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what i took away that you can take talking and make it more complex in you paragraph

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I learned that I need to add feeling and emotion to my writing.

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I learned that you should only say dialogue like somebody would say it. Instead of saying this, "Look, Its a shark."
Instead, say this, "Oh my god! It's a shark! Get out of the water! NOW!"

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I learned to be more energetic with my writing.

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I learned that you have to be more energetic like taking that was a huge shak fin to that was a realy bid shark or we need to leave NOW

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What i took away from the video is that when you make dialogue you have to make a new paragraph and you have to make the character feel more excited and realistic.

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to make sound more like someone and to make it sound real

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to make dialogue seem real

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Something, I learned from the Brain Pop Video was Dialogue makes your story seem more detailed and to make it seem more natural
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One thing i learn from the brain pop is that you should make the people who are talking say what they would actually say in that situation.

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One take away I had from the Brain Pop video is that make characters say what they would say in real-life.

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One thing that i took away from the brainpop was to make what the characters say more natural and seem like actually talking instead of the just plain narrating.And i also learned how to make dialogue grammatically correct.

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I learned that the most important thing is to make dialog seem natural.

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I learned to start a new paragraph every times someone new is talking

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I learned that dialogue helps your story sound real.

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One takeaway I had from the brainpop is that you should make your dialogue sound natural and something that person would say realistically. For example, instead of saying, "I am sad." You can say, "Tears ran down my face while I sat alone on the bench during recess." or something like that.

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i learned you should put some dialogue and make it sound real or it does not work

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The best thing that i took away from the video was to make your dialogue sound as natural as possible.

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One thing that I took away from the BrainPop video is that you should make dialogue sound like the person would actually say that.

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I learned that when a new person is talking you start a new sentence.

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in the brainpop was to make it sound real and interesting to listen to.

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the thing that is most important to me is to give the character's personality. ex- "Look at the lion" to "the lions are so cool!"

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Express what the person that is tallking, is feeling, instead of just saying that they are bored or mad.

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The most important thing in dialogue is to make sure it sounds natural.

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You should add more detail so that the reader knows what going on.

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One thing i took away was that if your dialogue is chopie people wont want to read it and it wont sound real

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One thing I took away was that when you write down a word your saying to someone or saying to yourself you should make it like the mood the character is in. The dialogue should tell the reader how the character is acting at that time.

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One take away I had is that the dialogue should reveal the personality of the speaker. The dialogue should help the reader learn more about the character.

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You should try to make the people sound more alive.

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Something that I took away from the brainpop video was, that you need to put dialogue in quotation marks. Lastly you need to make it sound like something the character would say.

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Something I took away from the brainpop that to add dialogue you need to start a new paragraph.

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I learn that characters have personality.

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I learn that characters have personality.

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Something that i took away from the Brain Pop Is that when a character says something like "Its a shark". You have to make the character say things the way their personality is. So instead you could say "Wasn't that fin huge"!

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You need the tell the reader when someone different is talking

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one thing I took away is that every character will react different.

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one thing I took away is that you have to express the persons feeling through the dialogue

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one thing I toke away was that your word

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You could said what it is like when Tim said "It is a shark" you could say the and "Was that fin huge".

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When a new character starts talking you need to start a new paragraph.

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I learned that dialogue is supposed develope a character and supposed to sound like something the character would say.

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I learned that you shouldn't just put a dialogue on whatever. You should use a certain dialogue if that is what someone would say in real life. Also let their dialogue connect with the characters personality and add emotion.

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One thing I learned is that the dialogue you use should reflect the characters personality, and that you should start a new paragraph when someone new starts talking.

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I learned that you have to revile the character's thoughts and feelings in the dialogue.

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You can tell who the characters are and you can know more about them.

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You can make it sound better or more realistic.

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You can make it sound better or more realistic.

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I learned that even if it's grammaticly correct it might not be how they would say it.

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I learned that you have to not only put quotation marks after people speak and also to make it sound realistic.

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I learned that when someone talks you should make it sound like something that person would say

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I learned that when you write you always have to add a new paragraph every time someone starts talking.

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I learned basic rules to dialogue like that you need to start a new paragraph when there is dialogue. Most importantly though, Moby says beep.

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I learned that when someone would say something you can make it sound more loud or more seriously.

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I learned that when someone else starts to talk that you should start a another paragraph.

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One take away was that you have to start a new paragraph and that dialogue should be something that you would say that expresses how you are.

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One take away from the brainpop video is that you have to start a new paragraph when a new person starts talking.

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I learned that when you write dialogue you have to make it sound like something that a real person would say.

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I learned that when you write dialogue you have to make it sound like something that a real person would say.

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One take away that I have is that you have to make your characters emotions and personality show in what they say and do, sure you could say something boring and something that is used a lot like "She was mad" or you could show that by making the character sound mad like "You are the single most annoying thing in the world!"

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One thing I took from that video is that your dialog should sound natural and be something you would actually say.

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I learned was when you write dialogue it should be by it's self and you put emotion into the dialogue you write. When your writing you make the dialogue sound like something that person would say.

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One thing I learned is that you should start a new paragraph and that you should also not write something that no on would say.

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I learned that you should use more excitement or emotion in your dialogue. To make it sound more real.

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I learned that when writing dialogue you should make what they are saying sound realistic. AS if they actually said that, not something that is very obvious.

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I learned that dialogue can help describe what the reader is thinking and saying.

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I learned that dialogue can help describe what the reader is thinking and saying.

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I learned that every few pieces of dialog you need to make a new paragraph and also to make things that people say sound realistic and sound like something a person would say

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One thing I took away from the brainpop is not to make it sound like something a person wouldn't saya and the dialogue should sound flowy and natural and not choppy like instead of "it is a butterfly." it should say. " Oh my goodness, look it's a pretty butterfly!"

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You should make it clear who is saying that by putting their name before, after, or in the middle of the dialog, and start a new paragraph each time someone different speaks.

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One thing I learned is that Dialogue should sound natural and sound realilistic.

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I learned that you should use words that would make the dialogue more realistic.

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I learned that you should use words that people would actually say or said, not telling us what is happening.

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One thing that I took away from that is you have to be really realistic about what you say.

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One thing I learned was that it needs to sound more realistic, as if they actually saw a shark, for example, "is....that...a....shark...?"

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One thing that I took away from the brain pop is that when you write how someone feels in a story or book it shows their personality.

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One thing I learned from the brainpop is that your dialogue needs to sound natural with the persons personality.

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One thing I learned from the brainpop is, when using dialogue you should use dialogue that will show their personalities and what someone would realistically say.

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One thing that I learned is, when using dialogue when people say something it should show what their personalities are.

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one thing i learned from the brain pop is that dialogue can express personalities by how they say whatever they said.

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one thing that i heard is to add more personality to my writing by how they acted when they are saying something.

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One thing I learned from the brain pop is that dialogue expresses your personalities. It is also easier for you to know how someone is feeling and who is talking.

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One thing that I learned from the Brain pop is that when someone says something it is easier to know who it is if you say there name. Another thing I learned is you want the words to reveal their personality.

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One takeaway I learned from the brain pop is that when writing a line for a character, add the characteristicsas and their personalities to the line so it seems like something that person would actually say.

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One take away I had from the Brain Pop was that you need to make your dialogue sound natural and capture their personality and not sound so much of like a robot and not have their personality.

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One thing I learned from the brain pop is that dialogue adds to the characters personality and it helps you imagine what they are like and get a mental picture.

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One takeaway I had from the Brain-pop video is that you need to add spice to your dialogue to define characteristics of the people in the story. You don't want them to say something plain and generic, you want it to express the person speaking.

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A takeaway I had from the Brainpop video is that the dialogue should actually be what someone would say, not a boring plain sentence that no one would ever say. Also you want the dialogue to tell something about the person - what he/she says will tell the reader about his/her personality.

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One of the takeaways I had from the video is that when your writing dialogue you should write it in a way that matches that characters personality. I also learned that when you put dialogue into a paper you are writing you have to start a new paragraph.

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One of the takeaways I had from the video was that you need to write what you think that character would say in this situation. For example in the situation of a 4 year old tripping you would they would not say OW! That hurt my knee cap. They would say OWW. And run away crying.

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I learned that when writing dialouge what the characters are saying should show their personality. If the dialouge is very simple and plain the reader will not be able to understand the characters personality. I also learned that when someone else starts to talk, you should start on another line.

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I learned that you need to write what people would actually say and not just what you would say.

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I learned that dialogue should sound realistic. If the dialogue doesn't sound realistic the dialogue won't be as good as if you make it sound realistic.

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First off i learned incorporate the character personality in dialogue and second i learn too make the dialogue more complex.

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Dialogue should follow how the characters personality is and you should not have boring dialogue like "It is a shark." and instead, make it more complex.

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I learned that diolouge should have meaning and show a characters personality.

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I learned that dialogue should be based on the character's personality. I also learned that in plays the name is supposed to be above the dialogue.

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I learned that you have to make your dialogue sound real not fake also make sure to make a new paragraph after you are done writting with dialogue

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I learned that you should make your dialogue sound natural and something that that person would actually say.

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I learned that you should make the character say something sensible and something that someone would say in real life.

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I learned that when using dialogue, you have to put down what you think the character would say, like if I saw a shark I wouldn't just say "it is a shark." No I would say something like "Oh my gosh!! Its a shark dont move!!"

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I learned that when writing diologe that you need to make the persons sentence something someone would say in real life.

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I learned that when you use dialogue make a new paragraph and to use better words so the reader has more fun reading and it feels more realistic.