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Good designs

Don't read off of slides

Was very clear

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Good PowerPoint and I like the idea of the outfits
Make more eye contact but you were confi

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-try not to read off of the slides so much
-make more eye contact

-I liked your designs

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-Good speaking.
-creative designs

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-Perhaps look at the audience more and be a little bit more confident in your speaking.

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You described each outfit very well. You spoke well but you could have made more eye contact.

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Nice drawings
Creative

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- Confident speaking
- Very creative clothes
- Great presentation.

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Don’t just read straight off the PowerPoint but good job loud and clear

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- More eye contact
- Nice voice
- I love the drawings
- Next time you should not read exactly what's on the screen

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I like your clothes drawings
Needs a bit more eye contact.

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- more eye contact with the class
- I like the outfits descriptions

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- I love your outfits!
- Nice looking at the audience

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- love your project choice you spoke confidently and loud
-interesting outfits with unique names
-like that you smiled and laughed you weren’t all serious
- make more eye contact but great job

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- tall to the audience more
- explain more on why you think prisoners should wear clothes to match their fealings

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Good drawing attempts
Liked the presentation and title

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- good voice projection
- very creative project

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- Good speaking voice
- It was good that your project was different than the transgender one
- Try to look less at the teacher and more at the audience
- Try not to read directly off the slide
- Try to sound more professional
- The outfits were very creative and interesting

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Not much eye contact, just reading from the PowerPoint.

Loud, confident voice.

Nice drawings

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Use professional words, you don't have to be smart, just sound smart

Look at your audience, not the wall

Stop reading from the slides, give us a presentation, not a lecture

Be more concise with your words

Give us some passion to work

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He was loud and spoke confidently. I liked how he used orange as his theme!! He needs to interact with the audience more. He thought really well about all the different outfits!! He was creative. He overall did a really good job.

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Leo has a strong voice and makes it easy for us to listen to. Funny presentation and also pretty interesting to see. However, he should make more eye contact, read less from his slides, and provide more enthusiasm in his presentation. But, his project was done well and overall pretty decent, well done.

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Nice use of your IPad in the presentation.
Nice color scheme on your PowerPoint as well!
Nice explanation of the symbolization of your fashion choices.
Try not reading so directly from the PowerPoint. Also attempt to make more eye contact with the class rather than with Ms. Song.