaurant but it is take-away and enjoy at home :)))) So that is what i like to do at the weekend.

Feedback:

Con viết khá dài và có nhiều ý hay, nhưng vẫn còn một số lỗi. Ví dụ:

i → phải viết hoa I.

I prefer cooking at home because i like to enjoy cooking the things i want to eat → nên viết: I prefer cooking at home because I like to make the food I want to eat.

try cook → try cooking.

Every daily → Every day.

every meals → every meal.

i add more light effect → I added more lights hoặc I decorated with lights.

when i cook and eating at home, i can listening → when I cook and eat at home, I can listen.

it is take-away and enjoy at home → I usually order take-away and enjoy it at home.

Nhìn chung con đã cố gắng sáng tạo, tuy nhiên con cần để ý hơn về từ vựng, ngữ pháp khi viết nhé!

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In my oppinion, I perfer cook and eat at home. Cook and eat at home can help you have more time and save money.The food you cook will healthy. You can eat your favourite food and help me with the cooking skill. All in all, cook and eat in home is better ,but it is very hard

Feedback:

Con viết đúng trọng tâm, nhưng còn nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt.

Một số lỗi ngữ pháp:

I perfer cook and eat at home → phải là I prefer cooking and eating at home.

Cook and eat at home can help you… → phải là Cooking and eating at home can help me…

The food you cook will healthy → phải là The food you cook will be healthy.

help me with the cooking skill → nên viết help me improve my cooking skills.

cook and eat in home → phải là cook and eat at home.

Ngoài ra còn một số lỗi chính tả: oppinion → opinion; perfer → prefer

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On the weekend I prefer to eat home than going to the restaurant, I choose eating at home because I can ask my mom to cook whatever I want to eat and it will be cheaper than eating in the restaurant.Firstly, when eating at home I can control the amount off nutritions in the food and also the fat.Secondly, I really love my mom food and my fav one is steak. Every time my mom makes that dish I really enjoy it. On the other hand, going to the restaurant is also a good option but I think I will go there once a month. Last but not least, eating home will always be the first choice for me and also my family

Feedback:

Con viết khá đầy đủ ý và có mở–thân–kết rõ ràng

Có ý so sánh nhà hàng và ở nhà, nhưng nên dùng các từ nối rõ ràng hơn (Firstly, Secondly, Finally)

Một số lỗi ngữ pháp:

"I prefer to eat home" → phải là "eat at home".

"the amount off nutritions" → sai, phải là "the amount of nutrition" hoặc "the nutrients".

"my mom food" → phải là "my mom’s food".

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My home is the place where my place I grow up. On the weekend, my family is stay at home and we to decide dicede whether to eat in at home or go to the restaurant. I enjoy eating in at home because it can help me with my cooking skills so I can survive in the wild and my family also enjoy spending time together. We will grill meat on weekends. I love eating at home. that day is very funny.I love my family ^^

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prefer doing A to doing B: thích làm gì hơn làm gì

I prefer eating at home to eating out (ăn ngoài hàng) because it's cheap not like in the restaurants and let me explain because : restaurants 50$,my MOM:5$,next its have fresher ingredients than the restaurants, because my mom harvest vegetable from our garden ,Last my MOM makes better food than the restaurants because my MOM have better recipes than the restaurants

Feedback:

Con nên viết thành các câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm liên từ như firstly, secondly, finally để mạch lạc hơn, thay vì viết tất cả 1 câu.

Một số lỗi ngữ pháp, chính tả:

it's cheap not like in the restaurants → it is cheaper than eating in restaurants.

its have fresher ingredients → it has fresher ingredients.

my MOM have → my mom has.

Viết hoa “MOM” sai, nên để thường.

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Hãy ra tín hiệu cầu cứu nếu thấy ko nhìn thấy 😇😇😇

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Hãy ra tín hiệu cầu cứu nếu thấy ko nhìn thấy 😇😇😇