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Technology isn't very good for you

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My first thoughts were that it was about turning off the lights and how everyone would fall asleep.
It is different from homeroom zombies because it has less details about sleep disorders and other things like the car crashes.

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my first thoughts on 'turn off, tune out, and turn in' was oh this would be about devices and how they effect sleep because turn off, you can turn off a phone,
turn in, you could turn in you phone and
tune out, you can mute your phone or tune out your phone

it was written differently than 'homeroom zombie'
some differences the text had were that in the first text ,homeroom zombies, was in first person (i think that is right) and then it changed in to 2nd person

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My first thoughts were it is about sleep. it was different because it was not about school or about young kids

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slob on my nod

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homeroom zombies was better and had more reasons

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I wasn't here on Friday so I dont know😉

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I cannot remember any of it.

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it was good but I Kida forget so I will need to re read it

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I thought that it was good and used all of the appeals. It didn't feel as formal as home room zombies

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I thought they would tell more about it

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its not amusing

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My first thoughts were that the text was talking about electronics and how they affect how people sleep. It seemed like they used less pathos and more logos and ethos than homeroom zombies.

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I thought it was interesting?🤷🏼‍♀️
it had less emotion in "turn off, tune out, turn in"

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it thought it was good. But in Turn off tune out turn in there wasn't as much emotion and it focused more on technology then the other one. And in homeroom zombies it was telling us what we can do

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turn off, tune out, turn in has a bigger ephisias on turning off cell phones than the effects of sleep deprivation. turn off, tune out, turn in had quotes from kids suffering sleep deprivation while homeroom zombies had quotes from teachers.

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I thought that it was written nicely because it used many quotes and supported everything that they said. It was written almost less professionally than Homeroom Zombies, and focused on the more technology side of it.

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I disagree we should just have nap time

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I was not here on Friday so I can't answer each question but when I heard about the writing I thought it would be mainly about the technology that teen are using today and how it can be bad for their health both physically and mentally

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My first thought about "Turn off,Tune out,Turn in" was that it was more about the affects of devices on you when you are trying to sleep . It was different than "Homeroom Zombie" because it talked more about things that you can do to help you sleep. And "Homeroom Zombies" talked more about what will happen if you don't get enough sleep.

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I don't know. I was thinking about sleep

it was different because it was a different story

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confusion.

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I feel like that it was boring and it made me very sleepy

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hi

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I feel like that "turn off,tune out, turn in" gave more human experience and didn't really site any quotes and in homeroom zombies they used sources and quotes and thats how it was different.

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my first impression was that it was a similar concept as the first one just it was different in how the author explained and proved there examples.

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I agree with it. I think it makes a good point.

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"turn off tune out turn in" I thought it had to do with the lights
and how bright lights can have you stay up more I guess
home room zombies was talking about what happens if you don't 'get the sleep you need while"turn off tune out t

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I knew it would be about electronics and how it effects sleep

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I think in homeroom zombies they talk more about what can happen

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My first thoughts of "Turn off, Tune out, Turn in" were mainly that this text is more about the causes of lack of sleep.

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I didn't really like it and it wasn't as convincing as. homeroom zombies.

Also don't put random things because it gets in the way when people try to read people's responses.

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I thought it was a  good story, but it wasn't better the Homeroom Zombies in my opinion. Homeroom Zombies was about how when you get enough sleep, how it can effect you and Turn off, Tune out ,Turn in was about texting and stay ing on your on was bad

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My first impression of the second text was that it almost had the same idea as the first text. It was different in how the author explained and used exapmles

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when I first saw the title I thought it was about turning off your devices and getting better sleep but as I read it I realized that it was more in-depth than that. Homeroom Zombies was more of a general reason(s) of why kids don't get enough sleep unlike the other text which is more focused in on one thing

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My thoughts before I read was turn off meant turn off phones and computers and tune out meant they would not pay attention so they would sleep and turn in is like work and homework.

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My first thoughts of "Turn off, Tune out, Turn in" were why do we have to read this. But they I noticed that it might be about electronic devices and how they might affect your sleep.

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my first thoughts on turn off tune out turn in were pretty okay. I thought that they didn't really cite a lot of sources and that it wasn't very interesting. it was different because in homeroom zombies, they used different peoples stories and it wasn't just one story, but in turn off tune out turn in has one main story.

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When I first saw the title I knew was about electronics and I was right.

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My first thoughts of "Turn Off, Tune Out, Tune In" were that 1. technology is becoming more sophisticated. 2. the more technology grows, the more we will rely on it. It was written different than "Homeroom Zombies" was because in "Homeroom Zombies" the author talked about several different ways and reasons that adolescents aren't meeting the amount of sleep required to get them through the day.

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My first thoughts of " Turn off, Tune out, Turn in" was about technology

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My first thoughts of," Turn off, Tune out, Turn in where," about students that don't get enough sleep because they go on there phone at night and get in trouble in school. Notice how the title is divide into three parts? "Turn off," (the first part) turn off your phone or any electronics. "Tune out," is when students can't participate during class because they are too tiered. And finally, "Turn in," is when the student gets in trouble for sleeping in class. "Turn off, Tune out, Turn in," is about one spasifice person and why people can't get enough sleep. "Homeroom Zombies" talks about multiple people and date happens when you don't get enough sleep.

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At first when i saw the title, I thought it was Turn off your devices, Tune out and sleep, and Turn in your homework. But then we started reading it and i saw more about what it was about. Homeroom zombies was talking about many things that made kids not get enough sleep, and this one talks about around one thing. I liked homeroom zombies better overall.

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My first thoughts on "turn off, tune out, turn in" were that it was trying to make the fact that kids who don't get enough sleep have problems during the day. The title kind of gave the point that they turn off their brains, tune out all of the sounds, and turn in has to do with something in school. Homeroom Zombies was more about the fact that kids fall asleep in class anytime that the environment is like the environment they sleep in. Also the second text was more about texting and electronics making you have trouble sleeping and then having an affect on their learning.

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Bell Ringer: What were your first thoughts of "Turn off, Tune out, Turn in"?

How was it written differently than "Homeroom Zombies"?
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