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i learned the difference between a weak thesis and a strong thesis and better ways to earn a higher grade on your essay

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I learned that you have to take your time to plan your essay's out to get a higher grade.

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I learned the difference of what a weak and strong thesis is and how to score an essay

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Most writers can easily create a topic: television viewing, the Patriot Act, Shakespeare's Hamlet. The more difficult part is creating an angle. But the angle is necessary as a means of creating interest and as a means of indicating the type and organization of the information to follow.
Thesis Angles
Click on each of the thesis angles in the box below that you want to learn more about.

So what about this thesis sentence?

As a reader, you understand intuitively that the information to come will deal with the different types of experiences that adult college students have. But you don't quite know if the information will deal only with adults, or if it will compare adults' experiences with those of typical college students. And you don't quite know what type of information will come first, second, third, etc.

Realize that a thesis sentence offers a range of possibilities for specificity and organization. As a writer, you may opt to pique reader interest by being very specific or not fully specific in your thesis sentence. The point here is that there's no one standard way to write a thesis sentence.

Sometimes a writer is more or less specific depending on the reading audience and the effect the writer wants to create. Sometimes a writer puts the angle first and the topic last in the sentence, or sometimes the angle is even implied. You need to gauge your reading audience and you need to understand your own style as a writer. The only basic requirements are that the thesis sentence needs a topic and an angle. The rest is up to you.

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Most writers can easily create a topic: television viewing, the Patriot Act, Shakespeare's Hamlet. The more difficult part is creating an angle. But the angle is necessary as a means of creating interest and as a means of indicating the type and organization of the information to follow.

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i learned what a strong thesis statement looks like and what a weak thesis statement looks like.

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i learned how to make a strong thesis and how to not make mistakes

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I learned how to make a great essay from the diagram, it helped me understand what to do and how to read and score correctly

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I learned how to make a good essay and how to score one

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So far in Unit 4 I've learned to think more critically and analyze more closely especially when it come to writing for instance checking word flow, and checking if a perseverance and example leave enough of an impact on a reader.
#analyze #re-read

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I learned how to properly use thesis statement and how it goes in our writing.I learned how to become a better writer automatic 3s.

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This diagram helps us understand that we need to let out out imagination and thoughts on inventing our hooks or an introduction that can really lure the readers. As we went through the process, we had to pull out our thinking hats and explain our invention and how it affects the examples we use. We also made sure we had correct grammar because everything sounds nice when it's grammatically correct.

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In this lesson i learned how to write an essay correctly and how to read and score one.

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to analyze our texts and re read over our writing to check over our stuff

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I learned how to score a essay correctly and to change it to a three if it was below that. Also i learned how to fix or write a better power sentence, thesis and give better examples.

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i learned how to read an essay correctly and score it

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I learned how to score and revise other people's essays and also, I learned that it is important to write a clear thesis statement, example and power sentence in order for the reader to understand my essay better. In addition, I learned that even the smallest details matter when it comes to writing an essay.

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we learned how to write with everything making senc=se and connect with being explained very well.

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we learned how to write a proper essay with no mistakes and what proper nouns to use in the essay

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i learned that the essay needs an example

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i learned that the essay needs an example

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asif

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What we learned in throughout this lesson is how to write a proper essay and how to tell proper nouns apart from regular nouns. How to tell a good essay from a bad essay. How to make a good thesis statement. So now we will succeed in writing our essays.

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i learned what a essay is supposed to include

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i learned what a essay is supposed to include

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support your example 

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 based off the thesis and the examples also have to somewhat connect.
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How to write a essay and what we should use to write it good
 
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learned how to write the (perfect) essay...

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we learned how to write with everything making senc=se and connect with being explained very well.

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i learned that essay needs a good example that supports your thesis and the power setnece needs to support your example 

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i learned that essay needs a good example that supports your thesis and the power setnece needs to support your example 

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Sajjad Zainy

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I learned what a essay is supposed to include

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I learned that a essay has to be written
based off the thesis and the examples also have to somewhat connect.

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How to write a essay and what we should use to write it good

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learned how to write the (perfect) essay...

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We learned how to write a perfect essay

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I learned how to write a perfect essay and have a strong thesis, power sentence, and example.

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We learned that  essays need thesis to catch the readers attention. It also needs an example that goes with the thesis so it proves a point about your opinion

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I learned that essays need a thesis or your story will have points taken off from it and you always have your example tha matches to the thesis and that the example is good.t

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I learned that essays need a thesis or your story will have points taken off from it and you always have your example tha matches to the thesis and that the example is good.t

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I have learned what a strong and clear power sentence looks like. #writinggoals

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A weak essay leads to a scholarship to McDonalds. Also add a strong example and a power sentence. #strongerthesis

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We learned that you should have a strong thesis And you should always have a strong supporting example #Supportingexample

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I've learned about how to write a essay with a stronger thesis, example, and power sentence. I also learned on what can make me receive a score lower than a 3. #strongertheisis

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I learned that to be successful when writing you need the key concepts of writing a good thesis, power sentence and contain an example that goes with your topic.

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With the info given

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I leanred that a good thesis means a good power sentence.#poweriskey

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#strongthesis

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i learned that in order to get a good score you need a strong thesis and supporting example. #mypartnerissicktoday

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What I have taken in from this fourth unit and few lessons is the importance of the basics of what makes up an expository essay, and how to successfully write one with ease!

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We learned that in order to get a 3-4 we need to have a hook, clear thesis, an example that makes sense and connects with the thesis, and a power sentence is important as well as the conclusion.

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I learned more about the characteristics of writing and learned the comparison of a good essay from the bad one #ExpositryEssay

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with out a strong thesis the essay is weak #BESTRONGboutyourthesisStatement

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I've learned about the characteristics of writing a proper essay. Such as, thesis, power sentence, leading example and so on. I also learned that it's important to make sure everything connects back to the main point. #youliveandyoulearn

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i learned that to be able to have a 3 or a 4 you must have a clear thesis and example.

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We learned how to score a 3 when writing an essay and how its important to have a clear statement , and an example that goes with the essay and a thesis statement

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You need a strong thesis and an example that connects to the thesis and end the essay with a setence that rephrase the thesis to close up the essay.
#followthesteps

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I learned that having and strong thesis and example is important to getting a good score on your essay.

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I learned about a strong thesis and how it can allow you to pass the test. A strong example is also necessary.

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We learned that in order to have a good score on your essay you must have a solid thesis and a solid example.

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We learned that to get a  good score on your essay it is important to have a solid and clear thesis statement,  a concrete example and a strong power sentence

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i learned to be able to get a 3 you should have a good thesis and a concrete example

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We learned about how to write a good essay and in order to get a 3 you need a good example, a good thesis, and a good power sentence

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To get a 3 on the essay you need a concrete example, thesis statement, and a power sentence.

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We learned that within a good essay, you must have a solid thesis statement, a concrete example and a power sentence.

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I learned that in order to get a good score on your essay you first need a strong thesis, so that you can have a good example to match up with it.

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So far in this lesson, we learned that in order to get a good score for your essay, you need to follow the writing process, especially revising and editing.

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We learned that in order for us to write a good essay we need to have a strong thesis statement, a concrete example, and a power sentence.

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We learned that you need to have evidence to back up your example and thesis or else it won't count as a point.  We also learned that we dont need extra information to have a better grade.

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so far from this lesson i have learned that in order to get a higher rate is , to have a strong thesis  , a strong example that is actually related to the thesis, and a power sentence to tie it all up . When writing an essay you have to make sure you are specific .

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Learned that in order to make a good essay, and get a good grade, i need to write in complete sentences, make sure the message is clear, have a good example, and a good thesis statement.
#essay

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After successfully overcame and conquered from the very beginning of the activity to this point,  I have comprehend something that i never known before and may have never been known to me if it wasn’t for  the specified websites that you and others English teacher created solely for us students. In order to get a passing grade which a score of 4 in the essay, there are 3 indispensable things that you must always have: a strong and clear thesis statement that state clearly your opinion ( answer) to the question that is asked through the prompt; a specific and not hypothetical example to best illustrates the prompt,  a power sentence, a sentence that have the capability to tie and connect the specific example that given  to the thesis statements; and finally the conclusion that summarize the thesis explaining why your thesis is crucial

To summarize you need to have a strong thesis statements, specific example, power sentence and conclusion

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We have learned that, in order to get a three or a four, we need to have a thesis statement and an example that ties to it.

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Writing in complete sentences and getting the message clear is important. The structure is important for people to understand. The thesis is the thing you should state clearly

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Mikaela Roper and Tyler Wick and Aditee Z.

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Mikaela Roper and Tyler Wick and Aditee Z.

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So far in this lesson I have learned that it is good to have a strong thesis with an example that connects with the prompt.  Throughout this process I have also learned how to leave out unnecessary details and how to at least score a three on the essay. #describetheexample

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We learned about the writing process and how prepare for an expository essay. We also learned how to write in a recursive process.  #ISayEssayYouUnderStand

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This diagram helps us understand that we need to let out out imagination and thoughts on inventing our hooks or an introduction that can really lure the readers. As we went through the process, we had to pull out our thinking hats and explain our invention and how it affects the examples we use. We also made sure we had correct grammar because everything sounds nice when it's grammatically correct. The second draft is not necessary if we revise/edit at the same time so two in one package that can narrow down our thoughts and our essay in one.

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we learned that the importance of thesis can really help you along the way of writing an essay. the examples and the connection with the power sentence can help with the flow of the whole essay. you need to make it enjoyable and not is icky and gross just easy and free flowing .

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Isaiah and I have learned a lot about the writing process and structure of the expository essay. We learned about how to connect the thesis and example which is the power sentence. Lastly we learned about how to rewrite the thesis statement in the conclusion. We also learned about what you need to do to get at least a 3 on your essay.

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We learned the importance of a thesis, example, and power sentence in an expository essay. We learned that the power sentence connects the thesis with the example.

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We learned how to connect the power sentence to our concrete example. We also learned that the concrete example has to refer to the thesis statement.

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There was a lot of sutiable information that was provided in this pacticular activity. We learned that what are the effects of having a thesis and not in the essays that were showemd. It made us think more and how the examples and thesis make up the essay.

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This sums up the writing process in one picture #HowToNotFail:

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It's important to have a clear thesis to ensure it isn't confused or confusing. It is also crucial to have a concrete example to prove your point, without evidence, you have no point. #SupportTheThesis